Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For It's Only Time
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2018 03:51 AM · On: It's Only Time

Love it

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2017 04:45 PM · On: It's Only Time

Hi I don't know if one day you read this but I really love this story ! It's like season 6 for me I hope you can write the sequel with their child in different age ! thank you for this 

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2016 10:24 PM · On: A Christmas Story

This chapter was so heartbreaking.  I couldn't stop the tears.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 07:58 AM · On: It's Only Time

Just the right conclusion! Of course, if inspiration were to strike, I'd be happy to read more chapters. I know it's been about 2 1/2 years, but it's never to late to continue... ;) 

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 06:25 AM · On: Halloween

<3

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 06:15 AM · On: Miss Independent

What a lovely chapter! I enjoyed seeing Justin and Brian through Daphne's eyes.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 06:01 AM · On: Scrabble

Wonderful! Further commitment communicated via Scrabble. :)

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 05:45 AM · On: I DO

Unique! A tell-all interview in Art Forum and then a chain of complaints from the extended family. I really like the approach you took.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 04:33 AM · On: 39

I like this transition to Justin as the hot, in-demand man (although perhaps not "the Stud" since he doesn't employ Brian's former "studly" behavior).

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 03:45 AM · On: I Love You, But...

You always create an interesting, believable turning point for Brian in your stories. Well done once again!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 02:56 AM · On: Rage

I was surprised--wasn't expecting Chris Hobbs as the owner of a baby store together with his wife. I'm curious if knowing Hobbs' wife knowing his history impacts their marriage; one would hope so!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 12:46 PM · On: It's Only Time

I have just sat here all night and read the whole story I loved it all. I was worried then tearful with Gus and thrilled when Brian and Justin showed him their love for each other and Gus. I do hope their is a sequal

Reviewer: bamamary (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 10:43 AM · On: It's Only Time

Great story.  I like the way the time passed quickly but with significant detail to the story.

Keep writing!

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2013 05:16 AM · On: Irony

thank you for sharing this story

it was a pleasure to read

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 02:03 AM · On: NYC

"Brian could feel his life changing; his attitudes changing."

I loved Brian's inner turmoil but mature outcome.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 01:39 AM · On: He's The Artist

"In that moment, Justin felt the finality to their relationship and he forgave Ethan..."

It is so refreshing to read about Ethan as more than an caricature. Ethan is discribed by Justin as being cute. It is a far cry from the greasy weasel I usually read about. I also like that they both had closure for their relationship. For Justin, it may have not been a sordid affair. He wanted a real relationship that perhaps neither one was ready for.

Brilliant!

Author's Response:

thanks for all the comments! Yeah, even though I am not a fan of Ethan I also don't think he deserves a lot of the grief he gets in many fics. In fact I firmly believe that without Ethan, Justin and Brian would have imploded and never found their way back together so really, we all need to thank Ethan :D

Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 01:18 AM · On: 35

"He was older indeed."

He was always supposed to be young and beautiful, but I guess everything has a shelf life.

I wonder if teenagers do look a 30+ year olds as old. I can't remembr back that far, LOL. It makes sense though.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 01:13 AM · On: Irony

"Finally, Brian asked the question that would either make or break the next month of his life..."

Brilliant!. It never made sense for Justin not to have been at the reopening. I would have thought Brian would have invited him or that he would have returned for it.

It was nice he way you wrote about Justin pretending to sound surprised.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 12:16 AM · On: It's Only Time

I have to read this story again. I know I read it somewhere else, but it's so good, it demands a repeat.

Nice job!

Reviewer: Nikki (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2013 02:14 AM · On: It's Only Time

Thanks for such a wonderful story



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

:)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 11:20 PM · On: It's Only Time

What I really liked about your story was how it seemed so natural. There were no big events - just little everyday stuff that happens to all of us which ends up changing our lives. This is exactly how I picture the boys growing older together. Few big crises but lots of emotional little ones. Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's all I wanted to do was give glimpses into their life. I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 02:33 PM · On: It's Only Time

Great Story! Can't wait for more. You must do a sequel, so we can see how their family grows. How many kids????

 

Lovely read - blue ribbon worthy - thanks for posting this here on Whispers.  ~Admin



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 01:54 PM · On: It's Only Time

That was a good place to end , while being the perfect place to start again.

Author's Response:

thank you, I thought so too :)

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:52 AM · On: It's Only Time

I waited until the very end before commenting...I just have to say that this story has been one of the best stories I've come across in a long time. I absolutely loved it and the future world you've created. I'm sad that it's over, but it ended so perfectly.

Thanks for the amazing read :)



Author's Response:

wow - thank you so much for the amazing compliment. I really appreciate the kind words! 

It seemed a natural stopping point, so I'm glad it worked for you :)

 

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:37 AM · On: It's Only Time

This was very sweet.  I like how realistic your story was and how true to character you had both of them.  I'm sad that this is the end of the road for this piece of work, but I hope that you do get inspiration.  If not, I will just look forward to whatever else you bring out.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I really appreciate you saying I kept the boys true to character - because that was my biggest worry each chapter! I've got this other plot bunny demanding to be written but that doesn't mean I won't come back to this one eventually! 

:)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:25 AM · On: It's Only Time

Loved this story with its time lines.  It might be nice to continue especially with a baby on the horizon.  I don't know-just a thought



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and for the comment! We'll see what happens regarding this story...who knows if or when inspiration may strike me. :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 08:35 AM · On: It's Only Time

Beautifully written; and I echo the other reader.  Would love to one day see a sequel where they further explore the possibility of another child.:)  Thank you for posting over here.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments, both here and at FF.net! We'll see what happens! Who knows, I may be inspired :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 08:28 AM · On: It's Only Time

Beautiful ending. I must confess I wish there was more of this story to come.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!! I liked leaving the guys with the hope of the future - but who knows, maybe I'll be inspired to go on...we shall see. :)

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Gus

WOW, this is such a great story!!!! I still have tears running down my face right now cause i can imagine how Brian feels seeing Gus leave again.

I really hope that Brian and Justin have a kid o their own soon or that - MAYBE - the girls decide that Gus can live with his father and Justin full time.

Thanks for writing this, it's really amazing to read !!

;)

Best wishes
Diana



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your lovely words! I'm really glad to know you are enjoying the story. :)

 

Reviewer: Kristina (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Gus

 This time Brian wished Gus were his.

This line just about killed me:( Great story so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you are enjoying it :)

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 09:02 PM · On: Gus

This was a great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 07:13 PM · On: Gus

That chapter was so beautiful. My favorite. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 06:24 PM · On: Halloween

Lovely chapter. I loved it. Thank you.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 04:50 PM · On: Gus

Wonderful chapter, thanks for writing.
This is the first chapter I read of this story * blushes * because of lack of time. But I'm hooked, I'm gonna try to read more today.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I hope you can check out the other chapters!

Cheers! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 11:25 AM · On: Halloween

It was so nice to see Brian think about children with Justin. Justin is a natural care giver and when Brian loves nothing will stop him. Only 2 chapters left , that sucks

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Halloween

- no-  only two chapters-  I love this story with its snippets and visions into the future

 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 09:29 AM · On: Halloween

Oh no only two chapters left.....would you consider writing more if we asked very nicely?

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2013 12:41 AM · On: Miss Independent

I like that someone else is getting to see how much they love each other, even if it is Daphne who has been their biggest cheerleader all along.  I really liked this prospective because what Brian and Justin has is very unique and special and maybe now more of the others will start to see that too!

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2013 01:22 PM · On: Miss Independent

Oh my....that was really lovely!  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2013 03:30 AM · On: Scrabble

That was perfect. so cute. thank you



Author's Response:

thank you! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 07:21 PM · On: Scrabble

I know I reviewed already on ff.net, but again, I wanted to tell you how much I loved this chapter, and how Brian was able to express his desire to Justin without having to say 'the words.'  These vignettes are lovely.  I'm so happy that you decided to post them over here, and I'll be looking forward soon to the new chapters.:)  Welcome again to the site!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

thank you again for your reviews! :)

I'm glad to be here!

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2013 04:11 PM · On: Scrabble

This is adoreble:)



Author's Response:

:)

thanks!

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 11:28 AM · On: Scrabble

This has to be my favorite chapter so far!  I think it is very much like Brian to communicate this way, protecting his feelings through the facade of a game.  And hey, my favorite type of B/J is a monogomous one so I'm all on board.  And the idea that even though Justin had never asked Brian to be monogomous but Brian had done so anyways...That's so sweet and really shows how much they have progressed.  Thank you for making me so happy!!



Author's Response:

aw, thank you :) I'm glad you liked it! I really wanted Brian to "grow up" on his own, without pressure from Justin, so I'm glad you liked that part!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 11:03 AM · On: Scrabble

I like them playing games , especialy smart games. Sapphire wrote awhole series about them playing games that is pee your pants funny.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll have to check out that fic, it sounds fun!

:D

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 10:36 AM · On: Scrabble

I can see this happening-  brian telling Justin through a game.  Great idea.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 10:04 AM · On: Scrabble

This was a really beautiful chapter.

Author's Response:

aw, thanks for all your lovely comments :)

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 08:33 AM · On: Scrabble

I love this series!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 10:45 AM · On: I DO

Art Forum only causes trouble . We should really stop letting people read this thing.

Author's Response:

LMAO!!! You win the best comment award, definitely!!! :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 04:21 AM · On: I DO

Even though we won't get a wedding chapter *pouts like little kid* I still can't wait for the next chapter~JP

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:28 AM · On: 39

Love it, love it.  Justin coming home for Brian-  as it should be

Reviewer: Eve jowi (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2013 02:57 AM · On: 39

Really  enjoying this story , Thank you for updating !

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 06:28 PM · On: 39

Thank you for the update. It is really pleasant to read, love the maturity of their relationship.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 05:30 PM · On: 39

This just keeps getting better ;)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 11:20 AM · On: Britin

sweet

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 11:05 AM · On: 39

These are really sweet stories . I just hoped it wouldn't take them this long to get thier shit together.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 12:17 PM · On: Britin

Great chapter.....I love how Justin and Brian symbolically closed the door on their respective pasts so that they could open the door to their future together.

More soon please~JP

Reviewer: Snow (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2013 06:19 AM · On: Irony

Nice!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2013 11:40 AM · On: 26

I think you process about his birthday is correct.  Loved this chapter-sentimental, caring Brian is the best!!:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I agree - caring Brian is the best. I love him best when he's snarky, but tender and loving! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 10:29 AM · On: 26

I love the way you figured Justin's birthday ,date, smart thinking and goo memory.

Author's Response:

Thanks! It drove me crazy trying to figure it out.  :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 09:53 AM · On: 26

I totally agree with you, the passage of time was never quite clear. I'm glad you tried to make some sense out of it.

Keep it coming, I love how you are writing this~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks for all your comments :) 

I'm glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:22 PM · On: What Are You Doing New Year's Eve?

Beautiful!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 10:02 PM · On: What Are You Doing New Year's Eve?

:) ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 07:24 PM · On: What Are You Doing New Year's Eve?

«you're home to me» oh so sweeeeet.
Thank you

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 06:32 PM · On: Irony

That was great. Thanks.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 02:09 PM · On: What Are You Doing New Year's Eve?

All I have to say is.......way to go Brian :)

Update soon please~JP

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 05:39 AM · On: I Love You, But...

That was a tear jerker, hopefully he'll keep his promise... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 05:27 AM · On: I Love You, But...

That was excellent!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 02:38 AM · On: I Love You, But...

Poor Molly, it's a shame it took a tragedy for Brian to fully come to grips with his feelings for Justin.

Hurry back with more~JP

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 01:25 PM · On: A Christmas Story

More, more.......if you don't mind please :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 12:09 PM · On: A Christmas Story

These are nice little snapshots. This one was good and alittle sad, but it opens the door for a more permanent future.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 11:20 AM · On: A Christmas Story

Oh so sad.  Brian needs to figure a way to see Gus and Justin more often.  I think as he gets older he realizes he wants them in his life.  Love the way you are updating on a regular basis. 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Rage

ohhhh-  Go Brian-  and so glad Michael left with him-  at least he wasn't going to buy anything when he realized who owned the store.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 08:10 AM · On: Rage

Holy shit! I wonder if Chris' wife had the good sense to leave his ass after she found out what he had done.

Kudos to Brian and Mikey for not spending one fucking dime in that asshole's store.

More soon please~JP

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:46 AM · On: NYC

Very sweet. I can't wait for more ;)

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 09:44 AM · On: He's The Artist

I liked that chapter :) nice to have that closure.

Author's Response:

thanks! :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 07:43 AM · On: He's The Artist

Yeeeesssss......no stalking chin rat haha. I'm glad Justin was finally able to get the closure he needed to move on from his past with Ethan.

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

lol - yes. That was the one thing I felt was missing from the show was true closure from that slight detour Justin took. 

Thanks again for reading :)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:35 AM · On: 35

I'm loving this so far, can't wait for more... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 06:28 AM · On: 35

Keep them coming, I'm enjoying all the introspection.

More soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 11:19 AM · On: 35

I'm enjoying these little vignettes-  I always thought B/J would be together in teh future and your future is a good one.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it. Personally, I can only tolerate the final episode of the show when I imagine a happy ending for these two; it's too painful otherwise. :)

Thank you for reading :D

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 05:39 AM · On: Irony

That was fast - LOL!  Welcome to the site; glad to see you posting this over here!  Really enjoying this story, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! I appreciate your encouragement :D *hugs*

-Michelle

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