Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 03:57 PM · On: Blue Sunshine
This seems interesting. I just have to re-adjust with what I'm used to, Brian is usually the predator and physically stronger. But this definitely looks promising. :)
Author's Response: I hope you will enjoy my story :)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 02:27 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
I am gonna enjoy this alot,I can tell. Great start ~ Vonnie xx
Author's Response: i really hope you do!! :)
Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2012 05:27 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
Great story! Just seeing Justin kicking someone ass :-). I would love to read sequel!
Author's Response: working on it! :)
i hope it would be loved as this one! :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Blue Sunshine
I thought I had reviewed some of these chapters before I went on holidays but I don’t see the reviews so I am going to just say I am loving this fic, it is such a great premise. Welcome to MW.
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2012 02:23 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
Ciesze sie ze dalej piszesz, bo bardzo fajnie ci to wychodzi. Watek ktory stworzyles jest bardzo fajny i nie moge sie doczekac co bedzie dalej. Pozdrawiam.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 07:01 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
I am a senior admin for Whispers and have the ability to get into most of your membership account; therefore, I'm able to edit your stories. Your image mistake told me the address of your image in your Whispers account folder. I just had to make it into a website address (URL) to enter your banner in your story summary.
For info how to enter your banners and pictures go to: How to add a New Story
Author's Response:
Amazing :) thanks again :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 06:25 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
:) Welcome to Midnight Whispers - this is the perfect website for a beginner. We welcome and assist new writers. (I helped with your banner)
~ Bob, admin
Author's Response: Thanks! How did you that?? Lol :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
Hello, Michal! Welcome to the writer's pool.:) I wouldn't delete your story - everyone has to start somewhere, and it must be quite a challenge to translate your story into English; that takes a lot of courage to do that! And I know how scary it is to write your first story; I remember that well. And this is such an original idea.:)
If you would like some help rewriting it or with anything else, I would be happy to help. Don't give up, though - keep going! Sending you a big *hug* of encouragement. ~Kimberly
Author's Response: wow thank you so much your amazing i would love some help! i just finished chapter two i wolud love to send it to you and if you don't mind just read it and mabey fix what you can?
XOXOXOXOXO!
:) :)
Reviewer: I_M73 (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 03:12 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
What a good story scenario. Considering English is not your first language you did well. It's hard to think in one language and write in another-believe me I know. Went through the same process years ago. Polish to English is really hard. So keep on trying and it will get better I promise. Don't and I repeat don't give up. I will be waiting for more from you.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! Thanks for the encouragement!
i'll try not to give up i'm really shy abput my stories so it's a struggle and of course the english :)
and again thank you!!
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
This sounds like a very interesting story, can't wait to read more : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: wow! thanks :) :) :)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 02:56 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
Welcome to our wonderful world. I think you'll fit in very nice. This story is starting off with a bang, I can tell I'm hooked. I can't wait to see where it takes us.
Lori
Author's Response: really?? you don't think it's hard to understand me? lol :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 02:45 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
Welcome to the ranks of the MW authors! Congrats! And, considering that English isn't your first language, I think you did great. This story has a very intriguing premise. Can't wait to read more. TAG
Author's Response: thanks :) ive been reading stories here for years and have lots of ideas... but i guss the english stuff not coming out the way i plannd... i thnik i'll go back to just reading :)
Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 02:38 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
story is sort of jumbled and english verbs out of whack here and there. your tenses are not correct, but i think the story is good and could be better if these things were improved. hope you are not upset-trying for positive help.
Author's Response:
upset? no :) grateful... it's hard for me to sound "right" you know? :)
i wish i could get some help... becasue when i think in english it's fine... but when i try to wirte it it's very hard for me...
thanks for telling me! :)
i'll be deleting the story... and just reading from now on :)
anyway...i think my photo turn out incredible lol :)
Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Blue Sunshine
Great start.
Can't wait to see what'll happen next.
-Marina
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! :)
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