Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 06:32 AM · On: Leaving Home...Coming Home
AWWWWW! Justin doesn't realize that he already has the Beast wrapped around his pinky finger.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 01:15 AM · On: Concerning Storms and a Rose
OOOOOOOH the beast is absolutely frightening. Jennifer had quite an experience. Now she has to forfeit give up Justin to the monster. Nicely done!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 12:10 AM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
So Brian received his comeuppance and I would almost feel sorry for the guy if he had been such a douche to the fairy. This first chapter is great.
Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:34 AM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
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Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2015 04:54 AM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
Okay now I guess Justin and I are both falling in love with the beast... ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: mi (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 08:29 PM · On: The New Castle
Hello :) I just finished reading your story. Sorry I can't leave review at each chapter cos I read all continously. I like the idea & the storyline... I like the characters too eventho I feel Jen's character changed too sudden.
It's the 1st story of yours that I've read so maybe I'm wrong, sometimes your writing style changed in chapters, is it intentionally? No offense but in-the-middle-of-story author's commentary not really necessary. Like "Justin's basket" or when they gonna have sex. It's like you're watching football game on TV & at the critical moment they airing long commercial break instead (you know what I mean?).
Hmm I feel I give critic more than compliment but I really do like this one. I'll read the sequel. Thank u for keep writing :)
Author's Response: I love criticisms! Thank you!
thanx so much for reading and reviewing even after story was done! And you're probably right, the writing style did change from time to time as I was posting by chapter and this was a VERY long story, taking a long time. Plus there was the alliteration chapter which was a kind of homage to another writer on here who wrote an entire STORY in alliteration.
As for the author's commentaries...well some like em some don't. I do try to keep them to a minimum though!
Cheers!
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 10:55 AM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
thank goodness. I'm kind of interested in the powers(gifts) that were given to Justin.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 05:37 PM · On: The New Castle
Arjax; "YAAA-HOOOOOO!!!!! YIPPPEEEE!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEE-HAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" That’s how I felt about the whole chapter. I was so excited arriving back from holidays to see you had updated with such a large chapter and didn’t finish the story. Please add the Mpreg category as I want a Jusan baby Pleeeeeease. Okay it doesn’t quite work like Britin but you get the picture. Thank you; you have a wonderful imagination.
Cheers
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2012 12:36 PM · On: The New Castle
Who can take a rainbow, sprinkle it with dew, cover it with choc'late and a miracle or two, the candyman can. . . and Bryton4ever71 can . . .
Nice castle, dude! Roald Dahl would be proud! I do have a bit of a tummy ache after all that sickly sweetness, though, now that you mention it. LOL! TAG
Author's Response: Awwww! Well that was just....sweet! Thank you! Sorry bout yur tummy but I'm sure it will recover Bwa Ha Ha!!
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 04:54 AM · On: The New Castle
Hi Jon,
Oh, LOL, no, not in one sitting (although I have been known to do just that), but I did read the whole thing yesterday. I didn’t really have a favorite part, at times I found myself cringing (like when Brian was first turned into the beast) to chuckles to outright laughter. But, there was one part that I really liked. It was when Arjax the horse became Arjax the man but still kept the horse outlook on things. The nervousness and outright panic displayed by Arjax was pretty much in "horse mode". ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: yeah Arjax is fun to write! I didn't mean for him to be quite so horsey but it just happened that way! Look for more horsey hi-jinks to come!
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 10:12 AM · On: The New Castle
I spent most of the day reading this from the first chapter up until what you have so far. I've never been much for fairy tales (even when I was a kid) but dang this is good! kind of like having a good book that you just can't put down, no matter how hard you try, haha. Can't wait for the next up date. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: Oh my God! Did you really? You read this in one sitting? No it must have been 2 or something. At any rate...thank you so much! What were your favorite parts? I'm just....Wow! It's reviews like these that make be want to keep going. It might be a week or so till the next update so I have a few other novel length fairy tales on my page if you want a look. My first, the Merman seems to be a favorite of many. Anyway, thanks again! I'm going to get to work on the next chapter tomorrow!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 12:07 AM · On: The New Castle
I loooooooved this so much,I am so happy you see no end for it yet!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 11:06 PM · On: The New Castle
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: that s super! Anything in particular yu liked? More is coming soon. One more story arc and then I'm done i think
Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Where's Brian??
Okay, that is still an evil cliffy, but you're right, not as bad as the last one. I love the story with all its twists and turns and can't wait to see how our boys end up. Good work. More please.
P.S. - Can you put me down for a vote for Aladdin?
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the ride! Thanks for the great review and thanks for your vote. It look like I'll be tackling Aladdin next...gulp....that s a big challenge!
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Where's Brian??
I am glad that Justin and Brian reunited. :)
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: I'm so glad they reunited too. I hope to provide more soon. I hope you'll like what I have in store for the castle and the village and for those awaiting back in the Pitts!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 12:54 AM · On: Where's Brian??
This story is incredible,I have been hooked from chapter one ~ Vonnie xx
Ps,put me down for Aladdin aswell please.I would love to see where you take that story :)
Author's Response: thanx for your vote and caring enough to do so! I ll keep it in mind! Thanx for your review. I'm doing my best, although, I never really meant to "hook" anybody with any of my stories. I have such a different style than the rest of you and I know there s not a lot of sex. But thank you for the compliment and I hope I can keep your interest as the story starts to wind down.
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Where's Brian??
phew ~~~~ u got me in the first paragraph!
Author's Response: the basement?? Yeah, I'll probably get a few people b4 the run is through! Bwa HA! HA! Hope you liked the little scare and then the rest of it ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Where's Brian??
Yay! Brian has been found! And he's horny! Yay! TAG
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 02:53 PM · On: Where's Brian??
Brian WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU!!!??" OMG this was a great chapter. You fooled me about the basement. ROFLMAO. Thank the powers that be for the convenient presence and placement of the condoms. Phew. I know this is wrapping up but please don’t hurry towards an ending.
Cheers
Author's Response: glad I could give you a pre Halloween scare! Yes thank God and magic castles for knowing when and where to put condoms and most of all...thank God For our horny Boys!
Don't worry, I won't hurry but as you said things will wrap up nicely pretty soon, but really...isn't this already the longest fairy tale you ever read already?? Don't you guys get enough?? Oyyyy!
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 08:38 AM · On: The Wards are Released
but where is Brian......
what wonderful gifts!!
love it!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 03:48 AM · On: The Wards are Released
It seems the question of the day is........WHERE'S BRIAN??
BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 03:21 AM · On: The Wards are Released
But, Where's Brian? TAG
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 02:51 AM · On: The Wards are Released
I am SO excited! I thought this story had no more to tell - and was kind of sad. Even though I always want the boys to end up together and happy - its kind of bittersweet when a story ends. Now I have hope that there is still a little life left in this tale - and I can't wait!
Charle
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 02:47 AM · On: The Wards are Released
Ohhhh. Mean cliff hanger. Liked the gifts and the reincarnation of the other men. Great loved it!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 11:33 PM · On: The Wards are Released
Omg!!! This is great but like Justi kept asking..... WHERE'S BRIAN!!?" ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 08:50 PM · On: The Wards are Released
I hope Brian and Justin reunite.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 08:45 PM · On: The Wards are Released
I love the gifts now Justin gets to have a baby BJ, lots of money, be young and beautiful throughout a very long life, with nobody able to lie to him but, WHERE'S BRIAN!!? OMG you left us hanging again; thank you so much because I don’t want this to end.
Cheers
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2012 07:28 PM · On: The Wards are Released
whoops another cliffy. will be waiting for Brian to appear.
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 02:50 PM · On: The Wards are Released
Justin is right...where is brian?^^
Nice chapter, thank you.
I'd love to get «Ted» gift.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:07 AM · On: Death of a Dream
Lovely, evil cliff hanger. Ohhhhhhhh! What is the evil white light? Great imagery, BTW - reminded me of CS Lewis', 'The Magician's Nephew' - with the magic ring pulling him through space. Very nice! And, congrats on 100+ reviews. You deserve them. (Even the mean ones? LOL?) You know what I mean. TAG
P.S. I'm not on fanfiction.net so I'm voting here - I vote for Aladdin. I really want the image of Justin in a skimpy belly dancer costume stuck in my mind. Or Brian, for that matter. Love skimpy costumes, on general. TAG
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 09:13 PM · On: Death of a Dream
I just read what you wrote to your reviewers. Thank you so much for letting us know how you appreciate our comments. I love getting involved in the story and I really like an author who answers a review with a personal touch as you do.
Cheers
Author's Response: I sure do appreciate them! None of my fairy tales have EVER gotten close to a 100 reviews b4 so I 'm just astounded and so happy! I love answering reviews on the most part but sometimes I let them build up and then it takes a long time. That's why I decided on the blanket message this time. Thanks for your support and don't worry there's more to cum after the exploding farts <wink>
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 07:36 PM · On: Death of a Dream
I like everyone else enjoying this fic would have just reviewed and reviewed for you to reach 100 but you are such a good writer there was no need. I am loving this and I can’t wait for the happy ever after even with an explosive fart I don’t think that is the end. Hurry back please.
Cheers
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Death of a Dream
Whooooo Hooooooo! 100 + reviews!!!! Thanx so much to everybody for reading and esp. to everyone who's been reviewing! Thanks and congrats to Predec2 for being 100! Also thanks to TAG, debv3, flossee, no sleep, yvonnereid, pacagirl, and anyone else I may have forgotten for reviewing thire way up to 100 for me. Thank you all for your incredible and rather....inexplicable support for this story!
Let me use this to answer you all re: this chapter: It'll take me a few days but it's already coming along and I have the ending all mapped out in my head. Sort of. Well, i'm doing it, let's put it that way!
Thanx again! Call me a cow cuz I'm over the moooooo--ooon!
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Death of a Dream
I am looking forward to what happens next with Brian and Justin.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Death of a Dream
ohhhh, you are so evil............how can you leave us just theere??? my heart is racing with expectation and I am scrolling and scrolling and its not going down....
I suddenly dislike 'TBC'.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 06:20 AM · On: Death of a Dream
Here you go, Jon! #100! Congrats on this very entertaining story! Now hurry up with the ending!!
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Death of a Dream
Great place to end the ch.apter! Love the description of white light. Where are the Wards during all of this? Hmmm what's next?
Reviewer: 097blue (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2012 05:15 AM · On: Death of a Dream
u are sooooooooooooooooooooo evil:-)poor brian what went wrong.hope justin is ok.
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 02:00 AM · On: Death of a Dream
:( :( your tissue warning was not enough from crying (sometimes when I'm prepared I can't stop the tears).
Great chapter.
Can't wait to know what happened and where is brian because he can't be dead (pwetty please)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2012 01:16 AM · On: Death of a Dream
I will review this the whole 100 times for you if you update it asap!!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 12:58 AM · On: Death of a Dream
that was pretty good. i didn't cry ,i know they will end up together.
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 06:32 PM · On: Greed
I just read all your chapters in a row. I'm sorry I did not take time to review each of them.
I love your story and your writing style.
I'm looking forward to reading next chapter. Hope you update soon.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:16 PM · On: Greed
Ack! No, Brian. No! How the hell is Justin going to make it back in time? Help! TAG
Author's Response: Actually, justin has all the tools to get himself home. All the clues are there and will be ass-embled in the next thrilling episode!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Back at Home
How did I miss this chapter? You must have posted it stealthily in the middle of the night when I was asleep or something. But, HA! I found it after all. And what exactly do I find, but smarmy Ethan, shopaholic Jenn, poor embarrassed Molly and now, drugged Justin - what a mess! You've got a lot of work ahead of you to clean up this mess. Goog luck! TAG
Author's Response: That might actually have been the case. I'm a confirmed night owl. As for the chapter , yu can see why it took me so long, as I hated writing about these terrible characters every step ,of the way (except drugged Justin, he was just a sweetie in a fix) Mess is being cleaned up as we speak.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 06:52 AM · On: Greed
OMG!!!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Departure and Inner Demons
Awww a very sad chapter ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2012 04:36 AM · On: Greed
nooooooooooooooooooooo.next part sooooon please.bye bye ethan
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 03:20 AM · On: B-Day
“I AM serious, Sunshine! And don’t call me Shirley!” This line floored me,I was reminded of Lesley Nelson saying it in the movie Aeroplane lol. Great update,hot sex scene too xx
Author's Response: That's where I got it! (wink) Thanx for all your lovely reviews! Glad to have another fan
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 02:25 AM · On: Aftermath
I must say,I enjoy your humor alot miss ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 01:59 AM · On: IT
A very intense chapter,I loved it alot ~ Vonnie xxx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 01:34 AM · On: Brian Remembers: The West Wing, the Hungry Hermit, and the Horrible Hunters
I enjoyed this chapter xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 01:12 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers Part 3: The Diner
:)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 12:52 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 2: The Trip into Town
:)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 12:39 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
I love your story alot!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 11:41 PM · On: What Happened After Dinner
I love it so much ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 11:14 PM · On: The Wards
Love it alot!!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 10:50 PM · On: Jambalaya
beautiful cliffhanger!!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 10:10 PM · On: Preparing for Dinner
love it!!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:57 PM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
This is incredible!!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:32 PM · On: Leaving Home...Coming Home
I love this!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Greed
What got Ethan? Is Brian's plan really going to work? I hope not, Justin needs to get his ring and go home! More. Soon. Please
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see. Bwa Ha Ha!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Concerning Storms and a Rose
This is so exciting!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
I think I will enjoy this!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:35 PM · On: Greed
I hope Justin get back to Brian.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, things will hopfully be ready a little faster with the next one as I am over the block. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 07:55 PM · On: Greed
Well, I no longer consider myself the queen of cliffhangers after this one - I am now officially passing that crown onto you! That was downright dastardly to leave it there, you big tease! (I'm proud of you - ha!). I adore this story and I loved this chapter. Brian's sorrow over Justin apparently abandoning him as well as the realization that he had fallen in love with him resonated emotionally with me, which I think is a testimonial to your writing skill. And I think no one has quite the imagination when it comes to story telling that you do. I will be both looking forward to as well as dreading the conclusion to this entertaining story like I always feel when one I'm enjoying comes to a end.
BTW - I also feel your pain regarding reviews. I appreciate each and every reader I have but especially those that take the time to comment. And when it is especially quiet, which it seems to be lately (at least with mine), it can be quite disheartening and discouraging. I do hope you get a lot of reviews for this one before it's over, my friend. Thanks for sharing this story with us. *Hugs*
~Kim
Author's Response: Why thank you! Yes, I can safely say I'm over the boring hurdle and am into a more exciting part of the story. Sorry for taking so long (this goes for everybody) and sorry I have not been reviewing. I'm terribly behind in all stories. I was spending Aug. writing and watching Big Brother UK. They go all year there and every day so there was 72 episodes to get in on the season. But I'm all BB ed out and into a better part of the story now. Next chapter should be quicker. Glad you liked the double cliffie! BWA HAHAHAHA!!!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Greed
Oh how I yearn for Ethan to reap the 'rewards' for his greed - and even more for Jennifer to be dealt with in hopefully a harsh and gruesome manner...what kind of mother turns her child over to quench her insatiable hunger for possessions and the inane comforts of life...not once but twice? Yes - something truly terrible needs to fall her way to make her feel the impact of her choices.
But more than anything else, I yearn for the moment when Brian realizes that Justin's heart is his - completely - even before he realizes that his outward beauty has been restored - that Justin loves Brian the man - not Brian the hunk, and that in Justin's eyes he is worth absolutely everything and more, worth giving up everything else for - and that true 'comes from the heart' happiness is possible for him.
This chapter really let us feel Brian's anguish, unchecked and ripped open, as well as Justin's need to get to him no matter what it takes. Great job.
Charle
Author's Response: Hmmmm, this is the second review or so, I've respondedto that wants something done about Jennifer. Hmmm, I'll have to think up something good and gruesome for her. Thanks very much for your lovely review and I hope the next chapter lives up to your hopes and dreams. Although there will be one teeensy little obstacle for them to over come that could potentially have devasating results. But that's all I'm saying!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2012 03:16 PM · On: Greed
you are 'EVIL' to leave us hanging.OMG!!!!
Author's Response: yes that WAS Evil, wasn't it? Wait till you see the next one BWA HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 02:07 PM · On: Greed
Oh this is getting really exciting now. How will Justin get back in time and what fate awaits Ethan? I’m so glad Brian and Justin both realise they love each other. I’m hoping Jennifier gets dealt with as well. Great chapter, thank you.
Cheers
Author's Response: Cheers! Don't worry, Justin will soon find there's no place like home (wink) and story will update a little quicker. Thanks for the review
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 01:14 PM · On: Greed
it's so heartbreaking to see Brian hurt so much to Justin's "betrayal".
Author's Response: awww...thanx so much for your review!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 11:14 AM · On: Back at Home
"How are you supposed to get the food out of these things?"
This chapter was hilarious!
I don't know whose worse -- Jennifer or Ethan. Jusitn was better off with the beast.
You're doing a great job with this story!
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 06:03 AM · On: Back at Home
Ethan should die and Jen should be ashamed of herself. I think she and Ethan were working together. Arghhh, Brian is so needed in the Pitts right now. Look forward to an update.
Author's Response: Whoa, girlfriend! Put down that pitchfork and torch! It's just a story! OK?? Deep breaths?? good. Now, I'm afraid Justin's on his own, but he has all the tools he needs to escape but it s going to be a process. The clues are all there. The update will be coming soon as I'm over the hurdle and I know what I want to have happen now.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2012 01:49 PM · On: Back at Home
Jennifer is the new Craig; clueless. I definitely didn’t think she would be like that. I always like surprises though. Oh no is all I can say to Justin’s predicament, Aunty Em better be able to contact him without the ring. Villain Ethan is always a nice touch as I may be the only person that ever kind of liked the guy; don’t tell anyone I said that. Now how is Brian doing, we missed him in this chapter? Please don’t leave this story unfinished or end it abruptly as I like the medusa Brian and he has come so far.
Cheers
Author's Response: Jenn is the new Craig....LOVE it! Don't worry, things are in the works but Justin has the tools to escape, the clues are all there. As Justin does have a week and at this point of the story the Beast is traditionally not in it, I have followed the storyline to follow Justin's adventures. However, he returns next chapter and the action will alternate back and forth.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2012 04:53 AM · On: Back at Home
Poor Justin! I hope Brian find out that Ethan took Justin.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Alas, Justin, is on his own! However, next chapter is in the works and all will be revealed soon.
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2012 11:33 PM · On: Departure and Inner Demons
I was deeply saddened to read You don't care about this story!!! I love fables and fairy tales and have really enjoyed this. I even watched ALL of the B &B shows on TV, plus recorded...years ago. AND I love our boys in ANYTHING. Please just complete. thank you
Author's Response: I'm deeply saddened myself. And I don't know how or why this has happened either. And it's not that I hate the story, or even Beauty and Beast story. I like it. I watched several versions to pump myself up and work the plotline into my subconcious and they were all lovely. A bit slower moving tale than the ones I usually like but good. It's just with Merman and Crucible and a few of the others...the character's anger, sometimes vicious anger, and fear and remorse coursed through me as if thier emotions were mine and mine were theirs. We were linked. With the Crucible, I felt Hunter's anger and the betrayal and sadness and I would be crying while writing it or have fits of rage so intense I would need to stop writing and take long minutes to do deep breathing to calm down. This sounds insane. I felt insane.
With this one...there's no link. I don't know why. So it s coming out slower (but steady) and is rather boring for me. Until the end, that's going to be a hum dinger, we're almost there!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2012 05:07 AM · On: Departure and Inner Demons
No fair - I want a lover with sexual super powers! Come on, Brian, why would Justin want anyone else when he can have super sonic lovemaking with you? I think Brian is just being silly.
Don't know why you're not in love with your story anymore - I love it. It's still humorous, romantic and just enough goofy to keep me hooked. Write on! Please. TAG
Author's Response: I don't know why either! But I'm not letting effect the story! Goofiness and one liners and fairy tale-ness still abound. The super sex idea WAS great wasn't it? After 17 days well....I dunno. After this next seperation of at least a week...what do you think? maybe a reprise of some sort?
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2012 08:38 PM · On: Departure and Inner Demons
Poor Brian! :(
I hope Brian and Justin reunite soon.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Sorry it s taking a while. This story is like a turkey...it's taking a loooong time to cook
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Departure and Inner Demons
O ye of little faith Brian! I hope he doesn’t do anything rash as Justin is certain to return to him. I hope he doesn’t lose the ring though as it could make it extremely difficult to get back in time. "There's no place like home." And Auntie Em, too funny. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Cheers dears! Thank you so much for the ring idea and the happy thoughts. Soirry it's taken a while to respond, haven t been on the site for a while.
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2012 02:12 AM · On: B-Day
PLEASE hurry with MORE! So into this story...so loving it! Thanks so much.....
Author's Response: Sorry it is taking a little longer this time. RL has been rather busy (in a good way) and I went on a trip this weekend to visit my baby/turning into toddler neice and got a bit done but not a whole lot. But I'm back now and hoping to work on the story a bit more now. Thanks for your comment. I m glad you are enjoying the story. Stay tuned, there's a lot more to come on this one!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2012 08:10 AM · On: B-Day
Yay! So happy to get to the B-day scene! Glad you conquered your writer's block - the earplugs must have worked! And, please don't be so modest - loved your hot and heavy sex scene. Loved Dom Brian turning into the wolfman! Very fun sexy romp! And I'm so glad the chastity device is gone - it just seemed like it was too cruel! Only question is now what happens? TAG
P.S. Don't call me Shirley! Caught the 'Airplane' reference!
Author's Response: thanks for thte praise! Yeah, the Airplane thing came out of nowhere. And now...we can get on with the story! Man this one is taking these weird incredibly long story arcs, isn't it?
Author's Response: thanks for thte praise! Yeah, the Airplane thing came out of nowhere. And now...we can get on with the story! Man this one is taking these weird incredibly long story arcs, isn't it?
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 10:07 PM · On: B-Day
Wow! Great chapter, I love the part about having to be invited in it was great. Brian turning into a true beast was kind of odd but then again the image in my head was more like a wolf mounting a sheep...does that make sense? Look forward to he next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, I was thinking more along the lines of him turning into a hybrid type wolfman rather than a total wolf but with a wolfy Brian and a creamy white Justin I guess that's a good image too. Working on next chapter but is taking a while.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 08:09 PM · On: B-Day
First reaction: That was fucking hot.
The sex scene was so primal, I loved that intensity.
Enjoying this story very much!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. the sex scene ws very hard to write. Writer's block abounded. I am in awe of the writer's on here who write out sex scenes here like they are the easiest thing.
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 05:55 AM · On: Aftermath
Sweet chapter. THANK YOU SO MUCH for updating.   
Later. RedRose.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Aftermath
Hilarious - sexy police uniform & we finally find out about the chastity device. I'd thought it was to keep Justin away from some other guy - but to do it merely to keep him from jerking off, boy that's cruel, Bri. Please, more, quickly. TAG
P.S. I saw that guy, the one in the back row over there, totally not paying attention when you told us to sit down & listen. He should be punished! Severely! LOL
Author's Response: He WAS! Severely! I put him in chastity right away! LOL No, That was just to keep you all there. I couldn't have you all REALLY going off to the House fandom now could I? At least not until you finished the chapter.
As for the police uniform, that came to me at the last minute actually. I was ggoing to have him dress in latex shorts and harness and boots but I didn't really like that ( can you say, S/M super gay He-Man?) and then I came across a photo of a guy in the cop outfit on this site where I chat about hypnosis and I thought....yeah, that's better! realistic AND authoritarian! Just the thing to hand out punishment in!
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2012 07:13 AM · On: IT
You did a good job with this chapter... and the ending was the best. Oh..and don't apologise for the angst, as for me, stories full of angst are my favorite,lol.    Later
Author's Response: Thanks for your support, I'm glad you liked it. Thx for the smiley, I've never seen that before.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 09:49 PM · On: IT
Well, I thought IT was more than okay! Brian to the rescue!:) At least now the birds will have something else to roost and poop on, and the deer will have another object to piss on (do that hike their legs like dogs do? LOL!). As the saying goes, to everything there is a purpose...!
I like the fact that Brian is gradually changing into someone who can love and is capable of BEING loved. And I'm looking forward to our stubborn boy giving in to what we ALL know he's wanting..But at the same time I always adore it when Justin plays hard to get!
P.S. How about asking Bob if it's possible to put your poll up on your author's page here? I imagine it wouldn't be hard to do and it would be easier for readers over here to vote, also.:)
*Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! You know I never thought about the animals pissing and pooping on them but that was good! Who is Bob and I didn't know you could have polls here. Let me know througfh fanfic or a IM. Thx!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 06:24 PM · On: IT
Charming chapter - don't chastise yourself child! Very visual verbiage! Poor pathetic Brian and poor pretty Justin with his punctured pate! Loved the fun imagery: horrible hunters turned to hardened stone, firebreathing ward horse:", the Ansley pony tail, not-quite Michael who keeps saying 'Mas . . . Brian'. I enjoyed - didn't feel like filler to me. Now - explain the chastity device? TAG
Author's Response: Awww thanks! the alliteratyion continues! I'm glad you liked this chapter and btw I saw your reviews for Snowshine and Cinderfella as well! I'll get to thiose soon as well. Thanx!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 05:52 PM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
I'm so excited to find out what IT was!!!!!!! I can't wait to read this chapter! TAG
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 09:57 PM · On: Brian Remembers: The West Wing, the Hungry Hermit, and the Horrible Hunters
This is getting really weird ! But in a good life-affirming way:D...update soon, can't wait, don't leave us hanging.
Dilia.
Author's Response: I'm doin' my best! Thanks for taking such an interestin the story! I can't believe how popular this one is! Keep reviewing!
Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:18 AM · On: Brian Remembers: The West Wing, the Hungry Hermit, and the Horrible Hunters
This whole chapter was an interesting twist. I really love the story so far and am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks for your support! Anything in particular you liked? Well thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Brian Remembers: The West Wing, the Hungry Hermit, and the Horrible Hunters
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED this Chapter. In fact I'm pretty sure MY chapter is the best one in your whole story! I was laughing out loud - everyone on th bus thought I was nuts! And of course, a little alliteration always amuses! But, I still have one question - How much wood would a woody chuck if a woody could chuck wood? ;p. TAG.
P. S. Maybe well start a new fad and all the authors will go temporarily insane with a-literacy!
Author's Response: For heavens sake to yur reading in pvt! Or at least not in enclosed spaces so you can laugh with abandon and yu won't be picked up for being nuts! I'm pretty sure yur access to midnight whispers would be DRASTICALLY reduced in the slammer and you won't be able to write at all with a straitjacket on! So behave! And keep reading...and writing!
Re: your question How much wood? About as much wood as a woody could if a woody could chuck wood!
I think it should definitely be a fad to be an alliterate for at least a chapter! I think everybody should dig our their thesaurus or to dictionarydotcom for an alliteracy challenge! I was using the one there online and I completely forgot and only found this out AFTER I finished the chapter... I actually had a book thesaurus, the whole time!
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:35 PM · On: Brian Remembers: The West Wing, the Hungry Hermit, and the Horrible Hunters
brian is going to be pissed,when he gets up
Author's Response: He is indeed! Await and see!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Brian Remembers: The West Wing, the Hungry Hermit, and the Horrible Hunters
Oh, so now you're writing large chapters AND cliffhangers? What are we going to DO with you??? "Pull up a stump" - ha! Loved that line...! Looks like you're riding a writing crest at the moment, so we'll expect another chapter tomorrow? (Hey, I thought I'd ask anyway; besides, I have my OWN stories I should be working on....!:)
Looking forward to the rest of what your very vivid imagination whips up....! ~Kim
Author's Response: I hope to have more soon...It'sstill very erratic....did like 1,000 words one day and then yesterday, I got out a paragraph....Coffeehouse continues to be loud and annoying...I think i m going elsewhere for a few days.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 06:45 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers Part 3: The Diner
Some very witty repartee in this chapter ("hands above the waist" - ha!). Loved the excuses that flowed out of Justin's mouth each time Brian needed one. And yes, you're doing quite well hiding "IT" from us.:) Looking forward to its imminent reveal in the next chapter, which I'm heading to now.:)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 06:34 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 2: The Trip into Town
Hi, my friend - finally getting a chance to get caught up on your story. There's that "IT" tease again at the end - ha! My favorite lines by far in this chapter:
"Justin, I'm - I'm sorry. That's a throwback from Liberty Avenue and Babylon. It's like...automatic pilot...it's like..."
"Learn to drive!" Justin snapped.
Hilarious!! Enjoying this little tale very much - now onto the next chapter.:) ~Kim
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2012 03:13 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers Part 3: The Diner
What's wrong with giving us a few little clues/allusions? Please. TAG
Author's Response: Oh, it s just that in a previous story, I tried to be all mysterious and spooky and it turned out horribly...you could guess who the mystery figure was a mile away...I give clues that are too overt...so this time i m being careful
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 02:25 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers Part 3: The Diner
I think you're doing great!! Sorry I hadn't reviewed your past few chapters but I did enjoy all of them, so much!
Now you've got me really curious about the "it", first I thought it would be some kind of bashing incident sort of thing (since the shaving of hair etc) but I guess not...can't wait to see where you take this :)
Author's Response: well, I'm not saying either one way or another but...remember...this is 15 days ago....so, 15 more fun filled days for IT to happen. It's Brian's POV/memories to come next. Keep guessing and reviewing...and please vote on the other site...I need to know where to go from here.
Reviewer: Dilia (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2012 09:42 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 2: The Trip into Town
MY GOD ,,, THIS STORY IS TO DIE FOR. KEEP GOING.
oh by the way I voted.
Author's Response: Thank you for the high praise! And thank you thank you for voting!!!!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2012 06:00 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 2: The Trip into Town
So very, very cruel. Leaving us hanging there like this. What happened at the Diner? When do we get to the Sex! Get your priorities straight here and let's get on with it! (Frustrated reader off to another cold shower!) {^^} TAG
Author's Response: Yes, I'm being very very cruel with the ciffys here in this one. The Part with the Diner is coming later tonight. I wasn't quite finished and I needed to tweak it a bit. And it still didn't turn out the way I wanted but c'est la vie, right? And sorry, one more chapter of flashbacks before any birthday celebration but it will well worth the wait. Well, the plan in my head is worth it...I hope I can do it justice. Sorry about the cold showers....sort of ;)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 10:17 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 2: The Trip into Town
GOTDARNIT!!! WHAT HAPPENED!??
Anyhow, the story gets better and better. This chapter was very cleverly written and entertaining as the whole story is. LOved the limo ride. Loved this line:
He was tired. Tired of this room, tired of the thing on his cock, tired of being neglected, tired of Brian, tired of Brian, making such progress and then obviously regressing back to his asshole "Stud" ways again.
I'm still dying to know what the hell happened, though.
Author's Response: Soon soon! This tortoise is plodding along! There is one more scene to go from Justin's memories with a very mean cliffy and then I start work on Brian's memories which hopefully will not be so long in getting through and will be called simply...IT. I will do my best with it and I hope not too disappointing and worth the wait.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 10:03 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
"Can I get you anything to drink? Sacramental wine? Holy water?"
LMAO! This chapter was hilarious!
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 05:17 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
in town sud be fun.maybe some see him and turns to stone.~evil grin~
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2012 02:49 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
The other reason was that he hoped Brian might someday knock on the door, catch him at it and fuck him into oblivion, rule be damned.
They're both horny. I'm dying to find out what the hold up is.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 07:59 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
Ah..I can guess what had happened or maybe I'll be surprised. And I have to admit segments of this chapter were hot, scorching hot. And a cock lock...quite creative indeed!
Author's Response: Yes it's actually based on real chastity devices that are out there on the market
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 02:05 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
What a cliffhanger! Ouch! Please kick R/L back on all of our behalfs and get on with this intriguing story! TAG
Author's Response: awwww! Thank you so much! That means a lot from such a great writer!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 02:48 AM · On: Preparing for Dinner
You said if I don't review you'll send the beast over to eat me. You promise? I'm having a rather dull afternoon and that sounds just lovely! Please, please, please! I promise never to review again ! TAG
Author's Response: That's a promise I hope you break! As it says in the lates chapter/ preview, R/L is being a bitch! But I hope to get more work on it done and send the Beast your way sooner than later!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 02:36 AM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
So, you're into leather, huh? -Sure. (wink.). TAG
Author's Response: He He!! This is kinda of a what if?... Brian was!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2012 01:54 AM · On: Leaving Home...Coming Home
Enjoyed meeting Beddy! Funny & cleavor chapter! TAG
Author's Response: Thanks fofor deciding to read and review this story I'm glad you liked Beddy and glad you are liking the story. If I don't get to reply to every review, please forgive. I just don't want to repeat myself.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 01:40 AM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
* waves * I just read all chapters and I'm hooked. I love it.
Please more.
* hugs *
Author's Response: thanks for reading everything. I'll try and give you another "fix" soon. But I'm a wordy, wordy bastard! And R/L is causing me grief. I'm trying tho.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2012 11:38 PM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
Great start - love the medusa twist! TAG
Author's Response: Well thank you! I loved Greek mythology
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 06:12 PM · On: 17 days later...Justin Remembers PART 1: Brother Brian
Oh, now you are such a teaser! Bad boy! Just enough of a chapter to whet our whistle and then you yank the rug back out! (Maybe I should try this - I didn't get a lot of reviews for my latest story update - ha!). I like the gold 'chastity' device, BTW - effective but also kind of 'kinky.':)
Well, when you're done teasing like Justin might be doing to Brian eventually I will be waiting rather impatiently to find out what "IT" was!! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Believe it or not I didn't mean to! I was just taking so long and then 3 quarters of the way through I saw where it was going and thought up this evil plan! IT is coming though!
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2012 04:53 AM · On: What Happened After Dinner
I enjoyed this chapter, it was hot and fun...it was different I have to admit but good different. I do look forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: well I warned yu about the S/M imagery BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! Yes this story is turning out very strange, delving into bondage and chastity and other things and will be a lot sexier that my other stories. It's funny tho.... The Little Merman which has virtually no sex ....and then that unfort incident with Michael...(sorry everybody!!!) is my most popular and beloved story. (And even decorated w/ a blue ribbon yay!) Anyway..... And with this one...which has sex, is popular but I feel is vastly inferior to all my other works. (Except The Crucible) OK well I've blathered on long enough....
Reviewer: toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2012 11:13 PM · On: What Happened After Dinner
I just discovered this wonderful Fic and devoured the enitre thing in s single day!
I dodn't have the adeaqaute vocabulary to express just how much I am loving this wonderful story!
But I am greedy by nature, and I want more - soon! =}
Author's Response: I cannot tell you how much this review meant to me since you do not know me. Did you really read this all in one sitting? Even the interminably long first chapter? Wow! However, sorry, I took a couple of days off and I cannot be rushed. I'm not sure when Ch 8 will be done. Keep a look out.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 06:58 AM · On: What Happened After Dinner
Well, that was a LONG one (at least by your typical standards!). I for one thought the game of cat and mouse was very cute. You warned me about the lasso and here it is - ha! I thought I was moving into a Star Wars movie there for a moment with Brian's "I can feel their presence" type statement - LOL!
It's hard to tell who will have the hardest time enduring the next 17 days - Justin or Brian. I'll be looking forward to finding out! Glad you updated this...and now I must go back to my own updating - yikes! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Yur a bit of a Star Wars fan too aren't you? Perhaps you should do a Fic for that too. I bet the fandom on fanfic is HUGE! Thanks for your review and support. I don't know how far the bondage thing is going to go but I hope it's not ruffling too many feathers there. So you liked the lasso tho huh?
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2012 03:43 AM · On: The Wards
And Justin smiled because he could see that Brian was not being belligerent, but simply doubted himself. And that, over time, could be overcome.
Nice point. I like the way you have incorporated canon Brian.
Author's Response: believe it or not I find canon Brian incredibly hard to write. That's why he's so often OOC in most of my stories. Or maybe...in those stories asshole/canon Brian doesn't really fit. But in this one, he's so damn horny. Also, look for a slow descent into the seedy world of BDSM. That's a warning to the rest of you too. That's just how things are rolling. I don't really know what's going to happen here. Ironically, the only clear picture I have in my hewad for this story is the ending and it promises to be my most spectacularly brutal one yet. I hope. Don't quote me on that.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2012 03:35 AM · On: Jambalaya
"Bitch..." Brian muttered under his breath.
"SHE'S NICE!" Justin roared, "And you scared her half to death! Aren't you ashamed of yourself at all!!?"
Brian looked down at his plate and pushed around his last bite of jambalaya. He shrugged his shoulders wordlessly and sulkily, obviously ashamed of himself.
Hilarious!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 02:50 AM · On: The Wards
Okay, my friend, I'll try not to take it personally because you wiped out my previous comments by mistake because I know you were having a bad hair day yesterday - ha! So here we go again:
My favorite lines of this chapter were:
"I don't really know where to begin," said Brian, after a long silence.
"Try at the beginning," said Justin, "It's a very good place to start."
"So I've heard," Brian said wryly. "I have seen the Sound of Music, you know. I am a fag after all."
"After that queen out just now," Justin observed, "Of that I have no doubt."
Brian looked uncomfortable, "Oh Justin, can't you let that go? That was SO five minutes ago!"
"That's because it WAS five minutes ago!" Justin yelled. "Now stop stalling and spill!"
LOVED those lines - LOL! And I adore the feisty side of Justin in this fic as well as your vivid sense of humor. And any fic that includes Emmett is definitely an added bonus. And what can I say about Tanya's banner? Absolutely gorgeous!!
I'll be looking foward to the rest of your story! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: and here was my response: You hit upon the one line that came out of no where and made me giggle the most! You know me too well. Glad you like the banner write and tell the artist so, won't you and that I do too. Glad people are liking it. As we both know, it was a job getting it up there. We earned it!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2012 01:37 AM · On: Jambalaya
Not a review yet. I keep forgeting to comment about the banner -- AWESOME!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2012 01:35 AM · On: Preparing for Dinner
"OK. You're the Master. What you say goes. Your way or the highway."
LOVE this Justin! He is addressing Brian on his behavior and not his looks.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2012 11:27 PM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
Now that was KINKY! I'm a little ashamed to say I sort of enjoyed it. LOL. You have such an imagination.
That courtyard scene was very sad. The flowers and statues with all the mean who had failed before was heartbreaking, but the thought of the two of them together in stone for eternity, wouldn't appease me if I was Justin.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2012 09:27 PM · On: Leaving Home...Coming Home
""I'll tell you what you've done!" Justin yelled, not hearing her, "You sold me! You sold me, like....like a fucking piece of meat! For a rose!"
That was harsh but so true. But it looks like Justin has some anger issues. LOL.
"Wh-what are you gonna do with me?" asked Justin fearfully, "Hey, you didn't roofie me did you?"
I loved the whole village and introduction to the Beast scenes. I also thought I was clever about the Beast home being promised to his prince, reminiscent of season five.
Reviewer: Upsadaisymaisie (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2012 09:54 PM · On: Jambalaya
Really enjoying this 'fairytale', as I have done all previous ones too. Glad to see Justin laying down some rules and not just letting Brian have his own way about everything. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response: glad you liked Justin "layin down the law'! That was a favorite part to write. I often feel Justin is portrayed to passive sometimes and while he is a bottom boy he was often...and stil is...a blond tiger in my mind oftentimes. Thanx for resading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Jambalaya
Like a train robber into S and M - that was a hoot! My favorite line of the chapter by far. I do love your wicked sense of humor, my dear. Looking forward to seeing where your vivid imagination takes this story next. Maybe Brian needs a whip to hold the 'head snakes' at bay? LOL! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: No whip...well... maybe later, but remember he did come in with a lasso....hint hint
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 11:57 AM · On: Jambalaya
OoO...Quite interesting, I must say, especially liked your idea about the rose tattoo.
I'm really curious for the next chapter.
Will be looking forward to it :)
Author's Response: thank you and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 07:04 PM · On: Preparing for Dinner
Hi, Sweetie! Glad to see you've updated this! I'm still really enjoying it as well as your creativity in coming up with Brian's different outfits (ride 'em, Cowboy!). And I knew it was Emmett before you confirmed it for me - he is perfect as a confidante of Justin's in this story.:) Sounds like you'll have another update soon - I'll be looking forward to it. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2012 06:11 PM · On: Preparing for Dinner
wonder when the mask will come off.then the fun will begin
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 01:47 PM · On: Preparing for Dinner
Ahh..You left me on the edge of the seat in the end! Excellent chapter.. and looking forward for more!!
Author's Response: All will be revealed next chapter , I promise. Plus a rather detailed recap of the prologue from Brian's POV and discription. It was boring to write but just turned out that way. Hope it's not boring to read. Sorry if it is. Coming soon!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2012 09:15 AM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
golden gardenias.:)
Author's Response: yup ;)
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