Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2018 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed that a lot, thanks so much. Now if GMH3 had played Christian Grey, I for one would've been at the front of the queue, but as you said, I don't think he'd be caught dead! Going off to hunt for more of your fics now, it was great, you capture the intimacy between them so well

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2015 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Scorching hot & steamy! Great response to "50 Shades", too. I'm ambivalent about that book and its popularity; I much prefer your BK response to it. ;)

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2013 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was amazingly hot. The sex always seems to be better with the two of them married and doing it raw.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

I wonder was it my tweet you read lol,I said that too. I enjoyed your story alot darling - Yvonne xx

ps,I never read the book and don't want to

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fun stuff. oh steamy queen!

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Why thank you steam princess. ;) I had a lot of fun writing. 

Love the pic! 

Cheers, Laura :) 

Reviewer: gmapam (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2013 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved this!  I feel the same way about "50 Shades.."  Drivel...but it does make me laugh how many of my friends LOVE it and how many of my daughter's friends have it as a Book Group choice!

Love your writing...great phrasing and vocabulary!  Have you thought about teaching at the FictionAcademy?



Author's Response:

Book group choice? Really? Dare I ask some of their other choices? I do have a few friends who have really liked 50 Shades, and I have heard more than enough about it. I had to share what I thought somehow and my muse said through a Brian/Justin story. Perfect medium to rant... and if I can throw some heat in there, then all the better (this is Brian and Justin, how can I not). Better than that still was (in my opinion) a more entertaining and realistic story, that actually acknowledges the BDSM culture and not just cause someone thinks chains and leather are hot. 

Thank you for the review and the compliments. I hadn't thought about teaching at the Fiction Academy, but now that you have put that suggestion in my mind, I may have to offer. I enjoy betaing, and if I had the time I would offer to beta more. Writing is an art and I think everyone can be successful, they just need the right tools and instruction. 

Cheers, Laura :) 

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Damn was that hot! Well done! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

Cheers, Laura :)

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great hot fic! Totally agree with you and Brian on 50 shades. I didn´t read it and won´t just to make a point because there are far more great fic on this site to read that this book!



Author's Response:

Hi Sisa,

Absolutely agree with that comment. I actually spend more time reading fics here than actual books there are just so many that are so good, and some so detailed and well written, who needs books? 

Thanks for the review and compliment, it always gives me a thrill when readers think my stories as hot as I do. 

Cheers, Laura :) 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

So wonderful to see a new, hot, sexy story from you, Laura!  I swooned at the "Our house, my prince" line, and of course I always love it when the boys are married,monogamous and doing it unhindered without that pesky old latex.;)

Thanks for hot, steamy little (well, NOT so little!) tale.  *Hugs* ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

Thank you so much for the review my friend! I had so much fun writing this and couldn't stay away from the heat, and I love it, too, when they are married, monogamous and rubber-free. ;) And what would one of my stories be without the steam, I can't seem to help myself where these two are involved. 

Cheers, Laura :) xoxo 

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Woo, Laura that was hot! I absolutely will NOT read 50 Shades, since the only BDSM-type of story I have any interest in reading would not include a man and a woman (oh, how Brian/Justin fanfiction has ruined me...). 

Great job! :)

 



Author's Response:

Hey, 

Thanks for the review, and I completely understand, I know what you mean. All these Brian/Justin stories have ruined my previous appreciation for hetero sex stories... and I'm bi! I'll still read some of the other romance novels (primarily paranormal, and then only a couple), but they are still silly and just not as hot as I once thought they were. 

I love BDSM stories, when they do justice to the BDSM culture, and definitely prefer all males couples/groups. ;) I won't read 50 Shades either (I could write better, if I had the time), and I just had to share my opinions, and through Brian seemed appropriate, entertaining and as simple as the original idea was, I just can't write a Brian/Justin story that's anything less than hot and steamy. 

Cheers, Laura :) 

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

WWBKD right.  Quite appropriate actually.  I loved those books.  Read all three.  I can see why Justin would like some parts as the description was intense in places.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. 

I haven't read the books, but I've heard so much about them that I worded my response in the way my mind saw fit: through Brian's perspective. There are so many fictional stories out there, so many novels, some entertaining, others not so much. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I read other romance series, and as good as they can be, they are still corny, predictable, there all porn with plot, and the guy always gets the girl.

There was something about this series of books that seemed silly enough to me to want to share what I thought Brian's opinion would be, and I wanted to present it goofily, and thought Justin's reading it seemed very appropriate. 

Cheers, Laura :) 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Laura :) 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have three words for you my friend.....hot, hot, hot. And let me just say I share your opinion ;)

Nice work darling~ JP

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review love! Before I started writing this story it was a simple way of getting Brian (and me) to share opinions on a book I'm really tired of hearing about. It was supposed to be fun and simple, but every time I write Brian/Justin I can't seem to stay away from the heat. Not that I'm complaining, nor would anyone else, I'm sure. ;)  

I had lots of fun writing this and thanks again for your comments, and I had a good feeling that QAF fans would share my opinion about 50 Shades. 

Cheers, Laura :) 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

I agree with you 100%. "50 Shades" is a want to be BDSM story. Brian would never tolerate that at Britin. It is so good to hear from you again. I have missed you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review and the compliment. It's good to be back (at the moment). Life definitely gets in the way of writing, and with my writing style I need the time and to be in the mood to write. It's hard to do that with family and school and everything. 

I was tired of hearing about 50 Shades and had to share my thoughts with someone. My mind suddenly thought what would Brian think... and this story was the result. I get to share my thoughts and Brian's thoughts and have fun writing. And I'm pretty sure that BDSM lifestylers would be either offended or exceedingly amused at a straight woman's attempt at BDSM like activities. 

Thanks again and even though school is starting back up soon, I hope to add some more to my other stories soon. I've missed writing. 

Cheers, Laura :) 

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