Reviews For New York Stories: New York City Rhythm
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 10
"We've come such a long way since then; no more apologies or regrets."
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
"Yet, Justin was hurt by Brian's reaction to the situation nonetheless."
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
I can't wait for the next installment of the series.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 10
I'm so glad Brian was able to stop berating himself and enjoy some time with Gus. I was kind of surprised to find out that Mel was having problems convincing Lindsay to so the same.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 9
Yeeeesssss!!! Brian came to his senses after all. Going to get Gus in person for his visit will be a nice surprise for Lindsay and sonny boy. Becoming members of the mile high club is just icing on the cake ;)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 9
It seems things might be getting better?!/ I will take it as a good sign that Brian is going along to pick Gus up. I still don't feel confident that he's over his problems with all this but it looks like he is trying. I knew he'd find it impossible to resist Justin and all his wonderful parts.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ok, what is up with Brian. This is just not normal behavior. He better show up, no he better be there before Gus arrives. I can't believe he would just run off, leaving Justin to make all the arrangements, not even take the time to call Gus...My god how hard is to hold a cell phone while being driven to the airport??? Has Brian been abducted by aliens? I do love the mystery of this story. It's driving me wild with anticipation.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 8
Is there really work in the Pitts or is Brian up to something else?......I can't wait to find out
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2012 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
I think you've done a fine job of showing how much Brian has grown, while still making it very clear how troubled he is by this. He is a mess but he's not turning to the usual drug/alcohol/tricks. He is willing to listen to Justin and know that Justin wants to do what it best for all of them, but Brian will be number one.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm so glad Justin was able to get Brian to realize that he didn't have to go through this difficult time by himself. Of course he knew this from the beginning he just needed to hear Justin say that he would remain loyal and wouldn't run away.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2012 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 6
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2012 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
It looks like Justin has a big challenge. Good thing he's motivated and has some special talents to use. I just hope his skills work, Brian does seem pretty resistant to the usual charms.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 6
Now I understand.....Brian feels that if he hadn't gone to Japan instead of canceling Gus' trip in the first place it never would have happened. That's why he thinks it's his fault.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2012 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 5
Poor Justin,I hope Brian somes to his senses soon.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 5
What the hell has Brian so wound up about Gus coming to visit? Why would he just walk out on Justin?.....
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow, I didn't think it would end that way. What is the world is bothering Brian so much that he keeps refusing Gus this one request. Great Chapter!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 4
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ummmmm, I can't wait to see what our little sunshine has up his sleeve.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm going to call this a cliffhanger! I hope you don't leave us hanging here too long. What a great chapter.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 3
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 3
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2012 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really hope Justin can help Brian with his depression. Great chapter.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm glad Justin still knows how to read Brian. I hope he can get him thru this rough patch. At least it seems like Justin has grown up and won't run off at the first sign of trouble. That should be good for Brian. Maybe he can trust in Justin this time.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
Brian is up to his old tricks again, trying to push Justin away instead of letting him in. It's a good thing Justin isn't falling for it.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 2
Yikes, hard to imagine Brian saying no to Gus about anything. Looks like Gus isn't the only one who needs to heal from this tragedy. Will Justin have to work some of his special healing touches on Brian to get him over this?
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2012 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
I know Brian will do whats right.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2012 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 2
I understand Brian's pain, Brian doesn't mean to an ass, he just doesn't know how to handle the situation because he feels responsible.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Gus having to suffer so much.......although Brian is suffering too,he'll find a way to help his sonny boy get better and in the process rid himself of unnecessary guilt.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
This sounds very good.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2012 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
OK another great start. I don't know if I feel sorrier for Gus or Brian. |
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