Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For THE FROG PRINCE
Reviewer: Wren (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 03:28 PM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 2

From the story of how and why the King gave Prince Brian his precious golden ball to the wonderful weakness of Craig's robot army this was just delicious.  I laughed myself silly.  And, of course, enjoyed all the BJ goodness along the way.

 

Delicious!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 06:10 AM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 2

In this case I think I can buy all the bad things because of the Happiness and Super funtime story this is.



Author's Response:

I---don'tr think I quite understand this comment.. You....want to buy...all the bad things? OOOO---kaaayyyy. Hey, yur the boss!! Let me know, hit me up, I need money.

Otherwise, this looks kinda like a compliment...sorta....So I'll take it as such....for FREE! Thank you and I hope you liked the story and sorry for the long wait for the ending. Yeah, I know that was you waiting... Anyway, sorry for the delay, I just made the deadline! I had a little cold. It's better now tho.

Cheers!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 06:00 AM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 1

How cruel of Jack to try to place his son under arrest!  But Kung Fu Froggy saves the day.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 05:52 AM · On: JUSTIN THE PRINCE

Yay!  I do so love happy endings or is it?



Author's Response:

What, that wasn't shmoopy enough for you? Besides, if you read it again, I'm sure you will see that both our Prince's had a happy ending! (wink wink!)

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2013 07:39 PM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 2

This is funny, actually I am not so much to QAF fairy tale stories, but I find this one interesting. I enjoyed the conversation between Prince Brian and Justin the frog.

Great story, thanks!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 2

“But this is a Springtime, Happiness, Super Funtime Story and I'm afraid it'd be against the rules”. Hilarious and a very smart way to write angst without writing angst. LOL. I love this humour; it's clever and oh so entertaining; thank you. Good luck with the challenge.


Cheers

Author's Response:

wellll....just a li`l bit!  Besides as old Aunt Lula used to say: Better to skirt the rules then to wear a skirt. Well...unless you`re a drag queen...i guess. And I`m afraid that`s not  me, I don`t have the temperment, not to mention the legs to pull that off!! Cheers and here`s to NOT getting disqualified!!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 2

Fabulous Kung Fu style ending with the jumping and leaping peasant-folk and exploding clockwork robots! Kung Fu Panda would be proud to have inspired this! See how fun it is to write an occasional Super happy, Funtime, angst free story? I'm glad you had fun writing this because your readers are going to have even more fun! Thanks for the laughter (aka insane giggling). Thanks for joining in on the challenge dealio. TAG



Author's Response:

Wasn't that just the living end? I told you it got better. And of course, we couldn`t let Crazy Craig off the hook, could weÉ Well, at least I let him live this time around...Did you like the kung fu You tube

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 08:03 AM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 1

I love how you manage to so accurately describe all the scenes that defy description. Justin's Froggy Kung Fu sure does come in handy. But, I am glad that no actual toadacide was committed in the making of this story. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 07:50 AM · On: JUSTIN THE PRINCE

I'd like to complain about the ridiculously romantic tone of this story and its complete lack of angst, but since this is a "Springtime, happy, super fun time story and it's against the rules", I won't. He he he! (Plus, I'm in a bit of a time crunch to move on and read the epilogue!) TAG

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Epilogue: PARENTS or MORE KUNG FU-OOLERY Part 2

I have had it with you boy!! You'll go up on charges for toadacide for this. And while waiting for your trial, I'm sending you to a very strict military school! You'll have to do math every day and play hockey! And no hair products!!"

       Brian gasped in horror. "What!!!? No hair products?? Unthinkable!"

       Jack smiled in evil triumph. "Guards! Place the Prince under arrest! And escort this rent-a-man out of here!"

 

OMG, Jon, you had me laughing at loud at those sentences!  Sooo funny!  Especially the part about Brian going without hair products and the 'toadacide'!

 

And this line:

They were dressed like simple farmer folk and carried torches and pitchforks and plowshares and rakes.

Frankenstein, anyone? Or else the XFiles episode where the ugly boy was hiding out and the townsfolk descended upon him.

 

I really enjoyed this one, Jon! And as usual, I'm extremely entertained by your warped sense of humor (I can relate) and your ability to place little off-stage whispers/asides into your story.  Thanks for participating in the challenge, my friend, it was great!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

I wish I could take total credit but actually, i got the majority of the content drawing from memories of The Frog Prince version of Faerie Tale Theatre  brought to you long ago by Shelley Duvall. toadacide and even being sent away to a strict school where they were forced to do math and play hockey was from there the frog Prince was played in that by the unforgettable Robin Williams

The har products etc...well, that was ALLLL Brian ;)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 07:34 AM · On: IN THE BEDROOM

Of course, frogs are made out of rubber and bounce! Everyone knows that! But still, Froggy Kung Fu? Flied lice? No Tongue? *Still giggling insanely - too much to continue typing*. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 07:17 AM · On: DINNER

*Insane giggling at the spactacle of Froggy Kung Fu* TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 06:57 AM · On: THE DEAL

I think Brian needs to spend some time talking with the royal head-shrinker (or doesn't this happy time before plumbing but after witch craft include the profession of psychiatry). First, the unhealthy obsession with his golden ball. Then, he starts hearing talking frogs. Now, he's moved on to a 'Lord of the Rings' type golem immitation (My, precious . . . Er, Sunshine). Poor Prince Brian needs some professional help here! LMAO! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 06:14 AM · On: JUSTIN THE FROG

Froggy Kung Fu? He he he! TAG



Author's Response:

it gets better!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 05:59 AM · On: BRIAN THE PRINCE

Just love your opening paragraph - you've been saving that one up for awhile, haven't you? I adore your fairy tales. But, I have serious concerns over the advisability of using a heavy metal - gold as a replacement testicle. From a biological standpoint it would be a very bad choice. And heavy, too! That one ball would probably drag prince Brian down significantly. LOL! Hmmmmm. Well, I'll try for a dose of 'suspension of disbelief' and read on. TAG



Author's Response:

no no, the gold ball is to play with only. I too thought that a metal (any metal) would be too heavy for as prothetic so I made a polished wood one instead.  Keep reviewing! I love your comments

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 10:39 PM · On: IN THE BEDROOM

I went to go onto the next chapter and there isn't one.  I was soooo looking forward to it.  Please, please put it up soon.  Totally enjoyable.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 07:54 PM · On: IN THE BEDROOM

No Tongue?  Fly Take Out?  Flied Lice?  This is too funny.  I'm glad that Brian has come to his senses and let Justin stay.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 07:46 PM · On: DINNER

Kung Fu Froggy!  I'm impressed.  Jack's awfully nice and Brian isn't.  Love the discription of Justin's little show, you could almost see it happening.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 07:37 PM · On: THE DEAL

After all Justin did for him - Brian left him alone?  How cruel.  But this is a fairy tail and a spring time tale so I'm sure things get better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 07:31 PM · On: JUSTIN THE FROG

Justin still likes to show his smarts doesn't he?  Shame Brian's lost his testicle-er-egg.  Is there a trick to getting it back?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 07:20 PM · On: BRIAN THE PRINCE

LMAO!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 04:09 PM · On: IN THE BEDROOM

I apologise for my last review; I didn’t mean to imply there was angst in your story. I was trying to be humorous, as that’s where my mind went as soon as you mentioned a wooden ball. I am totally loving your comical fic and I can’t believe where you left us here; at the kiss. LOL Please more of this light-hearted entertainment as soon as possible.

Cheers

Author's Response:

No apology neccesary. I just didn't want you getting any painful imagery from the story. Hope your enjoying the fic. The end and epilogue should be up today.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 02:37 PM · On: DINNER

This is hilarious. Brian with a wooden ball; Justin better watch out for splinters. Ouch. LOL I really hope you can complete this before the deadline. Good luck with the challenge.

Cheers

Author's Response:

ahhh but remember the wood is smooth and polished to make sure that doesn't happen. No angst to splinter our boys...Well...let's hope not....with a little luck

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