Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Life as we know it
Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2015 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

A friend of mine recently moved from Scotland to Wales and she is loving it, hope you're enjoying Wales too :D I don't read unfinished work anymore but I wanted to leave a review to let you know that I'm eagerly waiting this to be completed so I can devour it in one sitting lol! :D:D

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2015 02:50 AM · On: Prologue

Welcome aboard! There are many talented writers on this site and Many devoted readers. Just read Prologue; intriguing. Looking forward to reading the rest of chapters on line.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

Darn, just when it was getting good.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh, boy.  Hope the move to Wales is an easy one.  Look forward to future chapters.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 4

Who would have thought that Brian would get a pat on the cheek?  Things are looking up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

Finally he meets Brian.  It looks like Justin's new digs are near Brian's loft, unless I'm mistaken.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Love this.  Glad to see that Justin is sensable and has meet Emmett.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

So Justin is alone, except for Daphne and justice was finally meted out to Hobbs.  He could go to New York with Daphne since he has no one left to stay for, but he's going to meet Brian I expect and we learn if things run the way they do in the series or if you've got more surprises for us.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 11:10 PM · On: Prologue

I'm glad to see that there is no bashing in this version.  I see you started this in 2012 and am glad to see you're working on it.

Reviewer: fanof qaf (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2014 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

please continue your story, the plot is really interesting.

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 6

im enjoying the story update soon   kim

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 09:36 AM · On: Prologue

if there is anything I can tell you about QAF fandom is...if it's good and worth w  reading, then we will wait almost forever....so you get yourself settled first, we will all be waiting.  This has amazing promise - keep mup the good work!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oooooh! Justin turned Brian down the first time. That should definitely change things. Next chapter, please! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Actually, I like this start, even if it's sad for Justin, because he gets to start off with Brian with a clean/blank slate. Less interference from disapproving parents. It might make things a bit easier? Maybe. Can't wait to see. Off to chapter 2. TAG

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great job. I'm realyy liking this story.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

I can see I am going to like this Justin. Great retort at the bar. I love that you are updating this so frequently. Thank you.

Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

Well, at least they have been introduced, now lets see how they find each other...I really am hooked on this story.
Lori

Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2012 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 4

ooh i'm really liking the premise of this story! great work, looking forward to the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. ksij x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love how you write as it is straight to the point and no over explaining everything. However, when it comes to certain scenes feel free to over explain. LOL

Cheers

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. i feel when i am writing i have so many ideas that i want to include and tend to rush things out. but it also means the story doesnt take forever to read or write lol. And 'those' type of scenes when i eventually get round to it will definately have more detail.ksij x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

So much responsibility for a teenager. I like the way this chapter progressed as with meeting Emmett we know he is good hands once Daphne leaves for New York.

Cheers

Author's Response: Hi yes i didnt want to leave him completely friendless in life, although i am sure there are other schoolfriends in his life that were not included in the actual series ksij x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice set up of Justin’s life and how it has now changed so dramatically, in very sad circumstances.

Cheers

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. ksij x

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Prologue

I like the start. I’ve always liked Daphne and Justin’s friendship.

Cheers

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great first chapters. Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. ksij x

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great first chapters. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

hey great story sad but goog  update soon kim



Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. ksij x

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

And now it gets good.... so all the players are in place, let the fun begin.
Lori

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. ksij x

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 2

Good, Emmett is a wonderful way to be introduced to Liberty Ave. Who will he meet next...does his name start with BBBBBBBBBB
Lori

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. I love Emmett, i think everyone should have an Emmett in their lives ksij x

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my, that's a horrible way to do in the family. Did Chris mean to do it or was it a freaky accident? Makes the baseball bat seem like a love tap.
Lori

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. It was a freaky accident. I didnt want to do the bashing but still felt he needed included somewhere ksij x

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:07 PM · On: Prologue

Sounds interesting.
Lori

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice start - intriguing new use of cannon characters in a very AU situation

youve peaked my interest - looking forward to seeing what your muse has in mind

Charle



Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading my story and taking the time to leave a review. my muse is going a little crazy at the moment, so many ideas and not enough story ksij x

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Prologue

:)

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