Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:49 PM · On: The Truth

OMG! poor bri!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 09:57 PM · On: The Truth

Oh no!!!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 05:28 PM · On: The Truth

Nooooo Michelle is dead already so it doesn’t look like Justin has anyone he might turn to. That was brutal. Let’s hope Justin can save both of them but it doesn’t look good. I don’t have to wait and see as I have one more chapter. Thank you so much.

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 08:35 AM · On: The Truth

Hmm, now we get to see if the unit did a good job of training Justin, will he be able to save himself and Brian from this little situation? It's easy to see Michelle wasn't a very good student. She was too emotional. Can't say I'm going to miss her. Now if even a tiny hair on Brian gets messed up I am going to be upset. I do have my limits for fictional murders.
Lori

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 02:16 AM · On: The Truth

So...that whole year of "choice"...there really was no choice in the matter? Then what was the point of letting them go for a year? And now Justin s going to die horribly...who know s where Brian's been taken... This is turning into a bit of a downer...

Author's Response:
you really think that's how this going to end? come on give me a little cradit :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 07:03 AM · On: The Truth

Oh hell no! The suspense is killing me!

Author's Response:
Wow thanks! It's the best compliment ever! :) i really tryed to make it like a tv show lol :) every chapther ends with a bang ;)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 03:52 AM · On: The Truth

Yikes! Well, amazing how our government is using our tax money. LOL! But seriously, enjoying the twists and turns.

All the best!

Laura

Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! :)

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