Very cute story!!!   Loved it!!

Hey! in my last review I forgot to mention (although I'm pretty sure you noticed.... -_-U) that I've kind of been absent from this site (I've been hopelessly hooked with many Harry Potter and BBC Sherlock's fanfictions, and I've also had a huge workload the past couple of months), but now I'm trying to catch up, so expect many many more reviews coming your way!!! ^-^ Read you soon! Kisses! :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Mafita!  Yes, I've missed you!  So good to see you reading QAF again. Thank you for the comments and for reading this story; I am delighted that you enjoyed it.;)  Not sure if I can work on a sequel to it, but I WILL say that a new "Tricky" story will be coming up at some point involving the boys' wedding.;)  I hope you will enjoy that one.:) 

I will be looking forward to hearing your feedback on some of my other stories as you get time. Thank you again - and welcome back!!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

I really enjoyed the adventures of Snowball who’s almost as fun as Tricky. It’s funny how one little animal can cause such choas. Is it possible that we may see him again in another story? Also now that you’ve done stories with a dog and a rabbit how about a kitten!fic?

I’m afraid though that I can’t think of Brian purposefully giving Melanie measles as funny. Measles is a serious illness that can have severe complications and can even be fatal so Brian trying to make Melanie sick with it was just plain nasty in my opinion. I’m quite sure that if the shoe was on the other foot and someone gave Justin a serious illness on purpose that Brian, if he found out, would not think it amusing but would be angry and upset and rightly so. I was hoping that afterwards Justin would have insisted that Brian confess to Melanie immediately and to take any consequences like a man but he didn’t. So I’m afraid both Brian and Justin disappointed me in those respects.

It often seems like Brian often gets a free pass for things that had they been done by other characters would have had readers down on them like a ton of bricks. If Melanie, Lindsay, Michael or Ethan (the four characters most villainized in this fandom) would have purposely tried to make someone seriously ill I’m quite sure there would have been reader outcry saying how mean and evil they were but because it’s Brian who does it readers think it’s funny (and worse that Melanie somehow even deserves it!). This kind of double standard is something that’s always puzzled and disappointed me about this fandom. But apart from these aspects I enjoyed the story.

Author's Response:

Hi, Rixa - thank you for reading this story and for the comments.  Point taken about the measles; I meant (obviously) for it to be funny, but I see your point as well about it possibly doing someone serious harm.   I normally don't bash Melanie, BTW, although sometimes I do make her a little harsh or crass, since she tended to be that way on the show.  As far as Brian getting a free pass, perhaps. And yes, others would have probably been called on the carpet for things like what he did.  But it was like that a lot in the show, too; he tended to get away with doing and saying things that no one else would. Right?  Probably not.  But I think still in character.

Anyway, I DO plan on another Tricky story. But I think I will just let Snowball go back to school and remain there, out of harm's way.  Thank you again for reading.  Hope it didn't put you off to where you won't try any of my others in the future.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

This did make me smile.  I just loved the idea of Brian deliberately giving Mel the measles.  Serves her right!  And the interactions between Brian and Gus were sweet without being cloying.  I enjoyed the whole story immensely.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! What a lovely surprise to see your comments here.:)  Thank you for reading and for the feedback.  I do love to write a lot of stories with Brian and his son, as you probably know, so I'm delighted that you didn't feel Brian was TOO OOC here.  On another note, will you be at the con next month?  I hope so.  If so, I wish you would attend the fan meet and greet on Thursday the 7th.  One of the attendees is making up some great I.D. badges for the event which will be a wonderful souvenir.  I do hope you will be attending in either case so we can touch base again. 

Thank you once more for taking the time to comment, Wren!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Awww.  Its nice when Brian can express his feelings for Mel so openly.  (snort).

For the record, by the way, I must say I rather liked the blue lights over the loft bed.  It sure highlighted them beautifully.

I like that the girls moved home and Gus and his daddies spend lots of time together.  The bunny was a nice touch, to keep things interesting.

Oh, no! A blue cashmere sweater ruined! :(  But Brian's acceptance that it was JUST a piece of clothing was beautiful. It's so important to realize that time with family is precious.

Great chapter!

Cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:

Hi, Vin!  Thank you for all the reviews.  I hope you're having a grand time with your family.;)  I saw your nephew's photo on LJ; he's a real cutie.;)  And yes, you are right; family is most important of all, and I'm glad that you're getting the chance to be with them.  Take care and keep in touch.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

"I'm getting hungry, Sunshine.  How about some Rabbit Fricassee?"

LOLLOLLOL!!! I had to hide under the covers in order to stifle my laughter as not to wake my 14 month old nephew that finally fell asleep. Great chapter! Brian is his snarky, awesome self, while Justin plays peacemaker beautifully.

Well done!

Cheers, Vin

Great story  yours are always the best

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much for reading and for that lovely comment! That really makes me very happy.:)  (Love your user name, BTW;)).  I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy; I still love these two characters dearly.  Thank you again for taking the time to leave me feedback; that is always so motivating for me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Bad Brian! Intentionally passing on an infectious virus! Very bad! *Fun Microbiology fact of the day - the measles virus is one of the most virulent viruses out there. Worldwide, there are more than 20 million cases a year and approx. 200,000 deaths.* See what you learn when you're friends with a biologist? TAG

Are you sure the bunny shouldn't be named 'Tricky' as well? TAG

Only you could make Girl Scout cookies that sexy! He he he. TAG

I loved this story! Sweet and funny. Thanks

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Thank you so much for reading and for all the comments!  I have to personally stay away from Girl Scout cookies - too much temptation there.;)  But think of the fun ways the boys will have now to work off all that 'Hankie Pankie' with some of their own.  Thank you again for the support and for taking the time to leave me feedback; I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

The part of Brian's childhood was so sad. The rest was funny. thanks

I'm hungry now! Finally have time to read and review your story. *Happy dance*

I love the conversation here:

"At least wear the navy speedo, then, I'm on my deathbed here, and I need the inspiration to keep going."

"You're not dying, Daddy!"

"No, I was just trying to get sympathy."

I really love the romantic side of Brian. And that part wherein he even asked Justin if wearing trunks is necessary, hahahaha...how Brian loved to see Justin always naked! :):):)

{{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

I know - I'm evil!  Even when he's sick, Brian still has his priorities in order.;)  You noticed, though, that Justin still came out wearing the speedo anyway.;)  I, too, like to think that Brian COULD do romance, at least when he wanted to and in his own way.  Thank you for the comments and for reading, Sweetheart.  I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I forgot. How soon will you be updating your other stories? I miss them.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra (hiding under desk now...).  I know; I should be updating my other stories and not writing new ones!  (staring back sheepishly).  I AM working on the update to "My Heart's Desire" right now, so that is what I will be concentrating on for the next several days until it's ready to be posted.  I don't see me starting, finishing, or writing any new ones until I get these others updated and at least one of them finished (probably "Parent Trap;" I MAY have a sequel to that one eventually, though), so I should be cranking out updates to those in the next few weeks.  My teaching schedule has really been cutting into my writing, unfortunately, but they are all on my mind constantly, and I will NOT leave any of them unfinished.  Never have, never will.  So rest assured they WILL be updated, and the ongoing dilemma about what to do with Alex in MHD will be addressed in the next part of that story, along with some issues such as the election.

Thank you again for all the support, Sandra!  I can't express how grateful I am to you for that.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Rachel stikes again, LOL.

I loved te way Brian got Mel back.

Author's Response:

Tee-hee; couldn't resist.  I could see Brian as such a big baby when it comes to this sort of illness.:)  Thanks for the comment!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Somehow I knew that there was going to be a lost rabbit. It was a good thing Justin could rein Brian in before irreconcilable damage could have been done. Mel and Lindsay would never have forgiven him for terrorizing Gus nor would Brian have forgiven himself.

I loved the playful banter with the art magazine and the sex at the end. Adorable.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I always look forward to your comments.:)  Thank you for continuing to read this story and for the feedback; I'm glad that you enjoyed it.:)  You knew I would have to throw some smut in there somewhere, didn't you?;)  I do hope you enjoy the rest, Sandra; thank you for all the support you give me - and I hope that all the other writers to whom you do the same are as equally grateful.  I appreciate all my readers, but ones like you who go the extra mile to review are extra-special in my book.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Hysterical chapter. Brian's sweater. lol. I love, love when Justin rides the the horsey. *wink*

Author's Response:

Hi, Annie - I totally agree; he can saddle up with me anytime.;)  (BTW - did you see that gorgeous photo of him on IHJ and LJ today?  OMG!  Stunning!  He is so beautiful - sigh...) 

Yes, only his son would make Brian overlook the fact that a 'critter' was using his expensive sweater for nefarious purposes - ha!  Thank you so much for reading and for the comments, dear friend.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Glad to find out Snowball wasn't responsible for the soon demise of our dearly beloved Brian. Somehow I doubt cute blond boy is the recommend treatment for measles. How fitting he caught it from a Girl Scout. I've never trusted them, I was always involved in H-4. I wonder if it will be an open casket or if Justin will choose to cremate so he can keep the ashes with him.
Lori

Author's Response:

You are seriously warped, Lori - ha!  But I love it!  Yeah, those Girl Scouts just look too cute to be believed, don't they?  LOL!  BTW, I thought it was 4-H; I'm not sure with you, though, if you're making an honest mistake or just trying to be funny again.;)  Brian doesn't seem like the 'cremation' type; I would think that anything that would destroy his handsome physique would be an abhorrence to him, although having his body covered in maggots might not appeal to him, either.;) Thanks for the comments, my friend; as always, you are so entertaining!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I enjoyed the whole story alot,Kim ~ Yvonne xx

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie - I'm so glad that you liked it.:)  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Rachel stole the stole the show. She was hilarious. I laughed throughout the chapter but Justin steeling this little girl’s heart and her snarky reaction to Brian had me in stitches. And I can’t believe the names of the cookies. I don’t remember those on the list with the ones I bought.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  I was missing you.;)  So glad to see you reading this one.  You mean you don't remember getting any 'hankie pankie?'  LOL!  Actually, I'm pretty sure Do-Si-Dos ARE an actual cookie, and, of course, Thin Mints have been around for quite a while.  I can get into a LOT of trouble with those!  So glad that you enjoyed this story! Thank you for reading and for the comments; I appreciate that very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I GUESS WE KNOW WHO WON THIS CHALLENGE--NO ONE COMES CLOSE IN MY BOOK.  GOOD JOB!!  THIS STORY WAS FUNNY.  THE COOKIES WAS VERY APPROPRIATE FOR THIS TIME OF YEAR.  WE ARE BEING INUNDATED AT THE HOSPITAL FOR SALES FROM EVERYONE'S KIDS OR NEICES OR GRAND DAUGHTERS.  MY BABY GOT HURT.  WE GOT REARENDED IN THE PARKING LOT BY SOME ASSHOLE WHO WAS ON HIS PHONE AND GOING TOO FAST, AT LEAST HE HAD INSURANCE.  IT"S GOING TO BE EXPENSIVE TO GET HER BACK TO THE WAY SHE LOOKED.  I STILL HAVE SOME NECK PAIN, BUT I WILL SURVIVE.  I AM JUST TOTALLY PISSED.  ENOUGH ABOUT MY TROUBLES.  I AM STILL WAITING VERY PATIENTLY FOR MY "STORY".  LINDC SAID YOU HAVE BEEN BUSIER THAN A ONE ARMED PAPER HANGER--SO I UNDERSTAND. LUV 2 U.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I was so thrilled to see your comments on here!  Lindc told me about your baby; I'm so sorry to hear that!  You have certainly had a hard year or so, haven't you?  But I'm so grateful that you weren't seriously hurt; that is the most important thing.  I think all this just points out how strong you really are though, my friend.  You - and the baby - will be just fine, I know it.;) 

Yeah, this is definitely the time of year for Girl Scout cookies; all those girls hanging out around the grocery stores gave me part of the inspiration for this story.  And I could definitely see Justin gushing over the cookies.;) 

And yes, I AM working on your favorite story.:)  I have part of it written, but you know me; I need to write quite a bit more before the next chapter is done.  But I'll be working hard on it, and promise it will be the next one updated. 

Thank you for all the support, Lee, and for your kind words of encouragement. They mean so much to me.  I'm sending my love back to you, too, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

That was fantastic!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Julieta; I appreciate that so much, my friend.:)  And I'm thoroughly enjoying your own story, BTW - soo funny!!  Thanks again for taking the time to read and for leaving your thoughts; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I'm loving this story :)

Kim dear..

what a great story.. Ireally like it when Brian took his own of 'revenge' on Melanie.. she deserved that!

reading through chapter 2, I was thinking, 'is it Cujo?' but sadly, it was a rabbit.

I think it's been a while we haven't heard any story about Cujo/Tricky. if you have time, could you please create an update story about him?

*hugs*

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Sue!  Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  You weren't the only one who was hoping Tricky would show up in here.  He would have been a natural fit, but part of it was the time constraint to get this finished before the deadline.  So ultimately I had to, alas, leave poor "Cujo" out of the picture.  But not to fear, as soon as I can finish up one of my other stories, the boys' wedding will be making an appearance in a new story, and Tricky will be making a prominent and chaotic return in their lives, along with maybe a 'puppy' accomplice to help stir up the mayhem even more.;)

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, though.  Thank you again for reading and for the feedback; that was very kind of you.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Oh Kim!
You have another winner. I enjoyed the first chapter so very much. Love your humor as always. Can't wait until the next chapter. Excellent start, Sweetie! Hugs, Annie

Author's Response:

Hi, Annie, my dear!  I'm always so delighted to hear from you.:)  And to think it all started by sheer coincidence near the bathroom at "Tommy" - LOL!  So glad that we met, Sweetie. I do hope we get another chance soon.  Hopefully Randy will be in another play this year at some point, and we can get together again.  I'm delighted that you're enjoying this one, and I hope you like the rest of it.  Thank you for reading and for the feedback, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Oh, no when you insinuated that Rachel was going to give Brian something I never considered measles.  Brian really needs to see a doctor - I understand that it can be dangerous if you catch it when your older.  Causes sterility I think.  What am I thinking?  It's not like he can get Sunshine pregnant.  Favorite line - God I need this like a man needs tampons. ROFL.  That was evil of Brian to kiss Melanie knowing full well she's never had measles either.

Author's Response:

LOL! Glad you liked that line.:)  And if Brian should find out that sterility could be a problem, I'm sure he would rush to the doctor.  Anything that even hints at him not being the 'stallion' that he is would be enough to have him hurry to the doctor to prevent it.;)  And while I know it's not anatomically possible in the real world, I had actually thought about an mpreg story - maybe one day (in my spare time - what's that?  Ha!).  I couldn't resist with Melanie; poor woman, she and Brian just will never be 'best buds.'  Thanks again for taking the time to leave me feedback, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

OMG!!!! Brian finally shared something other than Gus with Mel....it's a miracle! Lol Well now she can't say he never gave her anything haha.

Happy Easter my friend.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  The same to you, Sweetie.  You've been so supportive of my stories, and I appreciate that more than you know.  Thank you for all the feedback!  Glad that you enjoyed the story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Awww, Mel got the measles.  Wonder how that happened? 

I'm sure the boys will find a way to work off desert!  Fun stuff.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Ha!  I have NO idea.;)  So glad you enjoyed this.:)  All your comments meant a lot to me; thank you.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Loved the ending. Loved it all.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, S!  All your feedback means the world to me.  Happy Easter!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Brian is evil. If he got sick just from talking to Rachel, he really wanted to make sure Mel did too.
Gus is simply adorable and loves his father deeply.

Author's Response:

Yes, he is - but it's hard to engender a lot of sympathy for old Mel.:)  I think he could have gotten it from handling the cookie box.  Who cares as long as Mel gets to share in it?  LOL!  At least Justin and  Gus already had it, so Justin can play nursemaid now.;)  I would love to have that beautiful man as MY nurse - sigh....Thanks for all the comments, my friend.  I appreciate that very much and it is always so encouraging to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I love the playful grabbing.  They're so cute (and horny) together.  Mel's dialog was perfect, by the way.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Yep, that's our boys. And not to fear; there will be more of each coming up - both horniness and more jabbing at Mel.:)  (tee, hee).  Thanks for the comments, my friend.  Love the rainbow heart, too, BTW!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

A very beautiful end to that chapter,Kim :)

I would love to have seen the look on Brian's face when he saw snowball on his sweater lol ~ Yvonne xx

Author's Response:

Well, you can imagine it was definitely NOT a 'happy face' - LOL! Especially when he smelled it - ugh.:)  Now go to bed and get some sleep, my friend!  Sweet dreams - and thanks for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Sweet.
Poor Brian, terrible patient

Author's Response:

Yes, he isn't very cooperative, is he?  But when he looks at you with those puppy-dog eyes, how can anyone be mad at him? So glad that you're enjoying this, S.:)  Thanks for all the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I enjoyed that alot,Brian is such a child sometimes hahaha ~ Yvonne xx

Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.:)  And yes, Brian CAN be a child at times - I can still remember him sticking his tongue out at his friends in the diner, and playing 'cops and robbers' with Michael with that 'gun lighter' during his 'stickup.'  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Brian Kinney scared of a rabbit. So funny.
It's nice that after eight years the spark ignites into fireworks.

Author's Response:

Hi, My friend - LOL!  Well, Brian is a smart man - ha!  Besides, I think Justin is more of the 'animal lover' type.;)  And yes, such chemistry between these boys.:)  So glad that you're enjoying this one, S.:)  Thank you again for all the support and for taking the time to read AND comment especially.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I wish we had girl scouts selling cookes in England, as they sound so good. What are they raising money for anyway?

(I was so happy to see you'd posted, as I was getting a tad bit worried when you hadn't updated in a while. It's stupid. I get less concerned when I haven't talked to my sister for longer time periods.)

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! So great to see you reading this.;)  Thank you for taking the time to comment, also; it is much appreciated.  I try to personally stay away from these cookies, especially the Thin Mints - my downfall - ha!  I'm trying to diet, and these are NOT low-cal.;)  I think the $ goes toward their camping programs, if I recall correctly.

And BTW - don't apologize for checking up on me; I'm very flattered that you were concerned.  It's when people DON'T miss my writing that I would be discouraged.;)  Thank you for all the support; I just posted the next chapter, and will get the rest put up very shortly.  Thank you again, Nikki.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

<pout>  They should have woken Brian up so he could enjoy watching Gus' excitement while finding eggs.  You gotta love the guy for his attitude about his favorite sweater being used for the bunny.  Looks like Justin got to go riding too. lol.

Author's Response:

Well, Gus was smart enough to know how soft the sweater was, but Brian's love for him won out over his initial outrage.;)  Brian's about to feel a little poorly, though (hint, hint).  But I promise to fix him up; it's only temporary.  I'll be posting the rest of this very shortly. Thank you for all the comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I knew that Bunny was going to be trouble. <grin>  How sweet that Brian realized that something said unthinking could be painful for Gus.  Not many people come to that realization and Brain has more reason to know then most.  Gus being there doesn't seem to be slowing the hankie pankie up any. <snicker>

 

It's a good thing a certain dog isn't around.  We had a rabbit die on us because our dog chased the rabbit around the yard.

Author's Response:

LOL!  You're not the first one to bring up Tricky; I think that might have been too big a strain on Brian's heart, though!  But not to fear - he will definitely make a return appearance in an upcoming story, with maybe one of his offspring soon.  As much as Brian would hate the thought, I think a certain blond can be quite persuasive when he wants to be as far as having a pet in the family.;)  Let's just say that Tricky will make a very unique 'ringbearer.'  Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!  You are very kind.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Brian has softened a great deal over the years.  He watches the cursing around Gus, which is nice.  The bunny is a hoot.  Think of all the trouble it can get into with Brian.  But Brian wouldn't have it any other way!

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend; yes, I think Brian 'doth protest too much' sometimes.  I think he likes a little mayhem in his life.;)  So happy that you're enjoying this; thank you again for commenting.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

awww what a sweet chapter, Brian really has changed. Why I wouldn't be surprised if he doesn't end up with own furry pet soon. I bet he would love to adopt an exracing greyhound. Very easy to fall in love with. They are calm and regal not to mention so grateful for a real home. Now I'm going to go eat some easter eggs and maybe nibble on a chocolate bunny. I hope your basket was filled this morning and your day is wonderful.
Lori

Author's Response:

Ha!  Not sure if Brian could handle that on a full-time basis, but I HAVE heard that they do make wonderful pets.  A calmer dog would be a good solution for his after-work tension, although I think Justin might provide the type of 'stress reliever' he needs already - wink, wink.;)  BTW - make sure you start with the ears on the bunny first - most people do - LOL! Aw, heck!  Be a rebel like Brian - start on the feet instead!  Thanks again for the feedback, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Bunnies sure can be sneaky. Now I'm just waiting for Brian to step in a pile of rabbit pellets...I'm sure that won't be a plus in the bunny column. I bet Justin added sleeping pills to Gus's meatballs to make sure he'd stay asleep so our boys can enjoy some private time.
Lori

Author's Response:

Ha!  You are so evil, but I love a sneaky mind!  That would be like the preschool teacher in the news that put some sort of sleep aid in the children's bottles to keep them asleep - but I know you're kidding, though.;)  Brian will be disgusted enough when he discovers what Gus gave the rabbit in an upcoming chapter that belongs to him - I'll get the rest posted shortly.  Thank you for going to the trouble to review each chapter, Lori; I appreciate you going that extra mile for me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I've been waiting for Easter to start reading the Spring Stories. Lucky you, you'r's was at the top when I logged on. I just spent the morning at church so now I feel ready to read these kinds of stories. We did have many boxes of Girl Scout cookies in our house but they all vanished before I even got a nibble. I will depend on you to remind me how wonderful they are. I guess I will have to make a snack of the dozen of easter eggs I colored last night. Can I hope that Trixie shows up in this story?
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori!  So good to hear from you and to read your comments.:)  I had toyed with Tricky showing up here - having him AND the rabbit together certainly would have been quite chaotic!  But alas, I finally decided to exclude him. Rest assured, though, that I have not forgotten the sequel where he is going to serve as 'ringbearer' for the wedding.:)  And I think he can create more than enough havoc on his own to satisfy your desire for some more 'Tricky trouble.'  I have a lot of ideas on how to do just that already.  So hopefully after I get at least one of my three WIPs finished ("Parent Trap" should be done soon), I can focus on the next Tricky sequel.;)

I'm hoping I'll have enough surprises in store for you in this story, though, that you won't miss him TOO much.  Thank you for reading and for your feedback, my friend; I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I wondered where you were,busy girl.  You have so many irons in the fire-can you keep up???  I just knew you would write a story for the challenge--so cute.  Brian, his boys and a bunny.  Loved it so far.  Some bad news here.  Lee was in an accident.  "V" banged up a little-fixable.  Lee is ok just banged up a little..He got hit from behind in the parking lot.  The fool was going too fast and talking on the phone-go figure.  Noonie had a slight heart attack, so she can't work any more as it's too stressful for her.  BB is good working hard.  We have two new people on our team, one guy and one gal.  She will be with us for six months and I don't know about him yet.  They are quite capable.  He is a riot and she is very quiet.  I hope you haven't been working yourself to death. Seems to me you should take it a little bit easy and not overdo it.  Sorry I'm being a yenta.  Ha!  Hope you have a nice Easter.  I'm glad I have something of yours to read. This site has many stories to read-but they are not yours.  We were missing you.  lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc!  I am so happy to hear from you and to know how you are, but very sorry to hear about Lee's baby getting skinned up and about Nonie. Tell her that I send her my best wishes for improving health and that my thoughts and prayers go out to her; I'm relieved that Lee is okay, too.  I am sorry for the very long delay in between posts - I have been extremely busy with my students' 3rd-quarter grades and was out of town this past week visiting my parents with very limited internet access, so that has put me behind.

I really had no business posting a challenge story, but as you said I couldn't resist.;)  Tell Lee I really AM working on his favorite story, and I have a good part of the next chapter written.  But it will be a little while yet.  I am trying as hard as I can to get it updated, though, since I know it's been much too long.  I feel bad about it, but my teaching, of course, has to take priority.

And BTW, never apologize for caring about me - I was already afraid that everyone had forgotten about me, since it had been so long in between posts, so your last comment almost made me cry; thank you for your support, lindc, it means so much to me.  I'm sending a big hug your way and also to Brian, Lee, and Nonie.  I wish you all a wonderful Easter and hope that I can continue to entertain you with my stories for a long time to come.  Love & Hugs ~Kim

Hankie Pankies.....I love it lmfao!!! Little Rachel trying to explain to Brian where she came from was priceless, I could just imagine the look on his face lol. But what really had me in stitches was how Justin gushed orgasmically over the cookies...hilarious (although girl scout cookies are that damn good)

I can't wait to see what you have in store for our boys when sweet little Gus arrives at Britin.

More,more,more please~JP

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  I can always count on your support, my friend; thank you for reading and for the comments.  It's probably not a good idea for me to think about Girl Scout cookies when I'm trying to diet - ha! - but to Justin it's a close second to sex, I think, so it was a must for him.;)  And yes, there will be some havoc - and surprises - ensuing in the coming chapters.  I'll get the rest up by the end of the day.  Thank you again for taking the time to comment; I'm delighted that you're enjoying it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim