Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Alien
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2018 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

Damn..alien justin is more cute then the human one.lol.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

You have good story direction.



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 5

Funny chapter. I can just see him yelling 'Take Out' to everything in the kitchen. TAG



Author's Response: LOL :) thanks!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2013 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 5

This had me in stitches laughing - Standing up, Justin explains, "You told me that if I get hungry, to call take out. So I said Take Out, but nothing happened. So I thought that maybe you were supposed to take something out and say Take Out to it...but I didn't know what, so I took out everything in your kitchen and told it to take out, but nothing happened." He sighs and shrugs, "Maybe you need to check your voice activation system?"~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response: LOL, I'm so glad that made you laugh! :)

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow. This story premise is utter brilliance, hun. I really love it! Last night I was in bed, taking a 'rare' break from writing. Shhh. Don't tell anyone. LOL. I stumbled on this and read all the chapters. This is original, fun, and witty. And... of course, hot! I love Justin's fascination with the word 'fuck'. Somehow it's both cute and endearing. 

I hope to read more of this unique 'verse. Well done on such a clever idea! One thing, though... maybe you need a banner or some sort of image to draw attention to it. Some readers might be missing it in between the larger size posts. 

Thanks for writing this! *Hugss*



Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your comments! That means so much coming from you, thank you! Now, I understand taking a break from all the fics you are writing but...get back to work! LOL No, seriously, thank you. This is pretty fun to write. I'm glad you like it. I'd like to add a banner, but I'm pretty crappy at it. I've been trying different styles, and nothing works as I can't find a good picture of "Justin" that I want to use. Thank you again! Hugs, Snow

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

"That's a fantastic idea."

I like it.



Author's Response: hehehe, thanks! :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 5

“Immediately the cylinder uncurls and Justin returns to his form.”

Nice alien ability. I wonder if Justin is in his true form.

"You've been busy."

Brian should have though it through about leaving him alone on his first day on earth. Again, hilarious.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

OMG That was hilarious. He talked to the food. I cracked up just picturing that. Love this story.

PS. Tom Hanks was in Splash, not Michael Keaton.

Author's Response: Oops! Thanks for catching that mistake!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian goes to work single and when he arrives home he is married. Priceless. Justin Kinney; wait until Michael hears about that. LOL Calling take out. Hilarious. Justin can go a month without eating; what can I say; a person who thinks outside the box. I have no idea what you do for a living but my guess would be that you are an English Literature professor who has a weird obsession (like the rest of us) with QAF because this is so well written and pure genius. Please keep it coming.


Cheers

Author's Response: Wow, what an incredible compliment! I had once thought about majoring in English, but when I entered the university, my literature teacher pretty much ripped me a new one every time I wrote anything. So I scratched that major and found my love in Sociology of Social Psychology. Afterwards, I decided to pursue my graduate degree in special education. Sometimes I think about returning to school for my doctorate in sociology, but I've never been able to return to English. Sad, I guess. That asshole really traumatized me. LOL I ended up stabbing all all of the textbooks for that class with a dagger before throwing it into the fireplace when the semester had ended....yeah, I had some rage. LOL Anywho, LOL, thank you so much for the compliment, I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story! :)

Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 5

LOL!  Who knew the F word  could bring so much joy :) I am definitely enjoying it!



Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh Lord!  Think of all the little things we take for granted and Justin doesn't have the faintest idea what they are.  You've got enough material with that to write many long chapters.  Kinda wish that it was Michael that made the call.  I've never liked him.  Keep 'em coming.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comments! Yes, it's funny all the things we take for granted :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 5

OMG, I am loving this story, Julieta!  It is very unique, and Justin as an somewhat innocent alien is too damn adorable!  I loved it when he couldn't figure out how to call Brian and how he transformed into a different shape so the Feds couldn't figure out he was there.  I love the sweetness of his character and his openness in this story - and how Brian is quickly falling head over heels for him.

So glad you decided to write this one!  So funny!  Definitely looking forward to the rest of this, and whatever other 'surprises' await our little blond alien.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kim! I've fallen in love with Justin in this story too...he makes it so easy, doesn't he? LOL Hugs!

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 5

OMG, I'm dying here. This is so, so, so great and funny...... really.

I want an alien for myself- Justin of course :D



Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'd like an alien Justin too :)

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