Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
Well, Im willing to believe just about anything when it comes to Ethan, lol.
Im glad they will have a house with more room to spread out, or contain the messes of rambunctious little boys.
I really liked this story. I wonder if someday you will let us know if they had more kids, how Brain and Justin's careers developed, how they are doing together.
There. I commented on each chapter. It is such a great story and has so few comments I wanted to do my part and fix that. Hope you weren't too bored. :o)
Author's Response: No way, I love to hear what the readers think. The more they have to say the better. Thank you for your words. See ya, Tay.
Author's Response: No way, I love to hear what the readers think. The more they have to say the better. Thank you for your words. See ya, Tay.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Married
I wonder who that was who killed Ethan?
What a nice commitment ceremony. Our boys deserve to have the best, and that is each other. They were always ment to be together.
Author's Response: you could say that ethan's hit is one of those things that randomly happen. brian and justin do deserve to be happy.
Author's Response: you could say that ethan's hit is one of those things that randomly happen. brian and justin do deserve to be happy.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 03:12 PM · On: One Little Question
Stripper!Justin. YaY.
Author's Response: i hope you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:49 PM · On: The Things I Never Said
Apologizing and saying he loved him was an amazing gift from Jack to Brian. Even if he didn't mean it, it would/could/should heal a lot of wounds.
Author's Response: yeah i think so too. i think it was good for brian to hear it all.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:31 PM · On: A New Challenge
Wow. I imagine it would be exciting and maybe a bit frightening to "hear" all the noise of the world again. I understand that a person born deaf would actually have a very hard time handling it. Its a good thing Justin went deaf after knowing what the phone sounded like, and what a knock on the door was.
Yeah, I just bet Brian had Ethan's number the moment he walked into the room, lol.
Im glad Michael and Hunter are looking after their friends. Its nice to see them for Brian's and Justin's relationship.
Author's Response: i think it would be crazy to hear everything when you havent before.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Insecurities
It’s not a contest, Justin. This is our family.”
Such a simple statement, a simple concept. But it is huge. You have to surrender youself to it. Accept that you are weak and need others in your life to survive, so you can be made stronger than ever by being part of a family.
Author's Response: deeper words couldn't have been spoken. i really like that. thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Making Amends
Its weird how Brian gets along better with his father than his mother. I mean, I guess I understand it. Physical abuse is easier to heal from than emotional abuse. I guess ignoring your son's cries for help is the worst a mother can do. I really and truly dislike Joan. Yet, canon has Jack as some sort of redeamable character. I dont think he is. Im not sure why he even tried, especially as Brian being gay must have been just another thing to hate about his son.
Author's Response: You know, I wasn't even thinking about that, but I guess in the back of my mind that was there; it is easier to get over physical pain than it is verbal. There are some words than can hurt you for life. I really don't understand how ANYONE...mother or father could hurt their kids, but it does happen. I think there are a lot of people that are emotionally screw and pass that on to their kids. It's a sick cycle.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Things That Hurt
Brian kept watching all of them make a mess and then looked back at Justin, Eric and Gus and he smiled. He simply didn’t care if they broke anything else or if the boxes seem to be making the loft look awfully small. Justin was there with him and that was the important thing.
I love that Eric is kinda "weird". And that Brian and Justn are adjusting so quickly.
Author's Response: i'm happy to hear that. thank you for reading
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 01:10 PM · On: One Big Step Forward
Brian was sure that he couldn’t talk at that moment to save his life. He was scared shitless of giving Justin’s his present.
“Are you okay?” Justin asked.
“I got you something,” Brian signaled not being able to utter a word.
Justin smiled a little not sure if he wanted it.
“You have given me enough Brian,” Justin assured him.
Fear of Brian pushing him away later will probably always taint the gifts Brian gives of himself. Which is silly on Brian`s part. How much more can you declaire your love and commitment than breaking holes in walls and making a bedroom for you and your lover`s children to share? Very loving and sexy chapter. I loved it!
Author's Response: i am very happy how this chapter came out.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:07 AM · On: His Father
“You are just using my son. He could be a normal kid if it wasn’t for perverts like you pulling him into your disgusting world,” Craig hissed.
What. An. Idiot.
Author's Response: u tell him damn it. don't worry that won't brezk them up it will only make them stronger.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 07:47 AM · On: No Need For Wishes
Too many things made me happy to quote them all in this chapter! It was all so nice and loving.
Author's Response: thank you so much for that. hope you liked the rest as much.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Saying Sorry Is Not That Hard
“Daddy?” Eric asked.
Justin looked at his son and smiled.
“What is it baby?” Justin asked cleaning Eric’s mouth.
“Daddy?” Eric asked.
Justin frowned and realized then that Eric wasn’t calling for him, but for Brian.
This is both an AWWW! and an OUCH! Because Brian is spending so much time with Eric its really sweet to see the baby miss him, but it also must be weird to have your child call out `daddy` for someone else.
Oh, and it is fun hearing Michael getting to call Brian pathetic and a moron for a change, lol.
Author's Response: he, he, he, yeah it was weird that micharl was the one talking like that to brian but someone had to.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Overreacting
Oh, Brian. Got a case of the Green-eyed Monsters.
Author's Response: that he does. he, he, he.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 05:39 AM · On: A Good Man
Brian being trusted unquestionably with a baby. Feeding the baby icecream. Changing diapers. Letting the baby jump on him and making faces. Awww. All things I can see Brian doing - if he was just left alone to do it and didn`t have gawking friends giving him a hard time!
I love that Jennifer knows something is up and is just happy her son has a good man.
Author's Response: by your words i can tell your enjoying this story, i'm happy about that.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 05:26 AM · On: For Them
“Oh god,” Brian moaned as he entered his boyfriend.
Justin arched from the bed towards Brian. They moved against each other as slowly as they could until they couldn’t hold any longer. Brian hammered his way inside Justin and the blond screamed with all his might. Brian was sure that one day one of the neighbors was going to come running into the room to ask if Justin was okay.
Okay, so there is no real reason to quote this, except that I really really like it. ;o)
“Two million,” Erica whispered while she looked at her coffee.
Brian licked his lips and didn’t even flinch when he nodded. “Done,” Brian said.
This I really really hate. :o( I dislike someone who would talk of excluding a parent for any reason. It is not healthy for a child`s self esteem.
Also, I find it unlikely. For one, I dont AT ALL see Brian as having that kind of money to just hand over. Second, she would have went for a lot less. $250.00 a month for 18 years is $54,000.00. She would have taken $100-$200K. And it would be believeable. Otherwise it would just be reasonable to let the matter go to court. Justin has rights and current custody. All the work would be on her part - and she can`t afford to argue it for long. She`d also owe back child support.
But thats just my opinion. :o)
Author's Response: i know what you mean, i guess i just really wanted her to be gone and not come back for more.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Needing A Superhero
In one swift move Brian was inside of Justin. He gave Justin a few seconds to adjust and then he started to move hard and fast inside Justin so the blond would know who he belonged to. Justin tried to push himself up so he could be on all fours and push against Brian but the brunet had a good hold on his neck and wasn’t letting him move.
“Brian.” Justin yelled.
Brian leaned down and bit Justin’s shoulder and sucked on the smaller man’s neck hard so it would leave a mark. He wanted everyone to know that Justin was his.
GUH! I love Brian`s possesiveness and need to declaire his claim (instead of denying he has any feelings at all for Justin).
“What are you doing here, Erica? ” Justin asked.
Erica looked at him not sure what he had said. She really didn’t care. “I came for Eric.”
Wow. I know that some people can be described as a breath of fresh air, but man, she is a blast of arctic air! Burrr.
Author's Response: it's cold baby, burrr. lol. so happy when people review. happy that you're into it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:56 PM · On: New Things
“Here,” Jennifer said, putting Eric in Justin’s arms. “He was crying.”
Justin looked at his mother, not sure if it was true. He looked at Eric who looked okay and wondered if his mother would say something like that to make him reconsider the operation. He took a deep breath and sat down with Eric on the bed. He didn’t know what to do anymore.
This was pretty harsh of Jennifer. I can understand Justin`s reluctance - the fear of disappointment is really intense in these situations. Then her throwing in Brian and the baby just seems really harsh. Of course he wants to hear them. But just thinking about it gives him the desire, then comes hope, then the intense fears that it just wont happen.
Author's Response: cruel to be kind, that's what they say. she wants her son to get better no matter what.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Good Times And Bad Times
LOVED this chapter! Sometimes it is so nice to read about Brian so easily giving into his emotions and admitting he loves Justin. He always did the actions, that is the same be it paying tuition or learning sign language. The willingness to have strong feelings was the problem.
Author's Response: that's why they say actions are better than words
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Forgiveness
Justin smiled back and kissed him. Brian pulled him closer to his body and kissed him back. He loved kissing Justin.
“I guess this means you guys are okay,” Jennifer said.
Brian pulled back startled. Justin looked at him weird until he saw what Brian was looking at. He blushed and hid his face on Brian’s shoulder. Brian smiled at Jennifer and nodded.
Even in canon Jennifer and Brian got along when she finally understood that Brian really cared for her son, and that her son was truly in love with Brian. She is a good mom.
Author's Response: yeah, i always did like jen. i know she was always trying to protect her son over all the things.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Because Of Him
I think this is a great chapter because Karen's teasing of Brian was a nice high note, and then Michael explaining to Brian that he got rid of Justin for him was a major low note.
I cannot understand how so many people let Michael get away with this kind of behaviour. They ALL have heard him tell the story but no one yelled at him or punched him in the face (drastic, but what I wanted to do). Poor Sunshine. Poor Brian.
Author's Response: don't worry i wouldn't let michael get away with all that.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:19 PM · On: My Crazy Family
WHY MICHAEL IS AN ASS:
“You brought him.” Michael said.
“I don’t see why not?” Brian asked. “You brought Ben.”
“But he is my boyfriend.” Michael pointed out. “And he is part of the family.”
“And Justin will someday.” <--- *SMILES*
“Why are you doing this?” Michael asked. “Do you feel sorry for him?”
“You know pity makes my dick soft.” Brian told him getting annoyed.
“Well, have you fucked him?” Michael asked.
“No.”
“Then I guess your dick is soft!” Michael hissed before he moved away.
WHY MELANIE CAN BE A REAL CUNT:
“The rolls, please.” Melanie tried again.
Melanie tapped Justin on the shoulder and he turned towards her with a questioning face.
“Are you fucking deaf or just fucking retarded? Can you pass me the fucking rolls and stop fawning over Brian?” Melanie hissed.
“Mel.” Lindsey complained.
Justin came out of his daze and got up. He took the rolls and gave them to Melanie before he walked away.
WHO TALKS TO PERFECT STRANGERS LIKE THAT?! JUST BECAUSE JUSTIN LIKES BRIAN?!
Author's Response: i know right, bunch of idiots. but you must have like how brian reacted and then went after the blond. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Connection
“I don’t do boyfriends.” Brian yelled.
“You are lucky he cannot hear you say that.” Debbie yelled back.
Brian fought the smile that was threatening to come out.
A perfect example of the kind of verbal exchange that you write that keeps bringing me back!
or this one:
“You came in humming, Brian.”
“I did not!” Brian shouted. “Go away.”
Cynthia giggled and walked away.
LOL!!!
Author's Response: happy to hear that you like that stuff. i'm lucky to have a good muse on my side.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Unspoken Words
Congratulations on getting a blue ribbon designation! You and this story really deserve it!
And yes, Im back reading it again, lol. Ive been so busy lately that I dont have time to get lost in a new story, if you know what I mean. I just want a good read before bed without being so curious about what comes next that I stay up too late. While short one offs are great, after a steady diet of them they dont really cut it anymore. So I sometimes find myself rereading stories that are longer and more indepth with character arcs and real plots just to keep up the good feelings my inner gai boi requires for my general well being and happiness. :o)
Author's Response: thanks very much. i'm really happy about it. hopefully soon enough i can bring out new stories.
Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
Your story has been selected for blue ribbon/feature status. Congrads. You're a very popular author and this is long overdue.
Author's Response: Wow, I didn't even know that. That makes me really happy. Thanks for the best wishes. Later, Tay
Author's Response: Wow, I didn't even know that. That makes me really happy. Thanks for the best wishes. Later, Tay
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
I love this story so much, and even though this must be my third time reading it I just couldn't pause long enough to leave a comment for each chapter, I was so eager to get to the next part of the story.
I like how you portrayed Michael. I actually think that in cannon he was ment to be quite loving if a bit narrow minded. A lot of fic makes him totally rotten, and while I enjoy the mikey-hate, your story is refreshing. While Mikey is still insecure and totally in awe of Brian, he was given a chance to grow into an adult and be a great friend to both Brian and Justin in a healthy way.
Eric is a little darling, I enjoyed this little origional character and how you gave him a huge personality and age appropriate dialogue. Gus, as always, was so open hearted and secure in all the love he has from those around him that he took to Eric instantly. A trait so rare even in the pure hearts of young children.
I have taken up reading a number of your stories in the last few days and congratulate you on the number of complete stories you have written for this fandom!
Michelle
Author's Response: I'm so very happy to hear all this. I enjoy writing a lot and like finishing them so that way is better.
Author's Response: I'm so very happy to hear all this. I enjoy writing a lot and like finishing them so that way is better.
Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
I like happy endings :) ...nice story
Author's Response: Me too!!! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Take care, Tay.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Married
I LOVE, LOVE,LOVE THIS STORY! I keep coming back to it and re-reading it over and over. This is my 3rd time and I know it won't be my last. I really enjoy your work and this is one of my favorites.
Well done and all the best.
Author's Response: thank you so much for those great words. i always do try to do the best i can. nice that is working.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
That was an amazing, wonderful story. I loved the originality and it was well written. One of the best fanfics that I've read in a long time. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had tons of fun writing it
too. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Marny (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 04:41 PM · On: Unspoken Words
Yesterday I read this whole story at ones. It was a sweet lovely story, thanks
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it and reviewing it. It makes my day. Yay! Later, Tay
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 12:12 AM · On: Unspoken Words
This is one of my fav's!! Glad you got it posted up again on this site. I love many of your stories but I re-read this one often. Love it and everyone should read it :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm always amazed that people loved this one so much. I never thought they would. It makes me so happy. You take care, Tay
Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2008 01:42 AM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
Your last chapter called "Enjoying Every Minute" reflects my feelings for this story. I enjoyed every chapter of this story ... the premise was very clever and I loved what you did with the characters. Thank you for such a great story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know. I'm glad that my story touched you in some way....mmm, does that sound dirty? Lmao. What? I'm innocent. Lol. There will be other and I hope that you love them as much. Later, Tay
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2008 05:31 PM · On: Unspoken Words
I so love this fic!
Author's Response: thanks a lot for that. it always makes me smile to know that people out there like my stuff. later, tay
Reviewer: Rach (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2008 03:32 AM · On: Enjoying Every Minute
this is one of my fave stories, its such a sweet story, I can read it over and over and its as good as the first time
Author's Response: thanks for letting me know. it's good to know that you don't get tired of it. at least that means it's good...right? lol. thanks!! later, tay
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 09:46 PM · On: New Things
I read this story a while ago and it remains one of my favorites!! It's so well written, I will gladly read it again! Also so glad that you're back!!
Author's Response: I'm glad to be back. You have no idea. If it hadn't been for Tiziana I would have never known where MW went to. I would still be waiting for the old one to come back and be sad each time I try to go to it and nothing would happen. I'm bouncing of the walls with the site being back. Yay! Hugs, Tay
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