Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Porcelain Angel
Reviewer: tianbe (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2014 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 1


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Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Dear Sunshine: Hope all is well. I really would love to see this fic finished - I need a resolution to all the angst. Any hope you'll come back and write some more for us? TAG

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2013 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 25

Please update soon! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2013 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 25

What a shame that Luke didn't take them up on their offer.  Maybe they need to understand the underlying cause of why they do what they do in order to start on the road to recovery?

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2013 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 25

I can see Justin could have a fear of flying as it's just another thing out of his control.   I think Brian has made the right judgment in getting professional help for both their sake.  Poor Luke, I fear he is lost and won't find his way back.  I like the decisions you have gone with in this update. 

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2013 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 25

I like that Luke was invited to go with them. I hope he accepts it. He needs a support in his life and this is an excellent opportunity.

Looking forward to the journey ahead.........

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2013 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 25

It's a shame Luke didn't take Brian up on his offer to go back to the Pitts...but at least now Justin will get the help he needs

Author's Response:

I don't want to reveal too much, but this might not be Luke's final decision about going to the Pitts. Not saying anymore though :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2013 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 24

Oh, that's heartbreaking for Brian.  This is reminiscent of Bronte, whose battle with Anorexia was well documented on tv here; I have nothing else to reference this by, however, this fic is beginning to show the agony that it brings to everyone involved.  How do you help someone that doesn't want help?  Even when they get back to Pittsburgh I'm really not sure the family will be able to help.  I hoping by the mere fact you can jovially talk about Ana means you have made steps towards a happier and healthier life.  I wish you all the best.  Thank you for the update.  

 

Cheers



Author's Response:

Firstly thank you soo much for the review. Thank you, I want it to be really angsty and really capture the pain of everyone involved realisticly. 
Yeah, I guess that's the question.

Thank you! You're welcome, I really hope that I will be able to update real soon. xx

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 24

Oh dear we are hopefully at a turning point I hope because I am not sure Justin or Brian can hold on much longer



Author's Response:

thank you for the review! xx

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2013 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 24

Oh, yea! Finally some hope. It's small, but good. Thank you. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Thought it was time for some hope. xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2013 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 24

It's so sad that it takes Brian breaking down for Justin to realize something is seriously wrong.  Hopefully things will turn around.  If Justin saw a picture of himself what would he see?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!
I have thought of Justin seeing a picture of himself, and I think I have a pretty good idea on how Justin will react. xx

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2013 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 24

Thank you for this chapter my friend :) I couldn't stop the tears of joy from flowing now that Justin has realized how dire his situation really is. I hope that he will allow Brian to love him enough to help him on his long road to recovery

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. :) *hands you tissues and gives a hug* but still takes the tears as a compliment. 
Hoping I'll be able to update soon.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2013 12:26 PM · On: New chapter soon!

I would like to see you continue with this and give us a true perspective, or one that is as real as you are willing to share with us. I’m always interested when someone writes from personal experience and I’m willing to wait until the inspiration strikes you. Update when you are ready, I still be here.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you! 

xx

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2013 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, we are still interested in your story and we can't wait till your next update. But we will, because we all know how tough writer's block can be - most of us have been there a time or two ourselves. My advice is to just keep plugging away and try to write every day even if you're uninspired. Eventually, something you think of will spark your imagination again and you'll be writing like hotcakes! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you. Thank you, I will. xx

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2013 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 23

I'm fine with most of this chapter being about Luke, but I don't like it when cutting is involved, it scares me.   I wonder if this is the end for Luke.  Please hurry back as I can't wait for Justin to finally accept help.  Maybe Luke is the reason he does.

Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2013 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 23

I am sooooo pissed at Justin for continuing to refuse Brian's help and extra pissed at Luke for continuing to help Justin destroy himself.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 22

Justin seemed to have a small breakthrough by allowing Brian to stay.  If you are talking about the other members of the family, it sounds like the men are heading back to Pittsburgh, so Justin would need to leave Luke, and that would relinquish more of his control.  Is he going willingly?  Depending on where you are taking the story as to how you write the characters.   Maybe you could write from you knowledge on how you know people react, to give us a very normal experience.  Good luck with whatever you decide.   

 

Cheers



Author's Response:

Thank you! 
Yes they will eventually go back to Pittsburgh. You will see (I haven't decided everything yet!) 

Thank you once more. x

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 22

I don’t think any of the characters you mentioned are able to help


Justin.  But there is hope since this is a work of B&J fiction, and


you can do just about anything.  Basically what I am saying is that


this is your story, be creative.  There are hundreds of things you


can do.


      


       .  Have a mock burial.  Have them all say good bye to Justin


          while he watches.


          You can bury only a picture, or even a large rubber doll. 


          Whatever… 


 


      .   You can have an intervention.  That can take so many forms. 


 


     .   You could have a mock funeral service.  Let each person in


          his life say good bye.


 


I think you see what I mean.  Do what you will.  So far you have


done a terrific job with this story.  None of my possible


suggestions are easy to write.  I don’t mean due to author’s


emotions, but I do mean to write in detail, and have it effective for


not only Justin, but us, the readers.  It could be considered (very)


high drama


 


Good luck!


DavidR




Author's Response:

Thank you very much! x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 21

I love the ending of this chapter and it was a good place to leave it. Thank you for the update.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you for the review! x

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 21

Such intensity in so little words. I feel that Justin is starting to realize exactly what it is he'll be losing if he doesn't help himself.

Keep it coming ;) JP

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

I'll do my very best! x

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2013 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 21

Unfortunately, I still don't think Justin's ready to admit he needs help. Brian might guilt him into it for now, but I think that the only way he'll really start to heal is if he admits he's got a problem. Hope your inspiration returns. Thanks for the updat. TAG



Author's Response:

You have to want to be helped, otherwise it wont work. 

I hope so too. x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 05:34 PM · On: BIG QUESTION!!

Chapter size should be what you are comfortable with. Just post when you’re ready.


Cheers

Author's Response:

I want the chapters to be longer than they are, but I don't want to you readers to wait too long. x

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2013 07:48 AM · On: BIG QUESTION!!

Post what you have.



Author's Response:

Will post it very soon. 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 11:02 AM · On: BIG QUESTION!!

    I finally caught up and am now current with this story.  I like

it.  You have done a real good job.  I don’t intend to go anywhere,

so let the story take as long as it is going to take.  I know that is

not much help, but what I hope you will get out of my comments

is just let it happen. 

   So, write when you can or want.  Please – it is a good story,

don’t rush it.  If you don’t put out a new chapter for several

weeks (or whatever), so what?  I will be here to read it when you

do.

  Thanks for the story.

  DavidR

 



Author's Response:

Just a HUGE thank you for the review! x 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 02:49 AM · On: BIG QUESTION!!

I say go with your instincts boo. We readers will appreciate your effort no matter how short or long the chapter is. It's your vision and I for one am along for the ride to the very end ;) JP

Author's Response:

I just wanna say a HUGE thank you for this review! x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 20

I’m so pleased to see this update and it certain was worth waiting for. This is so well written you had me fooled; I was so worried. Keep it coming just like that, however, I don’t know if my heart can stand another dream.


Cheers

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2013 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 20

VERY scary update. I even shouted out 'No' after reading Brian's dream where it looked like justins as going to die - I startled several other people also waiting at the bus stop. TAG

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 19

I’m sorry to hear you are struggling with an eating disorder. I hope writing this fic helps you. I like how you wrote out all the little sayings people have to make themself feel good about what they are doing, as it shows that you can see them for what they are. Write whenever you can and write exactly the way you wrote this chapter, as it is very relatable. Thank you for your openness.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Firstly, thank you. It does help. Some may be thinking that it would be triggering, but for me it's the opposite. I will try to write the same way I wrote this chapter, and I'm glad you liked it. x

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2013 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 19

As someone who was bulimic for quite some time, I feel your struggle. Don't give up: it does get better, and will get easier. Though sometimes you might think, "fuck it,"...believe me, you can do it :)



Author's Response:

I wont give up. You shouldn't either. It will get better, just like you say. Thank you, you can too :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2013 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 19

Still reading. Hope that helps you with your own struggle. TAG



Author's Response:

Yay! That's makes me glad. It helps. x

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 19

First let me say, I sincerely pray that you remain strong and keep fighting...never give up on yourself love.

I'm glad that Brian decided to really do his homework to find the best way to help Justin. As with any situation, not every method works for the same two people. Hopefully when Justin is released, he'll start to accept the fact that no matter what he says Brian is not going to leave his side.

Keep writing my friend and give us more~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you. I will do my very best. I wont. :)

Exactly, not everything works for everyone. Hopefully he will accept that, but it might take some time.

I will, and trust me, this is just the beginning, there's lots more to come. x

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2013 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 18

I’m glad to see Brian has realized the full extent of what he is up against. I don’t think Justin saying “I hate you “will make him give up now. Great chapter; as I think it moves Brian into a new understanding of Justin’s predicament.


Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2013 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 18

At least Brian isn't taking the easy way out. I'm proud of him for standing his ground and helping Justin whether he wants it or not.

I even have to give Luke credit for taking responsibility for his role in Justin's decline.

Update soon please~JP

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2013 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 17

Ahh, Luke redeems himself (sort of). TAG

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 17

I like the way you had Luke talk to Justin but I can’t see he is going to let Brian help him just because Luke suggested it. I have a real fear for Luke’s life right now but if something does happen to him will that make Justin seek help. I like this chapter. Please just update when you can.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Firstly thank for the review!

Yeah, he not going to agree to get help, not at first, since he don't think there is something wrong with him. I haven't really decided if Luke is going to do something or not, or how that will affect Justin. (it would be great if you had an idea! :] ) 

Thank you, again. And I will update as soon as I can! x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 17

Poor Luke.  He's got more problem than one would have thought.  Justin needs help, but Luke needs it even more.  But how will you use that to help Justin?  It's a very good chapter because one realizes that it's going to take a lot more than talking to get through to Justin.  And I'm not sure what it will take.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Firstly thank you for the review. They both need help, the question is will they get it? 

I will update as soon as I can. x

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

No worries my friend. Just continue at the pace you need to. I know how you feel, I'm working on two fics myself and the muse has been very uncooperative.

At least Luke is doing the right thing and trying to get Justin to realize that this isn't the way he really wants to live his life.

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Firstly thank you for the review. 
Yeah, I just get frustrated when I can't write. 

I'll update as soon as I can (since it's impossible to update sooner than I can, hehe) x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thank you for the quick update. I would really like for Brian to be able to help both Justin and Luke, however, in the real world that isn’t likely to happen or be accepted. “It’s okay if you hate me. Everyone does”. That line is heart breaking; I wish Luke had someone who at least cared. I apologise for writing RL in my review, I shouldn’t be so lazy; I should have written the words real life (RL).

Cheers

Author's Response:

You're welcome! It would be nice, but it's quite unreal. 

No worries, now I know what it means, so. :) 

And I'll update as soon as I can. x

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

Sometimes 'Rock Bottm' is a good place to be because the only direction you can go from there is up, right? TAG



Author's Response:

Exactly. With that I'm not saying that they (Justin & Luke, mainly) has hit Rock Bottom, yet! x

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2013 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 16

Need not worry, you didn't leave me hanging.Loved how you incorporated Brian's interaction with Luke.

Finally, Brian is getting a better idea of what he is dealing with.

Now he will be more vigilant where Justin is concern. Brian definately has his work cut out for him if he is going to help both Luke and Justin.

How on earth is he going to start?



Author's Response:

Pew... :)

He is getting a better idea, but there still so much he don't know. 

Yes, he will be more vigilant. Yes, he will have his hands full with helping them. Yes that's question. x

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 16

Ok so I don't hate you for the cliffhanger lol. I do however love how much info Luke was actually willing to give Brian.

Now we wait and see how receptive Justin will be to getting the help he deserves.

Can't wait for more~JP

Author's Response:

*Sighs in relief* :)
He may have given him that much info, but there is A LOT he left out, like all the details. 

I will update as soon as I can, promise! x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 10:29 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTER)

The sequence of events may depend on where you want to go. To speak to Luke first may allow Brian to see how Justin is hiding the condition when he eventually talks to him about it. This could lead to the beginning of getting professional help.

If Brian speaks to Justin first, then Luke, it may just make Brian watch to see what Justin is really doing; giving Brian a better understanding of it all. This would give you the opportunity to include any other symptoms of the disorder, if that is where you are heading.

Justin isn’t going to be truthful in hiding his eating disorder so Brian’s actions may play the key role in his recovery. Although ultimately it is Justin’s battle.

Good luck wherever you take us.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. x

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 09:39 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTER)

I would say Luke first. See what he has to say then he goes to see Justin. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! x

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 07:30 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTER)

Luke can not get any official infor. on Justin because he is not his ICE. However, Brian is and when Brian goes to admin. maybe Luke will realise that who he is and approach him for an update.

Maybe Luke will let it slip how he has been trying to 'help' Justin and this should enlighten Brian to what he is dealing with.

Before he sees Justin he has to know what physical damage Justin has done to himself also.....and then there is Anna. okay, am fast forwarding to quickly there.

I vote for Brian to meet Luke first then Justin.

As a reader, just want to say 'thank you' for including me in the writing process.

Which ever way it goes, look forward to going with you.



Author's Response:

Thank you!
You're welcome to come with more ideas, or that kind of stuff, anytime you want. I'm thankful that you're helping moving this story forward. x

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 01:24 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTER)

Talk to Luke first, as Brian will get a more honest answer from him than Justin. And if Brian has facts, Justin can't brush off his concerns. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! x

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 12:18 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTER)

Ok first do Brian and Luke remember meeting each other? If not, maybe Luke could overhear Brian talking with the admissions nurse and introductions could be made that way making it next to impossible for Luke to avoid answering questions about what he knows and what he has done to help or hurt the situation. After possibly obtaining some of the facts, then Brian can focus all of his attention to helping Justin to get better.

All of this could realistically happen while waiting for the doctor (doctor tend to move a bit slow even in emergency cases)

I'm not sure if this is what you're looking for but I hope it at least helps to get your creative juices flowing.

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what direction you take this story next~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you! And yes, partly, Brian remember seeing Luke with Justin at the show. I don't know how much information Luke is going to give him.

It gave me a lot of ideas. Next chapter will be up as soon as I have wrote it. x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 15

It will be interesting to see where Brian goes from here as talking will never be enough. How do you get help for someone in this situation and get them to accept it? I really feel for both Brian and Justin. Thank you for the update and I look forward to the next one when RL allows.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, and sorry for not answering on the comments. Not that I know what RL means, but I will update as soon as possible. x

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 15

I hope this is cathartic for you. It's making me so sad. But, god, I desperately want to help. I just don't know what to offer. TAG



Author's Response:

It kind of is. Sorry for making you sad. Everything is welcome, like ideas, what can happen? what you think should happen when Brian mets Luke? 

And thank you for the review, and sorry I haven't been answering the comments. x

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 15

now that things are really taking a turn for the worst for Justin health wise, and Brian has a little more insight as to what Justin is doing to himself Brian has some tough but necessary decisions to make.

Brian should definitely talk to Luke and get as much information as he can so he'll better know how to help Justin......let's just hope Justin doesn't reject the help when it's offered this time.

Please update soon~JP

Author's Response:

it sure is going to be tough decisions, for all of them. Brian isn't going to be too happy with Luke. And Luke isn't that keen on sharing information. You will see (maybe in the next chapter) if Justin accepts the help or not. 

Thank you for the review and sorry for not answering the comments. x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 14

I hope Brian can find some way of helping Justin but I understand how someone can go to great lengths to hide the full extent of the problem. I look forward to the update tomorrow.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 14

I hope that Brian finally meets Luke....



Author's Response:

He will. And he will not be too happy with him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 14

It is so sad to see how Justin is hurting himself.  Unfortunately there is a lot of this in the world and helping is never easy.  Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! x

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

I like the amount of detail you're putting into Justin's eating disorder/body dysmorphia. I hate when authors give a character an illness etc and then they're over it way too quickly. 

And I love Brian coming to the rescue, as that's one of my favourite types of stories. 



Author's Response:

I hate when authors do that to, because issues/disorders like this one isn't going away that quickly, so it makes it quite unreal. And yes, Brian to the rescue!

Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 14

So painful to read . . . So personal. This scares me but I'm still intrigued. TAG

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 14

Please make it stop my dear. I can't believe that Brian remains unable to really help Justin. He keeps collapsing but this time someone who enables him has found him.....this is not good. :'(

Please update soon~JP

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 13

You are so brave just to try and write anything - I don't think you should put yourself down. There are a lot of people out there who are too chicken to try writing fanfiction. I know I'm still reading so you must be doing right. TAG

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

This is a great chapter. Brian knows what he is up against and knows he must handle things accordingly. I hope he can get Justin back to The Pitts as I think he has a better chance of helping him if they can be together on a more permanent basis.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2013 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 13

Love that Brian is there with him now,but its a hugh battle ahead.

I don't have any ideas right now but will definately share once I get, since I really want you to continue.

Wishing you lots of ideas.

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2013 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 13

Not the worst chapter just not moving the story along yet.  Seems time for a turning point?  Not sure but it's just a suggestion.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

I think what you wrote in this chapter gives you places to move going forward. Brian could maybe obtain some information from Luke. I wouldn’t think he would confront him as Luke didn’t force Justin to take the pills but he may be able to gain some idea of what he is up against. Brian needs to maybe also seek out professional help for Justin but most of all he needs to be there for him. That alone may be hard; since he has work commitments. I hope you can move forward as I look forward to where you take this.

Cheers

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2013 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 12

Replacement Reivew - I know I said something much smarter in the original, but I can't remember what it was. I really like protective Brian. I don't care if he is a bit overly sentimental. TAG

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

I’m glad Ash called Brian. I’m sorry you lost some of your reviews and you will have to repost the next chapter again. I look forward to some new chapters as soon as RL allows.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2013 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

Can't wait for Brian to step in...........two months is a long time.

Look forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 11

I don't really know what to say, this story is taking an emotional toll on me but I can't help but to read it. I so want for Brian to convince Justin to face his demons and will himself to want to get better. Hopefully this 'surprise visit' will start a chain reaction to Justin's healing.

Update soon please~JP

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 11

I don't really know what to say, this story is taking an emotional toll on me but I can't help but to read it. I so want for Brian to convince Justin to face his demons and will himself to want to get better. Hopefully this 'surprise visit' will start a chain reaction to Justin's healing.

Update soon please~JP

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well you did warn us but still I read it. I can’t imagine doing that as I try not to vomit even when I feel like it. Maybe if Justin ends up in hospital Brian will take action. He needs Brian to be a little bit more insistent with his desire to help and Brian needs to be there for Justin. Luke and Brian need to lock horns. I have my fingers crossed that Brian will come through for Justin and restore enough self-worth for him to get the help he requires. However you do it I hope you continue this fic.

Cheers

Reviewer: Q_A_F_fanfic_addict (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

Hope to read more soon. I love this. :)

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2013 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 10

oh justin is really sic

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

How sad that Justin was able to conceal the fact that he hadn’t eaten at the restaurant for a long time. Brian must be a little worried but what can he do? I don’t mind short chapters as I’m just happy to see an update.

Cheers

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

Let's be for fantasy here, brian with his own two eyes can't see how justin looking why isn't brian not bitching or fighting to get inside of justin building geting answer from justin why is he wasting his time driving back to the gallery when he should be breaking justin door down tring to get in.   

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 8

Ok this is getting scarier by the minute. I started to cry the minute I started reading this chapter. Justin shouldn't be able to push Brian away that easily, and I would think that Brian would've refused to leave until he got Justin some kind of help.

Just please say that this illness doesn't end Justin's life.....I couldn't take it.

Please update soon~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Don't cry. And no it doesn't end Justin's life.

I'll do my best! 
Linn

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Yea! Brian to the rescue! He better hurry though. . . TAG

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

I’m so pleased Brian didn’t just leave. It must be hell having such a distorted view of yourself. Not thinking Brian would notice really makes this distortion obvious because of course Brian would notice even the slightest change in Justin, physically and mentally. I love the way you are handling this. Thank you.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2013 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

its short but its continuing....hurrah!!

Brian is going to have his hands full.....with not only Justin and Luke but Ana.....he can see Justin and Luke but Ana?

How will he know about her?

Wow! very interesting.......

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

I'm really not liking what this Luke is convincing Justin to do to himself. This is probably the darkest, scariest fic I've ever read.

I really hope Brian can shake some sense into our little Sunshine and get him the help he needs.

Please update soon~JP

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2013 07:37 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTHER)

You have done a great job so far and I think a time jump would be most appropriate.

This particular topic of 'control' and the helplessness that one feels when its out of our grasp or so we think, is such an important issue. The loneliness, depression, anxiety.....all these negativity is hard for one person to deal with.

Possibly fast forward to Brian point of view of how he discovers Justin's secret, Justin's recovery and Luke's recovery also. Although Luke has a lot more work to do, there is hope for him but he has to work at it.

Maybe Brian and Justin friendship is what gives Luke hope. Just throwing out ideas here because I really would like this fic. to continue.

Good Luck and look forward to reading more chapters.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

And thanks for the ideas. The fic will continue, it may take time, but I will not abandon it.

:D

Reviewer: Nana (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2013 03:57 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTHER)

Hello Sunshine92....

kudos for the story so far.

I have had an ed for 7years and honestly, most of the time the worst thing, is the affect that it had on others. In my case it's my parents, BUT to tie it in with your story, possibly now you should switch perspective to Brian - have a fast forward/time jump where Justin is back in Pittsburg, possibly in hospital, or the loft (I did not read anything about Britin - are you using it in your story?? - ooooh you have to have justin at Britin, imagine him poorly in one of the many rooms.... (Sorry I digress) anyway, possibly tell the story of what happened and how Justin ended up back in Pittsburg (and more importantly back in Brian's arms) through Brian's point of view. That way you could tell the story so that Brian finds out certain things at the same time as the reader. I also think it is easier to emphasise the gravity of a situation by getting those who are affected to speak of it. If people ask me how being ill affects me, I cannot talk about it, but I can speak about how I have hurt/affected my parents.... Does any of that make sense!? Sorry I ramble!!

good luck finishing the story :-)

xXx

 



Author's Response:

Hi, I'm sorry to hear that you suffered for so long, I really hope you get better, if you haven't already. I have an eating disorder myself and I agree with you that the worst is how it affects those that are close to you. 
And I absolutely adore your idea with justin at Britin, and imagine him poorly and all that. I totally going to tell the story from exemple Brian's POV. It makes a lot of sense. 

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 10:47 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTHER)

I’m so pleased you didn’t take the easy option like some authors and just abandon the fic. I like your idea of jumping forward and filling in the gaps with flashbacks. I think the idea of knowing where Brian and Justin are now and then finding out how they got there (from Justin thinking about taking the pills to what eventuated when he did) is a very plausible way to go. I admire you taking on a multi chapter story with this theme for your first fic.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I think I have decided on jumping forward. 

:D

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 07:29 AM · On: HELP (NOT A CHAPTHER)

Well, if you have your mind set on flashing forward, then I for one would like to know if Justin was able to finish the 20 paintings, and how they turned out...maybe the fast forward could take place at Justin's show? And then Brian arrives and sees him, and sees the paintings.... or maybe Luke dies, and that could be where your story continues from: Justin could be calling Brian at the hospital because he found Luke and is upset and doesn't know who else to call.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 6

I like the way you are writing this; being set around a person’s self-worth and how they think the world perceives them, is very interesting. I hope he doesn’t take the pills but I’m sure he thinks it will give him the control he so desperately wants. Thank you for the update.

Cheers

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

I liked that this was a longer chapter...but still want to know what caused his decision to lose weight. I get the whole "losing control and thus needing control" but then when you wrote the internal monologue of him calling himself fat, I had a hard time understanding where that came from. Some background memory or maybe more of a conversation with Luke might help me understand why he has decided he is fat. Being a former bulimic, the weight was a side issue for me...the vomiting and thus release of stress was the bigger appeal than anything else (weight loss and super white skin was just a bonus), whereas my sister's diet pill addiction was fed from an actual desire to lose weight. So I guess my question here is: what made him decide he was fat? What was his trigger? I can assume the trigger is being alone in NY and the stress of the show...but I would love to read more internal diagoue or conversations that convey that so we can understand his motivation a bit more.

Author's Response:

There will be some more internal dialogue, conversation and such things that will explain things better, promise.

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 6

I just wanted to say that whilst your English isn't perfect, this is way better written than some stories I've read written by native English speakers.

Also, I love Justin having bulimia (or whatever he's meant to have.) It's an angle I haven't read about what happens after Justin goes to New York, so it's wonderful to read something different. I just hope Brian finds out soon and swoops in to save the day.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

Uhhhhh......not really sure why Justin would take to doing something so drastic. Looking at Luke can't he tell that what he's doing to himself is unhealthy? Brian needs to make an appearance quick and save our little Sunshine from himself.

JP

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 5

So Justin is worried about his weight. I can see that happening, as in Brian Kinney’s perfect world he probably doesn’t feel he would be accepted. Maybe by Brian he would be but I’m sure others would be hurtful. I don’t understand the control thing yet but I can see others do. I just don’t know anyone in this situation so I look forward to finding out more on this issue.

Cheers

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 5

glad to see that you've updated! I hope Justin finds his inspiration to make those 20 paintings, and that Brian figures out what's going on soon! Diet pills can be so addicting! My sister became addicted to them when she went away to college. We both struggled with our own issues of wanting/needing control. So I can understand Justin's feeling of need totally here. I look forward for your next chapter!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

This has an interesting start. Look forward to the rest of it.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

I’m still worried about Justin; I hope Brian goes to him soon. You don’t have this in the category of Brian/Justin are you going to make it a Brian/Michael as I don’t really want to see it to go that way. I’m pleased Justin has a show so now maybe he will be happier. Thank you for the update.


Cheers

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

Still enjoying your story, Linn!:)  You have me intrigued.  I will be anxious to see what happens to Ben and to find out what is bothering Justin.  Looking forward to more. ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2012 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 2

OMG what is Justin thinking? Why doesn’t he think he is good? Brian needs to pay New York a visit and go get his man. More please; I don’t care how short they are as long as there are lots of chapters.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love the start. Brian should trust his instincts when it comes to Justin; I’m glad he called him back. Justin sounds like he needs to come home but I will just have to wait and see. Welcome to MW, I’m looking forward to the next chapter.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to the ranks of MW authors. Congrats on your story! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Addong a header is easy. you go to mange images, down load you're image you can check the image by clicking in the view prompt on the far right if the image coding... then simply copy the coding and insert it into your story... You can always ask JT if your having problems... Good luck ~ Kathleen

PS Great drabble...

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)

How to add a Banner (link)



Author's Response:

:)

thanks! 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to our family. I am very pleased to read your story. It sounds like it will be filled with drama and love. Great start, I can't wait to read more.
Where are you from/what is your first language?
Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks. Thank you. I'm from Sweden. :D
Linn

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very touching and so sad that the boys weren't together.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, it makes me want to continue writing. 
*whisper* And they will be together again... soon

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Linn!  First of all, welcome to the site!  Secondly, interesting beginning to your story.:)  I'm wondering what's wrong with Justin.  I like the way that Brian knew how to calm him down and help him.  I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of your story.:)

 

You asked about adding a header; are you talking about a banner?  If so, you would need to go to 'manage images' and download it first from your computer to get a URL address.  Then you could go into your 'manage stories' section and edit the story  to place the URL address where you want to put the banner in the story. 

 

If you need help, email me and I'll be glad to try and help you.  Or Bob (jtsecrets), one of the admins, could do it for you as well.  Good Luck!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you. You will find out in time. :) 

Yes, banner is what I mean. And thanks. 

Hugs.

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