Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Visitor
Reviewer: goddess_ophelia (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2014 06:34 AM · On: The Calm

Gah, perfect. I love the role reversal in Blake being the wise one and Ted the one who needs advice. Perfectly harmonious. Your "Ted" is brillianty in character and I could hear his voice in my mind as I read the words! I can has more pwease? xxx D

Reviewer: mag49 (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2014 01:10 AM · On: The Calm

Enfin un nouveau chapitre pour une merveilleuse histoire concernant l'un de mes couples préférés de QAF avec mon deuxième couple préféré Michael et Ben , j'aimerais voir dans vos prochains chapitres une réunion de famille entre Ted et la mère et les frères et soeurs de Blake voir plus de leur intimité , pourquoi pas un mariage et l'adoption d'un enfant car je suis sur que ces deux là seraient des parents merveilleux , je suis française et j'ai achetée les 5 saisons de QAF et j'ai adorée mais un peu triste pour eux deux car ils n'ont pas eu assez de temps ensemble et j'étais heureuse de les voir ensemble dans le dernier épisode , ils auraient mérités plus de fanfictions de la part des fans et ras le bol de ne voir que des fanfics sur Brian et Justin et surtout n'attendez pas autant de temps pour les prochains chapitres votre fanfic est dans mes favoris sur mon ordinateur portable.



Author's Response:
Bonjour mag49,

Merci beaucoup pour la lecture et le commentaire sur un autre chapitre de mon histoire.

Je suis d'accord avec vous - Ted et Blake n'ont pas assez de temps ensemble à l'écran. Je souhaite qu'il y ait plus écrit sur r03;r03;eux aussi des histoires. Je vais certainement garder vos suggestions à l'esprit quand j'écris les chapitres suivants et je vais essayer de ne pas vous avoir fait attendre si longtemps. Et ne vous inquiétez pas - la famille de Blake jouera un rôle plus important dans l'histoire très bientôt ;)

Merci encore d'avoir lu mon histoire. Je suis ravi d'entendre que vous aimez tant :)

PS. Désolé pour mon très mauvais français - anglais est ma première langue.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 12:42 PM · On: The Calm

It's good to get a new chapter after all this time.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are happy to have a new chapter :)  My apologies again for the wait.

Thank you very much for reading it!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 12:01 PM · On: The Calm

GravityAlwaysWins trivia; did you know apart from your poem and dabbles this is your shortest chapter.  I may feel cheated. LOL, Not.   I don't, I'm just glad we have an update.  I really wish Blake would open up more to Ted as there is nothing Ted wouldn't do for his man.  I love the feet warmer as I need one of them in winter, however mine are called slippers. xD   Another incredibly accurate portrayal of these character, which I thoroughly enjoyed; thank you.

Cheers 



Author's Response:

LOL Flossee, you never fail to make me smile :)  I hadn't even realized this was my shortest chapter until you pointed that out.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it though, even if you do feel a bit cheated :P

And don't worry, Blake will open up...eventually ;) 

Also, I need a feet warmer right now as well - mine are called slippers too :P

Thank you, once again for your lovely review!  You always motivate me to keep writing :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 11:21 AM · On: The Calm

What a lovely insight into Ted and Blake's lives. 



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for reading and reviewing one of my stories yet again.  It is very much appreciated!

I'm glad you felt it was insightful :)

Cheers!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 11:03 AM · On: The Calm

Great story.  So interesting to have astory devoted to Nlake & Ted.  You are doing a spectacular job of fleshing out Blake with little to go on from the show.  Really enjoying your story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Your review made me smile :)  It's great to hear that you like the way I'm developing Blake's character beyond what was presented in the show.  I'm having a lot of fun (even though it tends to be quite angsty).  It may sound weird, but Blake was one of my favourite characters on the show.  You're right - there is very little to go on from the show itself, but there were some hints about his past here and there.  I suppose there was always a great deal of mystery to him, so it's neat to have an oppourtunity to flesh out his character a bit more.  

I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far :)

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 08:49 AM · On: The Calm

This is very good!  I'm mainly a dyed-in-the-wool B/J fan, but I think you have done an excellent job of capturing Ted and Blake's characters here.  Ted's uncertainty, his gentleness, his grace. And Blake's playfulness but also vulnerability. I like the slower pace of this fic as you flesh it out.  This is an area seldom written about in QAF fan fiction, so I applaud you for doing this. Will be looking forward to the rest. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the reading and reviewing, Kim.  I'm glad you felt my characterization of Ted and Blake was accurate.  That's always a relief to hear :)  I love your descriptions of them, by the way!

I'm also glad you like the slower pace of the fic.  I think I like details a little too much :P

Thank you again for your comments.  Your kind words were lovely to read :)

PS. You taught me a new phrase: "dyed-in the wool".  I had never heard that before, but I looked it up and now I love it :)

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 10:18 AM · On: A Good Day

I have to tell you that your story was one of the biggest discoveries I made recently between fanfiction. Honestly, I do not read stories out of pairing Brian / Justin and I make a great selection of what I read or not (I have very little time to read). So as I am very focused for writing and reading stories about B / J, I, in general, do not read fics that are not focused on them. But. your story just changed it for me. 

Frankly, I would not read it, but I am reviewing some parts of the show to write a fic and today I saw the scene where Ted finds Blake drugged after he finds his wallet (I think one of the most moving scenes of the show) and because seeing the scene, I decided to read his story to see how the two are. Now, I'm very happy to have it done. Your story is wonderful! 

You write very well. His description of the subjective feelings involves us in the story that allows us to abandon the reading and increases the desire to want to see more. I liked seeing the two together, supporting one another, being really partners. Among all couples of the show, I always thought Ted Blake and the couple more feasible, since both been through a lot together and managed to face their demons and overcome them. 

I really like Ted. I think he is a much better friend to Brian than Michael. Incidentally, he is a great friend and a great support to all those around him. 

Well, I want you to know that with your story, you changed my way of selecting what I read and from now on I shall give more attention to other pairings in fanfiction. Just keep me faithful to my aversion to Brian / Michael (my stomach does not support it). 

A big hug! 

Fatima. 

PS: I hope you can understand what I'm writing. I do not speak English (only Portuguese) and use a translator of texts to read and write. Sorry for any error (was Google translator) :) 

...

 



Author's Response:

Wow!  What a wonderful review!  Thank you so much, Fatima :)    Don't worry, I didn't have any trouble understanding what you wrote.

It means so much to me that you chose to read my story, even though you usually don't read stories that focus on characters other than Brian and Justin.  I'm happy to know that my little story has helped change the way you will select what fanfiction to read :)  And don't worry, your stomach is safe - I don't plan on writing any Brian / Michael stories :P

The scene you mentioned where Ted finds Blake drugged after he finds his wallet is one of my favourites.  I agree with you - it's very moving.  And I like Ted too.  He's definitely a very good friend to everyone.

Thank you again for saying that my story was wonderful and for taking the time to read it, especially since you have very little time to read.

You've really made me smile :)

A big hug to you too, Fatima!  Muito Obrigada! (Hopefully that says "Thank you very much" in Portuguese)


~Sarah

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 11:33 AM · On: A Good Day

Hey, it’s good to see you back. I tread with trepidation as I write this review, since I killed Blake off in my last fic; as I know how you feel about these guys, as do I. This is another well written chapter capturing both men so well. Ted wearing lipstick, I didn’t expect that, and I was so happy Blake could talk him out of thinking he wasn’t handsome, as Ted permanently wearing makeup wouldn’t be a good look. LOL I hope seeing this update means Fearless is next.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your continued support Flossee :) 

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I must agree, I'm not sure Ted wearing make-up perminantly would be a very good look :P

And yes, the next chapter of Fearless is complete - I'm just have to edit it :)

I'm off to read your latest fic - hopefully Blake's death won't hurt too much...


~Sarah

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 07:14 AM · On: The Visitor

I'll be honest and admit that I normally overlook non Brian or Justin centric stories. (Yeah, I know... pathetic.) After reading this - wow - I think about the words of that old song I overlooked an orchid in search of a rose...

This is wonderful: the writing is crisp and concise and conveys so much in such little space! A talent I have never acquired, unfortuntely. You have a distinct talent, my friend, and I'm glad you are sharing it with us.

We (okay, I) focus so much on the b/j pairing, with their compelling angst and chemistry and connection, that we (okay, I) forget that the other characters were struggling with their own issues. Ted was such a support role during the series, but his character growth is probably the most far-reaching - even beyond Brian's I think. He's kind of like the drummer in the band - necessary to keep the beat, but pushed to the back in favor of the vibrancy of the guitars and the sexiness of the lead singers.

The unimaginable strength it takes to overcome the particular obstacles that faced Ted and Blake is so apparent here, but you don't lose the fact that this strength is a very fragile thing at times. I love this. Can't wait for more of their story and your storytelling.

Roni



Author's Response:

I was left truly speechless by your review, Roni.  I read it with my hands over my mouth.  It's certainly the loveliest review I've ever recieved.  I can't thank you enough for your overwhelmingly kind words :)   It’s so wonderful to hear that you enjoyed my writing style, especially since I’m quite new to the world of fan fiction.

And don't worry - I don't think it’s "pathetic" at all that you tend to overlook non Brian/Justin stories.  To be honest, when I first began posting my Ted/Blake fics here, I wasn't sure if anyone would read them, but I am so grateful that you did.

Also, I must say, the way you described Ted as "the drummer in band" is so accurate.  It beautifully conveys what I've always felt about Ted - he may not be flashy or vibrant, but he adds a wonderful and important complexity to the group as a whole.

As for his character growth, I couldn't agree with you more.  I've always seen him as perhaps the show's most psychologically troubled character, and watching him and Blake overcome their mutual struggles was one of the most deeply gratifying aspects of the series, at least for me personally.

Anyway, I'll quit rambling.  What can I say - your review ignited my passions :)  Thank you once again for your wonderful comments and for taking the time to read my story.  I can’t tell you how much it means to me :)

~Sarah

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 03:40 AM · On: A Good Day

Ted and Blake are made for each other.  I want to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

This comment made me smile :)  It probably goes without saying that I agree :P

Glad you are looking forward to more.

Thank you again for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: goddess_ophelia (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 03:37 AM · On: A Good Day

Cute, angsty and hot! Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hun!  Glad you liked the mix of flavours :P

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 03:28 AM · On: Nice

I love how thoughtful and tender Ted is.  Blake is a lucky man.



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed Ted's thoughtfulness and tenderness.  Blake is lucky indeed :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 03:21 AM · On: The Visitor

Wow, who would have thought that Blake had so much in common with Brian Kinney.  I hope his suggestion for the board goes through.  I thorougly hate his father, not only for showing up and insulting Blake, but for taking the money that could have helped his family and throwing it back in Blakes face.  Can't wait to see what your plans are for this story.



Author's Response:

Glad you noticed the Blake/Brian connection ;)  I really wanted to avoid bringing yet another abysmal father figure into the QaF mix, but it really seemed to fit Blake's character.  I always felt, at least in the beginning, that he was in search of a father figure - someone to show him kindness and gentleness, and I think he finds that in Ted.  I always thought it was very telling that Blake referred to Ted as "the first guy who ever believed in him."

As for his father's alcoholism - that was spurred by the fact that Blake tells Ted very early on that he doesn't drink alcohol.  I always thought this was a bit strange, given that he willingly ingests crystal meth.  So I thought it might be plausible for him to have an alcoholic father and for that experience to have caused him swear off ever drinking it himself.

Phew!  Appologies for the lengthy explanation. 

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 01:48 PM · On: The Visitor

A very compelling story. i like it a lot and I`m glad they kicked him out!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you liked it.  It's wonderful to hear that you found it compelling :) 

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 08:29 AM · On: Nice

I'm glad that this wasn't a one shot- thought it was-  Blake is so hurt and I hope that he can heal and let Ted help him do so.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad that you're glad that it wasn't a one shot.  That's lovely to hear :)  And yes, poor Blake.  Thankfully, these two always seem to manage to help each other through dark times.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 07:05 AM · On: Nice

“And I love that you’re nice”. That’s our Teddy always such a nice man. I love the interaction you are writing here between them. Thank you for the update, I really enjoyed it.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Teddy is indeed a very nice man :)  I'm so glad you enjoyed reading the second part.  Thank you for taking the time to read and review, once again :)

Reviewer: goddess_ophelia (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 06:36 AM · On: Nice

Oh woman, what are you doing to me. I thouroughly enjoyed reading that. A real rollercoaster of emotions, ranging from bittersweet sadness to anger to fluffy pleasant aches in the pit of my stomach. Beautifully worded and the flow of the story is nice. I'm a sucker for internal monologue and you really did it well. They're incredibly in character and I cannot wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! :D  Sorry for putting you through that rollercoaster ride :P  It's such a relief to hear that you felt they were "in character" *phew*

Thank you for continuing to read and review my crazy ramblings :) *hugs*

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2012 11:11 AM · On: The Visitor

I really enjoyed this story.  I've been meaning to read it for a week or so and tonight had the time.  good portrayl and use of quotes from the show as well as using information on Blake's clothing etc.  Well done.



Author's Response:

*smiles* It's wonderful to hear that you enjoyed the story.  It's also great to see that you noticed the quotes from the show as well as Blake's clothing :)

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.  It means a lot :)

~Cheers! :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 07:05 PM · On: The Visitor

I know it’s a bit late but welcome to MW. It looks like you joined the day after I did so we are both still relatively new to the site. I not sure if you post elsewhere but I can see this is your first fic here and I just wanted to let you know I have really enjoyed it so far. I love Ted and Blake but it is very hard to get people to read stories based on them but this one is very well written. I look forward to the update.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the warm welcome and the kind words :)  It's great to find another relatively new person around here, especially someone who loves Ted and Blake.

I actually read your fic entitled “Snap” when you first posted it, as I’m always on the lookout for fics featuring Ted and/or Blake.  It’s absolutely wonderful! :)

Needless to say, I was quite thrilled to see that you read and commented on my story.   I’m so glad you’ve enjoyed it so far.  It’s the first piece of fanfiction I’ve ever written, so I was more than a bit nervous as to how it would be received. 

Your comments have put a smile on my face and given me a bit more confidence.  Thank you :)

Reviewer: goddess_ophelia (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 07:40 AM · On: The Visitor

holy moly that's amazing. The tension, the angst, the emotions ... it had me on the tip of my chair! More please!



Author's Response:

*smiles and blushes*

Thank you!!! 

I'm so glad the tension came through :)  I never realized how fun it is to write arguments :P 

There will be more soon ;)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 06:46 AM · On: The Visitor

Great chapter. I love Teddy and I was glad he found Blake at the end of the original series. This seems a very promising story. There aren't enough stories written about Ted and Blake. Can't wait to read more.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Vin.  Needless to say I love Teddy (and Blake) too.  I really do wish there were more fics written about them.  Glad you liked the story and thank you for taking the time to read it :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 06:36 AM · On: The Visitor

:)

 



Author's Response:

*smiles back* :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 05:44 AM · On: The Visitor

This is very interesting!  I always loved Ted's character - his kindess, his humility, his insecurity - and I really liked his relationship with Blake, even through their difficulties.  This is different from most of the stories posted here, and while I love B and J the most, I will enjoy watching how you develop Blake's estrangement from his father, as well as his relationship with Ted.  Looking forward to more.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Oh wow, thank you very much for your kind and encouraging words, Kim!  They mean a great deal :)  Although I adore B and J, I must admit there has always been a special place in my heart from Ted and Blake.  I’m so to hear that glad you enjoyed the story, as I was quite nervous about posting it.  *hugs* :)

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