Reviews For Keep on Fighting
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2020 12:27 AM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2016 10:56 AM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2015 03:55 AM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2014 09:46 AM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: Sprite (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2014 02:57 AM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2013 10:20 PM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2012 04:12 AM · On: Enemies
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2012 07:45 PM · On: I Love You, Too
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2012 02:31 PM · On: I Love You, Too
I love what you did here. OMG this is brilliant. Now we get a sequel without even asking for one. Please don’t keep us waiting too long, but only if your situation permits. We all know Brian and Justin always end up together so fingers crossed it will be soon. This is a great way to keep people interested.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2012 05:31 AM · On: I Love You, Too
I totally did not see that one coming. After all they've been through Justin just gives up? Brian is going to need him more than ever right now he can't just walk away.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2012 07:28 PM · On: Oops
I did like this chapter; I was just worried about Brian. I can’t wait for the update. However, that’s not why I am reviewing again. I hope you are safe.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:04 PM · On: Oops
Damn! First Brian had to endure being tied up and gased twice, now he's being made to suffer through surgery after being shot......how much more can our poor Brian take?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 02:16 PM · On: Oops
Oh no not Brian; the man doesn’t seem to be able to catch a break. Justin waiting for Brian at the hospital on hard plastic chairs; I like the role reversal. I’m not going to try and guess this time; I will wait patiently for the next update. I’m pleased everyone is still alive though.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 12:44 PM · On: Shoot Him!
Thank you for the very quick update. Now I will guess;
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 07:10 AM · On: Shoot Him!
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 04:26 AM · On: Shoot Him!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 03:32 AM · On: Shoot Him!
Noooo......Molly needs to know the truth about how Thomas tried to have Justin killed because of his love for Brian. On the other hand, I hope it was Thomas that she shot anyway.
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 01:07 AM · On: I Believe You
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 07:27 PM · On: I Believe You
Oh damn, Molly knew about Justin all along. I'm glad she kept them alive so she could be reunited with Thomas. But I think the happy reunion will be short lived once she finds out the truth about her beloved.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 05:31 PM · On: I Believe You
Go Molly; shot them all. Yay, all my favourites are still alive. Who is going to get free? I want Justin to kick Molly’s ass and then Thomas’ and Brian can just maybe kick them in the ribs while they are rolling around the floor in agony. I’m not normally a violent person but the lovely, handsome, slightly fearless Brian deserves a little payback on someone. Just save yourself, too, while you're at it… because I can't live without you. That has to be one of the most romantic things Brian has ever said. What a lovely line to end the chapter. More pleeeeeeeeeeeeease real soon.
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 03:01 PM · On: The Show
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 09:31 AM · On: The Show
OMG, yes again you surprised me, I can’t even guess where you are going with this and even if I did I’m sure I’d be wrong. LOL I love being wrong as you take us places we never expect to go. I want Brian and Justin safe but I have also grown fond of Michael and Nikita plus I don’t want Molly killed as she is just trying to avenge her lover. It looks like I want everyone to live; well I will just have to keep telling myself it is not a fairy tale. Please don’t leave us hanging here too long. Another excellent chapter, thank you.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 08:14 AM · On: The Show
All these cliffhangers are a killer.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2012 04:03 AM · On: A Huge Mistake
I think Justin better have a good long talk with Nikita if they both survive, she needs to step back from her thoughts about Brian. She should realize she is wasting her time. I think Michael should find a new girlfriend, one who is happy enough with just him! I think Justin is still going to have to kill Molly, she sounds like trouble. Actually I hope Thomas gets killed too, he sure is a nasty boss, going around killing the students he has taught. Yep, I'm on a big killing spree right now. Loved the naked police being dumped! Serves them right for assuming Justin was doing something wrong.
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:57 PM · On: A Huge Mistake
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:56 PM · On: Room 417
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Invaders
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:54 PM · On: Someone’s here
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Brian, too?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 11:38 AM · On: A Huge Mistake
OMG you are so good at this. I see other people are thinking this is going in the same direction I’m thinking then you surprise us. LOL Keep up the good work. You should write suspense novels as I’ve never seen so many twists and all of them deliciously exciting. Thomas and Molly that’s genius. More please.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2012 01:36 AM · On: A Huge Mistake
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 09:39 PM · On: A Huge Mistake
Oh wow, that was s surprise. I hope Michael and Justin can get to them in time.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Room 417
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 03:20 AM · On: Room 417
Poor Michael, wasting all that time worrying about his girlfriend. I am sure no matter how much she would want Brian she would be out of luck. I hope Justin can catch Molly soon and kill her, I'm sure she needs to be dealt with very quick. I hope Justin and Michael have enough training to escape from Cops who come with blaring sirens.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Room 417
I had a feeling Justin wasn't the real target, but who is.......Nikita or Brian perhaps?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 03:31 PM · On: Room 417
Brian wouldn’t touch Nikita with a ten-foot pole!! I’ll say it again: HE’S GAY! And I don’t mean really happy, either. LOL this is too funny. OMG who is the target? I’m so pleased she isn’t after Justin as now he might not need to kill her. Parlez-vous Francais – NO. Google again. LOL.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Invaders
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Invaders
No No No Brian why did you do that we all wanted Michael dead? LOL I’m surprised Nikita’s reflexs didn’t kick in when Brian pulled her down; it would have been fun for Michael to catch them wrestling and Brian claiming he was bi. LOL Oh I have such fun with your writing and then you surprise me and it’s even more fun. I’m glad you translated the French words as I don’t speak or understand it. Je ne parle pas encore très bien le français; ok I got this from google. Please hurry back with more thrills for us.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 05:50 AM · On: Someone’s here
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Invaders
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:22 AM · On: Invaders
Remind me not to take a job with Louis, yikes. Seems like Molly is pretty quick to kill too. I guess she was top in her class at school. I hope Michael will be willing to kill her if Justin wimps out once he sees her. I think his love for Brian has taken too much of his training out of him.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Invaders
Yay I didn't forget my french......I knew all three phrases before looking at your end notes merci beaucoup for the refresher Mon cherie ;)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Someone’s here
How cute to picture Brian sharing his bed with a gun toting FEMALE killer. I hope Justin and Micheal can get their job done quickly and return to their correct partners. I'm afraid Nikita might be willing to try and have her way with Brian if they are forced to sleep so close. Brian is so very attractive!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:07 AM · On: On Her Way
wow, this sounds very complicated. Will Justin be able to kill his twin sister? I say yes, she is a stranger and filled with evil loyalty to Thomas, I think it should be an easy kill. But maybe Molly will have a change of heart when she realizes Justin is her twin.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:02 AM · On: Brian, too?
It's too bad Justin has the restraint to keep from killing Michael, I would not be too sad to see him do the world a favor and snap his slimy neck. I think Debbie was pretty stupid to take a risk and give Justin a smack. She could have been taken down too.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Someone’s here
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Someone’s here
Oh please let it be Michael Novotny making the noise and let Nikita shoot him. LOL Okay I know you don’t want to kill off the family but I can still hope it might happen. This again caught me by surprise; Brian having to not only live with a girl but he has to sleep with one in his bed. ROFLMAO Covered with liquid gold and diamonds on your nipples. What a description it’s just too funny. I hope Michael and Justin work well together as I really don’t trust Michael yet. Please more updates as soon as possible.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 03:34 AM · On: Someone’s here
Could it be that Justin was never the target to begin with and the map in Molly's apartment was just a trap?......and is Justin really safe around Michael? Guess I'll have to be a good little girl and read the next chapter to find out.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 11:28 AM · On: On Her Way
OMG I loved where you took this and it was anything but predictable. Molly as Justin’s twin and coming to kill him what an interesting mind you have. Please don’t keep us waiting too long for an update.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 05:43 AM · On: On Her Way
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 01:44 AM · On: On Her Way
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 10:56 PM · On: On Her Way
Damn this little turn of events changes everything. I hope Molly finds out that she and Justin are blood related before she exacts her revenge.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 03:00 PM · On: Brian, too?
I love that Justin got to hurt Michael a little. FBI agent that was a great plan. Please don’t tell me the mobster boss has Mel, Lindsay and Gus? If they do they can keep Mel and Lindsay but Justin needs to save Gus. LOL Please update soon this is fantastic.
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 01:31 PM · On: Enemies
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Brian, too?
Now I'm sitting on the edge of my seat in suspense. What could that phone call possibly be about?
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 12:13 AM · On: Brian, too?
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 11:29 PM · On: Enemies
Well,well,well.....can Justin really trust Nikita to keep the Russian mob from trying to get to him and Brian? Can Michael keep his fucking mouth shut and mind his own business for once?.....I'll just have to keep reading to find out.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 10:37 PM · On: Enemies
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Enemies
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 01:50 AM · On: Enemies
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 01:58 PM · On: Enemies
Great start for Justin to be able to kick everyone’s ass with Brian’s blessing. I loved the fact you got straight into it and Michael hopefully will be dead by the end of chapter two; along with the rest of the family. This is excitement plus I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Enemies
Yeah~ another story. Now it looks like Michael needs to be killed, if Justin thinks it will bother Brian he could always just ask one of his co workers to do the actual deed. That might make it easier for Justin to still socialize with the rest of the family. I'm sure no one will really miss that horrible little rat once he's gone. |
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