Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2019 10:35 AM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
I loved reading this story, really enjoyed it.Thank you very much. Judit from Hungary
Author's Response: Dear Juditka,
Köszönöm! So good to hear from our friends from across the sea! I've been to Budapest and loved Hungary.
Thanks again for the lovely review.
Jackie
Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:39 AM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
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Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2015 10:07 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
Beautiful story!!
Author's Response: Dear Purple,
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for leaving a comment.
- Jackie Mag
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2012 12:30 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
I read this before I started leaving reviews so I want to rectify that and let you know how much I enjoyed it. Thank you for the entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: Flossee,
This was a fun one to write ... seeing the guys work their way back to being together. Thanks for leaving the review!
- Jackie
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2012 09:27 AM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
Loved this story! Thanks for writing and sharing it! HUGS, Cindy
Author's Response: Dear Cindy,
Thanks for the lovely review. Your words mean so much to me. Happy to share!! Hugs back at ya.
- Jackie
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 09:28 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
Sorry,I just had made a grammer mistake in my last review.The fuck mobile!
Anyway,I love your story very much,because I am a big fan of BJ from the first sight of the show!Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Don't worry about the grammar mistakes. The ideas are what's important. ... And I've been a big BJ fan since I first saw the show a year ago.
Thanks again,
- Jackie
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 09:16 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
How sweet it is! Brain was a so romantic man!Although it out of charactor .I love this Brain,and Justine! sweet,happiness and love each other so much! They got everything what a happyly life should be imaged!
Author's Response: Dear ivylovebj,
Thanks for the nice review. Brian being romantic is out of character, I guess, but I can see THIS Brian being slightly different than the one in the series. I love writing the boys together and happy.
Thanks again!
- Jackie
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 02:17 AM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
I loved and enjoyed reading your story. It was well writtten and I just feel in love with B/J all over again. Two thumbs up!!!
Author's Response: Dear ColorLet23,
It's great that you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the compliment on my writing. It's so easy to fall in love with them all over again, isn't it?
Thanks again,
- Jackie
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:14 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
i like this story very much
thank you for sharing
Author's Response: Dear chandrika,
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed sharing it. Thanks for the nice review.
- Jackie
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 08:27 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
this ending is perfect! I have so enjoyed this story - and love your writing here. This version of our boys is one that has made me smile throughout the chapters. thanks
Charle
Author's Response: Dear Charle,
There's always another 'version' of our boys. I'm glad that you like this one. Thank you for appreciating and commenting on my writing. I had a shorter ending and one of my betas encouraged me to extend it. I'm happy that I did. You make ME smile, Charle.
Thanks again,
- Jackie
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 08:18 PM · On: CHAPTER NINE - PARTNERS PLUS
oh - this is so sweet - I love this chapter!
Charle
Author's Response: Charle,
Thank you so much!
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 06:03 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
Hi, my friend - finally had a chance to catch up with this very sweet story. I always love it when the boys are married and happy and I really like the name for their child you gave them.:) Thanks for sharing this with us!:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
Thanks for the kind words, my friend. This was a celebration of marriage equality in New York. I gave their son a "J" name to kind of reflect Justin's name and show that the kid is his offspring. I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks again for commenting. :)
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 01:28 PM · On: CHAPTER TEN - EPILOGUE
Perfect ending. I am sorry that it's over but now you can start another one...just a little hint! Thanks for such a good story that kept my thinking and wondering what would happen next. Lori
Author's Response: Dear Lori,
It's been fun keeping you guessing. This was a fun one to write and imagine. I have another one started, but it's far from done. It might be a while, Lori.
Thanks for all of the kind comments!
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 01:20 PM · On: CHAPTER NINE - PARTNERS PLUS
I can't believe after all the things you put these boys thru they finally are in a happy relationship with the I love you filling the air. I have enjoyed every word of this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. Lori
Author's Response: Dear Lori,
Well, considering how much they went through in the original series - what I wrote for them is probably on par. :) And, indeed, in the end, love fills the air. I'm glad that you enjoyed the stories and truly appreciate the encouraging words.
- Jackie
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 05:50 PM · On: CHAPTER EIGHT - THE SHOW AND THE SNOW
Wow a I love you and it looks like a committment coming up
Author's Response: Dear bksbracelet,
I hope I give you the ending you want. I think you'll like it. :)
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 02:33 PM · On: CHAPTER EIGHT - THE SHOW AND THE SNOW
My word, get Justin a little drunk and he'll do all sorts of things! Now I can't wait to see what they do about their commitment to each other. Will it be a full out formal event or a quiet private type one. I never can tell where this story is going to go. Great update. Lori
Author's Response: Dear Lori,
I've written Justin drunk before and it's fun to imagine. I'm glad I can keep you guessing. Thanks for the positive comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2012 11:25 AM · On: CHAPTER EIGHT - THE SHOW AND THE SNOW
This chapter was very hot. I was so happy when Brian said I love you and when Brian was so concerned for Justin. I love your story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Dear Bridget,
Thank you for the kind words and the 'hot' vote. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Kind words are always appreciated.
- Jackie
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 03:03 AM · On: CHAPTER SIX - AN ANNIVERSARY MISSED
this is sooo good - it so hard to wait for he next chapter! - really loving this story!
Charle
Author's Response: Dear Charle,
I enjoyed writing this one, too. I'm glad you're enjoying it, my friend.
Thanks so much! - Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2012 12:34 PM · On: CHAPTER SIX - AN ANNIVERSARY MISSED
I love how you keep throwing more road blocks in the way. I sure love your style of writing. Always leaving me wanting more and giving me so much to ponder before the next update. Lori
Author's Response: Lori,
The road blocks do make it more interesting. Thanks for the compliment about my writing. Next update within the next couple of days. Thanks again!
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2012 02:29 AM · On: CHAPTER FIVE - A NEW ROMANCE
Great Chapter. I hope the relationship grows and both of the boys are happy and getting what they need...
Author's Response: There are always ups and downs. So, maybe a little down before we're back up again. Thanks for the positive comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2012 05:49 AM · On: CHAPTER FIVE - A NEW ROMANCE
Very sweet, my friend; I like this type of Brian! My favorite line, though, was:
"If you want to have him slide down your pole, go ahead." LOL!
I liked the way you conveyed how much Brian cared with the key without him having to lay his heart out on the line, but the part where he tells Justin that he 'cares very much' is still very telling nonetheless. Very enjoyable story, dear; I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapters.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim,
I was imagining the stripper at the King of Babylon contest who dressed as a fireman. Thanks for appreciating the line. As for the key ... it was time for Brian to give that piece of himself, but it always has to be gradual with our boy. I thought a lot about what he'd say in answer to the I love you in this situation and "I care very much" seemed right. Thanks for the review!
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 07:05 AM · On: CHAPTER FOUR - BACK IN NEW YORK
I think that was worth waiting for. I don't think they'll be willing to stay away from each other for long. I doubt Brian will be able to last whole day at work with out a Justin break. Lori
Author's Response: Dear Lori,
I'm glad you think it was worth waiting for. I wanted it to be different and HOT. And, as much fun as fooling around at work sounds, that might not be the case here. This is post-Kip remember? :)
Thanks for the review.
- Jackie
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2012 05:44 AM · On: CHAPTER FOUR - BACK IN NEW YORK
wish you would post more than one at a time. this story is so good. it's hard to wait days for another chapter. sorry just saying.
Author's Response: Dear linda,
I know it's hard to get into a story in bits and pieces, but I'm doing this to try to increase the number of readers and reviewers. Put it on your story alert and you'll see the next time I post. I think I'm averaging a chapter every three days. Just know that it's all written and now it's just a matter of posting the chapters.
Thanks for the kind review,
- Jackie
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 05:15 AM · On: CHAPTER FOUR - BACK IN NEW YORK
I am absolutely loving this story! Nothing hotter for me than watching the boys fall in love - both openly admitted how much they want the other...gets me every time!
anxious for more
Charle
Author's Response: Dear Charle,
I also like to see the boys falling in love - gradually and naturally. I'm happy that you're enjoying it so much. Loving life, right? :)
Thanks,
- Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 04:22 AM · On: CHAPTER FOUR - BACK IN NEW YORK
Hi, Dear - very hot! Enjoyed this immensely (although probably not as much as the boys did - ha!). One of the best lines to me was when Justin said "Well, we've shared a shower before and I'm out of the closet, so, why don't we just proceed to the bed?" Loved it!
I wish I had your discipline to actually have a story finished before I posted them - aargh! I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
I'm glad you're enjoying this. Yeah, that 'out of the closet' line popped in my head and I knew I had to get it into the story there. I thank JustBeAQueen for the steam-assist here. I get the basics laid out - what happens when - then she adds her special bit of spice to it all.
I can only write complete stories ... I can't imagine any other way. I just got the last chapter of this one beta-d, so chapters 5-10 are coming right down the pike. I think that only posting a chapter at a time is increasing the readership a little and adding to the reviews as well.
Thanks for the kind words,
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 02:28 PM · On: CHAPTER THREE - EVENING AT BABYLON
Things just keep getting in the way. I think the anticipation is going to make the first time even more special. Great update. Lori
Author's Response: Dear Lori,
It's been fun, writing the roadblocks to our boys 1st time together. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review. More to come....
- Jackie
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 08:34 AM · On: CHAPTER THREE - EVENING AT BABYLON
this is sooo nice! I'm in love with the gentleness - the growing fondness - the pacing here is awesome - I'm not sure I have read any story ever where the boys were able to let their feelings grow slowly over time like this, offering each other their friendship before they get to the fucking (lol), all the while knowing they are so hot for each other. Really well done...anxious for more!
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Dearest Charle,
Your words mean SO much to me. Thank you for all of the positive comments. Yes, I wanted to show the boys getting to know each other first. I know that in the series it was fuck first and name clarification later, but knowing the love they eventually had for each other, it isn't that hard to imagine that the love (or genuine like) could come first. I enjoyed showing ways that they are hot for each other, without it culminating in sex. Poor Lindsay had to hurt her ankle, but it was worth it. Giggle.
Thank you again,
- Jackie
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 01:15 PM · On: CHAPTER TWO - THE GALLERY OPENING
I like it! Can't wait to see what happens once they get to Pittsburgh. I have a feeling Melanie is going to cause some problems. Right now things seems to be just a little too smooth. Lori
Author's Response: Dear Lori,
There will be some more obstacles to overcome, but you'll have to wait and see. Thanks for the response.
- Jackie
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2012 09:19 AM · On: CHAPTER TWO - THE GALLERY OPENING
better and better.:)
Author's Response: Dear linda,
Thanks and thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy.
- Jackie
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2012 07:53 AM · On: CHAPTER TWO - THE GALLERY OPENING
I must confess to being more than partial to alternate meetings and lives for our boys - probably why I write so many of them. This is off to a great and interesting start. I'm looking forward to reading more of this...
:)
Author's Response: Dear confused_bliss,
And you do them so well...! Yes, gotta love the alternate starts to their relationship, as long as it looks like there will be a happy ending possible. I'm trying the 'installment' method this time. Thanks so much for reading and the positive comments.
- Jackie
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 06:47 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
Nice AU I am looking forward to see where this goes :)
Author's Response: Dear bksbracelet,
Thanks. This was a fun one to write. I hope to keep people guessing for a while. :)
- Jackie
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2012 04:02 AM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
j adore ton premier chapitre attend la suite tres rapidement a bientot
Author's Response: Encore viendra bientôt, mon amie. Merci.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 03:00 AM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
well - this is intriguing - I love this new take on how they met - I love open for love and romance Brian and confident successful Justin! I'm anxious to read more
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Dear Charle,
It's a challenge to come up with new and challenging ways for the guys to get together. A new chapter soon...
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2012 12:17 AM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
Interesting story concept. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Dear Cheryl,
I'm glad you like the concept. More coming soon....
Thanks,
Jackie
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 09:50 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
Oohh...good beginning to your story, my friend! I love the setup of the sexual tension already and the more confident Justin.:) I'll be looking forward to reading more of your story.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Dear Kim,
I do a lot of sexual tension in this one, so hold on!
- Jackie
PS: All my love to Randy in RED
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2012 09:17 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
Less keep it rolling. I like the story so far. I always like it when B/J is on equal level ground. Very nice.
Author's Response: Dear taurus...
Thanks for the comments. Another chapter coming soon...
- Jackie
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2012 07:10 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
love the beginning. your synopsis was great-cut through all that bs and on to newer and better things. looking forward to more-hopefully soon. :)
Author's Response: Dear linda,
Thanks. I work harder on the synopsis and stuff now and I like to think I'm getting better at it. I appreciate the comments. More chapters soon...
- Jackie
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2012 01:59 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
i love it its great kim
Author's Response: Kim,
Thanks! More coming soon...
- Jackie
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 01:10 PM · On: CHAPTER ONE – MEETING IN NEW YORK
:)
Author's Response: :) back at ya. - Jackie
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