Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 09:13 PM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

I like it! Thank you!    

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2012 02:24 AM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Cute Story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it. 

- Jackie

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2012 01:19 AM · On: Ch. 0 - Prologue

thank you for sharing this story

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the thank you.  I hope you read some of my other, too.

- Jackie

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Great ending.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Thanks.

- Jackie

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Very sweet. Loved how you used the journals to get to their inner feeling. Great job. TAG

Author's Response:

Dear Tag,

Thanks.  Yes, each of them had a reason for keeping their journals.  It was a fun device to know what they were thinking/feeling.

Thanks again,

- Jackie

Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

I've really enjoyed this story! It was sweet and romantic but at the same time staying true to the characters. Not to mention I loved your idea about keeping the journal and Brian rating his tricks... On the whole, I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  It's tough to let the reader 'see' inside Brian's head.  What he says does little to give him away.  I thought the journal (f'ing or not) was a good way to know what he's thinking.  In the movie "Latter Days", Christian had a PDA/journal.  That's where I got the idea.  (Christian kept names, but, as I was reminded by my beta reader, Brian doesn't care about names at all.)  Thanks for the nice review.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:54 AM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Great Story. Thanks for sharing it.
Lori

Author's Response:

Dear Lori,

Thank you so much!

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:48 AM · On: Ch. 8 - More or Wes?

Wes sure is a scum bag. I'm glad Brian got rid of him and told Justin what kind of stuff he was wanting to do. Now how long will Justin have to wait for Brian to realize that he is ready to commit to Justin, all he has to do is grow up and face facts. It's what he really wants!
Lori

Author's Response:

Wes is the name of an actor I like* and it was kinda tough 'using' him this way, but, what the heck?  Justin will get what he really wants.

- Jackie

PS:  *See the movie "Latter Days".

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:40 AM · On: Ch. 7 - Two As One

That worked out very nice. All it took was a word from Brian. I hope things don't get too messed up. Things usually don't go smooth for our boys at first.
Lori

Author's Response:

Justin was rather clueless before 'the word' from Brian.  His Brian radar isn't as good as it was.  (It'll improve).

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:31 AM · On: Ch. 6 - Beautiful

I think something is going to happen after the wedding, I hope it goes well.
Lori

Author's Response:

Good things come to those who wait.  I don't know about you, but weddings make me hot.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:24 AM · On: Ch. 5 - Those Old Feelings

I was expecting Brian to want more than just casual sex. I hope he's just too afraid to say what he really wants.
Lori

Author's Response:

It comes out later.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:18 AM · On: Ch. 4 - Toronto Connection

well, they didn't fall into bed but I guess with Lindsay standing right there and Justin having to go to work. I wonder how long it will take for something to happen.
Lori

Author's Response:

They are both 'feeling each other out' at this point.  Justin is getting over his last love lost.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:11 AM · On: Ch. 3 - Do You Ever Miss Me?

This sounds promising, I hope sparks will fly when they see each other.
Lori

Author's Response:

Always the promise of sparks.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 03:03 AM · On: Ch. 2 - Moving On

Good to know Brian isn't happy about the loss of Justin from his life. Lets hope they both work on a way to reunite.
Lori

Author's Response:

I think it tears Brian up inside.  I think that Brian first realizes he's in love with Justin at prom.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 02:58 AM · On: Ch. 1 - Bouncing Boy

Yikes, this sounds pretty grim, how can they give up on each other?
Lori

Author's Response:

The darkness before the light.

- Jackie

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2012 02:51 AM · On: Ch. 0 - Prologue

Nice little twist, can't wait to see where this goes.
Lori

Author's Response:

It's fun creating the anticipation.

- Jackie

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Beautiful story, thanks for writing.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Dear Marny,

Thanks for the nice review.  I appreciate it.   *hugs*

- Jackie

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 07:48 PM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Very enjoyable read, my friend!  I loved the witty banter back and forth between the two and the double entendres you threw in there.  One of my favorite lines was when Brian was leaving the Pitts after telling everyone he would be renting a place from Justin and Emmett said to him, "It won't be the first time you've been on top of Justin."  Ha!  Loved it!:)

And I liked the way that you made Justin into more of an independent man, willing to wait until Brian indicated his wish to be close again.  And you spoiled us by posting the entire story - wish I had that discipline!:)  Thanks for a lovely story.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks for all of the kind observations.  Yeah, sometimes Emmett's lines just write themselves, I swear.  I think it's my love for Justin's character and respect for Randy's desire for Justin to be independant - that drive me to write him that way.  Although the 'Justin as a sub' stories add to the varied landscape that is fanfiction, I have a hard time writing him that way.  I can really only see Brian being attracted to an independant Justin.

I only publish stories if they're complete.  I have to see the whole story and get all my 'ducks in a row', as it were, before I consider it complete.

Thanks again for the kind review.

- Jackie

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 06:22 PM · On: Ch. 6 - Beautiful

thank you!



Author's Response:

Dear orhida43,

You're welcome.  Glad you enjoyed.

- Jackie

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 12:26 PM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

Loved it.  I like the changes in the storyline and especially happy with the ending.  Very enjoyable!

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response:

Dear Laura,

It's always fun to 'divert' the story of the series at some point and try a different direction.  I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the kind review.

- Jackie

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 10:29 AM · On: Ch. 9 - Last Journal Entry

great story - and how refreshing to be able to reacd a story from start to finish - really liked that, too

thanks

Charle



Author's Response:

Dear Charle,

Thanks.  The last story I did, I posted in installments, but this time just decided to do all at once again.  I've been frustrated, myself, with incomplete stories on the site.

Glad you liked the story.

- Jackie

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 09:51 AM · On: Ch. 0 - Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bob!  :)

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