Just finished this story and I loved it!!   It moved pretty quick, but too much, and had a great ending!!

good one

Heureusement qu'il y a une suite à cette très belle histoire, ça ne peut pas se finir comme cela, il y a tellement d'amour entre ces garçons!

A bientôt.

Just re-read this and I wanted to tell you both what a fun little story this is. I really like badass Justin having to kick butt to save Brian's life. Thanks for writing. TAG

P.S. Should I carry on reading the sequel or go write up my lab report? Hmmm? Think I'll keep reading. ;)

Author's Response:

thank you for liking it so much you read it again!! such a compliment!

I haven't read this chapter....but totally freaking out. In a good kind of way.

Just landed on this story... GLAD I DID because it was worth it! Thanks for sharing :o) Two thumbs up!

Author's Response:

thanks!! :) happy you liked it! :) :)

nikita and michael! another show i love! so exiting!

OMG! poor bri!

is it brian!?!? it has to be brian!! i know it's brian! OMG!

love that justin turn bad! can't wait to read about him killing somone!! lol :)

OMG!!!

Well my dear I just read all 14 chapters in one sitting and DAMN!!!....what a wild ride. Now I'm off to start reading the sequel. JP

Author's Response:

i'm so happy!!!!!! **jumping in my chair** :) :) :) :)

 

thank you for lovin it!! :)

Michaels damn hot!!! WHERES BRIAN??????? ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

I KNOW!!! he's so fine! there's a sence in "NIKITA" that he wears nothing but black boxer briefs holding a gun! HOT!

Oh no!!!

My god,I wish I skipped this chapter (Don't worry hon,I read your warning. My curiousty got the better of me lol) I bet its Brian who was asking at the end ~ Vonnie xx

chris and ethan...ugh! ~ Vonnie xx

I effing love this!!!!

Author's Response:

Good!!!!! :)

Happy to hear that!! :)

:)

I am gonna enjoy this alot,I can tell. Great start ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

i really hope you do!! :)

Great story! Just seeing Justin kicking someone ass :-). I would love to read sequel!

Author's Response:

working on it! :)

i hope it would be loved as this one! :)

Congratulations on the Blue Ribbon it is so well deserved. This story is going in my favourites. Now you said you might continue the story as Justin goes on a mission while trying to maintain a normal lifestyle, when can we have that, because I love the idea? Soon pleeease.


Cheers

Author's Response:

I just started to think about ideas for the story and i just came up with a great one!... So... In a few days i hope :)

I started to write three new stories lol :) so the sequel would be number 4!

Thank you for loving my story so much! :) 

Xoxoxo

Michal

Very nice ending!  I was sort of said to see that it was "completed," I was really enjoying the fic and wished it would go on a little longer.  Not complaining, just whining!

Very enjoyable - well done!  Looking forward to your next fic!

All the best,

Laura

lol  loved the ending. Thanks for sharing this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it! :)

Got a chance to catch up to this fic.  Enjoying the Justin-hero tweak of the story and how he's off to save Brian.

Looking forward to reading more.

All the best!

PS: The gory chapter wasn't too bad; I just hate ready/watching torture but that chapter wasn't extreme.  Glad to still be on-board with this fic.  I really like its uniqueness.

Love it!

No worries. I think he has some worries. Love certainly seems to have gotten him and Brian in a precarious situation. Please update as soon as possible as I can’t wait to see the dynamo go into action.


Cheers

Author's Response:

I read all your reviews and thank so so much! I'm so moved and happy that you liked my story... I'm kinda shy and to read that kind of feedback it's just warm my heart! Thank you so much i appreciat this more than you'll ever know :)

OMG it was Brian. Stupid Brian and stupid woman that helped him out. Why are all women with information in fics foolish? I want the next one to be male please. LOL

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Thank you for the warning as this isn’t my sort of chapter but that is their lifestyle so it had to come into it somewhere. I will read on to try and get it out of my head.


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I’m glad the men got a little romantic action as I think the type of action Michelle has planned for Justin will be very different. I assume she will try and entice Justin to the dark side again. Thank you for another fine chapter.


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"you lost him." Jennifier is going to be my favourite if she keeps coming up with lines like this. LOL Michelle wanting to kill Brian; that could be unfortunate for the story line but I am sure Justin will save him. I hope he doesn’t have to kill Michelle to stop her. I’ll continue to the next chapter hopefully finding more wonderful twists. Thanks again.

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Jennifier said “Can I be the one who tells him?” ROFLMAO that was so not expected. Debbie saves Michael from Justin’s death scenario. Even Brian might be in for a little toxic Justin or maybe the chair got the worst of it. Great Chapter thanks.

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What an exciting story this is, so many twists and turns. I love the image of Justin looking like a ham. I bet he knows his way around a knot and could free himself if he had to. I can't wait to find out where Justin is being taken to and who this worst enemy will be.
Lori

Author's Response:

thank you!! :) you'll fing out soon :)

So...that whole year of "choice"...there really was no choice in the matter? Then what was the point of  letting them go for a year? And now Justin s going to die horribly...who know s where Brian's been taken... This is turning into a bit of a downer...

Author's Response:

you really think that's how this going to end? come on give me a little cradit :)

Yikes!  Well, amazing how our government is using our tax money.  LOL!  But seriously, enjoying the twists and turns.

All the best!

Laura

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! :)

Now that's some good fictional action. I can give up my quest for blood and guts now. I'll go back to baking cookies and protection the wildlife. You did a beautiful job on Ethan. I think the fear and anticipation Chris had to face was thrilling too. He wasn't as attached to his body parts as that rat bastard Ethan was. How is Justin going to talk his way out of the mess he's in now? I can only hope there is one more killing to take place.
Lori~ off to lead a life of peace and harmony and sugar cookies

Author's Response:

I was so nurves you were going to be disapointed!! I'm so happy you liked it!!! :) yay!!

Hmmm... I'm not really into graphic, violent fanfic.  I hope this doesn't go in that direction, but if it does, I'll have to drop-off.  I'm not judging, throwing shade, or anything, it's just not my thing.  To each his/her own, right?

This is a very enjoyable, interesting fic and I've done a wonderful job with it.

All the best!

Author's Response:

You'll just need to skip the next chap :) it's very grafic.... But after that one there's no grafic violent just some gun shots... If that :)

if you like you can just skip the next one... "Chapter nine" it would be ok :)

 

And thank you for your compliments :)

Well, the perfect set up for some killing action. Can Justin kill all 3 and make it back to Brian in time for some serious cuddle time? The visual of both men screaming thru duct tape is nice! I hope it's the real sticky kind that hurts when it's pulled off. Oh, maybe some of that rat fur on Ethan's chin will be ripped out by the roots. Better than shaving with a rusty razor.
Lori

Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying it! :)

stay tuned... the next two episode would be very bloody! :)

Very interesting.  Is the guys child molesters?  

Author's Response:

i think you'll have to wait and see ;)

Exciting story!  Wow, Brian's in for quite a surprise!  Can't wait for your update!

All the best!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I'm confused as to how Michelle could just kill Brian.  I thought they only killed evil people?

In any case, I'm loving this story.

Author's Response:

to michelle brian was evil...  he was the reason justin won't come back with her :)

she would kill a school full of children to get justin back :)

she dosent feel anything.... all the pepole in this unit are cold blooderd killers they don't feel anything, justin is diffrent.

all of the other agents kill according to the missions they are given and it does not matter to them who they should eliminate.

Justin and Michelle were so disciplined that the administration gave them an option to choose who they want to kill ... Justin select the bad guys .. Michelle doesnt really care who murdered ... The main thing is murder.

wait...i thought they only killed rapists and drug lords and evil assholes not regular assholes like Brian. Sure, he s a dick but he's not an evil dick.  You know? Why are they suddenly talking about killing as to solve a simple problem?

Anyway, didn't really know what else to say...I like the story as a whole and hope more comes soon. Interesting to think that Jen might have been a "fake"

Author's Response:

to michelle if he stands beteen her and justin... he's the bigesst problem of all :)

I'm enjoying this very much.  Can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response:

thank you!!!! :) it's pnly gonna get better.... some brian/justin action is a most :)!

Ciesze sie ze dalej piszesz, bo bardzo fajnie ci to wychodzi. Watek ktory stworzyles jest bardzo fajny i nie moge sie doczekac co bedzie dalej. Pozdrawiam.

Hi Michal, I really like this story and you left it in quite a cliff-hanger there. I imagine that was Michelle that said "happy birthday blue" so I wonder what Brian's reaction is going to be. You're doing a great job : )~*~ Hugs, Janet

Author's Response:

thank you soo soo much :)

Hi, Michal! I'm not sure if I missed something regarding Jennifer; in the snyopsis you mentioned that Justin's mother died at birth - is Jennifer NOT his mother, then?  I may have overlooked something there.

 

I just wanted again to volunteer my services to you if you want some help.  I think you're very brave to post in another language, but there are some times where it's hard to follow due to an incorrect word being used, etc.  Also, maybe put some quotation marks around the conversations and other punctuation?  I would need for you to email me with what you want me to do, though, if you would like some assistance.  

 

In either case, thanks for updating so quickly!  I'm not so sure I will be able to handle a lot of violence in this - it's hard for me to picture Justin as such a mean, hard-hearted assassin, I guess - but your story is certainly unique!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

hi! :) anything you want to do to make my story better would be a belessing! :) 

i have five chapters ready... i wolde love for you also to tell me what you think before i'll posed them :) and of corse.. corrent my horrible english lol :)

can you send me an email? :) i don'w know where to get your email adress :)

my adress : michal2626@hotmail.com

 

about jennifer... in chapter 2 (birthday boy) we find out she's nothing but his cover :) the unit paid her and craig to give justin a normal life for a year :)

 

xoxoxo!

17 years of training to be the best assassin/killer. I just can't believe Justin was "allowed" to feel emotions. I would think Justin's life was a bit like Jarod in "Pretender" or more of "Nikita".

I would love to see Justin put Michael in his place by humiliating him for everyone to see. What can he lose by defending himself ? Brian made it clear that he doesn't want him like Justin would love to. So Justin has no excuse to tolerate Michael anymore. I'd say : "Go Justin and have fun by making Michael miserable !"

I'm also curious of how will Justin deal with Brian during the party. I don't think Justin will ever show violence even less if Gus is in the room. But Justin could pretend he doesn't give a f*ck about Brian anymore. Well, there's a chance Justin will decide to go back to "The Agency".

I'll be there for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

the diffrence is that jusitn unit is all about choice.. if he choose that life than you a comided. if you choose a normal life they'll free you :) (well exept if your as good as justin is :))

justin emotions came with his new life :) he had to feel.. when i'll get to the fleshback of the start of his "free year" you will learn that it's more of an acting job he got sucked in... he's such a good liar and that he made even himself belive that he's the inoccent little justin.

and in chapter 3 you'll find out why he can't do what he wants to do...like killing michael :)

 

thanks you so much for your review! :)

So, the cute little assassin is having a hard time making up his mind? I have been waiting for a story where there is some good old fictional murder and I hope I just might get my wish with this story...It's my lifelong dream for Ethan to get killed in a gruesome way with body parts all over the place. I sure hope if he shows up in this story Justin will be forced to use his training to do him in.

I think this story is great, please don't let nameless reviewers bother you. I think it's amazing that you are so dedicated to this story that you are willing to share it with us, in a language that is not your native tongue. I can overlook a few mishaps with our crazy language. I know I would not be able to leave a review for you in your language that made sense at all so until I can communicate in all languages perfect I would never begin to judge anyone else. Please keep writing, I want to see some blood and guts, of the fictional kind, of course!
Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you soo much lori :) it will get bloody but it would take a little while.... after all justin havent decited what to do yet... But killing ethan is a really good idea the problom is that he's too inoccent to hit by an assaent lol :) but i'll fighre it out :) maybe he'll pissed justin off and he'll kill him just for fun :)

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Author's Response:

Thanks! How did you that?? Lol :)

What a good story scenario. Considering English is not your first language you did well.  It's hard to think in one language and write in another-believe me I know.  Went through the same process years ago. Polish to English is really hard.  So keep on trying and it will get better I promise.  Don't and I repeat don't give up.  I will be waiting for more from you.

Author's Response:

thank you so much!!! Thanks for the encouragement!

i'll try not to give up i'm really shy abput my stories so it's a struggle and of course the english :)

and again thank you!!

 

Welcome to our wonderful world. I think you'll fit in very nice. This story is starting off with a bang, I can tell I'm hooked. I can't wait to see where it takes us.
Lori

Author's Response:

really?? you don't think it's hard to understand me?  lol :)

story is sort of jumbled and english verbs out of whack here and there.  your tenses are not correct, but i think the story is good and could be better if these things were improved.  hope you are not upset-trying for positive help.

Author's Response:

upset? no :) grateful... it's hard for me to sound "right" you know? :)

i wish i could get some help... becasue when i think in english it's fine... but when i try to wirte it it's very hard for me...

thanks for telling me! :)

i'll be deleting the story... and just reading from now on :)

anyway...i think my photo turn out incredible lol :)