Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For THREE DOWN
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2019 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2019 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is exactly the wedding they will have. Just the two of them. And two Looongh weeks 😉

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

<3 Plausible, in character, sexy one-shot. Brian and Justin are soulmates, together in every time and every universe, no matter the trials and tribulations to reach that point. Brian's right, love is not enough to describe how they feel about each other.

Thank you for this delightful story.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awww so adorable...I just love how you write them together

Reviewer: bergergrey (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

it's so good to see that there's a new story of you. Even if it's just a (very) small one.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

That's totally sweet... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was wonderful. not long but so much feeling.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm gald you enjoyed it.

 

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wishing for more...

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

You packed a lot of punch in this short story!

 

 She never saw further than the big brown eyes and the dutiful, obedient son. 

I never got why Michael was chosen.  Because he was Brian was his best friend, wouldn’t that  be why Melanie would not have chosen him. He was also said to be immature and not smart academically. I always wondered why not Ted at least.

…before life and baseball bats taught him a different reality and changed his perceptions forever.

 Looking back now, Justin finds it a constant source of amazement that he and Brian had survived…

 …demanding Brian’s attention because he was the only safe rock Justin had to cling to in a world that had suddenly become alien and hostile.   And he’d been so fucking young …

(That entire paragraph was amazing) I thought it was obvious to the rest of the gang that Justin was altered after the bashing, that he was more insecure and just a teenager.  He was so young to be dealing with all the problems and to recovering mentally from the bashing.  And Brian was too insecure to give him the reassurance he needed.  Yet Justin is the villain in leaving Brian for Ethan instead of being young and insecure. They both screwed that part of their relationship up. That they survived Ethan, and so much more, showed how much they were meant to be together and how much stronger the relationship was for it.

Justin had simply needed to know that he owned a special place in Brian’s heart where no trick, no Michael or Lindsay or even Gus was allowed.

That’s it. That makes so much sense. Justin had to have wondered what place he had in Brian’s life other that a convenient fuck and what was his importance compared to the others.

So how come you still find it so hard to say the same thing to me?”

Another thing I always wondered. How did Michael and the rest of the gang perceive Justin’s importance in Brian’s life if he never said those words to Justin in public or showed the same affection as he had with Michael and the rest of his gang? No wonder the gang had their doubts. How could Justin not have them too? 

…but I saw the expression on your face when I accepted and I couldn’t get it out of my head that I’d taken you by surprise when I said yes, and that you’d just realised what you’d let yourself in for.”

“I meant it,” Brian said soberly.  “Every word.  And I did want it, Justin.”

I never got that whole let’s call the wedding off. I guess what you explained makes a lot of sense, but Brian would have gladly gone along with it in my book too.

Can’t live without it? 

That was more romantic than saying “I love you”.  Justin is the air he breathes or rather he can’t live without him.

Beautiful!!!

I glad I got to go back to review more of this while I was more alert.

Sandra

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this as it is exactly how I feel. Both men put each other through different ordeals; Justin was very young and knew nothing about relationships; Brian would openly tell Michael he loved him, always have, always will; really bugged me when he gave so little to Justin. I did however liked how you explained that with; I love the Armani spring collection, fucking, winning a new account. I really liked how Brian didn’t have a word to describe how he felt about Justin because they all seem too trivial. Can’t live without it? Six letters. OMG how romantic.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I always feel a great deal of sympathy for Justin's youth: I remember my own early attempts at relationships and how confusing and frustrating it all was.  Let's face it, Brian would have been a daunting prospect for even the most experienced lover!  They learnt together and grew up together, and in my BJ universe they stuck it out together.  I personally don't think you have to be mushy to be romantic.

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice glimpse into the future for the boys.  Good job.

- Jackie

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was so happy seeing a new story from you! I so loved The Great Divide and Running (which I've read twice), so it was quite thrilling to see something new form you. Sadly, it wasn't the sequel to Running that I've been dreaming about... :) regardless, I loved this story very much. It was romantic in an understated way that was very IC. Wonderful story, gorgeously written!

Cheers,

Vin

P.S. Now....about that sequel? LOL!



Author's Response:

I know, I know.  I kept promising myself I'd get a hard-drive to back everything up on, but I'd never had a problem until my lap-top committed suicide.  Then, of course, it was too late - not only for the fics I was working on but for all the bookmarks I'd gathered. I swear I just lay on the sofa and grieved for a week.  I'm not good at all this technical stuff and I totally HATE trying to get the hang of this new lap-top, which is why this story was only a very short trial effort.

I'm sure I'll remember enough of Running II to resurrect it: I just need my confidence back!  And I won't make the same mistake again.

Anyway, thanks as always for taking the time to comment.

Meg

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sweet story. Now you need to write about the honeymoon.

Author's Response:

It's a possibility! : )))

Reviewer: daphne (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2012 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey!  And here I was checking over at fanfic every weekend to see if there has been a sequel to "Running" posted, and you snuck this one in on me.  This was such a wonderful read.  In your ficlet they have such a "grownup" relationship and I can see them having.  Well done, sweetie!!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately the 'Running' sequal was one of the WIP's that I lost (see comment below), and I was so depressed it took me a while to start writing again.  I had about 4 stories I was working on - including a Hallowe'en fic - and I have to find the enthusiasm to resurrect them.  I'll get there, though.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice story but i don't feel like that can really be the end. I'm left with a feeling of wanting more.
Lori

Author's Response:

I know it wasn't very long ... my lap-top died and I lost a lot of stuff I was working on so this was just a trial to see if I remembered how to post.  Could be more ...

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh I loved the ease of this fic, how they just soldier on together. I loved their unity

Author's Response:

Just felt like a little bit of Sunshine for a change!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)

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