Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2013 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

I would like to see more chapters of this story. I think Molly did not show up for fear of rejection Craig, but Justin does not give up easily than he wants and could continue to seek their place in the life of his sister.Please consider an extended history.

A hug!

Fatima.

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2013 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

this could be a good start to a longer story.  Be brave

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2013 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm going to go with her refusing to attend the party. But maybe in a few years when Justin slips into kidney failure she might be willing to be tested to see if she could be a donor. Not sure she'd actually give up a kidney, but she will explore the option.
Lori

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2013 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

I suspect she did not turn up because there is a lot of hurt and anger mixed with homophobic poison to just be swept away by a brief encounter and invitation. I would like to think that Molly would think it over and eventually make very small steps to have a minimalist relationship all helped by Justin quietly attending Molly's graduation. She would see him and Brian in the audience but they leave without talking to her. She  see this as them reaching out without forcing her.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Safe = Boring

Write an ending take the risk



Author's Response:

As a writer it was my peragotative. I didn't even have a set ending in mind. On one hand, Justin made Molly think so she might have showed up. On the other hand, she wouldn't want to be ostrized from her father and she has had years to become set in her ways, so she wouldn't show up. It was my choice to let the readers pick the ending.

Samantha

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Molly does not show up for the party.

Author's Response:

That could be.

Samantha

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like how you wrote this. With other stories I would have been really mad that I was left hanging. However, with this situation it made me think. I like that.

Great Job



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I really didn't want to make the decision. LOL

Samantha

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

You really want to throw everybody for a loop.  Have Craig show up and play nice. hehe.



Author's Response:

I could just imagine everyone's faces, LOL

Samantha

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

You know, I want to say Molly showed up, but realistically in my head I don't believe she would.  Families get divided and even if Justin did his best to reach out to Molly a two minute conversation isn't going to change her stance on his lifestyle - especially if she thinks she could be ostracised from their father just like he was.  Life isn't perfect and we can't expect it to be.  On the plus side, it would give Brian and Justin something to bond over - besides sex.



Author's Response:

I know; I feel the same way, which is why I left it open. Let everyone believe what they want to believe.

Maybe in a few years after Molly grew up and matured, and learned how to separate her life from her father's, then they could have a relationship, but I truly think it was too soon for it to happen.

Samantha

Reviewer: JANE (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think Molly will go - Justin planted some seeds!



Author's Response:

I hope so, but even I don't know. LOL

Samantha

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good, well written wee story! I liked that Justin took a chance on her and wanted to build a relationship, I'm quite hopeful that she did show up at the diner! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks. I hated that Molly disappeared from the show except for the occasional mention. It's as if the writers forgot the fact that Justin had a sister.

Samantha

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