Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2019 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 11

good one

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved it! Mat we have more please?

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 10

Gus' costume party went well until He who shall not be named tried to ruin the fun. They should have booted him out the door. The old douchbag.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 9

Finally, some back story and now I can connect the dots. I truly despise Michael and the way he betrayed his mother.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ted & Cyn do think fast on their feet. But Sunshine just can't win. The blow to the head has given him amnesia, but now he remembers the prom.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loving Deb with that blonde hair.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

Mikey has lost his ever loving mind to feel like its okay to assault someone in front of witnesses. What is his damage?

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

I don't know why Justin is so dumbfounded about all the changes. Ten years is a long time and it seems as if he hasn't had much contact with the gang when he left to do his thing.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2018 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story has been on my TBR list for a while. I love Mysterious Marilyn. But a Brian & Em hookup? Can't wait to see where you will be taking us in this fic.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2016 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 11

I loved this! I have never liked Michael either so this pretty much made my day.

I am curious though about why Melanie would be upset with Justin. I figured Lindsay would be the one upset to see Justin.

Well, anyway, this definitely is a keeper!

Deb

Author's Response:
Mel was upset on Linsay's behalf. With those two you never know.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love it!

Author's Response:
Hope you got a chance to read the rest.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

A great start ~ Yvonne xx

Author's Response:
Thank you.

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yes I've got, and read, it. As I got it on my kindle, I got it at like midnight and was still reading at 3am, I was so excited. I just wanted to get to the Blay/Qhuinn bits, so kept missing massive sections at a time (which I did go back and read.) But you have to read it. It's so good. And sets up so much for the next book, which J R Ward has already announced who it's about and other bits about it.

Author's Response:
That means I need to preorder soon! Thank God for Kindles. Love Blay/Qhuinn. Have you found any fics featuring them and Layla? I know where I want JR to go with this but will she?

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2013 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

No you didn't, but thank you. I've been waiting for the Blay/Qhuinn book since the end of Phury's book. I honestly thought that it would the next book after Payne, so was very annoyed when it was Tohr instead. I pre-ordered it on my kindle, but stupid Amazon have moved the release date from the 26th to the 28th, which is rather annoying.

Author's Response:
Did you get Lover At Last yet? I'm almost afraid to read it cuz it sorta drives me crazy ~ I keep wanting the action to speed up. lol

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2013 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

The other story is The Tarot Series by LJG on fanfiction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9076269/1/The-Tarot-Series

It's AU after the end of season 2.

There's nothing wrong with your summary, it's just how I personally felt reading it. (You know the feeling you get when you read a blurb of a book or a plot of a film and there's just something it about that it doesn't really want to make you read/watch it. That's what it was. So it's a fault on my behalf, not yours.)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the link. I'm going to enjoy reading this. Did I mention I love your screen name? I'm a JR Ward fan too and can't wait for the next book. I have it preordered.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 11

Fun story!

Author's Response:
Thank you kindly, I'd hope for just that reaction.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2013 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 11

Silly and twisted ending but very humorous. Thanks for writing. TAG

Author's Response:
Ah huh, you found out my evil plan. I'm glad to see that the humor did come out. Thank you, for all the lovely reviews.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was over too soon. Don't you think a sequel is in order?

Author's Response:
Anything is possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing (happy dance)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

Well I’m disappointed; I wanted many, many more chapters. LOL I would have loved Mysterious Marilyn to get together with Em; looking at the pictures you added they would have been an awesome couple. Maybe a sequel on MM and Em. I really enjoyed this fic; thank you, as it was wonderfully entertaining.

Cheers

Author's Response:
Thank you, can I quote you?

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2013 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 11

Love this story. However, I don't understand the last section, between Emmett and Marilyn. Marilyn is gay, is a bottom, and a cross dresser. Emmett is the same, so they could try to make a relationship work. I don't understand the part about Marilyn having pussy.

Author's Response:
It was supposed to be a joke. Marilyn in drag... sigh ... never mind.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 10

Sounds like a fun party. I missed my invite - which is too bad cause I love to get dressed up! LOL. TAG

p.s. No going back to lurking. You're too amusing as a writer!

Author's Response:
Lindsay must have switched it and sent it to Michael. This is what I picture Jenny Rebecca looking like. I don't know who it's a picture of, but I pulled it off the internet. My purpose of this story was to amuse and I'm glad that I succeeded. Thank you for your comments.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

love it

Author's Response:
Thank you for sticking with me and commenting.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

This is great! God, what I wouldn't do to see the entire cast in Elizabethan clothing!

Can't wait for more.

Cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:
I'm still not sure what gave me that particular idea. But I'm glad you like it. Thanks for all your nice comments.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG what is Gus up to? Michael turning up; I love the twists. More please.

Cheers

Author's Response:
The last chapter should explain it all. Thanks for staying with me and sending such nice comments.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

I feel really sorry for Justin; he believes he is solely at fault that he and Brian had not worked out. I’m not sure Emmett is going to be able to put all the pieces of the puzzle together for Justin as he wouldn’t know the intimate details like Brian does. Please update as soon as possible as I can’t wait to see how it all comes out.

Cheers

Author's Response:
Yet another good reason for his not getting his memory back too soon.

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm super bad at reviewing, which is why I'm only just getting around to doing so.

I love the plot line of this (I'm actually following another story based on tarot cards, but they couldn't be more different). I have to admit, I wasn't really expecting much based on the summary, but I am so happy to have been proven wrong. And I love that it's different from pretty much every other post-5.13 stories I've read. And all the plots twists and snippets of information you include makes me want to keep reading.

Author's Response:
What's the other story, I'd like to read it. This is only my second QAF story and I'm very bad at summaries. Any suggestions that would improve it? Only two more chapters left!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 9

Fifteen years is a lot to catch up on in one fell swoop for Justin . . . Good luck, Sunshine. TAG

Author's Response:
Yes it is. Wouldn't it be nice if we could all pick and choose our memories?

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 9

love it

Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2013 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 8

Rodney the dog. LOL That’s funny as I was holding my breath thinking Justin had a boyfriend. Deb’s with Brian and Emmett I like that. I can’t wait to find out what happened between her and Carl. More please.

Cheers

Author's Response:
I couldn't help it. I was going to make Rodney a boy friend and at the last moment Jennifer just blurted out that he was a dog. Sigh. Characters should do that! The next chapter should answer your questions.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2013 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 7

Business partners; Brian and Emmett are business partners; thank you. I have never seen a picture of Kent Staines (Mysterious Marilyn) before without the dress and makeup. Thanks for the update and adding the characters as they would look like in your fic it's a nice touch.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2013 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 6

OMG I wish that was true. I really wish people who sucker punch someone were held for attempted murder, as it is such a cowardly act. I love your way of thinking and I hope they throw the book at Michael. I love the pictures you have added; I would never have recognised Logan or Keegan Hoover as Gus.

Cheers

Author's Response:
I thought it might help to picture the people, glad you like it.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2013 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 8

love it

Author's Response:
Glad to see you're still reading. (happy dance)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

You scared me there at first, I'm so glad that Emmett and Brian are not a couple... I'm a total Brian/Justin shipper... Can't wait to see where this story takes us... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
Sorry about that. Hope you like what comes next.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I've never liked Michael... Good because I don't read Brian/Michael fics and I was afraid that was where you were going... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:
I'm a die-hard Brian/Justin fan, but I try for the unexpected. Can't say that I blame you though.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

So Em and Brian are business partners, ok.
Justin does have a life of his own. Is there room for Brian in it?

Author's Response:
Yep, they are. I've always thought that the two would make a good team. I couldn't see Justin pineing away, though I would have like to, so is there room for Brian? A very good question.

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 6

It's not your bad, the pic is right, it's one of them Logan or Kegan Hoover, can't tell which one since they're identical twins. It's just the way u listed their names as if it's one person Logan Kegan instead of Logan and Kegan who both played Gus.

Author's Response:
Thank goodness.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

love it

Author's Response:
Thank you. (happy dance)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Interesting story idea. Can't wait to see where you take it. TAG

Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy it. (smile)

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is a great story, keep up the good work. on a side note the picture u have of the actor who played Gus is actually kegan and Logan hoover (twins).

Author's Response:
when I pulled up their names that was one of the pics that came up. Do you mean that that's not one of them? my bad.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

What a fun story. Everyone is different, older, yet for Michael. Why am I not surprised there.
Please tell me Brian and Emmett are just roommates, or he's Brian's housekeeper
Something other than they're romantically involved. After the shit Michael pulled, why try and safe his boney ass?

Author's Response:
Did I do it right?

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

Very engrossing story so far. But I personally would prefer less frequent posts in exchange for longer chapters. These are more like drabbles. ;-)

Author's Response:
I'll try to do better.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

love it

Author's Response:
Thank you. (happy)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

I’m interested to see why Michael punched Justin. Where did this take place; was it at Woody’s? Please update soon. I love how quickly you are moving the story along.

Cheers

Author's Response:
Yes it was at Woody's. I'm not sure even Michael knows why he did it, but he does have an excuse as you will find out.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 4

“But Emmett does figure in so prominently - just not in a way expected”. I can’t wait to see what you mean by this. Thank you for updating so quickly.

Cheers

Author's Response:
Wait for more developements.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG Michael sold Debbie’s house. I hope she is alright wherever she is. I like how intriguing this fic is.

Cheers

Author's Response:
Deb will always land on her feet, if Brian, Emmett and Ted have anything to say about it.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

this is freaky , what the hell happened to Liberty ave?

Author's Response:
Things do change as the years pass, I guess.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow! I can't believe Michael had the balls to actually hit someone.

Very interesting development. As for the Tarot, I quite agree - don't know much about them, don't really believe in them, but I adore stories with all that mumbo-jumbo.

Cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:
I think Michael alway had it in him. Maybe he was on something? I don't believe in Tarot either - sorta. Had my palm read once and looking back, she was right on, which I didn't think of at the time.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

Can't wait to find out more!

Cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG, Michael sold the house? Deb disappeared?

Wow! Interesting twist on things. Love this so far.

Cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:
I love twists. Gotta make it interesting.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is really strange-where are you going with this my darlin? It will be interesting at best to see where your muse takes us. Lovin it so far.:)

Author's Response:
My muse tends to be all over the place. Hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: Xpo787 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

I like this story a lot. I'm curious where this story goes.

Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. (happy)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great story, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG!-this is interesting. Now this has really picqued my curiosity. Can't wait for more updates.:)

Author's Response:
Trying my best. Thank goodness I've got it all written.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

love it

Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2013 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

love it

Author's Response:
(big smile)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm a little nervous here. I'm not sure what's going on, but I do like that Drew and David aspect.

Author's Response:
It was kinda a What If. What if David & Drew met up - how would it effect Mikey and Emmett. But then again it was written in the cards, so it had to be written if that makes sense.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you for reassuring me this is a Brian/ Justin fic as now I can relax and enjoy it more. I am curious to learn what has happened between them. More Michael bashing; love it.

Cheers

Author's Response:
Just wait. There's yet another appearance in store.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 2

And so it begins, indeed! Fantastic start, or rather continuation. Again, can't wait to read more.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2013 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

I HAVE NEVER LIKED MICHAEL EITHER-BUT I LOVED MARILYN THE LITTLE WE SAW OF (HER). NICE-I DON'T REMEMBER EVER READINGA STORY HERE ABOUT OR WITH HER. LIKE IT. :)

Author's Response:
I wish they had used her more in the series.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

I’m not a Michael fan either so I love the start of this fic. I really like the Mysterious Marilyn angle. Is this a Brian/Justin fic as I don’t see that in the categories? I’m curious as I just read the beginning of a Brian and Emmett fic but it’s not for me (I think for a bit of fun you can put them together) however, I always loved Emmett because I think he was one of the few characters that didn’t lust after Brian. Please update soon as this looks interesting as well as original and I love original fics.

Cheers

Author's Response:
How could this not be about Brian and Justin. But Emmett does figure in so prominently - just not in a way expected.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, I really like this! This has me quite intrigued.

More, please!

Cheers,

Vin

Author's Response:
I'm delighted to see that you are reading. I love your stories.

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2013 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

" I never liked Michael" lol me either! Interesting start I look forward to seeing where this goes

Author's Response:
It gets worse.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2013 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

love it. I never liked Michael.

Author's Response:
me neither

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2013 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm with you as far as Michael goes. David and Drew, ewww. Ben and Drew, now that's a different story.
Brian's always had a good friend in Emmett. Think them moving out of the Pitts will be good for them but what's with Brian and Justin? Any chance of them getting back together?
I liked the beginning.

Author's Response:
David and Drew - how unlikely was that. Still it moved the story forward and gives Emmett a reason to consider moving. Justin's in New York and according to Mysterious Marilyn, he'll probably get caught up in everything that New York has to offer. But with my imagination you never know. Perhaps things do change.

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