Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 30
Our home. Sigh. Really well done. 🥰
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 28
Yeah 💃🏻🕺🏼🥳🥳
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 27
Nooooooooo!!!!!!!! 😳😱
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 26
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 25
Noooooo.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 20
Now I'm just in a state of fear.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 18
Hobbs. He's Crazy, scary.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 16
You did this calm very well. Love and laughter. Great combo
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 14
Damn. Now I'm scared.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 13
I want it to be Michael but I'm guessing Ethan right now.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2019 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 12
Really loving this story.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2019 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 30
poor Brianand Justin
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 16
I think it's a great story. I read it again.
I like your Brian is so in love ..
Naturally I like your Justin.
I hope you'll write more. To our heart's content.
On this occasion I would like to thank all the writers here, we make life easier and more enjoyable.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2012 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 18
Damn this is good!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2012 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 26
Boy - you sure are the queen of the cliffhanger!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
I actually read this some time ago and just discovered it again. I practically stayed up all night to read it. Fabulous story!
Reviewer: Diane (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 17
I don't really have a review although I am thoroughly enjoying your story. What I want to know is what happened to poor hurt Peter?!? Did Brian just abandon him in the burning cabin??
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 30
So did either of them lose any body parts? What about the ex-marine? Did he die? Did Chris die? I feel like this is unfinished. I really enjoyed it, but there are some loose threads.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 20
Hi, I know this is a story you wrote a while ago, and you're working on Justin T JP, but I just had to drop a note to let you know that I am thoroughly enjoying the picture of Brian offended by cacophonies of colors even while fighting for his life! This is fun. I have to admit, I've stopped reading JTJP until it's finished because I can't stomach Brian crying over Michael until I'm assured of a happy ending with Justin. I'll go back to it when it says it's completed, I promise! :)
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 30
I HOPE YOU CONT TO POST YOUR STORIES.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 25
you don't need to be killed or punished,you are really doing a fine job.b/j would be proud.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 20
I am truly enjoying this story good job
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 30
OMG...... Brian lost his fingers and toes and Justin lost his leg... because of that S.O.B. Chris..... why did Brian even bother trying to save him?? he killed Peter, blew up the cabin, almost killed Gus, tried to kill Justin 3 times... I know Brian is not a killer..but.... it doesn't make sense... Brian should have left Chris in the ice..........
Author's Response: I was glad he didn't though! Chris ended up getting what he deserved! The sequel will start with the boys getting better! If that helps any! Thanks for letting me know what you think! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
Thank God for Cynthia.... at least she knows whats going on and will send some help...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 17
Too bad Psycho Chris didn't blow himself up along with the car...... I hope Brian and Justin can figure a way to get out fast....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 16
I knew that the Psycho Killer....had to be that S.O.B. Hobbs.........
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 15
I feel as if I am watching a horror movie........ with the two of them alone in the woods with a Psycho Killer.... I hope Brian knows how to use the gun...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 14
OMG... this is getting scary...... how could this Psycho sneak up on Peter...who is an ex-marine and armed... without making a sound ???
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 13
WOW.....Not only is this guy a Psycho....but...he also likes to sleep in the woods and climb trees..... what asylum did he escape from???
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow.... It doesn't look good for Mikey...... unless the nurse left the door open... no one else could get in the loft..and he knew about Justin's allergies.... I don't want to believe it was him...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
What happened to Justin??? and what the hell is wrong with Mikey... he is acting very guilty..... but... I still don't think he would do something that cruel....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 10
OMG.... Mikey does have a silver car ..and he is being a real bitch to Justin...but... I think the Psycho... would have to be either Hobbs or Craig..
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 9
I am glad that Brian hired a Private Eye....but... what on earth could Justin have done to get 4 people mad enough to kill him???
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 8
This guy must be some kind of Psycho... if he keeps trying to kill Justin again and again and again..... one question.. what does it mean when you say that you are "pants at summaries".....
Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 30
Hi,
I had read this before (wherever you had it posted!) and was glad to see it again. I definitely want you to post any other BJ fics you've written. I'm sure I've read them all!
Author's Response: Probably and I had a few on the other site I hadn't finished so I am finishing them up while I polish and post the old ones! Thanks very much for your enthusiasm it is much appreciated! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 7
OMG... does Mikey have a silver car??? It couldn't be him......
Author's Response: Yes Mikey does have a silver car! So happy to keep you guessing! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow.... who the hell is so desperate to kill Justin... that he would try again??? and what happened to Melanie?? she hasn't come to see Gus once..
Author's Response: Oops I never notived that! I just was concentrating on Linds and her reaction; I suppose because she really was doing all the 'parenting' when Gus was very young. Thanks for the chapter by chapter review! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 5
I agree with Brian it seems as if it's a nightmare.....
Author's Response: Absolutely - I think that is why Linds reacts as she does - she can't really cope with the reality of it all. :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
It doesn't seem as if Justin remembers much of the accident...... just the color of the car.... I hope the police get some leads as to who it was....
Author's Response: Major accidents are often like that. My one big bingle on the other hand was excrutiatingly slow and every detail is still etched in my brain! I'd rather have the amnesia but not the brain damage! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
OMG.... they were hit on purpose!!!!! who the hell would want to kill Justin and Gus ???
Author's Response: Some evil twisted entity like the writer!! Mwa ha ha ha - oops sorry not really! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 2
OMG... Poor little Gus.... Poor Justin.... Poor Brian.... I hope they don't have any permanent damage......
Author's Response: Writer walks off whistling and refuses to take responsibility!! :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
I waited till this was complete to read....and I Love it already.... off to read the next chapter....
Author's Response: Glad you like it, I appreciate you reviewing each ep! You are more disciplined than I am I often just keep reading and review at the end!! :)
Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thanks for the wonderful, action-packed story! I don't read WIPs, so thanks for not making me wait too long -- and it was definitely worth the wait!
Glad to hear there's a sequel coming for this one, and even more glad to hear about your very positive-sounding approach to this exciting phase of your life.
The very best of luck with it all! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for all the encouragement - I really learnt the meaning of that which doesn't kill us makes us stronger last year! So pleased you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 30
Wow! Fantastic final chapter. You had me hooked right to the last. Hobbs can rot in hell as far as I'm concerned. Debbie was so in character in your story. Give us more of your work to enjoy. Congrads on the blue ribbon award for excellence; they are rare.
Author's Response: Truly chuffed!! Thank you sooo much. I love to hear that I managed to keep people in character! I have posted another - more light-hearted with a bit of black humour thrown in! Hope you like it too! I was rapt with my blue ribbon! Got a shock when I saw it! Thanks for all your support - love reading your work too - even more than cute Hammy! :)
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 30
I know I've read this before somewhere - so glad you decided to put it here -where it's easy to add comments - I loved the story and look forward to more completed ones from you.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! It meansa a lot coming from you! As I adore your fics! :)
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 30
Thanks, I enjoyed the story.
Whether your 8 or 108, it is always great when the heroes are rescued.
At that point, like an 8 year old, it is time to stand and cheer. I surely did.
Again thanks for the story, and yes, please post others.
DavidR
PS: Preachy? To me, that word has more to do ith a moralistic tone. I
didn’t see any of that in your story.
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I am typing this as I grin my response! I think no matter who we are we always put part of ourselves into our fic and I didn't want my opinions to impings on my fic too much. I think 'preachy' fics are the ones that I get the 'thou shalt not' or worse still 'thou shalt' vibes from. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts! Hope you enjoy the others! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 30
great ending. brian held on no matter what.
i remember KI2. are you going to post that here too? please.
Author's Response: Yep! But I want to finish writing it first so I decided to put up some other finished fics first. St least the ones I liked! LOL! So when K 11 goes up it will go up quickly instead of making people wait too long. Thanks for all your wonderful comments as I posted. Luv ya!! :)
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 30
whoa, what an intense ride. I glad the boys made it out alive and are in good spirits! Great story... will there be a sequel?? (hint hint, nudge, nudge)
Author's Response: Yes there is a sequel started but I decided to finish writing before I started to post, that way there won't be years breaks between eps! I alwyas intended to finish but RL really got in the way. After my 'annus horribilus' last year I decided LIFE is too short not to do things I love; so new job environment and new attitude = new me! Thank you so much for your fb all through the fic as someone who's writing I truly admire; it means a lot! Yes there will be a sequel but I am going to put up finished fics first while I work on the sequel. There are about 11 eps finished but I want to complete it before I post. I ended up with about 4 unfinished fics when BJ Fic crashed and I just stopped posting so I want to finish them before I post this time so I don't disappoint readers by making them wait too long! Thanks again for your imput! Luv ya! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 29
you are so mean, putting justin in his head.
Author's Response: Tee hee who moi?!!! I must admit it is fun to be mean to our boys sometimes but I always try to put it right in the end! Thanks so much for all your wonderful reviews! Last ep will go up tonight! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 29
Oh you're good.
Author's Response: Puffs up with pride!! Then discovers head is too big to fit through door! Oh well! Thanks for the happy! I'll put the final ep up tonight! Thanks for sticking with it!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 28
Glad to see some action; dying in freezing water is almost just as painful as fire. Chris deserves what he gets.
Author's Response: DO I detect your KI coming out? I think it would be a horrible way to die! Let he/she who is without sin cast the first stone! I don't know about you but my glass house is very vulnerable!! Thanks again for your wonderful reviews! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 28
Killer Instinct.... At last Brian gets a break on Chris hopefully the flares have been seen. yes put up all your fics :)Chris
Author's Response: Thank you I will! Yes Brian has a hard decision to make ahead! Thanks for the fb - a writer's life blood! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 28
Hugs back for posting! :D
Of course you should post your other fic...just as soon as you're done with this one ;-)
Author's Response: Yes nearly finished this and I will before I post anything else. It was fun reading it again and changing it a little! Thanks fot the encouragement! :)
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 28
Hi,
I finally caught up with all the chapters and just wanted to say hello.
I don’t know what you mean by too preachy. Preachy?
What a way to end the chapter. What will Brian do? The question that came to mind was: what would I do? In QAF, Chris was a big guy and n athlete, and is 12 years younger than Brian. Brian appears taller but hris probably weighs more.
Nice chapter and I know we will just have to wait for the answer.
Thanks for the story.
DavidR
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a fantastic review. By 'preachy' I meant am i forcing too many of my own ideas on the characters and the action rather than let it be natural. Yes Brian does have a hear decision to make (hmm, come to think of it he should be used to that! LOL!) More on the way! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 28
as much as i would love for brian to leave him there, we know brian would never lower himself to chris' level. what a fantastic chapter. poor justin, still trapped in the cabinet.
Author's Response: MWA! And huge hugs - that quandary and solution was exactly what I was aiming for! Yes I agree about Justin - I just cringe as I write it!! More on the way! :)
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 28
let him drown or not maybe prison finish soon and by all means do more stories. we like more love and less violence some sappiness. we all love your writing abilities and love the boys sooooooo much. thanx
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you sooo much! You just illustrated that KI the fic is about! LOL! I will aim for more love a but of angst and much sappiness - I am a sucker for romance in fics! I too love our boys!! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 27
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! Pretty please? :D
I do feel bad for Justin though because I have allergies and it would be my dumb luck to sneeze at the wromg moment as well :D
Author's Response: I know the feeling - I just had to put it in as I too have many allergies. It is more unusual for me to smell things than to be able to smell - which is lucky since I have teen boys! LOL! Thanks for the great fb I am glad you weren't upset! :)
Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 27
Really hon you can't do this,no way.
Author's Response: Told ya I was gonna duck!! You can't find me I have my head firmly buried in the sand!! Thanks for your repsonse!! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 27
omg. a luntic out to kill him. brian safely hides him. and he sneezes!!!! SNEEZES!!!!! omg!
Author's Response: Tee hee I really couldn't resist! Walks off whistling innocently!! Thanks for your wonderful fb. Love getting your gut reactions! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 26
the tension is building.
Author's Response: Hold onto your hats!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 26
Chris needs a big stiff dick up his ass.
Author's Response: Of dynamite!?? LOL! Thanks for sticking with it!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 27
"You're so wicked! Holding chapters hostage for reviews. Of course I've never done such a thing. :)
Author's Response: Oh no never!! Tee hee! Besides your fics are so good you don't need to resort to that type of behaviour! Who moi?? Wicked (puts broom away and takes off point hat, pats black cat then walk away whistling!) Thank you so much for your honest reactions, love to read them! :)
Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 26
knitting? really? I want to see that.
Author's Response: So would I! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 26
Bugger how can you leave it there, get back on those key's and save our boys!! :)
Author's Response: I will tonight! Promise! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 26
I’ll take up knitting
Awesome! And I'm right there with you Brian! :D
Author's Response: Absolutely! I tried to think of the least likely thing and that popped into my brain!! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh alright - I won't kill you if you don't kill off Brian and Justin, deal? :D
Author's Response: DEAL!! Thank you sooo much for not hating me - I did fight my muse for a while on this - but she seemed to get a certain amount of glee from the thought of putting readers through angst!! Tut tut naught muse!! LOL! Thanks for the honest response!! :)
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 25
Later? Later? Later?!!! You're killing me here!!!!!!!
Author's Response: SORRY!! Blame my naughty muse!! No I'll take the blame! I was ready to duck all the brickbats when I first write this! Will update very soon! Love your writing and feel very special that you are reading mine!! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 25
whatever the plan maybe, leving justin alone for any amount of time is not a good idea. leaving him vulnerable for chris to get to?
update soon.
Author's Response: don't worry - keeping Jusitn safe is priority one for Brian in this fic! But the killer instinct might be for himself!! Just a thought! off to update! Thanks so much for your thoughts and opinions!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 25
Here is your spanking. Thanks so much for the new chapter. Love this story.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 24
so he finally knows chris found them. what is he planning next i can't imagine. cynthia is right. if one didn't survive the other wouldn't want to. carl and debbie pushing the beds together?
can't see the plot hole.
Author's Response: Well Debbie needed comforting after all the stress of not finding the boys! Glad you couldn't see the error - I'll tell you at the end! Thanks for the review!! :)
Reviewer: Audrey2419 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 24
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see just exactly what Brian has up his sleeve since he has figured out that Chris was watching. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying the fic - as usual Brian is very clever! Thanks for the fb!! much appreciated! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 24
I'm enjoying the story too much to look for plot holes. Thanks so much for the update.
Author's Response: That might be the very best compliment I have ever received!! I'm trying to update each night but work and home sometimes interfere! Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 23
I'm pulling out my hair over here in fear of what's next. Please save what few locks I have left soon. :)
Author's Response: Errrr . . . I hear baldness is all the rage these days!! Hmmmm . . . hair transplants? I got plenty and only a few greys at the moment! Thanks for commenting! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 23
what a closet case that lunatic is. the boys did need something to take their mind of their problems.
Author's Response: I agree, we . . . er they really needed it! LOL! Thanks for commenting! :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 22
Still scary now because Chris knows where they are but they do not know Chris knows, it could make Brian careless.
Author's Response: Absolutely! Thanks for the fb, hang onto your hat (if you have one) it's about to get even rougher! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 22
I loved my chapter reviewers so I felt you might like it too!
Several words are spelled in a Brit manner unlike we spell them in the USA and you said "pants".
Did I find a hole in the plot? What about the ex-marine bodyguard in the cabin? Didn't he die in the fire and shouldn't Chris find his body?
Great story here and looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Well thank you!! I was very appreciative of your comments. I am sure there is more than one hole although I kind of pictured our poor marine blown to unrecognizable bits as he was closest to the explosions, and after he found the knotted sheet I didn't think Chris would waste time looking for more evidence - he is manic in his approach and following his own kind of logic - that killer instinct to wipe out what he hates (or thinks he does). More eps on the way! You have no idea how wonderful I feel when I know people have actually been thinking about my fic and then I go back and reflect on what ideas I had at the time. Should I have made it more specific I think sometimes I take too much audience knowledge for granted but I don't want to 'talk down' to readers or have them think I am being condescending or treating them like idiots. More to ponder but I'm off to put up the next chapter! Hope you like it . . . or something! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 22
stupid cellphones! I can sympathize- for some reason I get fantastic coverage everywhere EXCEPT inside my own home! In my yard, great coverage- go figure! Not too convenient in winter...
Chris is definitely one twisted dude...but we kinda knew that :)
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you picked up Chris is way past 'normal' in fact I don't think he can even see it in the distance any more - I wanted him to be obsessive as he is doing all this to make himself feel better about his feelings and reactions. He was one I had in mind when I first thought of Killer Instinct. Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 22
everything is suppose to in the morning. leave it to a man to get them lost. if carl and the girls don't get there before chris, brian and justin will be trapped...again. with no window to climb out of.
love it.
Author's Response: Well it takes place over a day . . . I didn't want to get more specific. I'm pretty sure I would get lost in a snowy landscape that was competely foreign to me too (don't have a great sense of direction to start with)! so it is not necessarily gender specific! LOL! Your right though the situation just got a bit more precarious, and just might get even worse!! Thanks for the fabulous review!! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 21
as bad as things are they were ok. now that better not be chris outside or brian better use that gun.
Author's Response: Hmmm . . . walks away innocently whistling!! (and nervously looking over shoulder!) Thanks for the response! :)
Reviewer: Cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 21
Arghhhh! When is their luck going to break and Chris realise he is hurt, surely we are due for one of his body parts to fall off or at least stop working!
Author's Response: soon I hope! I figure hate is a strong motivator! Especially for Chris! Thnks for sharing your reaction it is very gratifying! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh shit. Brian get your gun...
Author's Response: Absolutely . . . although there is still that problem that he may shoot himself in the foot! So great to know you are still reading! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 20
I hope you add more chapters soon. I see I'm almost caught up now.
Author's Response: This is a fic I had published elsewhere, so I am just giving it a polish and check and then adding the chapter. I am using it to get back into writing. So I have been trying to put up a chapter a night, but I am now back at work and it may be a bit difficult! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
Got to read on; I've commented every chapter to raise your number up.
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! It is wonderful to hear from readers and know there is someone reading who feels inspired to respond! (I really appreciate the increase in numbers too!) :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 18
Glad Chris got hurt too. Reading on...
Author's Response: Well I couldn't really have him so close to the blast site and escape unharmed - I enjoy pushing the envelope on what is believable but that would venture into the ridiculous! So glad you are still reading! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 17
This is so intense!!!!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 16
Well we finally know it's Hobbs. (does happy dance in his chair)
:)
Author's Response: Yeah you guessed right from the beginning! There goes my career as a mystery writer!! :( Damn I wish I could see that happy dance!! :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 21
Dam I was hoping Brian and Justin would be able to rest up awhile before Chris came around again.
Author's Response: Sorry, no rest for major players . . . or readers!! Chris is definitely on the warpath! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
He could be in the house. Justin should have a gun too.
Author's Response: I rather liked his clever idea with a pencil! I would also be worried about them shooting each other! Thanks for the fb! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
Lurkers; cute. Why the perp took out the body guard and didn't finish the job is a mystery now.
Author's Response: I think Chris wanted to torture to make up for the Posse incident. Yeah mu second eldest daughter gave me a very hard time for lurking many years ago! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 13
It has to be Hobbs now.
Author's Response: A gold star for you!!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
Only Michael could get into the loft and were was the body guard/nurse at?
Author's Response: Well only Michael had the combination as far as we know but there are many different ways of discovering information that we have no business knowing! Or at least so the tabloids and media tell us! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
What a cliffie you made here; Michael is an interesting twist or worse.
Author's Response: Yippee I made you think!! Love it that you enjoyed the twist enough to comment! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 10
Now I really wonder who is the prep. I'm sticking with Hobbs though.
Author's Response: Gut instinct is usually the best way to go! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
This just get more interesting as I read on.
Author's Response: I sparked your interest!? Fantastic!!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Glad to see Justin is home but is it safe?
Since you mentioned Hobbs at the beginning of the story I still feel he is the perp of this story; looking forward to find out who it really is.
Some of your writing tells me you may be a Brit. I love the UK and have visited twice.
Author's Response: Not a Brit - a colonial! Well an Aussie anyway! (South Australian actually) What expressions gave it away?? :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
I have to change into my boots since the plot sh!t is getting deeper now.
Author's Response: I just had a vision in my head of you in rubber boots hunched over your puter!! Tee hee! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great plot; attempted killing. There has to be security videos available. Hospitals have tons of cameras. Oops, I'm not writing this story. :)
Author's Response: Damn in Aus we have only a few cameras, ond those we do have are often not switched on - sorry about the big plot hole!!! Gald you didn't fall in and it spoinl it completely for you! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
Crash cart cliffie; I wonder how you will explain a cardiac event for a broken leg?
:)
Author's Response: This one I can answer as my eldest is a nursein Accident and Emergency! Justin would have had a monitor, he didn't just get a broken leg although the compound fracture is bad enough in itself. I imagined him having a finger monitor on and the alarm would have gone off when his pulse rate changed. Yes I have been placed on one after a car accident and I also had bruised ribs and like a burn mark from the seat belt (the airbags did not deploy). I loosened the finger monitor and all hell broke loose when the alarms went off . . . and yes my caring wonderful daughter told me not to be an idiot and keep my bloody hand still! (She is wonderful with other patients and the staff and patients alike think she is brilliant - as do I!)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very intense story here.
Author's Response: YAY! You think it is intense - does happy Snoopy dance around room . . . cat looks at me very strangely! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
You give great angst; I smell Chris Hobbs and it stinks.
Author's Response: So very happy you think I give great angst!! I think your 'rat nose' is very clever!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 2
Two chapters and I'm hooked :)
Author's Response: Is is wrong that I am happy you are addicted to my fic!? :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn that is one powerful beginning chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! You made my day! :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 20
Thank God for the boat, but I would have felt happier if Brian had taken the gun to bed with them. Chris seems to have nine lives.
Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughful review! I wonder if Chris had some army training? LOL! He is proving very difficult to kill off! Perhsps he is really part cat! When I was planning this I really wanted a 'rollicking adventure' type fic alont the lines of the old 'Perils of Pauline' serials from many years ago; so I have to have a villain and Chris fit the bill quite well! Thanks again for the fb. It is wonderful to know poeple are reading and actually thinking about the fic! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
how long does it take to get to the cabin? chris will be gone before carl gets there. finding that cabin was a blessing for brian and justin. have to make do with what you got.
Author's Response: I'm not sure how long it took - seemed to take Brian, Justin and their bodyguard a while - but it might not be distance rather than the snow that is the larger problem! Yes the cabin was a blessing, I just hope it was blessing enough! So glad for your review I am pleased you think the boys resourceful too! Love that you are still interested enough to keep reading!! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 20
Good thinking with the boat Brian! It should help trap the heat and provide an extra layer of insulation from the wind & cold!! It's amazing how good canned food can taste when it's all you've got! :D
Author's Response: I agree about the boat but I always thought Brian very clever so it did n't surprise me that he should make efficient use of whatever came to hand! It never ceased to amaze me how food my kids would normally turn their noses up at was suddenly really 'yummy' when we came home from the beach or other vigorous activity and they declared themselves 'starving' although too much of anything tends to pall after a while! Thank you soo much for your review, I love to know that there really is someone out there reading! :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oh dam does nothing kill Chris and when is help going to come for our boys lol
Author's Response: They are all proving to be quite resourceful! LOL! A little frustrating! Help is on the way though there may still be a few bumps in the road! Thank you so much for the fb it is appreciated! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
chilled me to the bones. hope chris doesn't know about the shed.
Author's Response: Glad I could make you feel chills! As for Chris and the shed, read on dear reader and find out!! Mwa ha ha! Thanks for reviewing - you made my day! :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 19
Really enjoying this.
Glad Team Cyn will be on their way!
Author's Response: YAY! Someone is reading and enjoying! Thank you for your review - I love Cyn too! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oooh... karma's a bitch Hobbs! And go Cynthia!
I hope Justin will be okay... :(
Author's Response: Sooo glad that someone is out there reading and reviewing! Loved Cynthia's character in the series and just couldn't imagine her sitting back and not doing anything! Gald you like her! Justin will be ok . . . eventuially, but there may be more unpleasantness to come! Thanks so very much for the great fb! You made me day! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 18
am i the only one reading/rereading this?
very thrilling chapter. you could feel the desperation of brian trying to get justin safely out. here's hoping the explosion does some damage to chris.
Author's Response: I think so! Glad I could 'thrill' you! Keep hold of your hat now the action really heatrs up! Thank you sooo much for the great fb! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 17
loving this all over again.
Author's Response: You just made my day!! Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
chris is a closeted lunatic. justin's so funny in the face of danger.
“I could throw my sketching pencil at him; pierce him through the eye, into the brain and kill the bastard!” hope he has perfect aim lol.
Author's Response: Well we had to do something to break the tension before our boyus broke!! Yeah Chris is awful in this! Thanks for the fb! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 15
he can't stay awake forever.
Author's Response: You aren't wrong but adrenaline can do amazing things! Mind you sooner or later we have to give back to our bodies whatever we take away! Mwa, blows wonderful reviewer and LJ friend a big kiss for fb! :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 15
Scary times ahead.
I wonder if you wrote this fic a few years back as I reckon I have read it before it seems familier. I am enjoying it thank you
Author's Response: Hi! Yes I did but the site I used is no more so I decided ages ago to put it up here and then life interfered and I never got to finish. So I have decided to put up all my stories on this site! So it should feel familiar! Thanks for the fb though! Definitely scary times ahead!! :)
Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 14
I'm glad you continued this story. I read it when it first came out,and was anxious to see what happened. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out who the killer is.
Author's Response: So glad you came back to read! Sorry about the very long hiatus, had a REALLY bad year last year but starting to get back on track now! I will try to keep updating frequently, this is easy as it is finished and I am going to work on some WIPs to get them up too. Thanks for reviewing, all are appreciated! :)
Reviewer: RCA (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
The suspense is mounting up. Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe Brian should wake up Justin to get a few tips on how to handle a gun before he shots the wrong thing or person. Great work.
Author's Response: Tee hee I can just picture Jusin's response!! I was a bit worried too! Thanks for the great fb, we thrive on it as writers! It has been 46 here today I think that is 114 F so it has been a bit hard to fire up my puter as I have to wait til it cools down, cooked puters don't like to work! I should put up the next ep soon though! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 14
LOL- maybe I should've made me screenname Lurker1030 instead ;-)
Poor Peter - I hope he's OK. I'm glad Justin wasn't hurt while Brian was downstairs. You keep me hanging on the edge of my seat! :)
Author's Response: Whoops quietly to herself!! Another lurker from out in the woodwork! It was my (then teen) daughter that taught me the evils of 'lurking' and insisted I give authors their due, especially as she pointed out there is no other remuneration we get other than a sense of satisfaction and appreciation from readers! So from then on I made it a practise to always review if I liked the writing and not say anything if i didn't. I will try to give your 'seat' a rest . . . or will I . . . mwa ha ha!! (ok insert evil sounding laugh here please!) Many thanks for your great fb, hope it is just one of many! :)
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 14
keep it coming very nail-biting brian to the rescue but no more injuries to jus please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment - I will 'keep it coming' can't promise about the lack of injuries to anyone however!! I knew I should have changed the warnings! There is one think though! I do strongly believe in happy endings - it just takes a while to get there sometimes!! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
Eek!
Author's Response: Uh oh, if you feel this way now wait til later!! Not sure I gave enough warnings about this fic!! Thanks for letting me know your reaction!! We FEED on FB! :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 13
Wow scary it looks like this is way above Mikey's ability.
Yeah it was 42 here today we do have AC and a pool :)
Author's Response: Lucky you!! At least we had the cool change down here! You may be right about Mikey . . . but I can't spoil it! If I am not a puddle of sweat tomorrow I will update and at least some will be revealed! LOL! Hope to go down to Victor tomoz as it should be cooler! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 11
YES..................................
Author's Response: Thanks! Do the dots mean you are unsure? Or for me to do it immediately! Hmmm much to ponder upon . . .! :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
i remember this, but it's so good to read it again.
glad to see you back. hope you'll stay around.
Author's Response: HUGS!! I intend to . . . sorry to those who have read all these before! I decided I'D put up the old stuff with some editing and work on new and finishing some, then once I get back into the habit I'll put up the new writing as well! Does that make sense. It feels so good to be back!! I fully intend to stay around - I think I need the outlet. Last year wasw my Annus Horribilus, so I am determined this will be better. :)
Reviewer: Tina (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 11
Of course!!!
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you! I needed to know people wanted to read it and as it is now no longer available anywhere else I figured I needed to get it up somewhere and where better than here? It is great to be back and feel a little creative again too. I am smiling as I type this! :)
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 11
story very good. has a good amount of angst.
Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful FB. It is great to know people are reading! I will try to update! :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hell yes! Please update - and SOON! :)
Author's Response: I decided I will try to update this fic and put some others that are also no longer on the net each couple of days. I am lucky enough to be on holidays at the moment and it is too hot o do much else! So just housework calling me away . . . decisions, decisions! LOL! Thanks for the encouragement, after such a long break I NEED it! :)
Reviewer: mandagrammy (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2008 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ahhh, it looks like we have a real mystery on our hands. Very good build up. Grammy
Reviewer: mandagrammy (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2008 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
After reading your thoughtful review of my work, I felt I must check out your story too. I just wish I had as much time to read as I once did, but I'm glad I took the time to visit your work. It is always a pleasure to read the work of someone who loves words as I do. You have set this story up quite well. That first line has left me incredibly curious. I have the feeling I'm going to find this a very interesting story. Thanks for sharing. Grammy
Author's Response: Thanks Grammy, I have a very full work load and family load at the moment and don't get the time I'd like to write. You were absolutely correct when you said I loved words. I have decided to try harder to write more. At the moment all my other writing (including my truly execrable first fic) are at another site but I am going to try to post them here too. So glad you are reading and happy to know you share my love of words and writing (this is also reflected in the calibre of your work!) Thanks for the positive review it made my night! :)
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