Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 12:17 AM · On: Please, God...

This story always manages to make my heart stop every now and then! It’s absolutely amazing and breathtaking, I just *love* how intense things are here! This and the last chapter are something probably all of the readers were waiting for, and you exceeded all expectations! I love angst, I have a really weak spot for it, so I was ecstatic – in some really perverted way - to see how Brian and Gus suffered… especially Brian.    

Not knowing what happened to Kayla, I felt dread. I suspected the worst, because really, what can you expect from Owen? Poor girl, and Gus is too paralyzed and shocked to answer her pleas for help. The timing is so bad! Or maybe not, because it gives a perfect opportunity to Tristan and Gus to explore their feelings. Funny how things can be connected sometimes.

I loved the scene in the hospital – it was very touching. Painful, but so emotional and tender… Brian’s love came into surface, and Gus finally saw it and realized everything. But I think he made a wrong decision – he shouldn’t leave Brian like that. It may only worsen things, and deepen Brian’s – and probably Justin’s – guilt, even if what they were doing together wasn’t aimed at hurting Gus. I was touched when Brian once again proved his love for his son s unconditional, though I must admit, I was a little upset when Brian said he loves Gus more. I hoped his feelings for the most important men in his life were equal. By the way, it made me think of Michael for some reason… I wonder how he’ll react when he meets Brian’s partner!:)

The episode when Justin’s heart stopped shocked me, I didn’t expect it! But I’m so glad you didn’t leave us with a cliffhanger!:) I’m sure it was Brian’s presence that gave Justin strength to fight.

Thank you, girls, it was a great chapter, I loved it!

    



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Mika and I appreciate you reading and as always your very thoughtful comments . Yes, there was a lot of emotion in this chapter.  And I do think Gus was wrong to leave, even though I can understand his reasoning.  If it's any consolation, in the next chapter he and his father will reach an understanding and Gus will have a chance to apologize for what he did after he realizes how futile his pursuit of Justin was.  He and Tristan will also be drawing more closer.;)

Mika and I probably see about two more chapters of this to go before it's all said and done.  She hopes to start writing the next chapter sometime this week. Thank you again for all the time and thought you put into your comments!  We both greatly appreciate that, and hope you continue to enjoy this story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Please, God...

Hey girl! Just thought I would drop in and say Hi. Bored-off-housework done, sooo thought I would drop you you a hey! We are all good. Lee will be comingback to work next week. He bought a used hummer that he calls 'THE HULK". funny~~~. I think he will feel safer, but I don't know where he will park it. BB said 'any where he wants to" I have been entertaining the thought of having a child. Don't know how yet, but I am contemplating. I believe Nonie is going to move home to Europe-she is hme sick and only working part time which she can do there. i will miss her but I understand howshe feels. Time marches on sometimes not swo much fun. Next week TLC starts, can't wait. Well kiddo I guess I will sign off. Will be waiting for your next update. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend - thank you for the updates!  So glad to hear that Lee's coming back to work! Loved Brian's response to where he can park - ha!  I think he's right.  The wife of the attorney I used to work for had a Hummer and they were quite big.  I don't think he'll have to worry about someone injuring him in THAT thing!  I think "The Hulk" is a fitting name for his new vehicle.;) Quite a departure from the Vixen, though.

I think, too, that you would make a great mom for a child.  Only you can decide if that is what is best for you though.  But if you do, I think he/she will be a very lucky child.  Tell Nonie I wish her the very best in whatever she decides.  I know how strong a pull it can be to want to go home.

Take care and keep in touch! Hope everyone in the reading group enjoys"TLC" and you make lots of money - ha!  I'm working on the next part of "Tame the Wild Stallion" as promised before I go onto Lee's favorite.  Mika's also working on the next part of "Father, Son, and the Blond," so I'm hoping to have some more updates soon. Would love a Halloween one-shot, but so far I haven't gotten inspired yet.  Still time, though, so maybe....

Tell everyone I said hello and send my love.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

 

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2013 03:32 AM · On: Please, God...

Aggrrr I need more ASAP. This was too much.

Still loving this story.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  Yeah, no 'happy dance' coming from THIS chapter!  Things are still a bit of a mess here, aren't they? Maybe that's why Mika and I work so well together - she likes the angst, too!  We promise to get them all straightened out soon. I'm hopeful my co-writer can work on the next part of this shortly and send it to me. We'll certainly get it updated against just as soon as possible.

Glad that you enoying it! Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2013 10:16 PM · On: Please, God...

wow. beautiful but sad chapter. I hope that among them some level. Brian and Justin are a tried, Gus perhaps once receiving. I hope that Justin will be fine. They deserve to be happy.
Thank you for the chapter.



Author's Response:

Hello, Saskya! Thank you for reading and for the comments.  Justin will be okay eventually, but there will be a lot of issues that will need to be addressed here, including what is happening with Kayla and Tristan.  Mika and I will get this updated again soon. Thank you again for the support; we are delighted that you are enjoying this story.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2013 12:24 AM · On: Please, God...

I didn’t even know how or where to begin to review this chapter. Everyone was suffering through angst and pain with no solution in site. Gus was still being immature and petulant to the end. It was understandable under the circumstances to certain extent. His heart was broken and he was disillusioned about his father. Justin fighting for his life almost seemed a moot point. Poor Brian was continually pulled between the love for his son and then for his boyfriend. He chose the only way he could have in that situation. If Gus would have asked, Brian would have left Justin in the hospital at that moment if not on the street bleeding out. Gus was still punishing him by moving out.

I’m almost afraid to find out what’s going on with Kayla and Tristan. How much angst can one story hold?

Great update and I can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  I think I DID see your comments somewhere, but it could have been for "Stallion" possibly (?).  Yes, Gus isn't being all that reasonable, but as a teenager whose heart was just broken by the boy he was infatuated with, I suppose I can understand it.  I think he realizes now that he would have never had a chance with Justin, though, and hopefully he will soon see Tristan in a new light.

Thanks again for the feedback!  Mika and I really appreciate that. We'll get another update up soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2013 09:21 PM · On: Please, God...

Ack! I'm worried about Justin. I'm worried about Kayla, too - something bad happened. Okay, ack! I'm worried about all of them. Nice cliff hanger! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag - Mika and I appreciate you reading and commenting.  There will be more of an explanation shortly regarding what is going on between Tristan and Kayla. Thanks again for the feedback.  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 09:02 PM · On: Please, God...

Thank you for the update. I love the story SO much!



Author's Response:

Hi, Natalya! Mika and I thank you very much for reading and for taking the time to comment.  We are thrilled to hear how much you are enjoying this story. We will try hard to get it updated again very soon. Thank you again for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 08:08 PM · On: Please, God...

Finally an update but again another cliffhanger! can't wait for the next update. I almost did the split in happiness when i saw this update!

Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 08:08 PM · On: Please, God...

Finally an update but again another cliffhanger! can't wait for the next update. I almost did the split in happiness when i saw this update!



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend!  Thank you for reading this chapter and for the comments!  We are so delighted that you are enjoying this story.  Yes, there is a lot going on here, including what exactly is going on with Kayla and her brother.  I think the relationship between Gus and Tristan is finally about to change. We will get this updated just as soon as we can. Thank you again for the support!  It is much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Mica and Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 06:26 PM · On: Please, God...

Why why why??? ...both your updated stories were making me super sad. Why Justin always being hurt in both. You just made me cry today sweetie not only on Justin's situation but when Brian talked to him while he was in bed; that was so devastating. My heart really aches for Brian too. And I am disappointed with Gus; this is the time that his father needs him by his side. But what he is about to do? I don't think he is in love with Justin; he will never be having this kind of true feelings for him as what his Father does. He should know that by now. He is blinded with jealousy. And that created wrong decisions he will just make. Anyways, thanks for the update sweetie. I am grateful to have a friend like you who can make my days away from boring reality :) :) :) {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  I know - a lot of angst in both stories.  And a lot of sadness, particularly in this one.  Yes, Brian is really torn up in this story between his love for his son and his love for Justin.  Add to that an emotional 16-year-old son who is hormone-driven and it really makes for a mess!  It's not an excuse for Gus' behavior, but I do think it's an explanation for it.  I think he is slowly beginning to realize how deep the feelings between his father and Justin run, however - and perhaps he will soon realize how great a guy Tristan is and give him a chance.

Sorry to make you cry!  Hope you will bear with us - and bear with me in "Stallion" - until we can make things right again.  Thanks as always for reading and for the support, Cindy!  It WILL get better on both accounts.  You know we won't leave the boys unhappy - either father OR son.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2013 05:07 PM · On: Please, God...

I cried love this chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tash! Mika and are happy that you are enjoying this story.  There are certainly a lot of emotions running through this, aren't there?  The relationships are slowly transforming into where they need to go, I think, but there's a way to go here. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!  Mika and I will get this updated again just as soon as possible.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 04:27 PM · On: Please, God...

Reading this chapter at work was not a good idea. But I was so happy to see an update. I don't want Gus to leave his home :(

Great, wonderful chapter. Thank you so much



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Well, Mika and I are flattered that you would be so interested in the story that you would sneak a peek at work.;) 

I guess you have to look at it from the perspective of this being a hornone-driven, 16-year-old boy with all the emotions that go with that.  I have a feeling, though, that another young man may be about to provide some much-needed comfort here.;)  And I can't wait to work on the bedside scene when a certain blond finally wakes up to find his love sitting by his bed (at least, I hope that's what Mika has in mind for me to work with).;)

Thanks very much for reading and for the comments!  We both appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2013 03:34 PM · On: Please, God...

I knew this would happen somewhere. It's always a hospital that getsa them back together-now to have him pull through. It seems his head is always at the heart of his troubles. He will be ok and Brian now needs to sort out his life and get Gus back in the fold. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  Thanks for the comments.  I always get a little nervous dealing with medical conditions and wanting to make sure that the lingo and situation are at least plausible.;)  Yeah, poor Justin - between this and "Stallion," he's having a hard way to go, isn't he - ha!;) 

And yes, there are still a number of issues here that need to be resolved, too.  I think we'll slowly start working through those in the next part.  Thanks again for all your support. Tell everyone that I said hello and am thinking about them.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 11:50 AM · On: Please, God...

Oh, Jeezzzz... My heart is racing. This was one powerful chapter! Life, death, love, heartbreak... Lord...

My faith in Gus is somewhat redeemed now. I know he's a young boy, with a young boy's reasoning and perception and experience, but I still have a hard time with his initial reaction to Brian. Right now, dealing with all of that, AND Justin in such severe condition, AND Gus's pronouncement that he's leaving, I wonder how the man can hold it together. But, putting Gus in proximity with Tristan may be a very good thing.



Author's Response:

Hi, Roni!  Thank you so much for reading and for the comments.  It's always great to receive them from such a wonderful writer as yourself.;)  Yes, I think Gus and Tristan are finally going to start deepening their relationship going forward. And, of course, there's still the issue of Lindsay.  I don't think this will help Brian at the moment, and I could see her using this to her advantage somehow.  Brian has certainly got a lot of his plate at the moment, doesn't he? Sigh...teenage boys! 

Thanks again, Roni, for the support.  Mika and I greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 11:22 AM · On: Please, God...

damn



Author's Response:

Hi, Jeremy! So glad to see you still following this. I know you're a big Gus fan.:)  Thank you for commenting and for reading - Mika and I will get this updated again just as soon as we can.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2013 09:50 AM · On: Please, God...

Yes finally updated!!! Love this story!!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yes, I apologize for the longer-than-normal delay.  My co-writer had some fairly major RL issues that had to be taken care of first.  We're so pleased that you're enjoying this story! We'll try to get it updated again soon. Thank you for the support!  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 09:31 AM · On: Please, God...

Talk about angst.  Will Justin survive?  Will Gus find love with Tristan?  Will someone answer Kayla's call for help?  Please hurry and post yet another amazing chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  You're always so good about commenting.  Thank you for that.  Your support means a lot to us.  Yes, there's a great deal going on here, both directly and behind the scenes. The parts with Kayla and Tristan will be fleshed out coming up.  We hope to get a new part up quicker next time, too, to address some of these issues.  Thank you so much for reading and for commenting.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Please, God...

It's so nice to see Brian admit his love, even if it's under these dire circumstances.  Gus finally realized how much his father cared for Justin.  It's best for all.  Now we just have to have Justin wake up....

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - yes, what an impetus to push Brian to admit how he feels.  I guess that is human nature, though.  I admit I think I'm going to enjoy the little bedside reunion between our boys here.;)  Thanks as always for taking the time to read and especially review.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Please, God...

Glad to see you back.

This chapter was hard on the heart.

I suppose the next chapter will be also.

Thank you for posting.

Author's Response:

Hi, there! Mika and I are glad that you are enjoying this story, and we thank you for reading and for the comments.  Yes, I imagine the next couple of chapters will be pretty tense. In a way, though, it's a relief that the big reveal is finally out in the open, because I sense that Gus can finally begin to reshape his life and see Tristan for the great guy that he is.  Thank you again for taking the time to read and leave us feedback.  Mika and I will get this updated again just as soon as we can.  *Hugs*  Mika and Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 08:20 AM · On: Please, God...

Wow....just wow... while I understand how Gus must be feeling, I think he would be making a big mistake by leaving his father. I'm going to try to say this without sounding insensitive...Gus is a healthy young man with the opportunity for love himself if he could only open his eyes to it. Permanent distance is not the answer.

Hmmmm...I have a feeling that Ms Kayla may have a great deal of explaining to do. I mean why was she bruised and crying? Is the reason why Tristan is so upset because he knows what happened? So many questions to be answered here.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara, my friend!  Mika and I for the comments and for reading.  I understand your annoyance with Gus.  At least he's finally startng to realize how deeply his father feels for Justin.  And I do think Gus is about to come to a lot of realizations regarding Tristan shortly.  And yes, there are some things going on in the background with Kayla and her brother that you very perceptively picked up on.

I'm hopful that my co-writer can work on her part of the update soon. Thank you again for all the support!  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2013 08:03 AM · On: Please, God...

You always update in the middle of the night my time, but as I don't have lectures tomorrow, sleep is less important than reading this.

So so very glad Gus man-ed up and realised what a dick he'd been. And Brian obviously loves Justin, how was that even in question?

Also, knowing there's no way you'd kill of Justin (right?) made reading this chapter, and the following chapters, easier.

I really want Tristan to be rushing off to save Kayla and annoyed at Gus for not being there for her, and then have a massive argument with Gus when he shows up at the house, before making up in the best possible way. Or going to beat up Owen for being such a dick to his sister. I could go on and on, but it's 2am, so I should really go to bed now.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  I know; why can't we all be in the same time zone?  Ha!  I'm glad you stayed up late enough to read this, though; hopefully it was worth the insomnia.;)  There's going to be a lot going on in the next chapter, but I do think that Gus and Tristan are finally about to bond here over Kayla and Justin's accident;)  Thanks for the feedback, my friend.  *Hugs*  Mika and Kim

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