Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 11:35 AM · On: Desolation

So not what I was expecting at the ending and typical Michael to say shit like that to a young impressionable and sometime lacking confident teenager. This was great wrtinig wise but so much angst.

 

Great chapter

Author's Response:

Hello, Vision - thank you for reading and for letting us know that you are enjoying the story!  Yes, high angst alert here, and Mica is evil, I know (her idea about the cliffy).  And that was a rotten thing for Michael to say; that may well have to be addressed at some point, but I think it's coming from just a bit of jealousy over not having Brian for himself possibly?  Anyway, I think a LOT will have to be addressed here, and yes, Gus was acting like a brat, too, although I think I can see the reason why. 

Will do our best to get this updated again quickly! Thank you once more for taking the time to comment!  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Desolation

Fucking hell?!!!
Why'd you do this to me?! I simply CANNOT wait for an update.
oh.my.glob.
fantastic !!
-Marina

Author's Response:

Now, now, Marina...slow the breathing down. Repeat after me - Justin will be okay, Justin will be okay....;)  Seriously, you know I would never kill the poor guy off; I could never do that.;)  This will be a good thing in a weird sort of way to get some priorities in order. Will tell Mica that she needs to work on her next part of the chapter pronto! Thank you very much for reading and for the comments, my friend; it is greatly appreciated.:)  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 09:14 AM · On: Desolation

oh-   you have to fix this-  you left us in such a bad place-  Owen, Gus, Brian, Justin, and poort Tristam-  happy endins please

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy - now you know I won't leave them all unhappy and broken (in Justin's case, literally!).  This will open up a lot of eyes, I think, hopefully Gus's especially. Poor Tristan - the guy definitely needs a break, too!  Anyway, will instruct Mica, my co-writer, to get to work on the next part pronto! Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Desolation

OMG! I hope he is ok. More angst for all these people. Hopefully you will get all these broken people back together without too many pieces missing. Great but sad chapter. More soon, pleaaaase.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc - well, quite a departure from surfer Brian, isn't it?  Yeah, high on the angst meter here. But in a way, Justin's accident will be a blessing (oddly enough),  because I think it will put a lot of feelings into perspective here.  Thanks for reading and for the comments! 

Moving onto "My Heart's Desire" for our recuperating man - tell Lee I'm thinking of him and tell everyone hello.;)  Oh, and found out that you do NOT have to be registered to vote in the challenge, but it's only one vote per computer.  Voting should probably start on Saturday and run through next weekend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Mica

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 07:52 AM · On: Desolation

Wow!  This misunderstandings in this chapter!!!  The pain they all feel!  Justin hit by a car.   Tristan's dispair.  Not to mention Kayla, who knows what Owen has planned for her.  Please tell me you plan to fix all this!

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, we DO have a lot of 'fixing' to be sure.  But it will get addressed.  So many hearts broken or wounded right now. So much to repair.  But rest assured we will get them all straightened out!

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!  I'll tell Mica she needs to get to work on her part of the next chapter right away!!  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 07:16 AM · On: Desolation

I actually had to take a moment to breathe after reading this chapter before I could review.

Kayla is in danger, unbeknownst to her. Tristan is going to find himself having to be strong for the two people he cares about most, and poor Justin.....please let our Sunshine be okay :(

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  I know - I'm sure that ending was totally unexpected. The question is, how will this impact what just happened?  And you know that I would never kill Justin off - so no worries about that, at least.  And who is the driver?  Tristan? Kayla? Owen?  A stranger?  And was it intentional or an accident? Hmm....We promise to update just as soon as possible. Thank you again for the support. 

And on another note, thank you for your comments about the challenge, Tamara.  It was greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 07:10 AM · On: Desolation

Oh my god. You cant stop there  i cant wait to read more

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading and for the comments.  I know - what a way to end it!  Almost up there with the previous chapter!  I will have to tell Mica to hurry with her part of the next chapter!  Hang in there - it WILL get better.  Thanks again for the support!  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 11:47 PM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

When I first saw this chapter published, my heart literally stopped! I was waiting so much for it. This story is undoubtedly incredible, I savor every line, every word of it. I think it’s fantastic that you two decided to write it together – a story of two great authors just couldn’t be anything but a masterpiece. I can’t get enough of it – especially now, when all angst began.

It’s funny, in a way, how quickly my opinion changes. Before I started reading, I was so sure that no matter what, Justin shouldn’t forgive Brian in this chapter – his words that night were *very* hurtful, they are difficult to forgive and forget. But… when I read everything from Brian’s POV, he suddenly seemed so vulnerable to me, so unsure of himself. He really regretted what he did, so I couldn’t find any anger in me left. I was dreading now what Justin will say, will he be understanding, or too overwhelmed with emotions… I wouldn’t have blamed him – I’m sure Brian wouldn’t too.

Ha, Sofia is so funny, I loved her in that short episode! Brian is lucky to have her :)

I’m glad Justin didn’t use this opportunity with Gus… no matter how much he was hurting. Gus shouldn’t have tried anything, but I understand him – and I admire him, because he is a great friend. I’d even say, he is a better friend to Justin than Brian is in most cases.

Oh… so Brian now knows Gus shared a kiss with the guy he likes so much. Oops, I doubt his reaction is going to be nice when he finally adds two and two. Considering how jealous he usually is…

I hope fervently that no matter what, Gus will not turn against Brian in this Lindsay shit. They should unite – at least temporarily, to fight her. What an impossible, disgusting woman… she is really revolting here. I can’t believe her audacity!

The make up scene was fantastic! You made it incredible, just what I hoped to see – Justin didn’t forgive Brian without a fight, and when he did, it was the sweetest moment of reconciliation ever. I loved it. However, one Justin’s phrase really disturbs me… --- but if you ever do anything like this again - if you ever shut me out again or hurt me like you did this time... ---  - I have a terrible feeling that something like this might happen very soon. Brian’s reaction just *can’t* be good or calm to news like that… and what will he do? It’s scary to even imagine. But hurt and almost destroyed once again, will Justin forgive him the second time? If things go this way, it will be much more difficult that it was here – and it wasn’t easy either.

Tristan is my big soothing prize! I have all hopes that Gus will turn to him once this nightmare with Big Revelation is finally over… what a way to learn the truth!! I’m shocked. It’s even worse that I thought before… I’m *so* happy the next chapter will be published soon! I can’t wait! Major angst is scary, yet amazing, especially written as brilliantly as you do it. Thank you, girls!   

   

Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! As always, your very thoughtful comments both amaze and overwhelm Mica and me in the amount of time and care you put into them.  Thank you doesn't seem like quite enough, but I want you to know how much we do appreciate each and every one.  Yes, what a horrible way to find out just who Gus's father is involved with!  And the next chapter, which will be posted very soon, will show how much hurt is produced from this.  The boys will be torn apart in a way that none of them imagine (how's that for a terrible teaser?). 

And yes, if Justin had encouraged Gus, that would have been terrible.  I, too, wonder how Brian is going to feel about Gus kissing him, since Gus did not reveal how brief and relatively innocent it was.  And I am glad that you were happy with the way the boys made up and how Brian received forgiveness from Justin, because there WERE a lot of horrid things said to him that night.

We now have a big mess to unravel here!!  Thank you as always for the wonderful feedback, Katrin!  This WILL be updated soon - Mica sent me the next chapter and I'm working on my part of it right now.  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2013 05:26 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

Seriously? Come on! Continued and soon! Please, please! Such an end ... OMG. But beautiful chapter. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Hello, Saskya!  I know, I know - horrible cliffhanger!  Obviously Michal and I will be writing a very angst-filled chapter coming up, now that the secret is finally out in the open.  I believe she has started the outline for the next chapter, so I'm hopeful we can update the next one a lot faster than this one.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Saskya!  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2013 08:26 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

I am sorry for not reviewing sooner. I didn't even see this new chapter here. I guess some how I missed it. This chapter was so good-another cliff hanger. The s--t is going to finally hit the proverbial fan.=, can't wait for that. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc - no need to apologize; now I feel like I shamed you into it - LOL!  Thank you, though, for reading and commenting, my friend. Michal and I do appreciate that. And yes, next chapter obviously will be full of angst now and a lot of pain, at least initially.  I just posted the next chapter of the challenge story, BTW; I hope you continue to enjoy that one as well.  Hope you're able to get a little rest along the way, too.;)  Tell everyone I send them my best.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: Lyndsey (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2013 08:24 PM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

I'm confused as to how Justin didn't connect the dots when he learned Brian's son's name is Gus. It's not as if that's a super common name these days.

Aside from that, I love this story.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lyndsey - thank you for reading and for the comments.  As far as I know, Michal and I have been careful NOT to divulge Brian's son's name during the story.  Hopefully we did that, but if you discovered it somewhere before this I'd appreciate you pointing it out where it is.  We intentionally sought never to bring up his name anywhere when Brian and Justin were together, just because of that, but we could have slipped up and not realized it.  So if you HAVE seen it, please let us know so we can correct it.

We're glad, though, that it hasn't detracted too much from the story. Thank you for letting us know that you are enjoying it nonetheless.  We are already beginning the next part of this, so the next update should be quicker than this one was. *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2013 07:36 PM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

The sh*t just hit the fan!  Damn, this could go in many directions.  Great chapter!

Sorry, had emergency oral surgery yesterday, not as eloquent as I would like to be.  Really enjoy this story and looking for the next update.

All the best,

Laura

Author's Response:

Hi, Laura!  I see you're all caught up now, and yes, a ton of angst coming up shortly.  How will everyone handle this now? And will it have a bearing on Lindsay's custody bid?  I imagine it won't help things any.  Obviously a lot of people are going to be shocked - and hurt - coming up.  Angst alert multiplied! 

We'll work on getting this updated just as soon as we can. Thank you for all the comments, Laura.  I hope you get to feeling better very soon; I can just imagine how uncomfortable that was.  BTW - hope you might be up to writing a summer challenge one-shot - deadline's been extended to 8/25 (hint, hint...). *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2013 06:53 PM · On: Dinner and a Movie

Wowwie, what a date. Ex-5 minute stand is the waiter, that just sucks, no pun intented.  But, love how the chapter wove around the obstacles and brought B/J together at the end.  Lovely!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2013 06:40 PM · On: Double Dates?

Lots of triangles, now Tristan, Gus, and Justin.

Enjoying this very much.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2013 12:35 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

OOooooh.  Finally found out!

Author's Response:

Yep - now the real angst begins.;)  Thanks for reading and for the comment!  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2013 11:41 AM · On: New Guy In Town

FINALLY !! I love your Story ... I hope the next chapter comes soon ....

Author's Response:

Hi, Julia!  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment!  Michal and I are delighted that you were looking forward to the next chapter.  We'll do our best to get it updated as soon as possible.   I know we left it at a horrendous cliffhanger!  Needless to say, there's still going to be a lot we have to tell - and some major hurdles to overcome - before all the boys are happy.;)

Thank you again for all the support!  We really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2013 08:41 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

talk about a dropping bomb!

I guess this is where the commercial break would have been if this was a series.

Love it!

Author's Response:

Lol! Well, that would have certainly made them tune back in hopefully.;)

Brian's love for his son - and for Justin - is about to be tested in a big way coming up. 

So glad that you're enjoying our story; thank you for taking the time to let us know. We will get this story updated again soon.  *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2013 03:25 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if I love you or "hate" you right now. This chapter was so good but I need more. I can't wait to read next chapter. Hope Brian won't be too much of an ass with Justin who "shared a kiss" with Gus the night before and with the other things his son told him about his crush.

Thank you so much. 

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! I know - poor Gus; the kid just can't cut a break, kind of like Tristan.  He's so mixed up with his feelings, and this is NOT going to help one bit.  And you raise a good point; just how much will Justin and Gus tell him about their relationship?  Brian already knows that his son 'shared a kiss' with this other boy he's interested in, and now he's no doubt going to know that the 'other boy' is Justin; just what does that mean?  You know "Mr. I Don't Do Jealous" Brian; he was already jealous before; how is he going to react when he realizes it's his own son?  Will he even let Justin explain that it was innocent and didn't get anywhere?  Or will Gus run out before any of them can even talk?  This is going to be a mess, but you know how much I relish angst, and this one has it big time!

I'm hopeful that Michal and I can update quickly; we'll do our very best. Thank you for reading and for the comments!  We appreciate the support so much and we're both delighted that you're following and enjoying this story.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Vision (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2013 01:49 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

oh shit not the way I wanted Gus to find out and with the whole Lindsay bullshit. I hope he doesn't think this is just some random fuck and listens to the whole story of how they met.

 

Damn need the next chapter soon

Author's Response:

Hello!  Michal and I thank you for reading and for commenting!  Yes, this is probably THE worst possible way to find this out; now Brian not only has to try and explain to Gus what is going on (after his own initial shock wears off!), but he has Lindsay to worry about, too.  Will Gus be so upset that he will decide to run off with his mother?  Or will Brian have to decide between Gus or Justin in order to prevent that?

Obviously there's plenty of angst still to come!  We will get this updated just as soon as we can. Thank you again for the feedback; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2013 12:30 AM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

Oh Boy!!!! Poor Gus- He likes Tristam and Justin and now to walk in on Justing and Brian.

 

Glad that Justin gave Brian another chance - I hope that meeting Gus won't put a damper on their situation-  could be very awkward.  More soon please

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy! Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for your comments;)  Yeah, this is definitely THE worst way for Gus to find out.  Obviously, there's going to be a lot of hurt to go around int the next chapter, and Brian will have to confront one of the hardest decisions he will ever have to make.  Someone is bound to get hurt here; how they untangle themselves from this dilemma is going to take some time.

Thanks again for the feedback, Sandy; Michal and I really appreciate that!  We'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: bedtimecoffee (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2013 11:53 PM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

I hate that you left me like this ughhhhh! Please update soon. I love this story.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! Great to hear from you.  I always loved your user name, BTW, although that would keep me up at night - ha!  

Terrible spot to leave it, I know; but at least Gus finally knows now and it's out in the open.  But the question now is, what in the world will Brian do?  Justin obviously wants to be with him, not Gus, and yet Brian loves his son and doesn't want him to get hurt. Will Gus understand?  Or will Brian be forced to choose between Justin or his son?  Hm....That's the big question; someone is bound to be hurt by his decision.   Believe it or not, though, Michal and I will get this tangled mess sorted out eventually, but not before some more angst sets in.;)

Thank you very much for reading and for the comments!  We will update this again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2013 09:54 PM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

Hey Kim :)

Omg....well the secret is finally out....poor Gus, I can just imagine how devastated he must be walking in on Justin and Brian that way. Now let's see if their relationship can survive this

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments!  Yes, as progressive and deep as Brian and Gus's relationship is, this is obviously a major blow to Gus's hopes of a relationship with Justin. Thank God they didn't go any farther than they did, but Brian will really be in a major pickle here now. What does he do to resolve this?  Hope you will stay tuned!  We WILL get this fixed eventualy.;)  Thanks again, Tamara, for the support!  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2013 09:18 PM · On: Here Comes the Boom!

Boom is an understatement.  Lindsay dropped a bombshell, Brian hurts Justin, Gus still doesn't know about Justin and Brian!  The aftermath!  On the plus side, Justin did forgive Brian and Tristan finally made his move on Gus.  Then the final exposion.  Gus finds Justin with his dad!!!  The next chapter is going to be stupendous as we find out how you proceed from here. 

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yeah, one step forward and then two steps back.  Michal and I have our work cut out for us to get everyone to a happy place here.  We all know how teenage hormones are, so Gus is bound to be devastated, at least at first. The main question is, though, how will Brian handle this?  What a major triangle!  Does he hurt his son - or does he hurt Justin again?

Thanks for reading and for the comments.  Sorry, too, about the longer-than-normal delay in updating; my co-writer had some RL issues come up and I just got back from my trip to NYC to see Randy in his play, so we're a little behind.  We'll try out best to get the next update up a lot sooner.  Thanks for hanging in there with us.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Heartsick

Oh! I read the new chapter as soon as I came back from my vacation, but since then, I tried really hard not to think about this story. Cliff-hangers are *evil*! Especially cliff-hangers like yours! That was such an intense chapter, I was reading with my mouth agape, and now I’m just *dying* to see what will happen next!

This impossible triangle is getting more and more complicated! Justin is waiting for Brian, Gus is waiting for Justin, Tristan is waiting for Gus. And Brian… Brian behaves like a total shit. I can’t believe he could say something like that to Justin!! No matter how hurt he is, it’s not right to vent his anger and pain on Justin. And in such cruel way… I’m not sure Justin will forgive him easily. Justin in this story is so incredibly strong, stubborn and independent. They love each other deeply, but I think Brian needs Justin more than Justin needs him. Especially now, when Lindsay went crazy and decided she has some chances, some rights on Gus! Gus is almost an adult, and he loves his father – of course he would choose him. Lindsay is disgusting!

I wanted to cry when Justin told Nancy everything. It’s horrible to see a strong person like him breaking and hurting so much. I wonder, what Brian will do and think now? Now he isn’t drunk any more, will he regret what he did last night?   

It’s a relief that Gus at least shows more and more interest in Tristan, even if he may not fully understand it now. Maybe it will make the truth about Brian and Justin a little less painful. Oh, everything is really so very complicated here! Now, with Lindsay, even more so. I hope Gus won’t make a big mistake and destroy his father, but he has a few reasons to be insanely angry with him. Will he be more angry because of Brian’s being the person Justin dated? Or maybe he will be more pissed off by Brian’s treatment of Justin? I have no idea, but I’m sooo looking forward to finding out! I can’t even think straight, I’m so immersed in this story! Thank you, girls!    

        

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Michal and I always look forward to your thoughtful comments.  You have hit upon a lot of the problems that are going to rise very soon regarding this situation.  And I should probably hide under my desk, because we are working on the next chapter now, and we can tell you that there is a humdinger of a cliffhanger in the next chapter.  And the big reveal is at hand, too.

Sooo happy that you are enjoying this roller coaster ride! Thank you very much for all your support of this story!  It will be updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Heartsick

Oh this is getting more and more intricate.  Can't wait for Gus to realize that the "man" is Brian and for Brian to tell him about Lindsay.  Eager to see how the story unfolds.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy! Thanks for the comments, my dear.:)  We're hoping to have the next chapter up sometime early next week.   And the 'big reveal' should be in that chapter (at last!).  Obviously, there's more angst coming before everything is ironed out, and yes, someone is definitely going to get hurt here - in more ways than one. But you know where my heart lies always.:)  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sandy!  Michal and I greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 03:59 AM · On: Heartsick

went on several sites to acertain his age. Can't find it anywhere. Was wondering if he is Randy's age or older or younger. Nosey much!!!! I will stop with the questions, but I have to go to the source when I have questions about the guys. Gale looks pretty sexy on horseback. I wonder if that movie will be released to all of us in November or just where it was shot? Time is up-have to do more housework ugh!!! lol

Author's Response:

Not sure about his age, but I just saw something from 2011 that stated he was 28.  So I'm assuming he's around 30, which would make him a little younger than Randy. And yes, Gale looks quite comfortable on that horse; apparently that is why he had to wear that beard for the con.  He looks pretty hot as a Civil War soldier, doesn't he?  Not sure when the movie will be released, but is has a lot of well-known names in it, so I'm hoping it will have a widespread release.  I'm looking forward to Such Good People, Randy's movie, being distributed eventually, but they will have to find $ support to do that, so it's hard to say when that will happen.:)  Keep those questions coming - Ha!  (After the housework first...).;)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 01:26 AM · On: Heartsick

I checked out the picture---sooo good. She has some amazing pictures also.Thers is one of Randy and a guy sitting on what looks like a colored wall. Who is that? Just curious. I guess he has a new boyfriend true? I haven't read anywhere who that is. Do you know? I am just nosey for the peeps.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc.  Yes, she does have some wonderful photos; she stays on top of what's going on with G and R.  Tanya has made a lot of my banners over the past couple of years for me, too; she's very creative.  I think the 'colored wall' is actually the edge of a swimming pool, and the guy with him is Nick McGough, who is purportedly his current beau.  He's a dancer in the traveling edition of "Flashdance: The Musical" touring the country.  Apparently from what I understand Randy went directly from the VIP dinner at the con to Texas to visit him; that was where the show was being performed at the time (San Antonio). 

A funny moment happened at the con, BTW, when someone asked Gale what Brian would be doing presently (Brian Kinney, not Randy's old BF), and he said something about him performing in "Flashdance."  I think that was more than a coincidence, don't you?;) But I don't know exactly what he was trying to say. 

Randy's back in NYC now rehearsing for his play, "Harbor."  Can't wait to see him in it in early August.:)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 08:43 PM · On: Heartsick

Orgrgugfdcbj% $/&£€####asdfghhjkkl i think that is quite the transcription of the noise I just made.

 I read the last 3 chapters in a row, and it was so great! So many feels and different emotions... i had a goofy smile, a hand on my mouth and a sad face. Congrats, good job! :) If i had a doubt before, now it is sure I ship badly Gus and Tristan.

The last chapter was my fave... bad lindsay is bad. I hope she won't be the one to reveal the identity of the kinneys men's crush or that she won't go after Justin to ask him to leave Gus alone. "You are so gullible," he told him as Justin's heart promptly broke in two.  "But you WERE good in bed." " my heart also broke.

I am happy,I, finally, had the time to read the last 3 updates. Thank you. Can t wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  I understand that first sentence loud and clear - LOL!  My thoughts exactly.  Poor Justin - and Gus.  Justin is in such deep pain right now, while poor Gus is just simply confused by his feelings for both Justin and Tristan. 

I really don't think Justin, though, will encourage Gus despite his sorrow at the moment.  I think that will get resolved pretty quickly. The big secret at last is about to be revealed in the next chapter, though, and that promises to open up even more angst!

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment; we're so happy that you're enjoying this story, and we'll work on getting it updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 06:46 PM · On: Heartsick

I may have mentioned I dislike Lindsay at least Mel does not pretend to like Brian! Lindsay is a wispy manipulative bitch!

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris - well, if we have portrayed Lindsay as stiff and unsympathetic here, then our job is done - LOL!  Seriously, she is being totally unreasonable, I agree, and her own son will eventually tell her as such, in addition to what Brian has already said.  Things are quickly going to be reaching a head here very soon - the big secret is about to be revealed in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.  We'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 04:05 AM · On: Heartsick

...and the sea was getting verwy wough.  OMG - why did Lindsay have to come back?  One thing I am sure of;  you'll fix it!  I really enjoyed this chapter, please please please update soon.  Jane

Author's Response:

Yes, Jane, verwy, verwy wough indeed - ha!  You must like Loony Tunes, too.:)  In fact, I think we could say that LINDSAY is Looney Tunes for thinking she's going to waltz in and take Gus away from his father.  Gus is going to have a lot to say about that, in addition to his father. The big reveal is coming up in the next chapter, and that's going to start the craziness all over again (tee-hee). But we promise to fix them all up, good as new, before we're finished.:) Thanks so much for reading and for the comments! It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  Michal and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 03:12 AM · On: Heartsick

Nice!!!!! cliff hanger. Lindsey what BITTTTCH. Poor Brian pain management 101 again. Hopefuly Jus doesn't give up on him. Good chapter.lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend. I know, I know - everyone's itching for the reveal.  It's coming up at the end of the next chapter. And yes, that would typically be very much like Brian to go off the deep end temporarily and insert his foot into his mouth before he thinks things through. But something tells me that Justin isn't giving up on him - and Brian isn't giving up on him, either.;) Thank you for taking the time as always to comment.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Heartsick

Agrrrr nooooo don't stop.
Now come back, sit behind your computer and write !! sorry I'm a little demanding.

But that's a cliffy *sighs *

* hugs *

Author's Response:

I know, my friend; I feel your pain!  But if it helps, the big reveal is (finally) coming up at the end of the next chapter. Not sure which one will be the most surprised, though:  father, son, or Justin himself.  More angst coming with it, too!  Thank you for hanging in there with us inthe meantime; it means a lot to both of us.  *Hugs*  Michal and Kim

 

P.S.  You can be as demanding as you want; it's when people DON'T want anymore that I would be worried.:)  So we thank you for the support and encouragement.

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 01:25 AM · On: Heartsick

Hello to Kim and Michal! One request....Can u just let Lindsay die in the next chapter, like having an accident? *evil me, hehehe* I just really hate her so much!

This chapter is really sad, you are breaking my heart. I felt so bad for Justin. I hope Brian will come to realize what he had done. He should fight Lindsay @ court, and with this he needs all the moral support esp from the one he loves....Justin. And also hopefully Gus will come to his senses that he is just infatuated with Justin and he has feelings for Tristan that he is not fully aware yet how he really felt.

Thanks for the update sweetie! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  We know - very sad chapter.  But believe it or not, it's setting it up eventually to put all the pieces in their proper places.;)  It's obvious that Gus is quite confused here in a lot of ways.  And you're right; the last thing Brian needs is to push Justin away.  Lindsay is more of a temporary blip here to the overall story, if that's any help.;) Some events are coming up that will make some of the characters realize how much they mean to each other - and which pair truly belongs together.

We'll get this updated again soon - thanks for reading and especially taking the time to comment, Cindy; Michal and I really appreciate that.:)  *Hugs* back ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: Lucy (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2013 02:37 AM · On: Surprises

Great story!

Author's Response:

Hi, Lucy! Michal and I thank you very much for reading and for the comments.:)  We are working on Ch. 14 right now, and the angst is about to ramp up big time!  It should be posted very soon.  So glad that you are enjoying it.:)  Thank you again for taking the time to review; it is greatly appreciated.:)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2013 12:44 AM · On: Surprises

Well!! here I am back in the good ole U.S. of A. Got back at 3:00 this a.m. Am a little jet-lagged but not too bad. This story you guys have put down here is so good. You two make a good team. Sort of like Meredeth and Thyme on another site. You should write more together. I am looking forward to the next chapters when the shit hits the fan. Should be quite an upset for one person especially. My trip was wonderful, did a lot of things and saw lots of interesting things. The nite life there is never-ending, so much to do. I went on your profile page and caught up with all you lucky folks did at the con. My god I was surprised to see hairy Gale. Randy never changes does he?? Still our never aging Peter Pan. He still looks seventeen.I think I caught a glimpse of you. Right?? at the closing ceremonies??? You won a chair. Wow!! You have good luck. What is next on your agenda? are there more places to go to see them. Is Spain an option? I wasn't sure if there was another QAF con there. It seems our accident prone guy has done it again. I don't know what I am going to do with him. I will be going back to work Sunday night as it is very chaotic at the hospital right now-so they are glad I am back and want me to come in on Sunday instead of Tuesday. Well I guess I better get my place shipshaped up and take a nap. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  Welcome back!  I've missed you.;)  I'm so glad that you had such a good time on your trip.;)  Yes, the famous chair arrived today via UPS.  It will have a cherished spot somewhere - maybe my bedroom.  Will be the closest I'll come to having Gale in there - ha!  And yes, I did win it - but at auction.  Cost me a pretty penny, too.  I should have probably bid on Randy's as well, or even his alone.  But I didn't know if I would ever see Gale in person again, so I thought I'd rather have something from him for now.

The only other event featuring Gale and Randy that I know of is the Bilboa con next March. I'm thinking of going, but I'm afraid by the time I find out if I can go all the good events with them will be sold out.  Will have to see.  Would love to meet some of the online friends that will be going, along with some others I met at Cologne that are going.

Don't know if I told you about their gifts that I gave them, but you may have seen them on my LJ.  I was so happy that they signed my copy of them.  I wasn't sure they would do that.  It was hard to tell what Gale thought of his, but Randy had a smile on his face, so I think he liked his at least.

Okay, back to the story!  Thanks for the compliments for Michal and me.  I am really enjoying helping to write this story.  The most critical - and angst-filled part - is coming up soon, and yes, Gus figures to be the most upset about it.  But there will be some twists and turns that maybe readers will not foresee as well. 

So good to hear from you again!  Tell Lee to behave himself for a while (if he can!), and that I am working on the update to "Heart's Desire."  It's up next.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim and  Michal

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 01:50 AM · On: Surprises

Ah, it’s always such a pleasure to see an update to this story! I’m still on the edge of my seat – it’s getting more and more unbearable to wait for a resolution! When, just when Brian, Justin and Gus will learn the truth? It’s infuriating, though I understand why big revelation still didn’t happen. Brian and Justin are falling deeper and deeper in love - everything is going to be even more complicated in the end, but at the same time I hope Brian won’t push Justin away. Before, I wasn’t sure, but now, seeing how incredibly smitten he is, I started to believe it. I can’t imagine how he would be able to go on without his blond. 

Brian and Gus’ relationship touch me so much. It’s amazing how proud of his son Brian is, how he wants only the best for him. It’s so obvious that Gus and Justin are the most important people in his life, those he can’t imagine his life without. I love Brian, so I hope Gus will decide to stay closer to Pittsburgh.

The story of Kayla’s mother terrified me. God, what a woman! I just can’t understand parents like that. Do they really believe money can buy and do everything, including making their children love them? Poor Kayla. Her situation might be better that Brian’s, but anyway, it’s so sad. It’s funny that Brian noticed Tristan’s apparent interest in Gus! Of course, nothing can escape his eyes, especially when it comes to his son. But what he will say when he knows about Justin!..

That kiss Gus and Tristan shared was completely unexpected! I didn’t see it coming, it was a great surprise! And most certainly I didn’t expect that Justin would see that. Poor Gus, I wonder if he realized that Justin wasn’t really affected – only happy for him. Or maybe he decided that he ruined everything they might have in future? I hope when he knows about Justin and Brian, he won’t think that Justin wanted to take revenge on him in this way. Of course if he also understands the dates, he won’t believe it, but being shocked, hurt and angry… everything is possible. I feel so sorry for Tristan! Gus actually kissed him back for a moment – who knows what would have happened if Justin hadn’t appeared? Now both Gus and Tristan are in pain :( I love them as a possible couple, I hope they’ll finally get their chance. 

I *loved* the way Brian and Justin were exchanging messages. I always can’t help smiling, seeing how in love they are, like teenagers, really! And Brian is sooo jealous, and it’s very exciting and hilarious to watch him being so uncharacteristically emotional. Justin has changed everything to him, Brian is so different from what he was like in the first chapter. Their sex/love-making scene was *amazing* - so passionate and vivid! Just like always, it evoked so many feelings. Justin has chosen the best strategy to become something more to Brian than just one-night stand – he doesn’t push at all, he makes Brian go after him instead of following him around. That’s impressive! If anyone had this chance, it’s Justin. It was unbelievable (in a good way) how Brian then asked Justin directly if he had been seeing someone else. It’s a breakthrough! He would have never done something like this before! I loved that episode so much! I enjoyed Justin little evil-game :)

Lindsay?! Wow, that was shocking! Just what is she doing there, what does she want?? I’m *so* looking forward to finding out!

Thank you, girls! Great chapter! Actually, it’s interesting how great you two combine together. I can’t see the difference in writing, if I didn’t know, I would have never assumed there are two authors, not one! It’s really fantastic. Thanks to both of you!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart! Sorry for taking so long to respond to your very thoughtful review.:)  I just got back from the QAF con in LA and am still catching up.  Please know how much Michal and I appreciate all of your wonderful comments.  I am very glad that she asked me to help co-write this story, because there are so many fascinating layers to it, and so many emotions that are going to come into play.  Lindsay, while not being a major character in this story overall, WILL manage to cause some unexpected problems with her appearance.  And the big reveal is coming up soon...promise.  It will be a big shock to everyone, especially Gus, due to the manner in which he finds out.

Yes, I enjoy the texting going on, too; I think it's very contemporary in light of what would happen in a present-day world.  I hope that Michal and I are realistically portraying the ever-deepening relationship between Brian and Justin.  It will cause an even bigger dilemma for Brian in the future, as he is more or less forced to choose which love to follow.  Quite a decision to make!

Thank you again for always taking so much time and care into your comments!  Michal and I are always thrilled to read them.  We'll work on getting this updated very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2013 10:43 PM · On: Surprises

Last half hour relax before the weekend starts.

Thanks for the update :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Elke!  Can't believe you found time to read this the other night - ha!  But Michal and I are honored that you chose ours.:)  Thanks for the comments and for reading.  And thanks again for the wonderful opportunity the other night - and it goes without saying that today would not have been possible without YOU.  So for that we can never thank you enough.  Can't wait!  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 11:34 PM · On: Surprises

I haven’t been able to review as quickly I did before, but I do still review. I read your updates as soon as I can; it’s just that I can’t review them until later. :p

I read this update with less anxiety because I knew Justin would not be revealed to the two Kinney men. I wasn’t anxiously racing to the climactic scene I have been looking forward to and so I enjoyed it so much more. It’s different reading about Brian raising Gus all on his own. I have forgotten, is he still the Stud of Liberty Ave? Anyway, they do have a closeness that is palpable and Brian being so closer to his age could be one of the reasons. I can’t help thinking about Gus having a stepdad his own age and having to really do homework together, LOL. That should be interesting around graduation day.

It’s a shame about Kayla and her mother, but I have to sound like a snot and say I don’t really care, LOL. Besides, at least her mother makes some effort. Lindsay hadn’t even been in contact with Gus. Speaking of which, please don’t tell me she’s going to become the picture of motherhood all of the sudden. I’m with Brian on this one. That was some cliffhanger.

I almost forgot, that bathroom scene of Gus and Tristan was hot! I can’t believe Gus left that behind to chase after Justin. It must be true love. Yep, holidays should be pretty interesting in the Kenny household after Justin and Brian marry, LOL.

Sandra :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend.  Michal and I appreciate that.:)  Yes, the big reveal has been pushed back just a bit, but Lindsay's appearance will cause some additional problems (although I see her as more of a temporary problem).  There will still be a lot of twists and turns to the story, but father and son's revelation regarding Justin is coming soon.

Thanks again for the feedback, Sandra; we'll get this updated again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 04:38 AM · On: Surprises

Oh dear Lindsay :( poor Tristan come on Gus get a clue. I am getting really concerned for Gus eventually he is going to realise Justin is with Brian and it is going to put the lovely relationship father and son have. Now Lindsay !,

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  A little twist there at the end.;)  It wasn't quite the blonde that Brian was hoping for.  And I think she'll be causing a little cloudiness with the sunshine now.  I think you'll love the twists and turns coming up that Michal has crafted into the plot.  Thanks for reading and for the comments!  We'll get this updated again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Donna (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2013 09:30 PM · On: Surprises

So happy too see this was updated. Tristan is fast becoming the "scene stealer" for me. I would love it if Gus falls for him eventually. They really deserve their own story. I know you have several other storylines to complete but please consider spin-off for "Gustian"

Author's Response:

Hi, Donna!  Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments.  I have to thank Michal personally for coming up with Tristan's character, but we both are flattered that you like him enough to consider a spin off with him and Gus.  Perhaps we can do that in the future, and we're delighted that you're enjoying this story.  We'll get it updated again just as soon as possible.  Thank you for the support!  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2013 05:55 PM · On: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

I love it !!!! love it and love it!!!! thank you for updating!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha! You're welcome. So glad that you like this story.  We'll get it updated again as soon as possible.  Lindsay WILL manage to cause some problems, but in the long run it will ironically turn out to be a good thing.  Thanks again for all your support of this story and my other stories.  Michal and I appreciate the support very much.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2013 03:18 PM · On: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

Hello Kim and Michal! I love the pictures you choose to play Tristan and Kayla in the story and I like the tattoo; is there a story behind that one?

This chapter is a tease; I was holding my breath while reading the part of the almost encounter of Brian and Justin after the game. Shocks, even though you kind of mention before that it will not be in the game that Gus will find out about his Dad with Justin, but still I was a little carried away. I hope it will not take more time for the next chapter to come. Please the soonest update needed! :) :) :) (Demanding???) Hahahaha! {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy! Thank you for reading and for the comments, Sweetie.:)  We both are really appreciative to you for taking the time to do that.:)  I know....soooo close!  And both of us are well aware that this is quite frustrating waiting for the big reveal. But I know that Michal has some exciting twists still coming up for this story, and that when the big reveal DOES occur, it will be a shock to everyone - especially in the way that Gus finds out! So we do hope you'll stay tuned.  Michal has given me the plot of the entire story, and all I can say is that I'm very excited where it's heading, and I'm really going to enjoy helping to co-write this one! I'll have to ask Michal about the dragon tattoo, BTW, but I like the photos that she's used for them, too.:)

Thanks again for the feedback, Cindy!  We'll do our best to get it updated again soon.  I'll be done with my teaching this week, so hopefully as soon as I get back from the con on 6/11 (woo-hoo!), I can accelerate my updating schedule.:)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 07:36 PM · On: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

OMG they just keep missing each other lol Poor Tristan he has it bad, I do not think that Justin was really playing fair by kissing Gus. Loving this and I cannot wait for the big reveal

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Yes, Michal and I are awful teases, aren't we?;)  I'm sure you're not the only frustrated reader right now, but it IS coming - promise!  Should be in the chapter after next if all goes according to plan.  First, we have a couple of surprises to throw in there, though.;)  And yes, that might have been a mistake on Justin's part to kiss Gus on the cheek, because it just may encourage him further, but I think he acted before he thought and considered it just an innocent gesture.  They'll be a lot going on in the next two chapters; I hope you will hang in there with us until all is revealed soon. Thanks again for reading and for the comments; Michal and I greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 05:51 AM · On: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

Oooh, the excitement builds.  Good job.

- Jackie

Author's Response:

Thank you, Jackie; we both appreciate the support. It is, indeed, coming soon, and it's going to have some wide-ranging repercussions once it does. Thanks again for reading and for leaving comments; we both greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 04:45 AM · On: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

OH COME ON! I was beyond disappointed. Now I know how Tristan felt, LOL.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra - hope you were just disappointed that they didn't meet yet and not in the story itself.  I know everyone's wanting the big reveal, and it's coming.  It just works out better to build up to it just a bit.  We're hoping once it happens that you will still be following our story.  We have a few more surprises coming up first that will help to make up for it.:) Thanks for reading and for the comments; Michal and I appreciate you taking the time to do that.  Hopefully you AND Tristan will get what they want eventually!  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2013 02:21 AM · On: Perfect Shot - and a Near Miss

Seriously? They were so close! But I'm glad Tristan's feelings for Gus have been confirmed, because surely that means something's going to happen between them?

And more surprises? I'm not sure I can cope with the excitement of more surprises.

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments! I know - soooo close!  But we needed to interject just a bit more drama here.;)  And yes, there WILL be a few more surprises coming up before the big reveal.  I'm so glad Michal asked me along on the ride for this one!  Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback; she and I appreciate that very much.  We're getting much closer to the truth coming out now.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2013 03:25 AM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

Ah, that was a great chapter, just like always! Very well thought-of and full of tiny details that make the story whole and interesting, evoking the desire to read thoroughly and analyze every moment.

I love how Gus can easily read Brian and see right through him. I laughed when he remembered Brian’s excuse for always staying up late when he isn’t at home – ‘lots of work to do’. Yeah, right! Brian just loves his son so much that he can’t even sleep without being entirely sure he is okay… this is so sweet, I adore those moments! And the way Brian felt guilty later, like he was a kid caught by a parent! The dynamics between him and Gus is fantastic!  I’m also still very fond of Gus/Tristan – very beautiful couple, in every way possible; I hope Tristan will be there for Gus when he’ll need him – and I think it’s going to happen pretty soon. Brian and Justin are incredible together, their phone conversation was so overwhelming. I love seeing the tender side of Brian, feeling how much Justin affects him. He is so in love, and you describe it so realistically, so beautifully! I always can’t help smiling watching what the two of them do to each other. I can’t imagine what is waiting for them later, though… the Big Day finally came, so the truth must be revealed soon. It’ll be such a shock, specifically after everything Brian, Justin and Gus experienced together.

Poor Kayla, I know what public humiliation is, and how infuriating it must feel when you didn’t do anything, but everyone blames you only because of some stupid rumors. At least she is lucky to have such friend like Gus - and the way Justin helped was so unusual and hilarious! I even envy her a little, just like Gus :) Who can blame him for falling for Justin – the boy is truly remarkable, you made him a real Sunshine. I’d love him myself if he wasn’t already taken by Brian. Owen is seriously playing on my nerves, I wonder when he’ll get what he deserves. I hate this kind of people, it’s almost impossible to deal with them.     

The humour in this story is great – I laughed so much when Justin called Brian Juliet :) I can only imagine his face when he heard it! But when he agreed to be Romeo, I thought my heart will stop. It was completely unexpected, but oh-so-great! I can’t believe how much he has changed, especially remembering the first chapter. Brian was softer than in canon, but cold and sharp with his tricks - Justin immediately became an exception, even though he obviously didn’t think he could achieve so much.

Great chapter – so interesting and so well-thought-out, I enjoyed every moment of it! Thank you, I can’t wait for more! I the closer angst comes, the more nervous and excited I get!

By the way, Michal, I wanted to ask – you have some banners with titles on your page, so I was wondering, are they stories? I searched for ‘The slap’, ‘I’ll bring you back’ and others, and I haven’t found anything. There are some of your stories there too, so maybe those banners are your plans on some future projects?         

Author's Response:

Hi, Dear! Always such a treat to read your comments!  Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for all the wonderful feedback.:)  It is fun to write the banter that goes back and forth between the two men, although I need to credit Michal for the "Romeo and Juliet" part; that was her idea.   And yes, Brian is falling deeper and deeper for Justin, which will definitely leave him unprepared for what is soon about to happen.  And then the real dilemma will begin:  what will he do and who will he choose?  No matter who he chooses - Justin or his son - both he and the other person will be greatly hurt. 

And yes, Owen is a big problem that won't easily go away; things will get worse regarding him before they get better, I'm afraid. We will get this story updated just as soon as possible.  We're so happy that you like it! 

Michal wanted me to tell you that the banners you saw ARE for upcoming stories.  The next one she will be writing is the one entitled "I'll bring you back," and from what she's told me it sounds like a very exciting story!  Can't wait to see her write that one.

Thank you again for all the comments!  We both greatly appreciate that, and look forward to future feedback from you.:)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 01:39 PM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

the Shakesperian-istic-isms?? continues! Me likey!

And the end...Including Owen....Dum dum DUMMMMM!!! how dramatique!!Can't wait 4 more!!

Author's Response:

I should have guessed that chapter title alone would have gotten your attention.;)  And don't start complaining about cliffhangers; seems like you've imbibed in writing quite a few of your own lately, Mister! LOL!  I'm glad you liked the slight bend toward literature in this chapter; something tells me that Owen is a fighter and not a poet, though - ha!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Jon.  Both Michal and I are grateful to you for that.  We'll get this updated just as soon as possible.:)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2013 08:44 AM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

BB wants to know if you are on meds for your depression.  He says to feel better.  His dad has had bouts of depression for a long time so he understands somewhat you are going through.  lol

Author's Response:

Tell Brian thank you.  No, I did try some meds several years ago, along with a year of psychotherapy, but none of it seemed to help me.  I hate being this way sometimes, but I've kind of decided it's about as good as it's going to get.  Sigh...sorry to be such a downer.  I get into these funks from time to time, and I guess this is one of them.  Thank you all for your concern, though; that means the world to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2013 06:46 AM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

I am so sorry I forgot to wish you happy birthday.  I put this on both sites so you would see my better late than never birthday greeting.  We are all sorry we forgot.  Please forgive us.  I am going so stop having them as Brian says they are nothing to be celebrated just our accomplishments. Ha!!  lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie.  Is that YOUR Brian or Justin's Brian you're quoting?  LOL!  I remembered Brian telling Justin that on the show, but I think he eventually learned to regret that philosophy. Thank you for the belated birthday greetings, but you all had no idea it was my birthday so there is certainly nothing to forgive.  I'm actually glad you posted it over here, too, though, because that's one thing I hate about FF.net; you can't respond to anonymous reviews like you can over here, so this gave me a chance to thank you for your warm wishes.  And I guess I know what Brian Kinney meant about not celebrating them anymore.  Every year I think I feel the 'march of time' at an even more pronounced rate, and maybe it's just because I'm in a melancholy mood at the moment, but honestly?  At the risk of invoking a pity party, my life is not much worth celebrating.  It can be pretty damn lonely most of the time, actually.  I suppose that is why I write fan fiction - to transport myself into another place and time and pretend that I'm someone else.  (Ugh - sorry for the downer).

Thank you again for all your support; you probably will never know how much that means to me.  Tell everyone that I send my love out to them.  And tell Lee that I really AM working on his story; it's been a struggle this time for some reason, but I have about half of it written, and it's slowly coming together.  Thanks again, lindc.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Definitely!

How Shakespearian!

Author's Response:

Ah, you flatter us, kind sir, like the melodic sound of the whippoorwill.  Forsooth!  Methinks Michal and I shall update this within a fortnight - or somewhere thereabouts - ha!  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: nonie (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2013 08:31 PM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

Hello again.  Sorry I haven't been reviewing here.  I am holding my own now.  I am wishing I can go back to work in some capacity.  I am very bored being at home with little to do. Thank you for keeping me in your thoughts while I was down.  The peeps have been wonderful to me.  I appreciate them so much.  It takes something like this to realize who your friends are and how much they are there for you during a crisis.  Lee has been a god-send.  He takes me to the market, doctors and any where else I have to go.  Such a dear.  Lindc cleans and helps me with heavy chores.  Just thought I would give you an update on my return from what could have been worse than it was.  Anyway---on to this story.  It is really a gem.  In my youth I had a bike, one of my prized posessions-my mother wasn't too pleased with me-but she got used to it.  So freeing to the soul.  I can't wait to see how all this is going to come to fruition.  talk to you later.

Author's Response:

Hi, Nonie!  I was so thrilled to hear from you, my friend!  And while I was very sorry to hear what had happened, you just make me realize once more what special friends you have.  They all sound like such a comfort and support to you.  I do hope one day I can meet all of you.  I will definitely be in the LA area this June for the con if you are anywhere near there and would like to do that.  But if not, or if you prefer to stay in the background, I understand and respect your wishes.:)

I am grateful to you, Lee, Brian, and lindc especially for your ongoing support of my stories; that, and the fact that you are willing to share a part of your world with me, makes me feel very special, just like all of you are.:) 

As for this story, I'm glad you're enjoying it and it brings back some happy memories for you.  I can't really take credit for the story idea, though; that came from Michal (StarShine-Green), my co-writer, who asked me to help her flesh the story out more.  She writes the chapters and sends them to me and then I write more detail into them and occasionally offer some suggestions for the plot.  But without her idea, I would have the pleasure of helping to co-write this one, so I will be sure to let Michal know that you are enjoyng it.  She is the main driver behind this entire story.

Thank you again for the kind words, Nonie.  Please stay in touch as you are able to, and I will continue to keep you in my thoughts and prayers.  *Hugs*  ~Kim (and Michal)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 12:06 AM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

Marvelous!

Author's Response:

Hi, Vonnie, my dear!  So glad to see you reading along on this one.:)  B and J are so 'smitten' with each other; what a shame that their idyllic romance is about to come crashing down on them, along with Gus.  Obviously, there's going to be a lot of shocked faces before too long.  Let's hope that the younger boys can figure out their own attraction to each other before too long.  I fear there's some heartache coming up first, though. Thanks so much for reading and for the comments, Vonnie; Michal and I appreciate that very much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2013 08:16 PM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

Romeo and Juliet- well that was sweet ;)  Can't wait to see what happens next

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sylvia!  Glad that you enjoyed this latest chapter.  I've actually toyed with the idea of doing an historical-type story for the boys based on Shakespeare's play; may still do that at some point.  Michal and I will get this updated as soon as possible. Thanks again for reading and for taking the time to comment; we both really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: amore (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2013 08:43 AM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

cette historire est merveilleuse.  je suis vraiment en profiter.  je suis noveau ici.

Author's Response:

Je vous remercie beaucoup, nous sommes heureux que vous êtes en profiter!  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Wherefore Art Thou, Romeo?

So Kayla does suspect that Tristan has feelings for Gus. I still say he should give Tristan a chance, and I'm glad that Kayla chose not to say anything until she was sure about the situation. She and her brother definitely need to have a little talk.

Looks like we're getting closer to game time and closer to watching the shit hit the fan.

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  So glad to see you still following this story and enjoying it.:)  Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments.  Yes, hopefully we can steer these two boys together, but at the moment Gus has stars in his eyes over Justin, so I fear it will not be that easy to resolve.  Things are going to hit the fan first, and Brian and Justin's relationship, which has seemed to be going so well, is soon going to hit some rocky spots.  But you know how much I adore angst.;)  We'll get this updated just as soon as possible.  Thanks again for all the support, Tamara.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2013 05:46 AM · On: Dinner and a Movie

I love this story.  I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens when everything is out!  Can't wait for your next updates:)

Author's Response:

Hello there! Thank you for reading our story and for the comments!  That makes both Michal and I very happy to hear that you are enjoying this!  (Michal prefers that I respond to the comments).:) 

I love this story idea that Michal came up with, and I'm really enjoying co-writing it.  She is working on her part of the next chapter right now, so an update should be posted very soon.  As you can imagine, things will be getting quite heated and tumultuous for a while until this unlikely triangle is resolved. 

Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to leave us your thoughts; that is so motivating to both of us.  *Hugs*  ~Michal (Starshine-Green) and Kim (Predec2)

Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 03:56 PM · On: Dinner and a Movie

Great story! I didn't know about this. Why you don't have this on LJ? And when next chapter? You make my next addiction! :-p

Author's Response:

Hi,Sweetie!  Great to see you on here.:)  I've been having major posting issues on LJ, for one thing; that's part of the reason for not posting it over there.  Plus it's being co-written with someone else who is not on LJ, so I think I would need to get an okay from her before posting it from my journal.  I will probably wait until it's completely finished and then see if she wants me to post it on there.  But thank you for reading this one and for the feedback.  That makes both Michal (my co-writer) and I very happy. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.:)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 07:23 PM · On: Dinner and a Movie

Wow, brilliant chapter! Apart from amazing date, it also has some unexpected moments, such as a flashback. I love those things!:) And I loved Brian being nervous about his date with Justin, he must feel very out of character – it’s funny that he’s experiencing all those emotions in the age of 32 for the first time in his life. The way he looked at Justin when he was approaching him… ah, it was so beautiful! You definitely know how to describe man in love.

Justin’s first visit to Babylon was incredible! Along with his first one-sided meeting with Brian. It was like I watched him through Justin’s eyes, feeling that dangerous, sexual atmosphere surrounding him. I loved the idea of the backroom being named after Brian – that’s so hilarious and so true!:) Brian’s cold attitude and disdain to those he already slept with always make it even more impressive when he concentrates his whole attention on Justin – I adore reading about everyone’s reaction when they see how smitten with the blond Brian’s become. Of course, even being in love he remains Brian Kinney, overwhelming and dangerous - Justin isn’t innocent himself, but I’m afraid that Brian anyway has all chances to break his heart. Though I suppose it goes both ways.

I love the way Justin is able to soothe Brian, to calm his nervousness and maybe even fear. He knows him so well already. The moment with that crazy admirer was so amusing – I couldn’t stop laughing!:) Brian’s shock and Justin’s amusement were something indescribable:) Poor hopeless Mark, he certainly behaved like a madman. He’ll be lucky not to lose this job. And it’s great that Justin is mature enough to laugh, not be offended by the whole situation. It’s a pity, though, that he and Brian can’t even go to a restaurant without running into one of his tricks. This could be really embarrassing.

Ooh, Gus and Tristan’s interactions are really amazing! Gus is clearly affected by him, though of course not as much as he is by Justin – at least not yet. And if Tristan chooses to cancel his plans so just to spend some time with him, it already means a lot. Thank you for the photos, by the way! Now I can envision both Tristan and Kayla much more better:)      

I’m so impressed how you turn the most ordinary and banal things into something incredible, unusual and completely unforgettable. When Brian and Justin were watching stars, I was overwhelmed with emotions! It was so beautiful and touching, especially when Brian assured Justin that he will never feel lonely again. I instantly fell in love with the phrase that Justin makes him look at everything in a new way – this is so true to fact when someone is in love! And knowing Brian, his character and his beliefs, it means much more than it would if it was someone else in his place. If man like Brian falls in love, this is for good. That is one of the reasons why I so strongly believe in bright B/J future after 513.  

Their love-making was so beautiful and tender, I loved every moment of it! And I was both shocked and excited when Brian longed to say those three words! He didn’t, but he wanted to – it already means *so* much!

Thank you, girls – the chapter was amazing, as always!      

Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin!  As usual, Michal and I am blown away by all the time you take to leave us your comments!  And if we have evoked some emotion in you as you read this, that means a lot to both of us.  You are so thoughtful in the way you describe which parts of the story that you are enjoying; and it gives Michal and I such a thrill to know how much you are enjoying this story. 

I do see a definite attraction between Gus and Tristan, but Gus is still in the 'enamored' stage with Justin, so I feel he can't quite see what is right in front of him yet.  Let's hope there is promise there, however, because we all know where Justin's heart lies.  The path is certainly not going to be a smooth one, however; in fact, it's liable to possibly blow father and son apart. 

Thank you again for reading and for all the time you take to leave your thoughts, Katrin; both Michal and I always look forward to your response.  We hope you continue to enjoy this story, and we'll get it updated again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 12:35 AM · On: Dinner and a Movie

I loved this chapter alot darling. It was so romantic ~ Yvonne xx

Author's Response:

Hi, Vonnie! Michal and I are happy that you liked it.:)  I think it was time the boys experienced a little more 'loving,' don't you?  At least before the 'you-know-what' hits the fan, which is bound to happen eventually.  Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, Sweetie; we both really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 05:58 PM · On: Dinner and a Movie

Oohhh what a lovely chapter both Brian and Gus starting to see people differently :) I think Tristan is going to make the shock of Justin being with Brian slightly more palatable for Gus

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Well, hopefully that will happen at some point; but Michal and I have some hurdles to overcome before everything is resolved; and there's going to be some heavy angst coming up for a while.  Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend; we should be able to update this again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 03:12 PM · On: Dinner and a Movie

Hello Kim and Michal! :) :) :)

I love this chapter. It shows the romantic side of Brian much more. And there is one thing I notice, Maybe I have missed some details in previous chapters but...Is Tristan gay? Coz I can sense a little attraction between Gus and Tristan. Well, I hope...coz it will be perfect if Gus will fall in-love with his best friend's brother! :) :) :)

{{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  *Hugs* back to you, my friend.:)  Yes, I think it's a safe bet that Tristan is gay; not sure if that has been mentioned before or not; I don't think so.  But there is definitely an attraction of some sort going on between the two of them, and a deepening bond, I would say.  That may be Gus's lifeline when he discovers the truth about his father's 'love.'  And, of course, Brian is really going to be in a big dilemma here once that is uncovered. 

Thank you for reading and for leaving your comments, Cindy!  Michal and I are very appreciative of your support; we'll work on getting this updated again very soon.  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2013 10:05 AM · On: Dinner and a Movie

This is really something of a story-just keep leading us on for the showdown.  Soooo good.  Am really enjoying this one.  You two are the dynamic duo.  Props to you.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc, my dear!  I hope you're still not working quite as hard as the last time (more than one shift).  And I hope you all have a wonderful time at Lee's new digs today!  Michal and I are thrilled that you're enjoying this one, my friend.  So many facets to this story - and there's bound to be some heartache occuring here shortly that will need to be addressed.

Thank you for taking the time to read this and for leaving your thoughts; sounds like life is crazy for you right now, so we both really appreciate that.  Tell Lee, Brian, Nonie, and all the others that I said hello!  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 05:05 AM · On: Dinner and a Movie

"For just one fleeting moment, he thought that this must be what Gus might have felt like as he waited for his own date to appear yesterday." That sentence amused me so much. 

And I love that Brian isn't hiding his feelings. Well, at least not to himself. 
And on top of waiting for the confrontation scene, I am now waiting for something to happen between Gus and Tristan. 

Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, at least we've given you plenty to think about now - LOL!  I sense some definite foreboding in this chapter; you know it's about to all come out fairly soon, and probably with disastrous results.  (Of course, we wouldn't have a story if we didn't throw the angst in there..).

And yes, I couldn't help including that sentence in there; how ironic is that??  If only he knew it was the same guy he and his son were pining over at the moment...

Michal and I thank you for reading and for the comments, Nikki; we'll get this updated very soon - Michal tells me the ballgame is up in the next chapter!  Thanks again.  *Hug*  ~Michal and Kim