Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: Fly Away

Loose ends?? I still want to see Justin kick Glenny hinie.....

Author's Response:

Hi Reader, Haha, I'll see what I can do to help that along : ) Thank you for reviewing ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 10: Fly Away

i definitely won't mind this chugging along for a bit longer just as long as Glen gets destroyed and Brian&Justin live happily ever after forever and ever!! lol :D

Author's Response:

Hi Hannah, LOL, I think you'll be happy once this is all said and done. : D Thanks for reviewing ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2012 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Gone

Did I tell you I'm afraid of heights, get me off this cliff soon! Now if this were me, I'd say gosh, I'm going to miss Molly but no way am I giving up Brian for a sister, but then I guess Molly night be a tad bit better than my sister. I'm sure Justin will do what ever it takes to save Molly from the handsome evil Glen. I hope poor Brian doesn't get another ugly bruise in the process. Hey, lets let Michael fight it out this time. He can take few punches. Great Chapter, but I don't see how this can be over in just one more chapter.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hey Lori, Ha- you always make me laugh with your reviews, I don't have a sister, so I don't know if Molly would be better or not. I think the last chapter is going to be pretty long, who knows I may have to break it into two parts, haha. LOL, poor Mikey ( shakes head) Thanks for the review ~*~ Hugs, Janet 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 9: Gone

Here I am thinking I'm the Queen Bitch of the Evil Cliffhanger and then I go and read this. I now must bow down at the feet of the master - you are truly more evil than I. You're seriously going to leave us with poor little Molly in the clutches of the sadistic Glen who's already threatened to kill her and Justin on the verge of running off to nobly, but stupidly, sacrifice himself for his sister? You're an evil genius! LMFAO! I can't wait to read the resolution. Way to go cliffhanger master! TAG

Author's Response:

ROTF- Oh Tag, haha. Awww, thank you for that, You just made my day, so funny : D  How about we share the title : )  You're right, Justin will try to save his sister by himself, but Brian will also call in a favor from an old friend once he finds out what Justin has done. A few things will be revealed in the last chapter that, I think, will be a little surprising. From one cliffhanger master to another, Thank You so much for this review, I'm still laughing! ~*~ Hugs, Janet   

Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2012 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 9: Gone

Good chapter.  A little angst never hurt anyone.  Dispite the warning from Glen, Jus better tell Brian. 

Author's Response:

Hi Linda, Brian will find out, from someone, and will ride to the rescue (so to speak, haha) : ) Thanks for the review : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 9: Gone

If Justin leaves without telling Brian, then he's a dumbass.  Seriously - a dumbass.  Now that Glen has kidnapped a child and taken her across state lines, it's a federal case and by law the FBI must be contacted.  I hope Justin does the right thing or should I say, things.

I hope someone beats the crap out of Glen, that would be lovely to read.  I hate a abusers!  Maybe I'm getting into this story a bit too much.  LOL.

Very engaging fic.  All the best!

Author's Response:

Hi Laura, Hmmm, you've given me a few things to think about and don't worry about getting into the story too much, I like that, haha. : ) Thanks for reviewing : )

~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 9: Gone

No!  Just one more chapter?  Ugh!  I hope I'm No. 100, but I will have to see!  I knew you told me I had guessed correctly before about Molly, but it's still exciting story writing!  Looking forward to the conclusion, Janet, but sad to see it end!  Brian to the rescue!  Loved the part, BTW, about Brian buying Molly the backpack; I wonder if it will have any significance in finding her.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, Nope, you're # 103, but hey thats ok : ) I know, I'm kind of sad to see it end too, who knows I may just have to stretch the last chapter out a bit, haha. Actually, I really need to get back to "Beyond the Wyoming Skies" again, I've kind of left the guys in limbo there. I'm not sure about using the back pack, that was kind of a last minute addition that was added this morning. If you want to know what happens let me know and I'll email you : ) thanks for reviewing my friend ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Gone

I hope Justin find a way to get to Molly. 

Great chapter, looking forward for the final chapter. 

Author's Response:

Hi Lynn, you, my friend are my 100th reviewer, Congratulations and thank you : ) Not to worry, I have a feeling both Justin and Molly will come out of this unscathed. Thanks again for the review ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Out of Time

Fun in the shower; you tease again it was so short. LOL Okay I have started my deep breathing exercises I won’t panic; being married does mean Justin has to live with him or even see him but it does pose the problem of Justin’s income being shared. Where’s Ted we will need his magic here? I hope that was Justin calling Brian’s name as someone will need to drag him off the slimeball because Carl can only help so much in a homicide. This is great writing very entertaining. Thank you.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi Flossee, you'll find out more about the married thing in the next chapter, as well as a bit of a surprise on Justin's part when he sees Glen. You'll also find out who yelled Brian's name in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Out of Time

I hope Justin get to Brian in time. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Hi Lynn, Thanks so much and Thank you for the review too : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: pfodge (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 7: Out of Time

Umm where is the rest? You're not leaving us here hanging are you? This was a great chapter, but please update it soon, like NOW!!! :) 

There really wasn't anything wrong with this chapter, other than that mean, evil cliffhanger, which you're going to rectify soon right? Great Job!!!

 

Author's Response:

Hi : ) LOL, I know, that cliffhanger was a mean thing to do, and Yes, I promise to rectify that as soon as I can. I'm glad you liked it and thank you so much for reviewing ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Out of Time

Another great, albeit horrifying and aggravating, cliffhanger! Help. Next chapter please. TAG

Author's Response:

Hi Tag, Ha- I'll up date as soon as I can. ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 7: Out of Time

Oh, no that was just evil, Janet!  I was just getting sucked into this chapter and now you pulled the rug out from under me - LOL!  Lots of things I really liked about this chapter, actually; some intrigue, some surprises (Married?  Has Glen paid someone to forge documents perhaps?).  Justin's appetite and Cynthia playing along with him.  Brian's surprising refusal to take Glen up on his offer because he's trying to be faithful to Justin.  And, of course, his reaction of aggression toward Glen when he finds out who he is.  Love it!  Of course, now you'll have to update even faster!  Looking forward eagerly to the next part (especially after THAT cliffhanger!).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hey Kim, Ha- I know, that was a mean thing to do, wasn't it (evil laughter). So have you guessed who it was that yelled out Brian's name? LOL, don't answer that, I'll email you in a bit. I'll try to up date soon, I haven't started the next chapter yet. ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 7: Out of Time

OH NO, you sure know how to write a cliff hanger don't you. First of all I have to say how much I appreciate all the tiny details you add, like even the color of the thread on the towel. I can only hope Glen will soon be using those wonderful fluffy towels to wipe the blood off his now mangled face. I hope the bellhop has to roll him to his room on a luggage rack because all his limbs are broken. I'm sure any hospital will refuse to treat him once they know why he needed to be demolished. Dang, here I was hoping my violent inner beast had been calmed by the other current story but I can see you and your magic ways with the ABC's has got me craving more carnage. And another thing, now I want a Cinnabon. Great Chapter, sooooo, who yelled out BRIAN....
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi Lori, well get that violent inner beast back in its cage, there are innocent people here, haha. Thanks so much for the review, they keep me laughing. BTW, I really enjoy our back and forth emails as well and if you got the last one, you already know who yelled out Brian' name : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: Come Apart

CRAIG!!!!  I knew it! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My sincerest hope that yu will make him PAY!!

Author's Response:

Oh, Ha- I'll see what I can do ; ) Thanks for reviewing~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 6: Tall Dark Angry Stranger

Can't wait for Brian to meet Glen.

Author's Response:

Hi reader, Ha- I can't either! Thanks for reviewing : ) ~*~ Janet

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2012 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Tall Dark Angry Stranger

I hope Jennifer will tell Brian she thinks she had seen Glen. I know she can't go to Justin because it would really scared him. But telling Brian would allow him to protect Justin and be carefull. What would be the benefit to Jennifer seeing Glen if she doesn't do nothing about it before Glen hurt Justin again.

Did Brian made his research on Glen? I think he would make sure Glen never find Justin again. But I understand Brian is very busy with his job and Justin.

Author's Response:

Hi : ) She'll try, but there's going to be a few things standing in her way. You'll find out what in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 6: Tall Dark Angry Stranger

Dream on Glen, you will not be living out those sick thoughts. Brian will do more than just reject you...unless he has no idea who this hot hunky new guy is...OH NO...that could be very bad if Glen managed to wiggle his evil penis anywhere near Brian and Brain only noticed how good looking he was. Quick Justin draw him a picture of the bastard who tormented you so he will know who/what to look out for. I hope Jennifer has her wits about her and warns Justin of what she saw. I am a wreck over this story. I can't wait for the confrontation to begin but I'm afraid of who is going to end up with the least amount of wounds. Since Michael is being so sweet in this story I can't offer him up as a target for stray bullets or angry blows from clubs. Maybe Molly could run in and take a few hits, I would like to see Brian retain his beautiful looks and pretty nose.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi Lori, LOL, you have part of it right, but I won't tell you which part (I know, I'm mean, haha). You'll find out what happens in the next chapter, which I'm working on and will hopefully be up next Friday. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. ~*~ Hugs, Janet

Reviewer: I_M73 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 6: Tall Dark Angry Stranger

YUP, A LITTLE DIFFERENT, BUT GREAT ALL THE SAME.  LOVE THIS STORY.  THE MEET SHOULD BE VERY INTERESTING.:)

Author's Response:

Ah ha, so you noticed the difference, it's not much but it's there. The meeting between Glen, Brian and Justin will come up in the next chapter. I'll post it over there as well as here. Thanks for reviewing, Linda, it really means a lot to me. ~*~ Hugs, Janet