Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Keep on Fighting
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2020 12:27 AM · On: I Love You, Too

Oh my gosh, what an ending!!!   I cannot believe that Justin actualy left.    I cannot wait to see how the sequel progresses!!!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2018 03:34 AM · On: I Love You, Too

Poor Brian

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2016 10:56 AM · On: I Love You, Too

A great sequel which has left me on the edge of my seat - this can't be the end. I'm searching for the sequel immediately, I am completely hooked.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2015 03:55 AM · On: I Love You, Too

Love this verse!

Thanks for sharing and so looking forward to sequel! 

I have a question all the banners you have posted above your fic list, are those fics you have written or read and where can they be found?

Thnaks, JoAnn

Author's Response:

thank you so much for reading and reviewing the sequel is in progress, five chapters for now are posted will be posting chapter 6 soon...

the banners are of an up and coming stories. all ideas i have.
thank you for taking an interest and thank you so much for asking about my stories :)



Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2014 09:46 AM · On: I Love You, Too

When is the sequel coming????

They just have to end up together, THEY HAVE TOO!!!

Author's Response:

Hi, there - thank you for your interest in Mika's story. I did help her cowrite it, but mainly to flesh the plot out after she wrote the shell of the story.  She is currently a newlywed and pregnant, so I am not sure if she is intending on writing a sequel. But I will pass your comments along, and I do thank you for reading it and for the feedback.  It is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sprite (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2014 02:57 AM · On: I Love You, Too

Is there going to be a sequel? I know this is from 2012, but I am really hoping there might be hope for a sequel! I really don't want the story to end like this! It's just too sad! Here's to hoping!


Author's Response:

Hello, Sprite. Thank you for your comments. I apologize for not responding sooner - my father died shortly after your comment was posted, and was in the ICU during this time.  I'm afraid I won't be much help in answering your question.  My co-writer, Mika, was the one who created this plot, and I embellished it/fleshed it out from there.  She is pregnant at the moment, and is pretty much not writing for now. But I thank you for your interest in the story, and I will pass your comments along about wanting a sequel. Thank you for reading it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2013 10:20 PM · On: I Love You, Too

Nice twist - Justin leaving Brian for HIS own good. How noble and silly. Off to start the next sequel. TAG

Author's Response:

thank you! :)

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2012 04:12 AM · On: Enemies

You evil evil guys! I waited till the story was finished to read it in one evening and there is such a evil end! But great work and I´m looking forward to sequel. Love Justin the agent!


Author's Response:

I'm the evil one! Lol :)

I love sad endings... But the story would go on :) don't worry! Our b&j would live happly ever after! ;)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2012 07:45 PM · On: I Love You, Too

Thank God there will be a sequel.  Can't leave this up in the air this way.

Author's Response:

But i love sad endings :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2012 02:31 PM · On: I Love You, Too

I love what you did here. OMG this is brilliant. Now we get a sequel without even asking for one. Please don’t keep us waiting too long, but only if your situation permits. We all know Brian and Justin always end up together so fingers crossed it will be soon. This is a great way to keep people interested.


Author's Response:

Glad you loved the ending as much as i did! :)

I adore sad endings! ;)

The next story would be up as soon, promise! :)

Thank you so much for caring about my situation,

the sad thing is that we here in israel after a while just get used to this mess.

After seven (almost eight) days of fighting we got used to it.


Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2012 05:31 AM · On: I Love You, Too

I totally did not see that one coming. After all they've been through Justin just gives up? Brian is going to need him more than ever right now he can't just walk away.

Molly that little bitch, should have kept her opinions to herself. She wasn't willing to give up Thomas and for her to guilt Justin into leaving the love of his life was a pretty low blow.

I'll be looking forward to the sequel JP

Author's Response:

I wanted to do this ending from the start... But when i was done with this chapter i realized that i have a prob with justin "leaving timing" because brian was hurt, than again if brian was 100% would he ever let justin leave? So it's a tricky part... I know :)

And molly is a bitch lol ;)

But i'm glad you enjoyed it! Next story would be up soon! ;)


Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2012 07:28 PM · On: Oops

I did like this chapter; I was just worried about Brian. I can’t wait for the update. However, that’s not why I am reviewing again. I hope you are safe.

Author's Response:

Oh you watch the news? :) there's a little mess here. i'm fine... The problems are in the other side of israel... I live in the north the fighting are in the south... Thank you so much for your consern my life is some what normal just watching alot of news... Alot of my friens are are drefted to the army... I'm worried that my boyfried would get a call. But other then that everything is normal... No alarms and sitting in shelter for me :) 


Thank you for caring :)


Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2012 01:16 AM · On: Oops

not brian!!! no :( :(:(

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:04 PM · On: Oops

Damn! First Brian had to endure being tied up and gased twice, now he's being made to suffer through surgery after being shot......how much more can our poor Brian take?

Meanwhile, Thomas and Molly have gotten away yet again comfortably hiding somewhere while Justin, Nikita, and Michael are sitting helplessly at the hospital waiting to see if Brian will make it through this ordeal.

I know I've mentioned this a couple of times already, but I would really love for Molly to find out the truth about Thomas. If she did, maybe then the innocents in this situation could stop getting hurt as per the rules of their training.

Please update soon JP

Author's Response:

sorry... hoping the next chapter will be more to your liking :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 02:16 PM · On: Oops

Oh no not Brian; the man doesn’t seem to be able to catch a break. Justin waiting for Brian at the hospital on hard plastic chairs; I like the role reversal. I’m not going to try and guess this time; I will wait patiently for the next update. I’m pleased everyone is still alive though.


Author's Response:

i'm sorry you didnt like this chapter... hope i'll do better in the next one :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 12:44 PM · On: Shoot Him!

Thank you for the very quick update. Now I will guess;

a) The gun has no bullets left,

b) The gun backfires,

c) Nikita shots Molly first making Molly’s bullet miss,

d) Michael shots Molly first making Molly’s bullet miss,

e) Brian steps in front of Justin. Oh no please not this one,

f) Molly is a good agent but she didn’t pass shooting class and she misses.

g) None of the above and I get surprised again.

I can’t wait to find out as once again I don’t have a clue. Thank you for the exciting entertainment. If I ask again for a quick up date would that be too greedy of me? Please as soon as you can, I’m looking forward to it.


Author's Response:

Well, the prob with your guesses is that your primary assumption is wrong :) :)

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 07:10 AM · On: Shoot Him!

Noooooo!! Oh what a way to leave us hanging! Can't wait for the next chapter, great story! Love it :D

Author's Response:

you will get it today or maybe tomorrow! promise :)

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 04:26 AM · On: Shoot Him!

OMG!!!!! who did she shot?!?!

please update soon!!!! :)

Author's Response:

I will :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 03:32 AM · On: Shoot Him!

Noooo......Molly needs to know the truth about how Thomas tried to have Justin killed because of his love for Brian. On the other hand, I hope it was Thomas that she shot anyway.

As always I will be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. JP

Author's Response:

Thank you again for reading and liking it!! :)

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 01:07 AM · On: I Believe You

so romantic!!!!! :)

Author's Response:


Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 07:27 PM · On: I Believe You

Oh damn, Molly knew about Justin all along. I'm glad she kept them alive so she could be reunited with Thomas. But I think the happy reunion will be short lived once she finds out the truth about her beloved.

What better way to end a chapter than to have Brian tell Justin he can't live without him.....beautiful :)

I can't wait for the next chapter JP

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 05:31 PM · On: I Believe You

Go Molly; shot them all. Yay, all my favourites are still alive. Who is going to get free? I want Justin to kick Molly’s ass and then Thomas’ and Brian can just maybe kick them in the ribs while they are rolling around the floor in agony. I’m not normally a violent person but the lovely, handsome, slightly fearless Brian deserves a little payback on someone. Just save yourself, too, while you're at it… because I can't live without you. That has to be one of the most romantic things Brian has ever said. What a lovely line to end the chapter. More pleeeeeeeeeeeeease real soon.


Author's Response:

I just posted more!! :)

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 03:01 PM · On: The Show

loved it :) as usual...! can't wait for the next one! :)

Author's Response:


Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 09:31 AM · On: The Show

OMG, yes again you surprised me, I can’t even guess where you are going with this and even if I did I’m sure I’d be wrong. LOL I love being wrong as you take us places we never expect to go. I want Brian and Justin safe but I have also grown fond of Michael and Nikita plus I don’t want Molly killed as she is just trying to avenge her lover. It looks like I want everyone to live; well I will just have to keep telling myself it is not a fairy tale. Please don’t leave us hanging here too long. Another excellent chapter, thank you.


Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

love love your reviews! :)

hope i won't disappoint with the next one :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 08:14 AM · On: The Show

All these cliffhangers are a killer.

I don't think Oleg and his minions were prepared for what Molly was about to do either. What a clever little wench she is ;)

Update soon JP

Author's Response:

yeah well... i love them :) twists are now my specialty! lol ;)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2012 04:03 AM · On: A Huge Mistake

I think Justin better have a good long talk with Nikita if they both survive, she needs to step back from her thoughts about Brian. She should realize she is wasting her time. I think Michael should find a new girlfriend, one who is happy enough with just him! I think Justin is still going to have to kill Molly, she sounds like trouble. Actually I hope Thomas gets killed too, he sure is a nasty boss, going around killing the students he has taught. Yep, I'm on a big killing spree right now. Loved the naked police being dumped! Serves them right for assuming Justin was doing something wrong.

Author's Response:

no!!! lol

i love nikita and michael! come on lori! she can't help herself! i have a boyfriend and i love him... but if i was living in brian loft of course i would go nuts! come on... it's brian the most beatiful sexy Perfect man on this planet! who wouldn't act like nikita??

i would be worst! i would climb on his back and refused to go down! lol! :)

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:57 PM · On: A Huge Mistake

dmitri?! fuck! so the russians have nikita and brian and molly after justin and michael?! wow! so many problems!

update soon please!!! i'm addicted! :)

Author's Response:

i will!!!! :)

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:56 PM · On: Room 417

who's the target?!? is it brian?! please no!!!

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Invaders

pissed off blond woman! ROFLMAO!

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:54 PM · On: Someone’s here

nikita and brian in the same bed! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:54 PM · On: On Her Way

a twin?! NICE!!!!

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Brian, too?

both of them?! wow! interesting!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 11:38 AM · On: A Huge Mistake

OMG you are so good at this. I see other people are thinking this is going in the same direction I’m thinking then you surprise us. LOL Keep up the good work. You should write suspense novels as I’ve never seen so many twists and all of them deliciously exciting. Thomas and Molly that’s genius. More please.


Author's Response:

So happy your liking it!!!! :)  i knew the thomas molly twist is good!!! :)

About the twists well... Ive seen so much movies and action tv seriers... American tv and movies of corse ;)

And i׳m trying to picter every scene in my head... Like a movie!

And always end the episode/chapter with a bang!!! :)



I hope you'll still think that after i'll post the last chap... It's extremly DRAMATIC! :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2012 01:36 AM · On: A Huge Mistake

loving it!

Author's Response:

Good!!!!! :) so happy!!!! Thank you!!!! :) :) :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 09:39 PM · On: A Huge Mistake

Oh wow, that was s surprise. I hope Michael and Justin can get to them in time.

Update soon please JP

Author's Response:

I will! As soon as i can!! :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Room 417

who is the target?

Author's Response:

wait and see :) it would be good i promise! :) :) :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 03:20 AM · On: Room 417

Poor Michael, wasting all that time worrying about his girlfriend. I am sure no matter how much she would want Brian she would be out of luck. I hope Justin can catch Molly soon and kill her, I'm sure she needs to be dealt with very quick. I hope Justin and Michael have enough training to escape from Cops who come with blaring sirens.

Author's Response:

yeah leaving any woman or man with brian is a reason for worrying lol :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Room 417

I had a feeling Justin wasn't the real target, but who is.......Nikita or Brian perhaps?

Can't wait to find out, update soon JP

Author's Response:


you'll be really surprised...! :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 03:31 PM · On: Room 417

Brian wouldn’t touch Nikita with a ten-foot pole!! I’ll say it again: HE’S GAY! And I don’t mean really happy, either. LOL this is too funny. OMG who is the target? I’m so pleased she isn’t after Justin as now he might not need to kill her. Parlez-vous Francais – NO. Google again. LOL.


Author's Response:

well.. justin isen't in the clear yet :)

stay tuned!! :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Invaders

Nikita and Brian in bed! Absolutely Hilarious!!!

Loved it!

Author's Response:

thanks!!!! :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Invaders

No No No Brian why did you do that we all wanted Michael dead? LOL I’m surprised Nikita’s reflexs didn’t kick in when Brian pulled her down; it would have been fun for Michael to catch them wrestling and Brian claiming he was bi. LOL Oh I have such fun with your writing and then you surprise me and it’s even more fun. I’m glad you translated the French words as I don’t speak or understand it. Je ne parle pas encore très bien le français; ok I got this from google. Please hurry back with more thrills for us.


Author's Response:

chap 6 will be here soon!!! :)

i got the french from google too! lol :)

so happy you are enjoying my story!!!



Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 05:50 AM · On: Someone’s here

Way cool.  Love Brian being the chick.  LOL.  Molly, his twin, is a baddie?!  Oy, that's a pisser.  Looking forward to your next update.

All the best,


Author's Response:

yeah that line was funny i can't believe it sometimes that it came from me! lol :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Invaders

So glad MW is back up and running! And so glad to catch up on this story!   

Author's Response:

that was a scary day! when the site didn't work...! i was so happy when i hit the refresh button and the site actually WORKS! such a relief!


thanks again for your review and the fact that your following my story!! :)



Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:22 AM · On: Invaders

Remind me not to take a job with Louis, yikes. Seems like Molly is pretty quick to kill too. I guess she was top in her class at school. I hope Michael will be willing to kill her if Justin wimps out once he sees her. I think his love for Brian has taken too much of his training out of him.
I'm sorry I got so far behind with the story. I will try to keep up!

Author's Response:

it's ok!!! please don't apologize!

i just love your reviwes and i missed them lol :)

you spoiled me :)


Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Invaders

Yay I didn't forget my french......I knew all three phrases before looking at your end notes merci beaucoup for the refresher Mon cherie ;)

Now this is getting interesting, I just know Michael is going to go shooting off at the mouth again where it doesn't concern him. Michael and Justin are going to have one hell of a fight on their hands when they catch up to Molly.....she killed eight guards by herself for fucks sake

Can't wait for the next chapter JP

Author's Response:

she's justin twin after all :) and he as good as it gets....


i'm trying to make the story longer! so far it had 10 chap, it's seem like so little! so chap 6 maybe will get some changes... it will be a few days.... SORRY!! :(

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Someone’s here

How cute to picture Brian sharing his bed with a gun toting FEMALE killer. I hope Justin and Micheal can get their job done quickly and return to their correct partners. I'm afraid Nikita might be willing to try and have her way with Brian if they are forced to sleep so close. Brian is so very attractive!

Author's Response:

yeah well... you know a woman of a man that would say no to brian?! lol :)

he's a god! if i didnt love justin as much i would want him to myself! but to think about brian kissing a woman makes me want to throw up! ROFL


Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:07 AM · On: On Her Way

wow, this sounds very complicated. Will Justin be able to kill his twin sister? I say yes, she is a stranger and filled with evil loyalty to Thomas, I think it should be an easy kill. But maybe Molly will have a change of heart when she realizes Justin is her twin.

Author's Response:

i was battling the idea myself... should molly be good or bad?

i think i made a good choice :) you will tell me in a few more chapters... ;)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:02 AM · On: Brian, too?

It's too bad Justin has the restraint to keep from killing Michael, I would not be too sad to see him do the world a favor and snap his slimy neck. I think Debbie was pretty stupid to take a risk and give Justin a smack. She could have been taken down too.

Author's Response:

i think brian won't forgive justin if he kill he's best friend lol :)

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Someone’s here

pleeeease let it be noise ass mikey... and she get one shot off juuuust grazing him.. whens the next up date?

Author's Response:

Soon! :) maybe today even...! :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Someone’s here

Oh please let it be Michael Novotny making the noise and let Nikita shoot him. LOL Okay I know you don’t want to kill off the family but I can still hope it might happen. This again caught me by surprise; Brian having to not only live with a girl but he has to sleep with one in his bed. ROFLMAO Covered with liquid gold and diamonds on your nipples. What a description it’s just too funny. I hope Michael and Justin work well together as I really don’t trust Michael yet. Please more updates as soon as possible.


Author's Response:

I'll update soon :) :) :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 03:34 AM · On: Someone’s here

Could it be that Justin was never the target to begin with and the map in Molly's apartment was just a trap?......and is Justin really safe around Michael? Guess I'll have to be a good little girl and read the next chapter to find out.

Update soon please JP

Author's Response:

Michael and nikita are good guys :)

I love them too much to make them evil :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 11:28 AM · On: On Her Way

OMG I loved where you took this and it was anything but predictable. Molly as Justin’s twin and coming to kill him what an interesting mind you have. Please don’t keep us waiting too long for an update.


Author's Response:

i'm so happy that your enjoying the twist! :)

thate's another one coming in a few more chapters... i hope you would like that one as well :)


i have a very creative mind.. maybe too creative sometimes lol i usually think about my story before i go to sleep.. and the ideas just come to me! lol :)

and again thank you for the positive reviews! it warm my heart!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 05:43 AM · On: On Her Way

Another great chapter!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!!! :)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 01:44 AM · On: On Her Way

Ohooh,not good!!! ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

well... if it was all good.... it won't be intesting lol :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 10:56 PM · On: On Her Way

Damn this little turn of events changes everything. I hope Molly finds out that she and Justin are blood related before she exacts her revenge.

I knew Nikita and Michael couldn't be completely trusted.....but I guess some good did come from their treachery.

Please update soon JP

Author's Response:

chap 4 and 5 are ready just send them to be "fix" :)

i'll update soon... ;)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 03:00 PM · On: Brian, too?

I love that Justin got to hurt Michael a little. FBI agent that was a great plan. Please don’t tell me the mobster boss has Mel, Lindsay and Gus? If they do they can keep Mel and Lindsay but Justin needs to save Gus. LOL Please update soon this is fantastic.


Author's Response:

Don't worrie! I took it in another derection! No one in the family would ger hurt :)

In the next chap the story is most about brian justin nikita michael (from nikita) and a suprise charecter!!! You will love it i promise ;)

Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 01:31 PM · On: Enemies

I am just read the story the innocent assassinationa292;It is hardly believe you start the sequel alreadya281;

This Justin is so stronga292;I love hima281;Keep goinga281;


I want say:you can "kill Michael" in your stroy,because you are the Juggernaut,hehehe~~~~

Author's Response:

Gald your enjoying it :)


I think brian would have a prob if i make justin kill michael lol ;)

But... Maybe i will kill him i don't know yet... The story needs somone to hate! Lol ;)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 05:37 AM · On: Enemies


Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Brian, too?

Now I'm sitting on the edge of my seat in suspense. What could that phone call possibly be about?

Update soon so I can find out ;) JP

Author's Response:

in a few days i promise! it's at my BETA now.. kim :) she's amazing lol

she's currecting and checking my english :)

i will update soon! :)


Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 12:13 AM · On: Brian, too?

I love this so much and a such a quick update too ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

yeah... it's like i can't hold it in any longer! lol

chap 3 would be up soon.... ;)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 11:29 PM · On: Enemies

Well,well,well.....can Justin really trust Nikita to keep the Russian mob from trying to get to him and Brian? Can Michael keep his fucking mouth shut and mind his own business for once?.....I'll just have to keep reading to find out.

Please update soon JP

Author's Response:

i just did actually! lol ;)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 10:37 PM · On: Enemies

A great start,can't wait for mor (damn that Michael!!) ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

 i HATE him! but i can't kill him... i wish i could lol :P

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Enemies

So glad to see you continuing this story! I love a bad ass Justin!

Author's Response:

ME TOO! it's hard for me to write other stuff... it's not that exeiting as this one! :)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 01:50 AM · On: Enemies

YES!  A sequel!!! It will be interesting in how J handles the family.  Maybe B/J should send the family after the Russian mob - Debbie alone would take them down.  LOL

All the best.

Author's Response:

after i'll END this story you would want to kill me! i can see that coming... just wait to the last chap... lol :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 01:58 PM · On: Enemies

Great start for Justin to be able to kick everyone’s ass with Brian’s blessing. I loved the fact you got straight into it and Michael hopefully will be dead by the end of chapter two; along with the rest of the family. This is excitement plus I can’t wait for the next chapter.


Author's Response:

i wanted to kill some of them! but... everyone will hate me if i do that lol :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Enemies

Yeah~ another story. Now it looks like Michael needs to be killed, if Justin thinks it will bother Brian he could always just ask one of his co workers to do the actual deed. That might make it easier for Justin to still socialize with the rest of the family. I'm sure no one will really miss that horrible little rat once he's gone.

Author's Response:

let me tell you i had an idea a few days ago that the family will be at risk (but not by justin!) but i gave up on it...! i mean pepole will probeble kill me if i kill anyone in the "family"! lol :)

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