Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 02:50 AM · On: Birthday Boy

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Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Birthday Boy

17 years of training to be the best assassin/killer. I just can't believe Justin was "allowed" to feel emotions. I would think Justin's life was a bit like Jarod in "Pretender" or more of "Nikita".

I would love to see Justin put Michael in his place by humiliating him for everyone to see. What can he lose by defending himself ? Brian made it clear that he doesn't want him like Justin would love to. So Justin has no excuse to tolerate Michael anymore. I'd say : "Go Justin and have fun by making Michael miserable !"

I'm also curious of how will Justin deal with Brian during the party. I don't think Justin will ever show violence even less if Gus is in the room. But Justin could pretend he doesn't give a f*ck about Brian anymore. Well, there's a chance Justin will decide to go back to "The Agency".

I'll be there for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

the diffrence is that jusitn unit is all about choice.. if he choose that life than you a comided. if you choose a normal life they'll free you :) (well exept if your as good as justin is :))

justin emotions came with his new life :) he had to feel.. when i'll get to the fleshback of the start of his "free year" you will learn that it's more of an acting job he got sucked in... he's such a good liar and that he made even himself belive that he's the inoccent little justin.

and in chapter 3 you'll find out why he can't do what he wants to do...like killing michael :)

 

thanks you so much for your review! :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 08:53 AM · On: Birthday Boy

So, the cute little assassin is having a hard time making up his mind? I have been waiting for a story where there is some good old fictional murder and I hope I just might get my wish with this story...It's my lifelong dream for Ethan to get killed in a gruesome way with body parts all over the place. I sure hope if he shows up in this story Justin will be forced to use his training to do him in.

I think this story is great, please don't let nameless reviewers bother you. I think it's amazing that you are so dedicated to this story that you are willing to share it with us, in a language that is not your native tongue. I can overlook a few mishaps with our crazy language. I know I would not be able to leave a review for you in your language that made sense at all so until I can communicate in all languages perfect I would never begin to judge anyone else. Please keep writing, I want to see some blood and guts, of the fictional kind, of course!
Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you soo much lori :) it will get bloody but it would take a little while.... after all justin havent decited what to do yet... But killing ethan is a really good idea the problom is that he's too inoccent to hit by an assaent lol :) but i'll fighre it out :) maybe he'll pissed justin off and he'll kill him just for fun :)