Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: ShoGal (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 06:45 PM · On: Lost Him / Kill Him

loved it!!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 03:01 AM · On: Lost Him / Kill Him

Oh crap,not good!!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 04:45 PM · On: Lost Him / Kill Him

"you lost him." Jennifier is going to be my favourite if she keeps coming up with lines like this. LOL Michelle wanting to kill Brian; that could be unfortunate for the story line but I am sure Justin will save him. I hope he doesn’t have to kill Michelle to stop her. I’ll continue to the next chapter hopefully finding more wonderful twists. Thanks again.

Cheers

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2012 04:12 PM · On: Lost Him / Kill Him

Michelle isn't really is best friend by forcing him like that. She doesn't know what happened during this year and she judge Justin. She just doesn't want to be left alone. Michelle doesn't think about what Justin wants.

She dares threat to kill the man her "best friend" loves for pity reasons. I hope Justin will put her in her place and deal with her like he did with Jennifer.

It didn't even occure to Michelle to question Thomas reason to send her there. Neither did she think about her blowing Justin's story and compromise the unit. For someone with her training she doesn't seem so smart. Like you can see, I don't like Michelle's character.



Author's Response:

You're not supposed to like her :) It's fine ... She's a bit scary :)

Michelle classical assassin ... She sees only the goal in front of her and it's really did not interest her who stands in the way.

But then you can also kinda understand her ... He's her best friend, they grew up together (only she's older than two years his senior) Most assassins who go for "free year" comes back ... They are supposed to drink and do drugs and party ... only justin started a life and got a job, went to school... and fell in love :)

 

she only tring to get her friend back :)

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 12:26 PM · On: Lost Him / Kill Him

wait...i thought they only killed rapists and drug lords and evil assholes not regular assholes like Brian. Sure, he s a dick but he's not an evil dick.  You know? Why are they suddenly talking about killing as to solve a simple problem?

Anyway, didn't really know what else to say...I like the story as a whole and hope more comes soon. Interesting to think that Jen might have been a "fake"



Author's Response:

to michelle if he stands beteen her and justin... he's the bigesst problem of all :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 11:14 AM · On: Lost Him / Kill Him

I don't think we can let Brian die a fictional death so soon in the story...but, if you think it's best I'm willing to go along with it. I really want a high body count in this story. I'm hoping Jennifer doesn't last too long, she is really starting to piss me off. I think she must be really working for the "other" side. She is acting so nasty. Is Justin going to go crazy and kill his lifelong partner to protect this unable to return his love-lover? How young was Justin when he made his first kill? He just doesn't seem to have the physical body type of the normal paid killer. Maybe that is what makes him so good. He is a complete surprise.
Lori

Author's Response:

Chapter Five is ready and and coming up ...
Chapter six and seven I am writing now...
I think you'll be happy when you read Chapter Seven :) He will be full of blood!
:) :)

They start to kill at really young ... After all, what better than a child could trap and kill a pedophile? ;)

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