Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For MISS OTIS REGRETS
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

ROTFLMAO. So many laughs, with a small dose of seriousness. Poor Brian--jealous of a ghost. ;)

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

LOL, Brian and his fashionista moment. Even the ghost finds it funny. :D

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like Brian's "practical" approach. ;)

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just finished reading this story & I loved it! I love all your stories & your characterization is always dead on perfect...thank you so much.

Hope to see another VERY long story from you soon (maybe same length as Running?) Pleeeeze????



Author's Response:

I'm working on the sequal to Running right now!  I have several ideas about which way to take it, I just need to decide which one ...

Thank you for all the lovely comments, they're very much appreciated.

 

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2012 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

thank you for sharing this story



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2012 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 2

spooky!

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi!

Thank you for this beautiful story! There was places where I had goose bumps:) and flying glass to Brian´s face was really nice moment to read :) Very good ghost story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it ... and I really couldn't resist having the ghost mess with Brian a little.  Queen-out, stomping feet Brian is just about my favourite thing in the world!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG, I'm on the edge of my seat! The suspense is killing me. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

What a story!



Author's Response:

Not long to wait now ... thanks for reviewig!

Reviewer: Snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2012 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 9

I am so excited to find out what is under the floorboard!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2012 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 9

Yessss suh!  get that crowbar!!!

Reviewer: Julie (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 9

Loving this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

Just read all seven chapters and I love this story. thaanks for writing. hope to see the next chapter really soon.


* hugs *

Author's Response:

I'm posting every night up till Hallowe'en.  I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 7

     This is a wonderful story.  You are a very talented writer, as each line smoothly comes after each line with an almost rhythm.  I like very much how you kept the characters in character. The story itself is light hearted yet intriguing.  This is really fun.  Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it with us.


     DavidR


Ooops, me too!  Each line is a character or two longer than what my screen could show.  I don’t have to arrow over for the one or two characters, as I am able to guess what the word is.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  As to the problem you're having with the text, I've contacted the mods to see if there's anything I can do to fix it.

All the best,

Nightvision

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 7

Brian was hilarious here,a grea chapter. I can't wait to find out more about the ghost,I love this story ~ Vonnie xx 

 

Ps,I am not good at anagrams but I think the mixed up letters say something,yes?



Author's Response:

Yes, but it's not an anagram!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Interesting!! I wonder who Chalmers is????



Author's Response:

All will be revealed!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really love this alot,I can not wait for more,I repeat I can not wait for more ~ Vonnie xx

 

Ps,did I mention I can not wait for more? lol



Author's Response:

Glad you're having so much fun with it!

Thanks for reviewing,

Nightvision

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this!!

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Maybe it's just me, but the words can't all fit into my monitor, i have to scoll to right and left on every sentence, so i will just use my iphone to read it then.



Author's Response:

I don't know ... it's fine to me, and nobody else has said anything.  If anybody is having problems, please let me know and I'll see if I can do something.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

So like Brian....haunted or not, his first thoughts are to check out the "competition" and christen the place. LOL

Love it!

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

That's our Brian, always gets his priorities right! LOL!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 4

You can always count on Brian lol ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

He, he, he... That will definitely give the ghost an eye full... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start I like an independent Justin... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

So do I!

Reviewer: Daphne (duffy_60) (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2012 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

Very good and creepy.  I will admit to checking over at fanfiction.net since you're a couple of chapters ahead over there.  :-)

 

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is really creepy,I love it alot ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am loving this so far. Happy Halloween to you too ~ Vonnie xx



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  I'm planning the last post for Hallowe'en, so I'll be posting daily 'till then.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2012 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 2

HMMMM!!!!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

Going to like this ine a lot.  Love Halloween stories and spooky, scary stuff so much.  Good beginning.



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too!  There's nothing like an old-fashioned ghost story for Hallowe'en.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.

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