Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviews For Actions speak louder than words

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2016 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really nice to remember these telling moments in Brian's actions -they really did speak louder tban words. Lovely read:-)

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

beautiful story :)

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2013 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Your version so beats out their wasted 8 chapters. Welcome to the QAF family - hoping you continue to write longer and longer stories. I really enjoyed reading this. Only one question - who turned the tape on?

Author's Response:
Thank you.

That's the bit I haven't figured out yet. In the dream I had that inspired it, Justin walked into the Loft to find me stood in front of the TV and I therefore turned it on. But I didn't want to include myself in it. I like to think of it as magic.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

My daughter wants to name all her 'someday' children after caracters from those books. Have you read the story by JustBeAQueen about the Brotherhood?

Author's Response:
I want to call my children Blay and Qhuinn (who come out soon. So very excited!). And no I haven't. I shall check it out.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm sorry but I have to ask about your penname , did it come from "The Black Dagger Brotherhood".

Author's Response:
Yes it did. Coz Zsadist is a badass vampire. :)

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was very good. I wonder who it was? Sometimes showing your love works. It does in Brian's case.

Author's Response:
I like to think of it as magic having done it. (Mostly because I have no idea who else it could have been.) If Brian had done just one thing to show he loved Justin, Justin wouldn't have left.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

I didn't think the ending was so bad.

Author's Response:
Thank you. I wrote the entire thing in one go in less than an hour, so I was loosing steam by the time I got to the end.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this. It would have been wonderful if it had gone this way on the show.

*****

Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm ever hopeful that the writers will see how annoyed we are with some of the story lines and the ending and give us a new, better one.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

I looked really hard for something to criticize and guess what ... couldn't find a thing. I like the segments you picked and wished that had happened during the series. Great story.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm very critical of my writing (due to lack of confidence) so I'm really happy you couldn't find anything. :)

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2013 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ah, if only this could have really happened! If Justin had learned about even one of these things that Brian did/said, he wouldn't have thought twice about leaving Brian for the Fiddler. But alas, we had to live in the hell that was late season 2-early season 3 until Justin realized where he really belonged.

By the way, if you need an American beta, I'm available... ;)

Author's Response:
I kmow, right? I'm still passed it took Ethan cheating on him for Justin to realise where he belongs.

I have a couple of ideas for stories, but nothing concrete. But if I do ever get round to writing them, I would love to have you as a beta. (I love Sweet Sacrifice.) I'm usually okay with American names of things, but I struggle with phrases and idioms.

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2013 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

You did great...wonderful story!Thanks so much. Keep em' coming!!!

Author's Response:
Thank you. :) I have a few new ideas, it's just getting them from my head into writing that makes sense.

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2013 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Right up until the end I was mad that Brian would stay true to himself. Then you go and have a great ending. I pretty much had my own "Sunshine" smile. Great job.

Author's Response:
In my world, Ethan never happened and Justin didn't go to NY. Therefore every story I write/dream up has to have a happy ending.

Thank you for liking the ending though. :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

really nice - I love the passion we can almost feel from Brian at the end...

thanks

Charle

Author's Response:
Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yeah, there were lots of events that shows how Brian really do love Justin, but was not known by Justin himself. Thank you for sharing this my friend. I love it! I love Justin knowing how much Brian do really cared and loved him. And always be. :):):)

Author's Response:
Thank you. Comments like this increase my confidence in my writing. :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very unique idea! I liked it. I always thought Justin should know what happened during these events. If he had, perhaps some of the difficulities between them could have been minimized. Glad to see you posting on here.:) *Hugs* ~Kim

Author's Response:
Thank you. :)

I posted this on ff ages ago but I'm not very confident in my writing, so was a bit nervous about posting it on here.

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