Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2019 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 11

Love it

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow! That was an emotional rollercoaster. Good story! Can't wait for the next installment.



Author's Response: Thank you! Next part of the series, City of Dreams, will start posting soon, and will be much darker for the most part.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 10

"We've come such a long way since then; no more apologies or regrets."

I loved the conversation with Melanie. She's usually portrayed as the reasonable or peacemaker.

Author's Response: I don't like to be anti anyone of the major characters. They all had issues and flaws, but had redeeming qualities as well. Thanks for letting me know you're reading.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 11

"Yet, Justin was hurt by Brian's reaction to the situation nonetheless."

"Someday, I will burn that fucking bag, Justin."

This was avery well written chapter. Justin's introspection about Brian's behavior was enlightening. And his way of dealing with Brian shows just how much he not only understood him but how much he knew how to help the man get through his pain.

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you. They have a very complex relationship and even after many years they are constantly learning how to deal with each other and life n general.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

I can't wait for the next installment of the series.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. The next part of the series is titled City of Dreams and will begin posting within the next few days.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm so glad Brian was able to stop berating himself and enjoy some time with Gus. I was kind of surprised to find out that Mel was having problems convincing Lindsay to so the same.

Something tells me their canoe ride will take a momentary scary turn making Justin second guess his decision to say yes.

Can't wait for the next chapter JP

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 9

Yeeeesssss!!! Brian came to his senses after all. Going to get Gus in person for his visit will be a nice surprise for Lindsay and sonny boy. Becoming members of the mile high club is just icing on the cake ;)

Can't wait to see what happens when they get to Toronto.....update soon please JP

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

It seems things might be getting better?!/ I will take it as a good sign that Brian is going along to pick Gus up. I still don't feel confident that he's over his problems with all this but it looks like he is trying. I knew he'd find it impossible to resist Justin and all his wonderful parts.
Lori

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ok, what is up with Brian. This is just not normal behavior. He better show up, no he better be there before Gus arrives. I can't believe he would just run off, leaving Justin to make all the arrangements, not even take the time to call Gus...My god how hard is to hold a cell phone while being driven to the airport??? Has Brian been abducted by aliens? I do love the mystery of this story. It's driving me wild with anticipation.
Lori

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

That had been almost two weeks ago.

Why that little s... That man needs professional help.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 8

Is there really work in the Pitts or is Brian up to something else?......I can't wait to find out

Update soon please JP

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2012 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

I really like how assertive Justin is here. How he takes charge of Brian so forcefully. Okay, my only complaint is that your chapters are too short. LOL. More please. TAG

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

I think you've done a fine job of showing how much Brian has grown, while still making it very clear how troubled he is by this. He is a mess but he's not turning to the usual drug/alcohol/tricks. He is willing to listen to Justin and know that Justin wants to do what it best for all of them, but Brian will be number one.
Lori

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 7

i love their one on one conversations.  So well written.  Jus is so smart when it comes to Brian as he knows him so well, too well sometimes.  Wonderful chapter.:)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm so glad Justin was able to get Brian to realize that he didn't have to go through this difficult time by himself. Of course he knew this from the beginning he just needed to hear Justin say that he would remain loyal and wouldn't run away.

More soon please JP

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2012 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

very much enjoying this unique storyline.

Looking forward to Brian's reaction.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2012 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

Silly Brian. Does he never learn? What's the appropriate quote - Those who don't learn from their past mistakes are bound to repeat them (apologies to the original Unknown author for mangling the quote). But that's Brian for you. TAG

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

It looks like Justin has a big challenge. Good thing he's motivated and has some special talents to use. I just hope his skills work, Brian does seem pretty resistant to the usual charms.
Lori

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Now I understand.....Brian feels that if he hadn't gone to Japan instead of canceling Gus' trip in the first place it never would have happened. That's why he thinks it's his fault.

Justin is going to have a hell of fight on his hands once he walks through that office door....for his sake I hope he is as prepared as he thinks he is.

Update soon JP

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2012 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Justin,I hope Brian somes to his senses soon.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

I think Justin shoulda maybe left Brian tied up a bit longer. And the naughty boy deserved a little spanking too. ;) 

 

TAG



Author's Response: Justin agrees right about now-lol! And that would be a whole 'nother story to tell.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

What the hell has Brian so wound up about Gus coming to visit? Why would he just walk out on Justin?.....

Can't wait to find out JP

Author's Response: There will be a little more background into the circumstances behind Gus's accident soon. Brian's got himself in drama queen guilt mode at the moment.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow, I didn't think it would end that way. What is the world is bothering Brian so much that he keeps refusing Gus this one request. Great Chapter!
Lori

Author's Response: There will be more revealed about Gus's accident soon. But Brian is also his own worst enemy sometimes.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

Terrible place to end a chapter! I'm all excited with no place else to go! Help me, please, next chapter ASAP! TAG

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

I've got chills...andcan't believe you left us hanging at this particular moment...I want more...:)

Charle

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

Ummmmm, I can't wait to see what our little sunshine has up his sleeve.

More soon please JP

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm going to call this a cliffhanger! I hope you don't leave us hanging here too long. What a great chapter.
Lori

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

;)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 3

Justin's allegiance was to Brian first, and that would never change.

I loved that line. Justin understood that Brian was hurting and internalizing his guilt over Gus.

 



Author's Response: On the show, Justin did a lot of thinking about his relationship with Brian, I'd like to think after more time together he'd be an expert on Brian behaviors.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2012 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really hope Justin can help Brian with his depression. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Justin will try his best, but Brian has really tied himself in knots over Gus's accident.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm glad Justin still knows how to read Brian. I hope he can get him thru this rough patch. At least it seems like Justin has grown up and won't run off at the first sign of trouble. That should be good for Brian. Maybe he can trust in Justin this time.
Lori

Author's Response: I think Brian does trust Justin , but sometimes with Brian things like guilt can get the better of him. Justin is still a clever devil. Thanks for commenting and reading.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

Brian is up to his old tricks again, trying to push Justin away instead of letting him in. It's a good thing Justin isn't falling for it.

More soon JP

Author's Response: Brian may have a few new tricks too, so Justin needs to stay on guard. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

Yikes, hard to imagine Brian saying no to Gus about anything. Looks like Gus isn't the only one who needs to heal from this tragedy. Will Justin have to work some of his special healing touches on Brian to get him over this?
Lori

Author's Response: Justin definitely has plans to help Brian work through his guilt. Quite elaborate plans.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting premise. Pretty sad though. Can't wait to see where you take it. TAG



Author's Response: This is a much sadder fic then I usually write. I feel bad for using poor Gus as a plot device. : (

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2012 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 2

I know Brian will do whats right.

Author's Response: He probably will....eventually...with Justin's help.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2012 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 2

I understand Brian's pain, Brian doesn't mean to an ass, he just doesn't know how to handle the situation because he feels responsible.

More soon please JP

Author's Response: Brian is almost always his own worst enemy. Justin is always persistent though.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Gus having to suffer so much.......although Brian is suffering too,he'll find a way to help his sonny boy get better and in the process rid himself of unnecessary guilt.

More soon JP

Author's Response: Brian will need to realize he doesn't need to face this alone. This should update about once a week. It's only going to be around 10,000 words or so.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

This sounds very good.
Lori

Author's Response: Thank you Lori. I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

intriguing new twist - so glad that the boys are working through this together - hope that remains - really great first chapter

Charle



Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you're checking this out. It won't be smooth sailing, but Justin knows his man-lol!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2012 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

OK another great start. I don't know if I feel sorrier for Gus or Brian.

Author's Response: They both need some serious love from their loved ones! : ( Glad you checked this one out.

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