Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2014 08:29 AM · On: Definitely!
Poor Gus. A little competition never hurt anyone. He can't win from his father.
I love this story, can't hardly stop reading.
Author's Response: Hello, there! Mika and I thank you for reading and for especially commenting. We're so happy you are enjoying this story! I had never co-written a story before, but when Mika told me about the plot, I couldn't resist.;) We hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it; it is going to be full of ups and downs before it's over, but we promise to put all the boys in a happy place before it's done. Thank you again for the support! It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Mika and Kim
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2013 06:21 AM · On: Definitely!
Hello, Kim and Michal!
Brian is a really great dad. Their relationship is honest and true. Brian is for your child to only one parent can be great. I am very worried about how things will be with them when they realize they are in love with the same man.
Brian telling Gus that he can make Justin forget the other man. Ah! I do not want to see any of them suffer. I hope this relationship so beautiful survive this.
Fatima
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Definitely!
How Shakespearian!
Author's Response: Ah, you flatter us, kind sir, like the melodic sound of the whippoorwill. Forsooth! Methinks Michal and I shall update this within a fortnight - or somewhere thereabouts - ha! *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 12:41 AM · On: Definitely!
Just read all three chapters. Think I'm hooked * grins * ... more please.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny! Good to hear from you.:) I know this one's different than the norm, but glad that you gave it a try. Michal and I should be updating this one again soon. I've been involved lately with writing a (completed) story for the LJ QAF Fan Fiction Exchange lately, which was due tomorrow, so it's taken up a little more time than I would have anticipated. But I'm done now, so I'm working on the next update to "Stallion" and hopefully we'll have another chapter to this story, too, very shortly. Thanks for reading and for the comments; hopefuly we'll have you doing your famous 'happy dance' again soon.:) Take care and Happy New Year! *Hugs* ~Kim and Michal
Reviewer: Yalda (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Definitely!
this story is great!! is the first time that I find one with Jus and Gus almost the same age and intrigues me a lot, I can not wait to read the next chapter, so i can find how things go! :)
Author's Response: Hi, Yalda! Thank you for reading and for the comments! Michal and I are delighted that you are enjoying this story! There should be a lot of twists and turns to this story before it's all over with; we both hope that you continue to enjoy it.:) We'll get this updated again very soon - thanks again! *Hugs* ~Michal (StarShine-Green) and Kim (Predec2)
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Definitely!
It is wonderful. This is my favourite kind of story. father and son and Justin.
I aslo love your warn that GUS and JUSTION not involveed in sex. I don't like the chaotic relationship between BJG.
But I like this setting. fantastic job, you guys!
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for the comments! We both greatly appreciate that.:) I'm confident with the way that Michal is heading with the story that eventually things will all work out for those involved, but there's definitely going to be some angst and drama coming up before we get to that point. Thank you again for taking the time to leave us feedback; we'll get this story updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 09:19 PM · On: Definitely!
What a wonderful relationship Gus and Brian has. I can see some turbulence ahead for sunshine but they will survive.
Look forward to how they sail through the rough waters.
Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for reading and for the comments! You are right - there WILL be some bumps in the road coming up, definitely. But Michal and I are confident that father and son can weather them and everyone still come out okay. Thank you for your interest in this story! We'll get this updated again very soon.:) *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 09:05 PM · On: Definitely!
Oh my, Gus is going to be surprised when he finds out he is "sleeping with the enemy" so to speak.
I'm falling more in love with this smart, aggressive Justin every chapter ;) keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where the story goes from here.....I mean besides the bedroom haha.
Update soon please JP
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara! You got that right! Just wait until BOTH of them discover who the third person is in this drama! Not to mention that Justin's in for a big shock as well. I think the 'big boys' will be getting better acquainted in the next chapter, BTW (wink, wink). I'm sure that Michal will be thrilled to read that you're enjoying this more aggressive version of Justin's character in this story, too. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; we both greatly appreciate that! We'll work hard at getting it updated again very soon, but I really have to go pay some attention to the backwoods of Kentucky for just a bit. Thanks again, Tamara, and Merry Christmas, my friend.:) *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Definitely!
ooh, now i can't wait if they do 'continue.' couldn't help but laugh when brian told gus that he could make justin forget this other guy. that was so brian. little does he know. wow, this is so going to get very complicated. can't wait to see where you take this. good job, both of you.
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend of mine.:) And yes, to answer your question, Michal has every intention of them 'continuing' in the next chapter (wink, wink). It WILL be quite an eye opener, I think, when Brian finds out just who Gus's competition is for Justin's affections, though - ha! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this. And thanks for everything else. You're very special to me. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: sarafanjum (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 12:45 PM · On: Definitely!
Kyaaaaaaaaaa I totally love this Justin, just hope he doesn't get into any serious trouble in the future. Of course kinney man always gets the guy but poor Gus can't compete with his dear Dad. Really really looking forward to the next chapters ^o^
~Love & Kisses~
Author's Response: Hi, Sarafanjum! Thank you for reading and for the comments! I guess the question is - just which Kinney man gets the guy? I think we probably all know the answer to that one, but I think it will be a angsty ride to get there.:) So glad that you are enjoying Michal's more aggressive Justin. I think he and Brian will be getting to 'know each other better' in the next chapter (wink, wink). But just when will Justin - and father and son - make the connection? Hmmm....We'll get this updated again very soon. Thanks again! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Definitely!
Okay, what type of parents does Kayla have that they allow a teenage boy to sleep over with their daughter and in the same bed? Maybe I missed something with that. Loved that acting on Justin's part in the principal's office.
I love that Brian had no idea he's giving advice to his son or his competition. This should prove interesting.
Author's Response: Hi, Sandra! Hmmm...you have a good point there. Michal may have to address that in upcoming chapters. Thanks for pointing that out! Michal and I are glad you're enjoying the story - it certainly puts a different spin on things, doesn't it? And I have a feeling that Brian and Justin will be getting 'better acquainted' shortly (wink, wink). Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Definitely!
"Justin had taken full advantage of the few seconds he had to completely change his demeanor - from one of an aggressive, confident, and smart-alecky combatant to an introverted, tearful victim, small and helpless"
LLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL!!!!!! Well played!!! I love your Justin, resourceful, funny and smart, how can the kinney men resist such a combination?
Loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Sorcha, on my behalf as well as Michal's.:) She's so good at making Justin such a strong character in her stories; I'm sure she's thrilled that you are enjoying her characterization of him. She is the one really writing the plot; I'm taking it and filling it out with more details, so I'm enjoying it as I go along, too.:) Thank you for reading and for all the comments! We'll get this updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: Mary (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Definitely!
Sooo exciting oh my God! This last word.. I felt nothing when I read it as the title, but now as I've finished reading the chapter my heart is doing flip-flops just from the sight of it!!
I wonder whether the authors realize that they have done a revolution in qaf-fanfiction by this fic? It' s the first time the reader can ask himself if he wants Justin to be with Brian!! It would have been a nonsense before!!
However I can't but point out one very very little but still a flaw of this fic..Brian is 14(!!) years older than Justin instead of canon 12..it makes him realy old!
Author's Response: Hi, Mary! Yes, Michal and I were aware there would be a little bigger age difference between Brian and Justin than on the show. She initially wanted him to get Lindsay pregnant at 14, but I thought that would be a little too young, so you can blame me - LOL! So happy that you're finding this story intriguing - there's going to be a lot of hard decisions being made in the future between father and son. Thank you for the wonderful comments, Mary! We'll get this updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim and Michal
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Definitely!
Okay. I don't think I've told you yet how much I freakin' LOVE this fic. I loved the instant attraction between Brian and Justin, and despite there being other hot guys, Brian is It for Justin. I kinda feel bad for Gus but its not his fault. Justin is like catnip for Kinney men. And no matter how cute Gus is - Britin is destined. I also think the whole interaction bewtween Gus and Brian is perfect. Its so sweet that Brian is so open about is love for his son.
I cannot wait for the moment that Gus, Brian and Justin all find out about the whole 'no degrees of separation' thing. I have no idea how you are going to set it but I know its going to be great :D Eagerly awaiting your next update!
Zoe :)
Author's Response: LOL! Catnip for Kinney Men - OMG, I LOVE that line! Too true - and so funny!! Michal and I are so thrilled that you are enjoying this story. It is certainly setting itself up for a whale of a triangle, isn't it? But there's a lot more at stake here; which love will Brian choose - his 'catnip' or his son - ha! Thank you so much for the comments, Zoe; we'll get this updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim and Michal
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Definitely!
"A little competition never hurt anyone,"
I'm sure Brian will change his mind in a few chapters.
Nice chapters. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear, for reading and for the feedback. Yes, this just won't be a casual fling for Brian. And Michal and I have a feeling that once he figures out what's at stake - and who his competition is - Brian is really going to have a heartwrenching dilemma on his hands. Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback; we'll get this updated again just as soon as possible. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Definitely!
I just had to laugh so much! :D Poor Brian and poor Gus, both want the same boy.
[ A little competition never hurt anyone...] I'm really looking for the competition :D
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback! Yes, this will definitely be a triangle of a different nature, won't it? And just wait until Brian and son find out just who the 'competition' is! So glad that you're enjoying this one; we'll get it updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 04:30 AM · On: Definitely!
This story is just so good. the s--t is going to hit the fan soon i'm thinking. Can't wait to see the fireworks.
Author's Response: Hi, Linda! I'm afraid you're right; especially after the next chapter (wink, wink). I have a suspicion that Brian and Justin will be doing more than just 'texting' then - LOL! Thanks so much for reading and for the comments; Michal and I will get this updated again very soon. *Hugs* ~Michal and Kim
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