Reviewer: guavejuice (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2018 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
IDK why I've never read this story before.
This was such a delightful heartwarming and above all IC tale. LOVED it!
And btw- thanks again for your ongoing support for my QaF fan fics. It's great to be sharing them here. Aa for your 'Toppy!Justin' comment to my latest story- you asked if Brian only topped for Justin. My answer's YES< he did it just with him because he wanted to :)
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2017 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Brian may not think he does cute, but he does. Hi mini me is just like his daddy and he was so cute on the show and in almost all the fiction here write him as sweet and loving as he could be
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2017 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very funny ! Thank you !
Reviewer: feet526@ comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2017 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Just DELIGHTFUL!!! Thanks; a great way to end my day!
Reviewer: LEAM (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2017 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
I definitely agree with the review from Al. You should write more with this story.
Anti-Linds & Mel, because of them asking for money to buy them a gift, that is just wrong on so many levels. Lindsey trying to show the article to Brian; while Justin tries to cover it up. You could even write something to hint at that Lindsey and/or Mel did something to the wire that broke, so they could get rid of Gus, for money. Just a thought. As you can tell, I am Anti-Lindsey & Mel.
I could go on and on with more ideas. I wish I knew how and had the talent to write… I would do something more with this. I hope you do!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2017 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh wow what a cute story thank you
Author's Response: Considering Gus was involved it couldn't help but be that way. Thank you so much for commenting.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2017 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love this story!! Brian to the rescue. Bill
Author's Response: Hey, Bill. Just something for the Spring is in the Air Challenge Midnight Whispers had a couple of years back. Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2017 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was amazing...thank u for posting.
Author's Response: I need to thank whoever decided to make this a feature story. And I thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this story. I like how it fits into the timeline of the show. That damn magazine!!!!
Great story!
Author's Response: I know. Glad you enjoyed the tale.
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2015 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aw, that was cute. And shame on that school for hooking a small child onto wires so he could fly! That's just asking for trouble lol. Good job.
Author's Response: But Gus got the best part in the play.
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2014 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. Gus has got his Daddy's business savvy with those eggs, also I liked his go with the flow personality. Thanks for sharing. :) ~hugs~Mandi
Author's Response: He's the best of Brian.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi my friend,
Just read this and I was alone in front of my conmputer, laughing at loud with my son trying to get my attention every two second lol
That was sweet, yet really funny, I love it. Love the last "act" aha
Thank you
~alois~
Author's Response: Thank you. You caught my mood, I was going for funny.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2013 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Adorable father/son moment. Loved that Brian would call in reinforcements and make an Easter bunny appear for Gus! What a big marshmallow! Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: So many children never get any eggs and Brian would not want Gus to be disappointed. So he goes a little overboard.
Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
This story is so cute!!! I love the end part when Gus was saying "I didn't know you were in the play, Daddy." I can just imagine the innocence in his voice! :) :) :) Nicely done!
{{{Hugs}}}
Author's Response: Gus didn't even realize he was in danger. All he thought was that it must be part of the play.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was so wonderful! very sweet story !
Author's Response: I love how Gus and Brian interact.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, Sweetie - I just noticed I had read this the other day and had never reviewed! Sorry about that - I was out of town and had limited access to the internet at best, so I'm rectifying that right now. This was so charming! Loved the line about Brian hoping Justin wasn't allergic to golden gardenias, and how Ted helped Brian mastermind Gus's discovery of the bunny. Sooo cute! I loved this!
BTW - I was a little mortified to notice that we had two similar elements in our story - the bunny and a comment that Justin makes about Brian being 'our hero' - believe me, it was unintentional. I hope you believe that. I had already written my story by the time you posted yours, and it was Tag who actually gave me the idea for Gus adopting the classroom bunny over the Easter break several weeks ago.
Speaking of which, I appreciate your review of my own story; that was very kind of you. Thank you for that. And good luck with this story in the voting - it's very heartwarming! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Voting is going to be soooo hard. Kia is a top contender along with your story. Not to mention all the others - too many goods ones to name. Spring and Easter Bunny kinda go hand in hand, I'm not surprised others thought they'd be cute in a story. Great minds think alike? I wasn't sure which flower it was in the series so I opted for gardenias - hope I got it right. lol.
I'd wish you good luck, but I don't think your going to need it. Great writting always shows. <big grin>
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2013 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG...the cavities from the sweetness have disinitgrated my teeth...I now need dentures....lmao! This was awesome! So cute and sweet! I hope there will be a follow up or sequel or something! =) Loved it!
-Alyse
Author's Response: Send me your dental bill. <just joking> Sorry no follow-up at this time. Thanks for the lovely review.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2013 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Gus wearing fairy wings and carrying a wand; I can just see Brian’s face. LOL I love the last line. "I didn't know you were in the play, Daddy." Hilarious. This is so cute. Best of luck for the challenge.
Cheers
Author's Response: Somehow when I was thinking of what to write, the look on Brian's face just hit me and I couldn't resist. Closing a story is hard, but I figured Gus would say something and hoped it would be funny. Thanks for reviewing. : )
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was fun-
Author's Response: Thats great to hear. I was hoping to make it enjoyable and weird. It's the way I'm wired.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very cute, even though Brian Kinney doesn't do cute... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: That's true, but I would hope that for Gus, he would put out the effort. ~ Thanks for reviewing. It's one of the things that makes my days.
Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2013 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was wonderful
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Sweet story ;) Good luck!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks! With all the good stories that have been written I'm not expecting anything, it was just a weak moment. <giggle>
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2013 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
When does this take place. Because the Gus in this story seems older than the one from the show.
Good call on Mel and Linds asking Brian for money for his own wedding gift. That is absolutely something they would do. The way that these two always had their hand out for Brian's money made them both beyond annoying.
Author's Response: I thought that Gus was in preschool? Bwahaaa, I had that feeling too, about the wedding gift. Thanks for reviewing : )
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Cute ending! Our hero and crown stud!
But the girls asking for money to buy them a gift - wwwhhhhaaaattttt! Actually, I could see Lindsey asking for that and how sad is that?
A nice, sweet treat.
Thanks and all the best!
Laura
Author's Response: When I started this I needed a reason for Brian to be at the girls house and the characters just kept throwing things at me so I couldn't help it. Thanks for the lovely response.
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2013 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Cute ending! Although I can only imagine how Brian felt about his son being a 'fairy.'
Author's Response: Me too. ;) But I couldn't figure out how to word it.
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2013 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love this! You so need to write a longer story. I want to see what happens with the magazine with Justin being there with Brian at the time Lindsey tells Brian about the article. How Brian reacts to them asking them for money to buy him a wedding gift. That is so wrong on so many levels. You absolutley need to write about the wire breaking. Was it done on purpose. I have so many questions. I feel like I started reading a great book but then the rest of the pages were blank. PLEASE Please write a longer story about this, it allows so many twists and turns. So many possiblities.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. I just wrote this yesterday and didn't have time to go into details. You've seen the show so you know what happens when Brian finally sees the review. Of course my version would totally change the storyline. : 0 Nothing sinister about the wire, I'm sorry to say. Though come to think about it I could get Carl involved. Maybe a Hobbs like kid? That's a whole other story. Thanks for leaving a review not many do.
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