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Midnight Whispers
QAF Fanfiction - Brian and Justin - SSL Encrypted - Mobile
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2013 05:19 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

you are very good with your writing.   Poor Gus it breaks my heart more and more every chapter.   i'm glad i found this.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2013 06:39 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2013 09:12 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

I’m pleased to see Brian is taking care of Gus and also Melanie’s arrangements. Justin really needs to be included, even if it’s just for Lindsay now. I think you are doing a great job so far of making this different to other fics and I love it when an author goes back and forth as it keeps the story line fresh in your memory.


Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 07:15 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

What's happening with Lindsay? You say Brian is now a full time parent. Is that because Lindsay dies or paralyzed and in a rehab facility? Brian is planning to stay in Toronto but why at the hospital? Think it would be easier for Gus to be home with his own things. I can't believe he doesn't want Justin there or right now not want to have anything to do with him.

Author's Response:

Chapter 1 revealed Lindsay's fate, as we know it so far; this chapter actually flashes back in time to before Lindsay wakes up and after the doctor tells Brian, Michael and Ben that Melanie has died. Sorry for the confusion.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 06:58 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

     Does a unique plot every exist?  So far you are presently this one beautifully, and I look forward to new chapters as t0he story unfolds.  Looks like we got a long way to go.  So much to do, and I sure conflicts and other difficulties are on the way.

    Yes, I did get a little confused with the back and forth in time.  My fault tho.  I thought Brian had already called Justin.  No matter, I got it now.  I think Justin should pack his back and get his butt to Toronto and now.  Brian needs him, and so does Gus.    Thanks for the chapters, and thanks in advance what looks like a terrific story.


Author's Response:

:) true - every story is a derivative of something else. Thanks for the comment, and thank you for reading! 

I worried the timeline switch-a-roo would be confusing...I hope not too much, though. It seemed the logical way, for me, to begin the story. But don't worry, there shouldn't be any more time jumps after this chapter :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 06:54 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

I'm enjoying this so far. I think that Justin needs to get to Toronto ASAP because Brian won't say it but he needs him. It's a very sad start but I have faith it will lead to great things. TAG

Author's Response:

thanks for reading! Sad start yes, and lots more angst to come...sadly! or not :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 06:39 AM · On: World Spins Madly On

So nice to see how Brian is focused on Gus.  I'd think he'd better tell Justin soon because I'm sure Justin will get the wrong idea if he doesn't.  I'll just have to wait for more on this to see how you handle it.  :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :)

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