Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2015 11:52 AM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

So I've been reading this story till 2:30 am last night, I can't resist to stop reading a good story if it's not too long, so I usually end up staying that late because of it. Anyway, I absolutely loved it! I really enjoyed the OOC Justin, there was enough drama for the story to not be boring, but not too much to make me cry. And it was hot, too. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Dear Astrid,

It's so great to know that I'm contributing to your insomnia!  LOL!  No, really, thanks for the kind words.  This one was fun to write, imagining Justin in a different situation.  I prefer to write with enough drama to keep it interesting, but try not to make the drama the complete focus of a good story.  

Thanks again,

- Jackie Mag

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 11:09 AM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

I've just spent the last couple of hours reading this whole story and I just had to tell you that I think it's amazing!! It was sweet and hot! Thanks for sharing your talent! HUGS! Cindy

PS ... I would LOVE reading more of their love story from Justin! :-)

Author's Response:

Dear TrinTiff,

I'm glad that you enjoyed the read.  I, personally, look to read only stories that are complete, unless it's an author that I KNOW will finish the story. 

Please read my other stories.  As for Justin writing further on this story line...  hmmm... I was thinking maybe it's Brian's turn to narrate.   :)

Thanks, Cindy,

- Jackie

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 03:49 PM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

I love your story, each chapter just got better and better, a follow up story sounds ideal to me.

Author's Response:

Dear vlsope2,

Thanks for the nice review.  Yes, it might be good to do a follow up.  Someone suggested that I do it from Brian's point of view next time.  Hmmmm....

Thanks again,

- Jackie

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 01:52 AM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

I sooooo enjoyed reading this!  Too bad the show couldn't be a happier experience for the characters.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

All the best,

Laura

Author's Response:

Dear Laura,

Thanks for the positive comments.  It was my pleasure to share it with you.

Jackie

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Chapter Four – Giving it Up

This really a great story.

Author's Response:

Dear galenut,

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you like it.

Jackie

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 09:27 AM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

Very sweet story! I liked the way you took parts of what happened in the show, too, and made it fresh.  Thanks for sharing this story with us.  *Hugs* 

Author's Response:

Dear Kim,

I always like to incorporate parts of the show, if I can.  Although I hate the fact that the bombing of Babylon occurred, it DOES add something to the story line. 

Thanks for the positive comments,

Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 06:40 AM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

I enjoyed this so much I had to check out the movie you mentioned. I enjoyed that too. Thanks for suggesting a good movie.
Lori

Author's Response:

Dear Kim,

I was pleasantly surprised at the movie "Boy Culture".  I'm glad you enjoyed it, too.  X is hot!

Thanks for the positive comments,

Jackie

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2012 01:41 AM · On: Chapter Six – Holding On

Incredible chapter ~ Vonnie xx

Author's Response:

Dear Vonnie,

Thanks for the review/comments.

Jackie

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2012 12:23 AM · On: Chapter Four – Giving it Up

:)

Author's Response:

;)  (wink)

Jackie

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2012 11:34 PM · On: Chapter Two – To Catch a Killer

Incredible sex!

Author's Response:

Vonnie,

It's always fun to imagine new and interesting ways.....

Jackie

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Chapter One – Out on my own

This sounds incredible!!!

Author's Response:

Vonnie,

I'm glad it captured your attention.

Jackie

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

I loved reading your story. It was easy to read, nice plot, OOC but it did not bother me because it matched your story.
Totally the kind of fic I needeed.
Thank you.

Author's Response:

Dear pacagirl,

It's so cool to hear that it was 'the kind of fic' you needed.  I know how that goes.  Sometimes we get in a mood and the only thing that works to appease us is a good story.  I'm glad that this one worked for you.  Thanks for the great comments.

Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

The perfect ending. Thank you so much for this story. Loved it!
Lori

Author's Response:

Dear Lori,

It's great that you liked the ending.  It doesn't always have to be marriage or running off to New York together.  A solid partnership is important.

Thanks again,

Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Chapter Six – Holding On

Yes! something wonderful is starting. These things do take time. I like the way you are using cannon bits in new ways to make a wonderful fresh story.
Lori

Author's Response:

Dear Lori,

I always fun to incorporate parts of the show, if I can.  It's familiar that way, but different at the same time.

Thanks for the positive comments,

Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Chapter Four – Giving it Up

Ok, now I feel much better. If Brian wants a cup of high priced coffee he better just act like a man a ask Justin out on a date!
Lori

Author's Response:

Lori,

He drinks too much coffee, anyway.  Right?  Glad you feel better.

Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:33 PM · On: Chapter Two – To Catch a Killer

I hope a relationship starts and Brian doesn't have to keep paying for it. Justin needs time to work on his art...with a brush and paint....
Lori

Author's Response:

Dear Lori,

Justin will find a way to be able to concentrate on his art.  Brian will get by.....

Jackie

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter Three – Strictly Business

Aww! I was expecting maybe a jeaous Brian to emerge...too bad....ahhh well, glad he moved in with Deb+Co. But will they  want to live with a hustler lifestyle?

 

Author's Response:

Dear Bryton4ever71,

Deb sees all kinds in her Diner and she knows how some 'kids' have to live.  Brian asked Justin if he'd ever taken a john home, but Justin doesn't do that.  That was Brian's test to see if Justin would line up with Deb and Co.  I have written Brian jealous in the past, but, no, not this time around. Thanks for the comments.

Jackie

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 10:27 AM · On: Chapter Eight – Trying New Things

I love the movie Boy Culture. This story was really good. You combined the movie and shoe very well.

Author's Response:

Dear wellreadbunny,

Yeah, "Boy Culture" was a great movie.  It got me inspired to do a take on it.  Actually, the line "when you're ready, you'll give yourself to me" was what really got me interested.

Thanks for the review!

Jackie

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter One – Out on my own

Interesting first chapter! I love the premise.

Author's Response:

Dear no sleep,

Thanks.  It's fun to get inspired by movies.  I'm not taking from the movie so much as being inspired by some elements of it.  Thanks for wriiting!

Jackie