Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: fanof queer (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2014 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: Importance of Friendship

finish your story its epic

Reviewer: Choco (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2013 05:22 PM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

For some reason, when I saw the "Vampires" section I wanted Justin to be vampire and Brian to be human. Then I stumble upon this. I absolutely love the story. Can't wait to read more. Thank you =)



Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a comment! I'm glad that you found what you were looking for - and really happy that you love this story :) I'll have the next chapter finished soon, so there's more coming even if there has been over a month when I last posted a new chapter.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 8: Importance of Friendship

I’m sorry you lost your reviews. Let’s hope when Ethan, sorry Thane, turns up Justin is strong enough to protect Brian and Rafe. I love the name and the continued back story. Now bring on more Brian. LOL

Cheers

Author's Response: I'm sorry too, but thankfully I only lost about three reviews. Yea, let's hope that because we wouldn't want anything bad to happen our three boys. Hah, I'm glad you loved the name and the back story. I'm bringing more Brian in the next chapter, I promise :D Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Importance of Friendship

I decided to repost my review :) That was a really great chapter, I like Justin and Rafe's friendship and I can't wait for Thane to be, physically, part of our boys' present life. Thank you.



Author's Response: Aww, thanks for reposting your review, I'm very thankful of that! :) We'll have to wait and see when Thane arrives to make things even more complicated. I like their friendship, too, so I'm happy that you liked it. Anyway, thank you so much for leaving a review - I get a chance to read the first one and now this, I'm truly thankful. (I know, there was pretty many 'thanks' in one respond :D)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions

I loved seeing Brian’s insecurities of not being in control appearing after misinterpreting why Justin fled like he did. LOL Justin on the other hand; I was hoping he had more control but it looks like his demons run deep. I look forward to where you are taking us with this. Thanks for the update.


Cheers

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions

I can't believe I'm actually feeling sorry for Justin after he killed a woman but I am. Great chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions

This looks interesting and I hope to read it when finished. I usually comment on each chapter too. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions

I cant wait for more. Justin needs to move on. Rafe is right...he needs to let go in order to go on.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions

Oh, thank you for this update. This is simply superb. You have created an original character with Rafe that I adore. He sounds like a true friend to Justin and vice versa.

I loved Brian's conclusion that something must be wrong with Justin, lol.

You've got one hell of a story here!

Sandra:)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 7: Unthinkable Actions

Kudos to Rafe for getting Justin to open up a little although I do have one question, are Rafe's feelings toward Justin purely platonic or is does he feel something more?

Hopefully Justin's creator's identity will be revealed in the next chapter *crosses fingers while patiently waiting* JP

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

"Because monsters didn't have human lovers."

OMG! That was ANGST!!! And so well written.

I'm dying for more of this story.

PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like this story! Yeah, there was angst last chapter and there'll be more in next couple of chapters, and I'm so happy you thought it was well written (I'm blushing here! :D) I'm happy to tell you I finished writing the next chapter last night - now I'll read it thorough couple of times, edit and send it to my wonderful beta. There shouldn't be more than couple of days until I can post it (it depends how fast my beta can proofread the chapter).

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Middle of the Dance Floor

"You can't feel without being hurt from time to time, but you also can't live without feelings."

For a while, I thought you could have been describing Brian. The two are so similiar.

Brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: I think that describtion would fit with Brian, too. They are pretty similiar at this moment; both of them don't want to feel hurt and they both believe that letting people in would hurt them, eventually. But we see how things go and how they change during this story :) I'm happy you liked this chapter too! Thank you, again, for such wonderful review :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey

"He hadn't yet learned that everything would come with a price.'

This is superb! You have written one intelligent vampire story. Justin's training with his creator was very interesting and harsh, but realistic. also love Justin's need for somepart of his humanity, even if it's just a home.

Author's Response: You know, I'm sucker for vampire stories, but so many times I'm disappointed how the story goes or how the vampires are descriped. So, it means really much for me to hear you calling this 'one intelligent vampire story'. Thank you<3 Well, I've always thought Justin would be like that, missing - and needing - some part of his humanity to stay sane. Thank you for commenting :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

That confrontation scene in the last chapter was awesome. Justin is one bad ass.

The interaction of Brian and Justin is intense even though they haven't even spoken to each other.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, again! You really made my day ^^ Yeah, Justin is one total badass when it comes to protecting his loved ones - and I had so much fun writing it, so you bet there's going to be more scenes where Justin's badass. Well, they're Brian and Justin, nothing else can be expected :D

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

"It was his time to let go of impossible dreams of ever having a family again."

You did a nice job on th background story of Justin. It also made feel very sad for his lonely existence. It seemed more of a curse.

Author's Response: Thank you for rewiewing! Yeah, I feel for Justin, too, it must not be easy to live so many decades alone. You're right, it seems more of a curse than anything else, but maybe Justin's luck has changed and he'll got something - or someone - who's worth of living eternity ;)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

I was amazed at how much I enjoyed this story so far. I had read so many vampires stories before. This is a nice change. Great story!

Author's Response: You don't even know how happy you made me when you reviewed! I've flu and I feel little under the wheather, but your comment made me smile :) Nice to hear you've enjoyed Humanity's this far. Hopefully you enjoy rest of it, too! :)

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2013 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

I have avoided vampire QAF stories because I think they are out of character.  But I tried this one and really like it.  I like that you made Justin the vampire too.  Waiting for the next chapter.  Hope your ankle feels better. 



Author's Response: Aww, thank you, my ankle feels much better already :) I'm happy to hear you've liked Humanity's this far even if you've avoided vampire stories previously. The next chapter will be here in a couple of days :) Thank you for leaving a review, it means so much to me!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

Thank you so much; I can’t tell you how much I've been looking forward to your update. Control Justin, control we don’t want you draining Brian with those fangs as I’m sure there is still so much fun you can have with him. LOL Justin used the "I don't fuck with anyone more than once" line on Brian. Priceless. I like that we get a little more insight in to Justin’s creator and the reason behind some of Justin’s actions. Rafe is ready to pick up the pieces. You have to love the guy. I hope your ankle is healing nicely as RL can really get in the way of important things like entertaining us reading. LOL.


Cheers

Author's Response: No, thank you for reviewing, especially now because I was so nervous about this chapter. Yeah, Justin needs to control himself, because we simply can't let him drain Brian - we would miss all the fun! Well, I think it's important to show what has happened in the past and how it affects present time, so I'm trying to include flashes from the past. I agree, you absolutely have to love the guy! Rafe's good friend for Justin even if he has his flaws, but then again, everyone has their flaws. Indeed, I hope my ankle heals fast, I really don't want it to keep me from entertaining you guys ;) lol.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

Like this chapter!? I love this chapter ... love this whole story. Thanks for the update.

* hugs *

Author's Response: Awws, you made me blush! I'm so glad to hear you love this story! Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it very much. *hugs*

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

nice chapter. Thank you



Author's Response: No, thank you for reviewing! It's nice to know that you liked this chapter, because I have to admit, I was quite nervous about this one.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2013 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

I want and totally need more. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You made me smile like an idiot, but it's all right ;) I try my best to get more written as soon as possible.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2013 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 6: May the Mayhem of Feelings Begin

I loved the chapter but the question still remains, who is Justin's creator and why would he intentionally hurt Justin that way? I can't wait to see where you take this from here.

I hope your ankle heals soon and update when you can ;) JP

Author's Response: I know I'm mean because I keep Justin's creator's identity hidden, but this story is just starting so there's plenty of time and Justin's creator will be revealed some point. But some of his purposes will be explained soon, or at least explained in Justin's point of view. Patience ;) I hope too, because it's annoying when you can't walk properly - but in this point my ankle won't delay writing and posting this, so I try to update at least once a week from now on. Thank you for reviewing ^^

Reviewer: Aima (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2013 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Middle of the Dance Floor

Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I ran out of story!! Hurry up and make more.

b.t.w loving the characterization of Justin.



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! It made me so happy, especially when I sprained my ankle couple of days ago and am now unable to walk. I try to be as fast as I can - though I'm happy to say that I've already written 2/3 of next chapter. Aww, I'm happy to hear that you love the characterizarion of Justin :)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

Those blue eyes will be the death of me lol ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response: For you and me both, hah :) Thank you for leaving a review ^^

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

:)



Author's Response: I truly appreciate every review - thank you for letting me know you read and liked :)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Im am hooked!



Author's Response: I'm happy about that, hopefully the rest keep you hooked! Thank you for leaving a review ^^

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 04:19 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

I'm gonna love this alot!!! ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response: Thank you for your comment! You just made me smile widely :) I truly hope you're going to like the rest of this story, too!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 5: In the Middle of the Dance Floor

Justin suddenly decided to leave with Brian did not surprise or bother me.
I can't wait for Brian to realize he is not the one in control..
Thank you.

Author's Response: I'm glad Justin's sudden decision didn't bother you! You're not only one, I'm dying to get write the scene when Brian realize just who is the one in control :D Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Middle of the Dance Floor

I like that Justin is in control even though Brian doesn’t know it. Let’s hope it stays that way and Brian lives to tell the tale. I can’t wait to see Brian’s attitude the next morning. Please hurry back.

Cheers

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! Your comments always make me smile :) Oh, there's going to be a few suprises ;D Justin in control = my kind of Justin (especially when Justin lets Brian to think he's in control).

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: In the Middle of the Dance Floor

Things are starting to heat up between our boys.....I like it.

More soon please~JP

Author's Response: Your comments always make my day better! Yes, things are definitely starting to heat up between our stubborn boys ;) Thank you for your kind review! I try to finish writing the next chapter as soon as possible, so you get more to read :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey

Oh I love how you explain why the men can’t be together; as Justin might lose control. That’s a great reason to keep them apart a little while longer. Nice. Love the back story. I can’t wait for the meeting as I am assuming Brian’s frustrations won’t be alleviated. LOL.

Cheers

Author's Response: Well, Justin is way too stubborn and in this 'verse he wants to be in control more than anything. We'll see what happens in next chapter (which I hopefully have enought time to post it tonight). But, whatever happens next, Brian's frustrations won't be alleviated any time soon... I'm sure Justin will keep him frustrated for a quite long time :D I'm glad to hear you loved the back story, there's going to be more in the future chapters. Thank you for your review! :)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey

I can't blame Justin for his decision to avoid Brian. One fuck with him is not enough. Hehe.
I'm very curious about the Creator.
Great chapter, thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Every review I get makes me always so happy and courages me to write more and more. Yeah, one fuck between the two of them is never enought :D

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey

Nice story! I just started it this evening! Looking forward to something more happening btw B and J

Author's Response: I'm glad you started to read this story and even liked it! In next chapters things start to happen more between Brian and Justin, I promise. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2013 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey

I'm still intrigued about who Justin's creator is. It seems that the two of them had quite the unconventional relationship.

I'm really looking forward to more of this story, there are so many questions yet unanswered.

More soon please~ JP

Author's Response: Justin's creator and his relation with Justin will be revealed at some point ;) Thank you, yet again, for your kind review! It really makes my day everytime.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2013 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Rules You Have to Obey

nice flashback of sorts to let us in on some of his past.  i don't think he has a chance of ignoring the auburn-haired one.  he will give in at some  point.  it will be interesting to see how this proceeds.  love this story lots.



Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I'm so happy that you like this story :) Yeah, I'm trying to add some flashbacks of the important moments of Justin's past, so that readers would understand better how Justin ended up being the kind of "man" he's nowadays. We'll see how long Justin can ignor Brian :D

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

Once again a really good chapter!

Hope you have a Happy Christmas and New Year :)

Tori x



Author's Response: I'm a little late, but hopefully you had a Happy Christmas and New Year, I certainly had :) I'm glad you liked the chapter ^^ Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

Great chapter. Can't wait for mre.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy you liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

OMG please let Brian try and take Justin to the backroom. I would love for Justin to push Brian up against the wall. I hope Justin’s solution works for Rafe as I’m enjoying their friendship. Please hurry back.


Cheers

Author's Response: That would be very interesting, and hah, so funny. Brian would soon notice that Justin's much stonger than what he looks like :D I'm happy you enjoy their friendship, because I enjoy it, too. Thanks for you review!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

Great chapter, loved it.

Thank you



Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you loved it :) Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

So now Brian knows Justin is the new owner, will he share this knowledge with the rest of the gang? Will Brian and Justin start to admit their attraction to one another?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter to find out ~JP

Author's Response: You will get answers for your questions in next chapter, don't worry ^^ Thank you, yet again, for reviewing! I'm so glad you read and review my story :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2012 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 3: Prevention Is the Word of Today

Aggrrr you can't stop writing ... I need more ... please.

Love this story, thanks.

* hugs *

Author's Response: I won't stop writing, I promise! I'm sorry about a long wait, but I'm going to post next chapter today or tomorrow :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

I have always liked a strong Justin and for him to be so powerful is awesome. Thanks for some back story. I can’t wait for the update. A rejected Brian; classic. Love it.

Cheers

Author's Response: Well, Brian had to be rejected because this Justin won't be pudding in his arms, not in this universe - and even though I love and adore Brian, he needed to get rejected at least once. Great that you like Justin and him being powerful because that's what you going to get more in future :D Thank you for your review! I promise to post the next chapter tomorrow or Sunday.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

Another interesting, wonderful chapter of new details. Good to have some background info added to the plot. Keep it coming please.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! More background info is coming little by little, can't reveal everything at once. Glad you liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

I'm liking your character Rafe and I can't wait to see what happens with him. I also liked the peek into the past!

It was a good chapter, can't wait for the next :)

Tori x



Author's Response: Gosh, I'm blushing! I'm glad you like Rafe - I like him, too. He's going to be around, so you'll see what happens with him :) Also, there's going to be some more peeks into the past. Hopefully I can post next chapter before christmast, I don't like to make you guys wati for next chapter too long. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

Lovely chapter. I enjoyed it very much, especially the flashack to the 1600's.

Looking forward to more.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter! There's going to be some more flashbacks, I hope you will like those too :) Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: storm217 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 05:25 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Great chapter! I liked getting a little back story on Justin and am interested to know who his creator is. Can't wait for more! So many things can happen :)

Author's Response: Nice to hear you liked this chapter! There's going to be more backstory for Justin later, and sometime his creator will also be revealed. Thank you for your review :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

Now I'm intrigued to know just who Justin's creator is. Rafe better watch his step because the next fuck-up could very well be his last.

Please, please update soon JP

Author's Response: Heh, I'm a little bit teaser for not revealing Justin's creator's identity, but this chapter wasn't last one where we get a climpse of Justin's past and his creator. Yeah, Rafe better watch - and hope that Justin will be there for him. I try to update before christmas, but I got caught up with another story. Thanks for you review!

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

you just hook me more with each chapter! fantastic storytelling, I cannot wait to see how it progresses and what happens when inevitably Brian and Justin cross paths once more :D:D

Author's Response: You got me blushing! I'm so glad you like this story :) You don't have to wait too long for Brian and Justin's crossing each other's paths once more. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

Poor Rafe, I have a feeling he won't survive long once Justin gets busy with Brian...I mean I hope Justin gets busy with Brian. Great story, can't wait to read more.
Lori

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Rafe. Let's hope he learns to control himself more so he won't need Justin around all the time. Would be terrible cockblocker if he was around all the time :D Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 2: Confusion Comes After A Busy Night

"Brian was certain that the blond-haired guy was older than he appeared to be on the outside" lol. You're right Brian, so much older.
Nice chapter, I liked to know more about Justin and Rafe.
The Vampire topic still does not bother me.
thank you :)

Author's Response: Hah, Brian is definitely right, and we will see what happens when he found out just how old Justin really are :D I'm glad you liked to get to know Justin and Rafe better, and that the vampire topic hasn't started to bother you yet. No, thank you for reviewing, reviews means so much for me :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Ohhh Love at first sight. Any chance Justin will feast on Michael??? nah, I bet he doesn't even have tasty blood. Oh well I can always hope.
Lori

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Hahah, that would be entertaining. But I think Justin would more likely to command Rafe to feast on Michael rather than doing it himself. Sure, you can always hope - even I don't know what the future will bring, well, not yet :D

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 03:29 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Very nice beginning. Glad I have a few more chapter to read, can't wait to see what's going to happen when he see's Brian!
Lori

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Glad you liked the beginning :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2012 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Great chapter. Fun to read stuff. Please continue.



Author's Response: Nice to know that this is fun to read! I try to add some fun stuff among all the serious business. Thank you for your comment :)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

I'm intrigued.  Please continue, I like the idea of vampire!Justin, too.  



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'll post next chapter tonight. Nice to know that you like vampire!Justin too ^^

Reviewer: storm217 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

I've really enjoyed the beginning of this story. Didn't expect Justing to stay away from Brian, it'll be interesting to see how long that lasts :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning. Justin has his own reasons to stay away from Brian, but hey, I believe that even if they tried, they couldn't stay away from each other in any verse, so we'll see how long it lasts :D Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Welcome to MW. I’m sorry I haven’t been able to review sooner. I love the start you have here as it looks like we are going to get a strong Justin, which I love. I’m enjoying the fact he has a good looking friend as it will give Brian someone to be jealous of; even if he is straight. Brian standing in line that’s priceless, I wish it had happened. LOL. I’m looking forward to the next update.

Cheers

Author's Response: Thank you, I feel so welcomed in here. Yeah, you're going to get strong!Justin, mostly because I love him too. Okay, I admit I love him anyway, but really, could he be anything else than strong is he's centuries old vampire? Not in my opinion. Nice to hear you're enjoying Rafe's presence. He kind of created himself, I just wanted Justin to have a friend who's male for a change. I had very much fun just thinking Brian's face when he heard he had to stand in line to get in. Someone should really make him wait in line sometime (lol, I'm so tempted I'll probably end up doing it myself later). Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Chapter 2 is a winner! Very well done and I can't wait for more.

Cheers

Vin



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I try not to make you wait too long for more.

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Oooo I like it :) I like how you described how his heart felt like it was beating with the music definitely not something I've read in a vampire fic before. 

Great update, can't wait for the next one 

Tori x



Author's Response: Thank you for your comment! I haven't read about it either, which makes me wonder why. I mean, I've been in nightclub and there it feels like your heart is beating out of your chest because of loud techno music. I just thought about it and I reasoned to myself that it could feel like your heart was beating even if you're vampire who's heart is supposedly dead.

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Ooft I wasn't expecting Justin to actively avoid Brian once he saw him, interesting! If Justin saw Brian, does that mean B also saw J? Wonder how B feels about what was pretty much a 'rejection'?

Well written, just a few wee spelling errors but no biggie, keep going I am really enjoying your story :D:D



Author's Response: Hah, I like to be unpredictable. Okay, maybe not, but Justin has his own reasons to avoid Brian at first. I promise that there's going to be Brian's reaction of Justin in the next chapter. Oh, okay, I'll have to check the chapter again later and see if I'm able to find those few spelling errors. Thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

I think I'm going to like this dark!Justin. I just hope he doesn't wait too long to approach Brian.

Update soon please JP

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I like this darker side of Justin too. It's interesting to write about Justin who have seen world and it's cruelty, and how it has changed the character. Little wait isn't bad, they're going to meet eventually and then we will see how they deal with each other.

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: New King of Babylon

Another great chapter. I think I'm gonna love this story because I enjoy your style very much. It's well writen. I can't wait for the vampire things to happen because I have the feeling you're gonna make me like it.

Thank you :)



Author's Response: Oh, you made me blush! Thank you so much for your kind words! I promise you, there's some fang showing in the next chapter ;) And more vampire stuff will happen more or less in every chapter.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 05:55 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Have avoided Brian and Justin vampire stories so far but this one caught my attention ... And it's holding it. I love vampire Justin ... Keep those updates coming please.



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm trying to update once a week or so, because I know how frustraiting it is to wait next chapter. I'm happy that this one got your attention and it's holding on. I love vampire!Justin too, especially if he isn't all that innocent and "vegeterian" (lol, can you even call a vampire "vegeterian"? :D)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 11:28 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

I enjoyed this first chapter I look forward to seeing how it evolves :) Chris

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed the prologue :) Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 11:08 PM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Very nice intro. I hope you'll post again soon.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I try to post soon the next chapter :)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Usually,I don't read vampire!fic but I was intrigued that for once Justin was the vampire.
I really liked this first chapter, it's well written and it makes me curious to know what happen next. Thank you :)

Author's Response: No, thank you - for your comment! I'm happy that you read this even if you don't usually read vampire fics. I'm also happy you liked the prologue :)

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

I like it a lot so far! I love good Vampire stories and I can't tell really that you have any trouble with the language! Great job on the Prologue! I can't wait to see where you go with it! Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response: Oh, that's a relief to hear that my problems with the language doesn't show in the story! For that I've to thank my amazing beta who corrects my mistakes, because I'm not as fluent as I'd like to be. I'm happy you liked the prologue :) I'm thankful for your review!

Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2012 09:55 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

So good! I love vampire!justin fics, eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Great job so far :D

Author's Response: You too! I love vampire!Justin, although there's only a small amount of them (or at least, what I've found). It's nice to know someone else loves them too :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Great start now I can't wait for more.

Update soon please JP

Author's Response: Thans for your review! I promise to try update soon, especially when prologue was kind of short.

Reviewer: driada (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 08:14 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Liked it very much, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy you liked it :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 07:01 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

I try to greet new writers and stories. This one is after I read the chapter.  I'm big on vampire tales having two of my own here. I'll be looking forward to more chapters.



Author's Response: I think it's wonderful that you try to greet new writers and stories, and I haven't seen that kind of action anywhere else :) I'm big on vampire tales too, well, if they're well-written, and it's nice to write own vampire story. I'll try to get other chapters as fast as possible!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

Kim mentioned this one. Welcome to Whispers and thank you for sharing this story with us. I smell a good old fashioned home run here :)



Author's Response: Thank you! I truly feel welcomed here, and it's kind of amazing how friendly atmosphere here is :)

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 06:05 AM · On: Prologue: Shades of Immortality

This is really good! It has potentional and I can't wait for the next chapter ;D 

Tori x



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment! I can't descripe how excited I'm right now because of it! I try to work fast with chapters, hopefully I could post one chapter per week, at least. :)

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