Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Where Do I Begin?
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2019 02:59 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Happy tears tons of them. I loved Justin talking to the kind lady and telling her all about Brian and his relationship. Then omg Brian he just melted me. I am a puddle in my sitting room now. Incredible and beautiful work 💕💕💕



Author's Response:

This story is the one that is probably dearest to my heart because I am that little old lady in the story.  The name Hinkle is special for me.  That was my mother's maiden name.  I am thrilled that this story touched your heart.  Thank you so very much, Vicki.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 03:35 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Loved it!!    It was great that Brian came to his senses and decided that he just couldn't go on without Justin by his side!!    



Author's Response:

This is one of those stories that I hold close to my heart, because I like to think I'm that old lady who listened to Justin's story.  LOL!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Cullengirl.  And thank you so much for your lovely comment.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 05:34 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

beautiful story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Saskya.  I loved the idea of sitting at the airport and running into Justin as he's about to leave for New York City.  I know one thing, I would have shouted...'Don't do it!'  LOL!  I'm glad you enjoyed my story.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 05:59 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Hello, Grammy!
I loved every line of writing and how you sent the meeting Brian and Justin.
It would be so wonderful that Justin had actually found someone who did rethink your decision to go to New York and Brian were to the airport to propose novomante!
As I'm a big trauma episode 513, he became recurrent in my stories.
  I also wrote a fic in which Justin did not sail for New York and returns to Brian. But yours is wonderful! I'm adding as a favorite of mine.
Thank you for making my day happier!
A big hug!Fatima.
P.S: Sorry an error. I am Brazilian and I use the Google translator to write.



Author's Response:

Your comments are wonderful, Fatima.  I understood what you are saying quite well.  Thank you so very much for letting me know that you enjoyed my version of how that night ended.  I, like you, hated the way the series ended with Justin leaving, so I've written a number of stories that have changed the ending to suit us better.  This was one of my favorites to write.  I checked out your list of stories and it looks intriguing.  I seldom read anymore because I never have enough time, especially since I started writing again, but I'll have to see about finding time to read your work.   I noticed that one of your stories is about Gus.  I love to write stories like that, which includes a grown-up Gus.  I think I'll start with that  one.  Thank you again for taking time to respond to my work.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: LemurSonya (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2013 03:12 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

So beautiful..tender and sweet! 

Can i translate this fanfic to russian so that russian QaF fans could read such an amazing story too? Please...? 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely comments, LemurSonya.  I would consider it an honor, if you think my story is worthy of a translation into Russian.  Please feel free to translate any of my stories that you choose at any time.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: crazy4tv (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 06:20 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

BEAUTIFUL!!! I was NERVOUS Brian wouldn't make it in time. When he called out Justin's name I could prefectly hear him doing so from "Prom." The questions, the speech... So perfect! So romantic! Butterflies!!! I literally cried when Brian pulled out the rings. Why couldn't this have happened in the show. A show-stopping airport scene? Always my fav.

 

I liked hearing about their relationship from Justin's point of view. At some times though, I was like "Mrs. Hinkle, butt out!" 

 

I am SO happy right now! I'm SO glad I read this fic! From now on, I'm gonna pretend this happened and not what happened in the show.  

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2012 10:34 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

I just smile so much each time I read this Grammy :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox



Author's Response:

And I have to say that I smile each time I read your comments, Vonnie.  Thank you so much for writing this and letting me know what you think of the story.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 02:34 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

damn that was good.   I love this.   



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Latoya.  It is really good to hear from you.  My muse had deserted me for quite a while there while I dealt with RL issues, but she has come back full force and I love her for it.  Hope to get more work out before she goes on another vacation.  LOL!  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Such delightful fluff; thank you. So good to see you writing again!!!

Author's Response:

I do tend to get a little fluffy at times, don't I?  LOL!  But the romantic in me always urges me on when I'm writing.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Thank you very much for commenting.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

It is my pleasure, Chandrika, and I very much appreciate you commenting too.  Thank you.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 05:15 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

I'm so glad you are still writing for us!  I loved this little story and I'm glad it ended the way it did.  Just perfect!!!!  Thanks for sharing it!

 

Amy ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad too, Amy, that my muse came back to me and I have more time to write again.  I love our beautiful Britin and enjoy writing stories for them.  I'm just happy that some folks like my work.  Thank you so much for your very kind comments.  I appreciate them very much.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 02:48 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Wonderful story Grammy, thanks.

Oohhh feel sorry for mrs Hinkle ... she didn't see the wonderful end.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Don't feel too sorry for Mrs. Hinkle.  She has a vivid imagination and I think she knew exactly how their story was going to end.  The old girl knew what real love looked like when she saw it, and she could see it the second Brian and Justin saw each other.  Thank you for the lovely comments, Marny.   Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 11:25 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Nice review of the series and Justin's feelings at every turn. 

I like Brian's "vows" ...   forsaking all others, unless as a couple...

LOL

- Jackie



Author's Response:

I was wondering if anyone would catch that little bit that Brian threw in from the vows.   I'm so glad you mentioned it, Jackie.  I actually wrote it without the 'unless as a couple' part with the first draft, but the more I read it the less it felt right.  Then I realized it was more in character for Brian to add that last part.  Thank you so much for your great comments.  I enjoyed them very much.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

What a nice one.  Mrs Hinkel sounds like my gram.  She would always listen and not give advice unless she was asked.  I think we all need someone in our lives just like her.  Thank you for ths one.  It's special.



Author's Response:

Your Gram sounds like a wonderful lady.  I try very hard to model myself as a Grandmother to my two teenage Granddaughters after my Mom, who is my inspiration for Mrs, Hinkle.  I'm very glad you enjoyed my characters and the remaking of Brian and Justin's story ending.  Thank you so much for commenting, Linda.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2012 07:53 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Oh, if only it had ended like this! The way that the show actually ended was absolutely tragic.

JUSTIN AND BRIAN FOREVER!!!



Author's Response:

I agree with you completely, Charming.  But their ending sure did give a lot of writers the chance to re-create the outcome.  And it is such fun to do so.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this version.  Thank you very much for commenting.  Huge huge, Grammy

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 04:13 PM · On: Where Do I Begin?

thank you!



Author's Response:

You are most welcome.  And thank you for the comment, Orhida.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 11:49 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

I loved this story very much, Grammy.  This is the way it should have ended.  I love the idea of the old lady being a sounding board for Justin.

Wonderful job.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Jane.  All I had to do was imagine myself meeting Justin at the airport on that fateful night and the story wrote itself.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 11:48 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

I think this is the story that will kick you back into the writing demon you used to be. I think your muse has returned from her camel hunting trip and now you'll be locked in your room ruining keyboards at an alarming rate and no one will see you for weeks at a time. Just send out a call and I'll make sure a tray of food is set by your door along with the calorie count and you'll be set. I really loved this story even without a single drop of soap and not a camel with in a 100 miles. I was a tiny bit sad that Justin didn't invite Mrs. Hinkle to move in with him and become his live in Grammy, I mean doesn't every beautiful gay couple need a wonderful older woman to provide a mature side to the home? Someone to just look at them and sigh. I think Mrs. Hinkle would have been perfect. She and her cat, I just assume she has a cat, would have loved living at Britin. Sitting in the rose garden watching the birds. Maybe even floating in the pool, in a very flattering but not revealing swim suit. No thong for Mrs. H...
Great story, can't wait for more.
Huge Hugs from me and a big Nose Poke from Tadhg

Author's Response:

As expected, Lori, you have read my mind.  I think Brian and Justin need the perfect housekeeper for Britin and now that Mrs. H is a widow, it is the perfect job for her to keep herself busy and out of trouble.  Of course, she will also need to travel with the boys when they go out of town for business or pleasure in order to make sure all their needs are met.  LOL!  And look out, my muse is really revving her engine.  I already have another idea swirling around in this old gray-head of mine.  I may have to take you up on that offer for a tray of food every once in a while to keep me going...and don't forget the ice.  You know how much I'll need that for my water during this typical Texas heat wave.  Huge hugs for you and a chin scratch for Tadhg, Grammy

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 09:48 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

yup - that's what should have happened - they should always be together - and in my mind they are!

great story - very nicely done

Charle



Author's Response:

I'm with you, Charle.  I cannot imagine Brian and Justin living far apart for long.  It just isn't natural.  LOL!  Thank you so much for the lovely comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 06:58 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

You go girlfriend! :)

This is very clever!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Bob.  If I can't meet Justin (or Randy, for that matter) in real life, I can always do it in my stories.  LOL!  I'm really glad you liked it.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 05:59 AM · On: Where Do I Begin?

Oohh...so sweet, my dear!  I think the idea of having Justin converse with the older lady was very ingenious and a comfortable way for him to express his doubts over what he was doing.  I enjoyed this very much - and the snow helped me forget for just a moment that it got up to 102 degrees here today - ugh!  Thank you.:)  ~Kimberly



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Predec.  It is over a 100 degrees here too and has been for a couple of weeks.  I longed for some cool weather.  That and trying to imagine myself sitting down and having a conversation with Justin prompted this story.  I combined my age with my beloved Mom's name and both our past lives and TAA DAHHH...up popped Mrs. Hinkle!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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