Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 130: You Are Not Better than Him

One word Jensen. KARMA. Karma at work and play.

“This building’s on fire?” I can’t believe you wrote that as I thought Jensen might do that since Brian couldn’t leave in a hurry but then I thought, no we have already had a fire. Let’s hope Justin is still available in one years’ time.

Another chapter. Thank you so much.

Cheers

Author's Response:

"Wow, Flossee you get funnier and funnier.  And I C U noticed it 2, the karma between us.   So often U say something and I hav to say WHATTTT is she reading my mind doggone it!  Well, here's a few much chapters for U 133 & 134. Certianly hope U enjvy.  Later Delores.

Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 15 ... And You are Just Telling me That Now!

I am just reading this for the second time. I the first time I read it, I only got through a few chapters and I gave up because I thought it was a Brian/Michael story and I dislike Michael so much. I recently decided to give it another chance. I should have stuck it out the first time around because I am loving it so far.

Author's Response:

... Loving it so far.  Thank U, Taire.  And, that you so much for taking the time to comment.  If you read any of the other reviews here you realize how EXCITED I get when someone new comments. So I smiling so big right now.  And Happy Belated New Year to you

here's your fireworks display 2013@##^&^&*$##!!!!   I don't know how far you are thus far but 133 & 134 was just added.  I hope U do stay till the end. Sincerely Delores

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

I am planning to hire a private detective to go find you. Then I am sooo going to fucking kill you!...... I mean that in a good way. LOL. I read all these chapters non-stop. The very first one had me so confused and then it just went deeper down from there. Lol. But I never stop even when I wanted to. I have shouted, yelled, cried, smile, laughed and cursed you. But that is what is all about. You have me bowing at you. You have given me something to remember and it's not even finished. Now, please ...FUCKING UPDATE!!!

Author's Response:

Non-stop!  Are U pulling my leg there!  I'm so damn excited.  

Shouted, yelled, cried,smile, laugh and curse me - THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU.

And this so unbelievable especially cominig from you because I been a fan of your stuff since I first discovered this site about 5ive years ago.  And I love the way you push the envelop. I'll never forget your story where both Brian and Justin are serial killers.

And then there's the one where Justiin's the biker and he's the more aggressive one as well as older than Brian.  Also, if I recall correctly, it was an MPG and Justin impregnated Brian, and he was so innocent.  There was a love scene in that story that I must have had be  stuck reading the same paragraph over and over and over and over... for days!   I think I was so mesmerized that I actually left a comment asking you if you was a man or woman writing a love scene that hot, LOL!

But Draccone I cannot express enough how so flattered i am to find a review like this left by you.  You've made my YEAR already and the year is not even two months old yet. 

And heres that FUCKING UPDATE you asked for.  Two chatpers 133 and 134 and I hope you enjoy them as much as the others.  Later, and sincerely and thx so much again.  This was an incredible review.  Delores

 

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 46: Remind Me To Thank Him

well, I'm up to chapter 47 so far and still loving this. can't seem to turn computer off.   I'm still trying to figure out who the hell Harry is!   I'm thinking it's Brian's mentally  challenged  brother or cousin or something like that(any hints?) Mikey is an asshole of the greatest proportions. Please tell me that you plan to get rid of him - somehow!  off to read again....  keep it coming....

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

I hope Justin say no to Jensen.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa... let's see about that, huh?  Here's 133 & 34.  Hav Fun, Later Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

Oh God no please don't... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

LOL!  Let's see what happens now.  Here's 133 & 34, will definitely put some light on the situation.  Later Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 130: You Are Not Better than Him

Thank God Justin's relationship with Jensen is finally over... And just maybe him and Brian will have a second, or third chance at love... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi Kathlee..   THIRD chance LOL!  ROFLMAO... did I do that!  Absolute riot!   Hav Fun, heres chapter 133 & 34  Sincerely and later Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

Nonononono!!!!!

Author's Response:

Uh-oh, let's see.  Here's 133 & 24.  I hope it makes U holler less LOL!  later & sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

Be strong, Justin! Don't you dare to back to that evil Jensen. TAG



Author's Response:

Here's to STRENGTH>  Thank U TAG.  Here's chapters 133 & 24, so hope U enjvy.  Later Delores

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

No he won't marry you. Justin can't marry a psycho, racist, violent man.. That is just a no! Go away Jensen.

Author's Response:

Wow!  U're so right and here's chapter 133 & 34 to prove it.  Hav Fun, PacaGirl, so glad 2 C U R still w/me.  Later Delores

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 131: Later... And You 've Better Behave!

Thank you :)

Author's Response:

You are so welcome, Pacagirl.  And here's chapter 133 & 34 for you have fun.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?

run justin! run !

get away from him!!!

thank you for these three delightful chapters

loving it!



Author's Response:

Hi, Reader:   And, you are so welcome and thank you for keep coming back.  It's a pleasure entertaining U.  Hav fun.  Later.  Delores

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 130: You Are Not Better than Him

Yeaahhhhhhhhhhh! I think it's safe to think the bigot won't stand anymore between justin and brian. Justin is back to his senses. Yeahh! And Brian calls Gus! Yeaaahhhh.
Please don't make our men meet new lovers.
Thank you for this chapter. Hugs for you.

Author's Response:

"Justin back to his senses"   Hooorahhhh to that LOL!   Hi, Paca so glad U enjoyed the chapter.  Like promised here's 131 and 32.  I hope you still enjvy.  later, Delores

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2013 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

Hi, Delores, thank you for those great updates! I'm always so happy when you update your story! 

I didn't know anything about what had happened to you till your answer... now I appreciate your fantastic story even more than before! I can't imagine how strong you are, how many efforts you put in this beautiful work! I never though I could love it more, but it happened!

Finally Brian and Justin had some kind of closure, but still, it's so sad:( Why, just WHY does Brian have to be so stubborn?! He is ready to lose the only man he loves, just to avoid new difficulties! Or maybe he just doesn't believe that Justin would forgive him even if he tried to appologise. He may be right, I'm sure it won't be easy! Now, what's in Europe? I'm glad that Justin decided not to marry Jensen, it will be better for all of them. You described Justin's feelings of freedom perfectly, I was just as happy as he was!

Thank you for the great updates! I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Hi, again Katja: 

You're welcome and here's three additional ones 130, 31, & 32.

Awwww, thank  you so much for you say here.  It is so inspiriing.  I meet so of the nicest people at this website.  I think that's what keeps me coming back and I learn so much for everyone.  

And, Justin do have an adventure of head of him and I guess Brian does too in a sense, I can see him giving his all the have full use of all his extremities again.

Later and Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

OMG what a great way to go, you’re a legend. Justin will be famous, rich, unmarried and playing the field. Thank you I think it’s about time he got a break. Read about that Brian and I hope it’s heartbreaking; as you once told Justin “I’m going to fuck other people” and it devastated Justin so now you live with it. Oh I feel really evil writing that so I had best stop now. I love this update.


Cheers

Author's Response:

"I'm going to... other people"  Wow!  I'm flatttered that you would remember chapters way back there in the beginning.  Thanks, Flossee.   Well, again heres 130, 31 and 32 for you.  Later, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

Great chapter. I hope Brian and Justin work things out between them. 

Looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

"I hope Brian and Justin work things out between them."  Awwww, I hope so too.  Well, here's chaps 130, 31 & 32 for you.  Enjvy, Lexa... and hav fun.  Sincerely Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

Good choice Justin! Make him come after you, he deserves it (Brian of course) And let Jensen get another maid. He deserves it as well :P 

 

Keep on!!!! Hurry!!!!! <3 



Author's Response:

"Jensen, get another maid."  You got me rolling on the ground with that comment.  And, again heres 130, 31 and 32.  Hav fun & enjvy.   Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

*happy dance*
I hope Jensen won't be a jerk about it and that Justin will follow his plan and forget about that awful man (jensen, not brian). Thanks for this chapter

Author's Response:

I'm 'happy dancing' right next to you, Pacagirl.   You welcome and here's 3 more chapters 130, 31 and 32, I truly hope you enjvy.   Later & sincerely Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

Oh thank God... Europe is just what Justin needs... :) ~ Kathleen

More chapters soon please...

Author's Response:

Here's for you, Kathleen, chapt 130, 31 & 32.  Hav Fun I hope U still enjvy.  Later & Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2013 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Al  Happy belated New Year to you   2013@#$&&*%^#$! (fireworks!)  I'm so excited!

 

So, glad U joined me and where are 3 more chapters for you.... hope I didn't keep you waiting too long.   Chapt 130, 131 & 132.   Enjvy.  Sincerely Delores.

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 129: New Adventures Await You

Sounds like Justin is leaving Jensen.  GOOD!  :)  I think Justin would love going around Europe, maybe sampling lots of men but ultimately finding them empty and realizing his deep love for brian?  Third tries the charm, right?  Keep 'em coming!!



Author's Response:

Hmm!  Nice prespective you have there.  However, you would be surprise what Justin would find in Europe that might inevitably lead the men back into each other's arms.  Stay tuned, lol!

Reviewer: Carly (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2013 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

I'll definitely come back when it's finished.  You are one of my favorite writers on the site :)



Author's Response:

Wow!  Carly, thank you so much.  ABSOLUTELY MADE MY DAY!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

THANKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3



Author's Response:

You are so welcomeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

Reviewer: Carly (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2013 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

I love this but I can't read it anymore until its finished.   It's too angsty and I cant handle it :) Looking forward to the end.



Author's Response:

wow!  Heard for a new person.  So exciting.  Thank you, Carly.  I hope you do come back after it's finished.  And belated Happy New Year to you.   fireworks  !#@##$$$%^^!!

Reviewer: JANE (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Allies

JUST FINISHED CHAPTER 4 -- ALL I CAN SAY THIS IS VERY INTERESTING EXCEPT THE MIKEY STUFF - I HOPE BRIAN SEES HIM FOR WHAT HE REALLY IS :  an interfering, jealous and manipulative little weasel.  Can't wait to catch up with my reading!  



Author's Response:

Jane, Hi!   I do believe U R new to commenting on one of my stories and i get so EXCITED when that happens!  Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and tell me how much you are enjoying the story and happy belated New Year to you.... fireworks dispaly for you !@#^%#@@$^!!!

Later and hope to update really soon again.  Bye for now though and thanks again for taking the time.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Thank god Justin didn't marry Jensen! I don't trust him at all. Once you try to rape someone and manipulate them into marriage and begin controlling their ommunication with family it is time to get out. Fast! 



Author's Response:

"... it's time get out.  FAST!"  You got me rolling on the floor, LOL!   Thanks, debv and here's the next chapter for you 128.  Hope U like.  later, delores.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Great chapter, looking forward in what happens next. 



Author's Response:

thanks, Lexa, and here's another chapter for you 128.  Hav Fun!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Please let Justin and Brian get back together again, and him forget about Jensen... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathleen.  Believe me that is the PLAN.  Just a matter of how soon our boys is going to let that happen.   Later, and here's chapter 128 for you.  I'm so glad U R still w/the story.  LOL 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Can I please have my kitchen sink back as the dirty dishes are stacking up? Okay they aren’t really as I let the dog lick them clean before putting them away. Eww, I hear you say; well you made me read about Justin and Jensen together again so we are even. LOL. I love the ending on this chapter; you are the master at keeping our interest piqued. Please hurry back or just post something when you break from class for elevenses.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Are you a mind reader or something.  Yesterday I didn't have time to respond to the comments but I at least peeped at them and when I saw this one, I said NO WAY!  I was angry with my niece for leaving my kitchen in a big mess while I was away for the weekend.  I came back home to discovered almost every dish I had in my house scattered all over the kitchen.  She let the dishes pile up from Friday all the way up until Monday; and Tuesday morning when I got out of bed, I was sure I would go downstairs to a clean kitchen.  BUT FUCK if it wasn't even dirtier than the day before.  And, I said nothing to my niece then because I didn't want to send her off to work upset.  I thought I'd give her a good old fashion lecture when she comes home from work instead.

In addition, I had someone from my utility company scheduled to come over and fix a problem with my stove.   I certainly didn't want him to come into my kitchen and see that nasty mess, so I broke down and cleaned up after my niece.  And, then you mentioned a dog (which is my niece's dog).  I was angry at the dog too because she got dog food all over the kitchen floor, so I had to clean that up too.  Then you mentioned school and that's causing me a headache because they knocked me of hree of my classes claiming I didn't fulfill the prerequisite requirement for the three courses, but I did fulfill the requirement with the class I just took this winter, and I did pass the course.  I guess it was just that it hadn't registered in the system yet, so I got to go down to the college to resolve that situation tomorrow.  What a bummer.

Well, anyway - here's chap 128 for you.  Hope you like.  Later and sincerely, Delores

 

 

 

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Thank god for parents calling in at most inapropriate moments, LOL. You really didn´t want to go through with the wedding, didn´t you ôo???? Continue sooooooon, anxiously waiting here! :)



Author's Response:

Here's your continuation.  Didn't want you guys waitiing too long for it.  Enjvy.  Delores

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Ah you're eviiiiiiiil!

Author's Response:

Oh wow!  Pacagirl; here's 128 for you.  I hope you like.  LOL!  At least it puts Brian and Justin inside the same room for a few minutes.  LOL!

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Postponing marriage = good.  But I don't know how much longer of this Justin/Jensen thing I can take.  I need some good, ole' fashion Brian and Justin here soon!  Update soon please!  (Still loving the story  <3).



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, IcedCupcake, here's the next chapter for you.  Hav fun.  Later.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 127: I Don't Want To Fail

Another nice cliffhanger there! You're very naughty leaving us like this. Please hurry with the next chapter. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, TAG, glad U R still enjvying the story.  Here's chapter 128 for you.  Later and sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

Hi, Delores! I just wanted to support you and to say that you shouldn't get upset because of the last comment. I mean, yeah, grammar is important, but as long as it's not roughly violated, I see no point in trying to check the chapters longer so to make everything perfect. The editing is always a good thing, but in my opinion, it'd better be done when the story is already finished. What can be better than posting new chapters regulary, when all readers still remember what has happened before and can't wait to see how it'll turn?

As for moaning - well, what's the problem with that anyway?:) And I usually notice things like that, but definitely not in your story.

Thank you for everything! I'm looking forward to the new chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Katja.  Thanks you so much.  I'm aware of all the mistakes I make regarding spelling, grammar, typos, synonyms, syntax, and chronological errors as well, etc.  When I first started writing at the site, readers used to come down really hard on me about it and I used to get terribly upset, but I don't get as upset now as I used to.  I try to take it with a sense of humor now.  However, there's a reason for the problems with my writing and I've told readers about it in the past.  However, at some point I got tired of having to explain it and decided that I'll just do the best I can and have FUN! 

Well, anyway, at the age of 30 I had a bad accident that resulted in brain damage, but I'm fifty now and I've come a long way since then.  The brain damage used to be so bad I had difficulty doing simple mathematical equations like adding 25 and 9.  It would take me almost a couple of minutes to total it up to 34.  Also, I had severe problems talking, reading and writing.  When I spoke, I stuttered terribly because I had difficulty comprising a complete thought in my head.  It got to a point that often I would say nothing because of my verbal resrtictions.  When I read I had to read the same sentences or passages over and over to fully interpret its meaning, and when I wrote I had difficulty with even the most simple synonyms, like when to use sea/see; we/wee; to/two/too; their/there; hear/here, etc.  IT WAS A NIGHTMARE!  I rarely have problems with the simple ones anymore but I have to be careful with other such as blonde/blond, accept/except/ effect/affect whom/who.  Lately I've been pretty good with those but sometimes forget and have to look them up and that's at the moments I realized I made a mistake.  I don't always pick up the mistakes until after I posted and then reread the chapter.  However, due to my disability, readers here have no idea how many errors, I fix before posting.

However, over time with lots of therapy I've gotten better.  In fact, as added therapy and to better develope my mind, I returned to college, and started writing fan fiction.  Writing fan fiction and returning to college has been better therapy for me than anything that a therapist ever offered me.  And, although, I don't think my mind will ever be as sharp as it used to be, relatively speaking, I feel I'm a genius compared to what I was when the brain damage first happened.  I used to be so depressed back then, but I'm not any more because I've accepted the new me and my disability, and just do the best I can.  I realized the most anyone can ask or me or I can ask of myself is that I do my very best, which I at least try to.

Thanks again, Katja. 

Will try to update again this weekend.  Exams got me busy.  I have two this week... one tomorrow, (Tues.) and one (Fri.)... and it's a math course.  I'm so happy I can do Stats now, especially when just a couple of years ago, I had difficulty doing basic arithmetic.

Later and Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: Frostbite_las (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 124: You Can't Understand Unless...

The grammar in this story needs so much work and why do all your characters moan so much? 



Author's Response:

Now you are the one moaning.  Hav fun!  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

Great chapter. I am looking forward to when Justin meet back up with Brian. If he and Brian stop being so stubborn. *shakes head*

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa:  So glad you liked the chapter; and I hope to update again by this weekend.  Have to hurry and do some studying now, so catch you later.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

Thank you for the updates! Of course Jensen has almost made a grave mistake, but well, I personally can understand him. It's been A LOT time since their meeting, and no matter what kind of relationship he and Justin have, it still IS a relatonship. If Justin wants to be with him, he should accept that he also has to sacrifice something. And he did just that. Jensen is a man after all, he does have his needs, and well - Justin has just agreed to marry him. It's reasonable that he lost his mind for a few moments, but he stopped, and that all that matters. Anyway, they can both be blamed.

Brian really pisses me off. I hope he will find out about Justin's engagement and realize what he lost, what mistake he's made! I think he is to blame much more than Jensen. I loved Justin's speech about their past relationships, it's very well-written. I hope Justin will be strong enough and won't forgive him easily. I personally am not sure if I would ever do that. To me it seems that Jensen, no matter how strange he is, appreciates Justin more than Brian did! But anyway, I hope eventually they'll make it back together.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hi, Katja:  First of all, let me say to you what I usually say to most everyone when they comment for the first time:  I GET SO EXCITED WHEN SOMEONE NEW COMMENTS.  Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and lettiing me know how much you're enjoying the story.   But I want to give you a special thanks for if you saw the comment that posted just prior to yours you have to realize how much your comment was a relief to me and such a much needed boost. 

I'm especially grateful to you for taking the time to analyze the scene and showing me that I wrote it well enough that it can be intrepret by readers the way it was intented.  Again, I do not blame or pass judgment on any reader who might have interpret the scene in any way different than how I intented it to intrepret but it's really good to come here to this comment after the prior one.

Thanks you again, and I hope you stay to the end and contnue to enjoy.  I definitely enjoying entertaining you and all readers at this site. 

Later now and sincerely.  And also belated HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU!   fireworks diaplay.... 2013@$(&^%$#$!!!

Delores

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

I never commented and I'm sorry for that. Now I'll say I was once addicted to this story, now not so much. This was the first time a fan -fic has left me disgusted, and now I'll say goodbye to this story. I see nothing sexy about attempted rape no matter what the excuses are. I now could care less if Justin ends up with Brian or the racist, and loathsome Jensen!



Author's Response:

Hi, Jaz.  You said you are  abandoning the story, so I don't know if you will come back and view this response or not.  But you did take the time to comment and although this is a terribly touchy subject matter.  I will take the courtesy to respond.

First of all, I want to say right off the bat, that my intent was in NO WAY to glorify rape.   It had never even incurred to me that anyone would take what i wrote here that way.  So, thank you for leaving this comment, I had indeed learned something from it.  And based on some personal experiences of my own (that I won't specifically mention here), I don't fnd anything glorifying or dignifying at all about rape and I'm as disgusted as you are if I thought someone was trying to glorify rape.

However, I don't want to be insenstive to you because I can't control how any thing I write here impact on the reader, and that's why I put the warning. 

Going into writing this chapter I put the WARNING because I realized that some readers would find the subject matter of this chapter highly sensitive and emotional.  And, how some might view the chapter would be based on their own personal experiences or overall viewpoint of the highly sensitive subject matter.  And based on the fact I don't know the  personal experiences of anyone reading here (but myself), and I have the good sense not to dare try to analyze or speculate on why you or anyone might responded to my story in the way in which you did, I won't say anything further regarding that aspect.  You reacted based on your own personally feelings (no one can fault you for that).

But I want all readers at this site to know  I did not find anything sexy about the attempted rape and I won't even try to analyze why you felt my intent was to make that scene seem sexy.  (I do not know you personal experiences and do not won't to risk saying anything here that might really hurt you or anyone else at the site).

However, since you accused of me of something so heinous and I do have feelings too, I have to take this moment and define my stance.  Again I was not trying to glorify rape and it hurts me that someone here accused me of such.  However, I'm not angry with you or judge you because like I said earlier I don't know your experiences.  Therefore, I don't know why you took my story out of context the way that you did.

However, I'm going to defend my story:   The violent scene between Justin and Jensen was not just thrown into my story for any kind of sensational effect, which I kind of get the impression that's what you are accusing me of.  However, my story built up to the event and I feel I depicted well why my characters would react they way they did.  This chapter fit in just as well into my story as any other.  It is not misplaced in any way.  Jensen's haughty pride, bigotry and being highly humiliate explains why he act the way he did, and Justin's broken heart and desperation explains why he acted the way in which he did. 

However, as inclined as I am to say I'm sorry, I won't apologize, because (1) I did nothing wrong here, and I only apologize to people when I know I have wronged them in some way.  However, that's not the case here. You just didn't get the meaning I was trying to relay here, and that is perfectly okay because it happens.  It's the risk everyone takes when they express themselves in any way.  People are different so people view things differently.  Again that's the reason for the warning.  (2) Like I said ealier, it's not my fault because I can't control other peoples's perceptions of any thing that I might write here.  (3) I acted responsibly by putting the warning on the chapter and then label the warning as SEXUAL VIOLENCE and no where did I label it as glorified attempted rape so I can't be accountable for you or any other reader at this site seeing it that way.

Jaz, thank you for commenting.  I assumed you are commenting at chapter 126 because you've read up to that point, and although you have never commented before, I further assumed you only read thus far because you were enjoying the story up until this point.  So, I'm glad you were entertained thus far.

God bless and all those other good things.  Bye.

 

 

 

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

Grrrrr....Jensen on top is NOT good.  But at least Justin was thinking of Brian the whole time.  Gaw...I need more.  Update soon please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey!  IceCupcake!  So glad U mentioned that Justin had Brian on the brain the entire time.

 

Have to run out to school now.  so later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

If you are trying to make us feel sorry for Jensen it isn’t working. The man is a bigoted slimeball. Now pass the soap please as I need to get the image of Justin and Jensen out of my sight.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Nayyyyy, nawww, nooo.  No SORRY for Jensen.  You're free to throw everything and the kitchen sink at him, lol!     Rushing out to school. later. Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 125: Get Bruce Lee Back Here! Damn It!

No Brian don’t have sex with Bruce Lee; he is creepy rubbing himself against you when you couldn’t push him away. Okay now I realise how silly I’m being as Brian has had sex with Michael. Excuse me while I throw up in my mouth a little. Happy Note: Rosalind is safe; I’m so relieved and let’s hope she is too after spending so much time in the restroom. On to the next chapter.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Brian is just glad 2 hav his MOJO back (Robert once put it), so I don't think he cares who does him the honors, lol!  Hurrying out to school, so later.  Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 124: You Can't Understand Unless...

What the hell was Justin thinking that he was going to get some afternoon delight with his lunch? Maybe he should have stayed around and Alex could have helped him with that. Just as Robert is about to tell Justin about Brian's condition he gets interrupted. LOL. Thanks for three chapters.

Cheers

Author's Response:

'Afternoon Delight...' You know how to extract an instant SMILE from me.   Hmm, I wonder how Justin would have taken that news?  I would think he wouldn't want Brian to think that he would react one way if he was permanently quadriplegic and then another way if he thought he was going to have a full recovery, it might seem shallow of Justin.  But we'll bound to find out in another way no doubt.  LOL

Like to say more but rushing out to school now.  Later sincerely Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

Oh God please let Justin leave this asshole as soon as possible... He knows who he really loves... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

HIIIIIIII!  It's been a long while.  How R U doing?   Belated Happy New Year to you   2013$&^&*&%^$##^!!!!!

I'd like to say more but I better rush out to school, another minute or two I will be later.  So later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

Oh come on what dose respect have to do with anything it's been two years (still can't get over that part) and justin and crazy been fucking most of that time if it was the other way around and justin did what brian did to him by leaving you bet your ass brian would have been fucking somebody's and nothing would have been said. Really can someone just get both brian and justin alone in a room togather in that hotel  before anther two years,  that would get brian moving and Robert can be alone with Jensen and beat the shit out of him.



Author's Response:

Hi, Meme... missed you dearly.   and, I'm so IN LOVE WITH YOUR COMMENT HERE!  Especially when yo say... 'Oh come on what does respoect have to do with anything..."  ROFLMAO!  Having to rush out to school now.  Later, sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

WTF Justin? Pack your suitcases and leave that psycho!

Author's Response:

YOU GOT ME LAFTING SO HARD, I'M DROOLING ALL OVER MYSELF!  

 

Thanks, Pacagirl, for taking the time to comment often and let me know you're still with me.  It's a ROARRRRRRR pleasure.  Sincerely and later.

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 125: Get Bruce Lee Back Here! Damn It!

I can help you with your problem Brian.
Thank you for this chapter.

Author's Response:

'I can help you with your problem Brian.'    WOMAN!  GET IN LINE BEHIND ME LOL!  But I can't gaurantee you that there will be much left over after I finish with lol!  

I actually met Gale Harold in person once.  It was in New York at a play he was acting in.  It was Tenessee William's "Suddenly Last Summer",  but I was a horrified damn kitten.  I just got his autograph and stared at him.  But my bold sister struck a long conversation with him.  She asked him a bunch of questions but I was completely tongue-tied the entire time.  he was so handsome in real life; and I've been told some many stars aren't as good looking in real life as they are on the screen.  But that was hardly the case with him.  Boy!  He looked good and had the nicest personality.   He was the only person (in the play) who stayed around until the very last fan left. 

He even stood around after he had signed all the autographs and a few people just wanted to talk to him.  He was so down to earth.  He didn't seem like a celebrity or star at all.  He just seemed like one of the guys/common folk.  What a thrill it was to be around him.

Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: iris (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 126: Make Feel Like a Man! ( I am Better than Him Now!)

hmmm ....dont have much respect for Justin in this chapter..dont quite understand why he lets the guy that almost raped make love to him...he seams to have some serious issus with himself and his feelings about his life... i get that the way Brian treated him really wong but i hate seeing Justin lose himself trying to get over him.



Author's Response:

Hi, Iris:  Plz forgive me if I'm wrong but I think this might be the first time U are commenting on this story.  Either way IM SO EXCITED to hear from you.  

 

WOW for this:  '... i get that the way Brian treated him really wong but i hate seeing Justin lose himself trying to get over him.'  I couldn't have summed it up any better.  Justin's hurt has definitley clouded his good judgment.  Let's hope he can eventually find his way again.

 

Sincerely, and thanks again for taking the time to comment.  I luv it immensely.  Later  now Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

I have not read a fic where a character like Jensen has to roll over to obtain an account. This is so original; you are a genius. That was the last thing I expected. Where did you come up with that? I am not going to write anymore, I will just wait for the next instalment of where your pure brilliance takes us.


Cheers

Author's Response:

'... a character like Jensen has to roll over to obtain an account."  You know I'm getting the feeling that that might not have even happened had Mr. Mallory had not sensed Jensen's arrogance and bigotry.  So in a sense, Jensen brought that on himself.  so, I don't know how sorry anyone should feel for him, how readers around here don't seem to feel sorry for him anyway.  Justin needs to jump on that band-wagon, lol.

 

Later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 122: Far Too Many Coincidences

You used one of my favourite words “vexed”, so how can I not like this chapter. Oh wait; you let Jensen discover where Brian was living; now he has an advantage. I’m not sure what the advantage is yet but I’m sure we will find out in time. So Rosalind’s book made it home but is Rosalind still unaccounted for? I love Brian’s sarcasm; you have his character pegged. Two chapters; thank you so much.

Cheers.

Author's Response:

Brian's sarcasm when dealing with Jensen!  Boy!  If he only knew who he was I wonder how Brian would have treated me then.  Knowing Brian though he probably would have found a way out of that chair that instant and strangled the guy but only after he had rushed him down on the floor and got some first and then kill him, LOL!  Well, Flossee here's 124 & 5 & 6, hope you enjoy.  Later. Delores

Reviewer: WW (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2013 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

Ooooh!!



Author's Response:

WW!   Hiiiiiii!   So glad and very excited to see someone new commenting!!!!!   And, HAPPY belated NEW YEAR to you.   Here's your fireworks display  2013#%^&*%^$@#@!!!!

 

Hope you stay until to the end.  Where's 124, 25 & 26 for you.  Do hope you enjvy. and thanks so much again letting me know how much you are enjvying the story.  Later and sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

Enjoying the story. Don't like Jensen at all, not the way he treats Justin and especially the way he reacts to African Americans. He is a terrible person. Please let Austin see that soon. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Debv:  Good to see you back.  Nice way to start the year off. 

 

'.... But don't like Jensen at all.'  I think that's the concensus among readers, HE's a TRIP, darn it!   But Justin's judgment is so impaired and clouded by what happen between Brian and him, and he's just too blind to see.

 

Here's chapter 124, 5 & 6 (6 imparticularly is kind of intense), hope U enjvy anyway, lol.  Later and sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

Oh wow! That opening scene was comedy genius and gold! I just loved it when Justin did a 180 from mentally cussing her out to sucking up to the big lady calling her a pretty young thing and a siren. ROFL

And the end....Jensen in the hot seat with a portly AA! Uh oh! So...is he racist? I diidn't really get that from him earlier altho he was calling Robby "brother" a lot...maybe that was a clue...Oh dear....another black strike against the J-man...tut tut!!....aaaaaacccck just read that back...no pun intended!



Author's Response:

Ohhhhh, Wowwww!  U like Mrs. Jennifer Bakersfields, lol!   Woman's a trip, lol!  

 

Poor Jensen!  Looks like his snobbish air done caught up to him.  Mr. Mallory had to have noticed the scene between Jensen and the hostess and could easily figure out what was going on, or otherwise he might not have acted the way he did.  So in a sense Jensen might have brought that on himself.

Later and sincerely.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 119: It's a Tall Order

OMG!!! You are riveting!



Author's Response:

RIVETING!  Thanks for that... what a wonderful way to start the NEW YEAR!  I'm cheering here and smiling like a fool to myself.  Now here's three more chapters 124, 5 & 6... hope they aren't too riveting lol!  especially number 6, I had to give it a note of warning, irk!

 

Later, Sincerely Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2012 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 87: I'm Going to Kill Him/All in Just One Night

OMG it's hilarious that Harry came to visit and nobody saw him or could it just be my sick sense of humour that I thought it was funny.

Cheers

Author's Response:

"Hilarious... "  Thank you for teaching me how to spell that word.  For some reason I keep spelling it with a ha....  maybe I have the tendency to mispell it that way because 'hahaha' usually pop up in my mind whenever I think of the word. 

Oh, what about that, huh? Harry got some timing... don't he, LOL!  Probably the only time he's in the right place at the right time is probably when he's with Teddy or his daughter.

Sincerely, Flossee

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2012 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 87: I'm Going to Kill Him/All in Just One Night

Michael has killed so many people and now Vic; karma’s a bitch, so he is in for a world of hurt.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin definitely drummed the 'guilt complex' into Michael.  Right now, Michael can't stand to be inside another room with other people nor in a room by himself.  Imagine what it's like to HATE your own company. 

In R/L, I know a few people (like that) who can't stand to be alone with themselves because they've done so much evil to others, but are forced to reflect on that whenever they find themselves alone, so for that reason they avoid being alone.  It's really sad when a person have done that much evil in their lives though. I've quit some ugly jobs that were very lucrative all on the account I didn't want to wake up one day and feel like I couldn't look myself in the mirror.  I don't think any job or amount of money is worth all that especially when I consider I've had some pretty lucrative jobs that didn't require I sell my soul or tear someone's else soul apart.  So, I realize it don't have to be that way, so why make it that way.

Forgive the sermon, Flossee.  But I get like that sometimes.  Laugh with me please.  Laughter is amazing in so many ways, as long as you laughing with someone and NOT at someone (of course).

Later, Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 86: The Long and Agonizing Wait

I thought the young girl waiting was going to be Roxie until they talked with her. I like that is was a little cryptic for a while. OMG is Ted in love with Harry or Brian. He seems to be thinking of Brian a lot. LOL. Thank you for keeping your promise and posting today I look forward to your updates.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi there, Flossee:

I couldn't let you down by not posting this weekend.   I had promised, and like Brian I believe that a promise is a promise, and a deal is a deal.  Oh, and by the way, Roxie is a much younger girl than Carl's niece Madeline.

Thanks, Flossee, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2012 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 86: The Long and Agonizing Wait

I think I am still in the hospital corridor waiting for word on Brian. Reading about this scene was particularly realistic. If its one thing you learn to do in a hospital is wait.


Are Ted and Harry the hinters. I guess a fire is heading towards the hospital or is that too obvious?

Look forward to where you are taking us next.



Author's Response:

Hi, Reader:  So glad to see you're still with me. 

 

"I guess a fire is heading towards the hospital..."  Boy!  Wouldn't that be something sensational, but actually the fire serves another purpose.  You're finally out who Harry is in this next chapter (but I guess everyone has guessed it by now).  However, the fire is there to keep Justin and Harry from meeting, if not just a little while longer.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2012 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 86: The Long and Agonizing Wait

OMG! Hopefully Bri is alright. Ugh what if he doesn't remember re-marrying justin?!?!?!?! oh no!



Author's Response:

"What if he doesn't remember marrying, Justin?"  That would be a helluva doozy, and one that Justin might rather hear instead of what the doctor's about to spring on him.

 

Thanks, Britinfield.  I'm glad you are still with me.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Sorry Flossee I keep forgetting I can't respond in Explorer only Fireforx.  So here my respond to you.  I had to do a cut and paste:

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

This is the 200th review I have written and I wanted to put it on someone’s story that always answers their reviews and genuinely likes their reviewers so I chose you. I know there is nothing new for me to review but I just wanted to say I appreciate an author such as yourself. Just to let you know we are still holding our breath as to Brian’s wellbeing and Justin’s comfort. No pressure RL comes first; well maybe a little pressure. It's BigPaw’s turn with the brain now.

Cheers

Author's Response;  Flossee, thank you so much for for your kind and considerates words.  You have no idea how thankful I am.  And, just for you I will make sure I update this Sunday. 
Later, sincerely, Delores


Author's Response:

 P.S.  Plz forgive all those typos.  Me stressing lol.  Will see you Sunday though.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

This is the 200th review I have written and I wanted to put it on someone’s story that always answers their reviews and genuinely likes their reviewers so I chose you. I know there is nothing new for me to review but I just wanted to say I appreciate an author such as yourself. Just to let you know we are still holding our breath as to Brian’s wellbeing and Justin’s comfort. No pressure RL comes first; well maybe a little pressure. It's BigPaw’s turn with the brain now.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2012 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Ok, I stopped holding my breath! At least yu did update, for which I'm happy, but now you have our poor Brian on the brink of death and crap for brains Mikey (hate that name so that's why I called him that) at the hospital......Brian has to make it and please let Mikey still get what's coming to his flat ass,ass! I guess I won't resort to another childish scene, but if iyou don't make Brian fit as a fiddle and ready for some Sunshine loving, I will! Oh, and I love this story!



Author's Response:

Hi, so glad 2 see you are still with me.   And, here's another chapter for you 86, and I hope to be uploading 87 this same evening.   Just have to do some quick editing. Michael getting his... he just might bring that onto himself.

 

"Oh, and I love this story!"   THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STATEMENT.  I LIVE FOR PEOPLE TO SAY THIS. 

 

Later, Anon, See ya,  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

I hope Brian be okay.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

"I hope so tooo.... but sorry.... no promises though."

 

Thanks Lexz.... Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Ok, I swear Flossee and I are not sharing the same brain, we do not compare our ideas and try to write the same reviews. Heck we live in different halves of the world, but I do think we are kindred spirits.
Lori

Author's Response:

... Flossee and I are not sharing the same braiin..."  Are you ABSOLUTELY sure of that... LOL!  

Later, Lori... sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Oh I know this is a very sad and serious moment, but I can't help but laugh over Justin pissing his pants and Vic spraying him down with lysol....Now I sure don't want Brian to die, but I would love for Justin to have cause to kill Michael. Hey maybe the Doctors could make a mistake and pronounce him dead, when really it's just a faulty heatbeat measuring machine, then once Michael is dead in a puddle of blood...beep beep goes the old heart monitor and Brian is good to go. Justin might be headed to prison but in the long run no Micheal might be worth a few years behind bars. I was shocked that Jack and Joanie showed up, all of a sudden they are going to pretend to care about the son they never wanted or loved? TWISTY!!! I do hope that Ben wises up and gets the hell out of town before Michael knows he's leaving. That parasite has no business latching on to a sweet guy like Ben. I am now going to have the Love Boat theme song in my head for days on end. I think I would have made a wonderful Julie the cruise director. I just couldn't stand to wear the dorky uniform all the time. Plus I probably would have wanted to push the problem guest overboard if they gave me any grief. That might have caused some problems. Good thing I like train rides better than boats. Well it's 3:30 am so I think it's nearly bedtime. I hope Justin get some dry undies soon or he's going to get diaper rash and you know that's going to be a big turn off for Brian, if he lives. He likes his bottoms smooth and rash free, or so I've told.
Lori

Author's Response:

Funny you should laugh about the wet pants, that was hardly thrown in there for just dramatic effect,  Justin trying to remedy the dirty pants situation can cost him dearly (in the long run).  Now that you bring a vivide picture of Vic spraying them with the lysol to mind, That is HALARIOUS, laugh out loud!

Hmm, hmmm... it just might not have to take something as terrifying as Brian dying to cause Justin to kill Michael,   Oh, how many LOVE BOAT memories are you bringing to my mind now!   I wonder if I can find some episodes on Hulu.com or Crackle.com.  I'll give it a try later.  

 

"... likes his bottoms smooth and rash free..."  Hmm, might just about to become a distant memories for some people.  STAY TUNED.

 

Thanks, BigPaw.... you're the best... sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

I don’t want to see Brian die but maybe just for a short while Justin could think he has; then Justin will carry out Michael’s demise. I’m still voting on the barber shop ending BigPaw suggested but Justin can wield the scissors. Vexed I love this word it is one of my favourites so thank you it was a thrill to see it. I know that’s a random thought. Come on Brian come back to Justin. Can someone please get Justin clean pants as I’m sure he will be there for a while and that’s just sad that he is so upset he couldn’t control himself. Thank you another fine chapter.

Cheers

Author's Response:


"... just for a short while Justin could think he was.."  It might not even take that much for Justin to violently lash out at Michael.  

 

It's funny you should mention Justin getting clean pants because even that (which might seem like a minor things right now) just might bring unexpected and unwanted circumstances about.  Huh?  Stay tuned.

 

Thanks  Flosse, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

oh heavens! please let it not be Brian, please let it not be Brian..........but something tells me that it is.

with my heart in my hand I await..............



Author's Response:

Reader!  You're another one I missed something BIG TIME!  So glad to hear from you again!  

 

Your heart is in your hand, AWWWWW!   That's so sweet.  Poor, Brian.  It's all Mike Novot's fault though!!!!

 

Hope to update in a week's time.  And, thanks so much for checking this one out.  I hope you stay to the end and continue to enjoy. 

Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

Oh no... Please let Brian be alright... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hiiiii,

 

Hi there, I miss you.  It's been a while, Kathleen.  How are you doing?  So glad to hear from you.

 

And, I'm so glad that you've join me on this one.  Sorry, to leave you with such a intense c/hanger there but I hope to update by sometime next week when my school load shows down a bit.

 

Thanks again for joining me.  Boy, have I missed you!  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

WOW! How do you get these chapters out so fast!? You are a machine! And I'm really hopinbg that s a different accident. Seriously! Michael must pay!

By the way, isn't there anyone out there who can make a banner for this wonderful and now extensive story? That's not my forte but I think this story really deserves one! Say hey! if you agree!



Author's Response:

Oh!  You think I'm fast.  Thanks for that boosting compliment.  I had thought I was slow.  But I have to slow down a little bit though for R/L and college stuff but I'll try to update again in about a week's time.

 

About the banner thing.  I'm sure that is something I can probably teach myself to do as well as teach myself to put sound and video into my stories.  However, I need a new computer.  This one is hanging on its last legs so there's not a whole lot I can do with it anymore.  I can't even do a tenth of what I used to be able to do with it.

 

But I hope to be getting a state of the art one when I get a break to go shopping for it.

 

Thanks, Bryton4ever71.  It's a thrill, Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2012 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

Well this is a real cliff hanger.

Author's Response:

"Who the Hell is Harry?"   My gosh!  I bet I got people asking that question in there sleep, LOL!

 

'Well this iis a real cliff hanger.'  And, I'm afraid I might leave readers hanging from that cliff for probably at leat a week while I get ready for some exams next week in school.  But I promise the moment I get some relief, I hurry up here and post the next update.

 

Thanks you so much Galenut for hanging in there.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

Killer cliff hanger! Thanks for posting all these new chapters over the weekend. You've bviously been busy. But now we need another ASAP. Hurry, hurry. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks, Tagsit.  I've been busy all right and my professors at school are determined to keep me that way.  It might be a while before I might be able to update again. So, I hate now that I left you guys with such a KILLER cliff hanger!  Sorry about that.  But I will return as soon as I can.  Maybe in about a week's time.

And, thank you so much for staying with the story because I can see you've been quite busy yourself, and I can't wait until I find the time to read your stories; I'm dying to.  I see all the reviews you get, so they must be some outstanding stories.

 

Catch you later.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

You are evil to the bone. Now poor Justin is sitting outside the elevator door all ready for a romantic trip up and down the shaft and he going to get a call saying Brian is dead or nearly dead, now he's not going to find our who Harry is. I bet his amazing rod of steal will go limp as a noodle when he hears the news. I bet he'll even cry. I wonder if he'll be able to collect a nice tax credit as the window of a wealthy businessman. Is chance Micheal could also be near death and maybe be needed as an organ donor and save Brian's life? No, I bet he would reject the organ, I know any sane person would! OK, you better skip a few days of school and get us off this cliff.
Lori

Author's Response:

"... evil to the bone."  From YOU dear I take that as the BEST compliment. 

 

Oh really!  What SHAFT is that, LOL!   Got me going insane with laffter again. 

 

"I bet he'll even cry"  Awwww.  

 

Michael organ donor to Brian.  Question would be then... would Brian rather die instead (lol) than to have a piece of Michael inside of him.  When they were a couple he never let Michael top.  So, he definitely never wanted a piece of him inside him, LOL!

Skip a few days of school!  Believe me... I definitely feel like it. 

 

Later, BigPaw, Sincerely.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

Great Michael can leave with Ben. Ethan can leave with Chris. Now I think we are down to four villains, Vance, Jim, Todd and Kip (aka boner boy). Maybe also Mel and Lindsay make the list. Brian was doomed when he said I love you; when will he learn bad things happen when he voices such a sentiment. I’m not worried about him though as this doesn’t say major death but please don’t tell me his dick will be in a brace for the next 9 months; maybe he’ll have memory loss and forget what it’s for until he’s in an elevator. Harry is still a kind of, sort of, mystery to Justin. Maybe he will meet him at Brian’s hospital bedside. Thank you for the update as the suspense was almost unbearable; I was almost at the stage of sitting in the corner with my arms wrapped around my knees while rocking back and forth.

Cheers

Author's Response:

"Down to four villians."  Again I'm cracking my side.  How many antagoinists did I have in this story!  

 

"Brian was doomed when he said I love you! and his you-know-what in a brace for 9 months.... Sorry to say but that's observation is close, sorry!  

Sitting ini the corner with your arms wrapped around your knees.  I could just envision that.  But I HATE being the cause of it. 

I'm falling more and more in love with you everyday, Flossee, and CHEERS to you too.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Mokuwahine (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

Now that's what I call an EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!  Please update soon...I may be losing sleep until you do.



Author's Response:

Hiiiii and Welcomeeee.  I don't think I've ever heard from you before, but forgive me if I'm mistaken.  I get so excited when someone new responds.  Thank you for this and such a heartfelt compliment.  However, let's not both lose sleep.  My professors at school is keeping me up all night with assignments. So, it might be another week or so before I'll be able to update again.  But please return when I do.  I'm so glad Ur enjoying the story and I hope U stay til the end.

Thanks again for taking the time to express how much you're enjoying the story.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

I'm  an impatient type so I will resort to this childish scene if I have to .....if you don't update immediately I will hold my breath until you do,also will do the same if you injure Brian! Also this is a really good story started reading it during the weekend and just love it!



Author's Response:

Oh my Gosh!  This is such a flattering compliment; I'm REALLY eating it up.  Thanks for that. 

And, I apologize for taking so long to answer the reviews but if you've read a few of the other reviews here you probably know I'm a college student.   I assure you that that's the only reason I've been away so long.  I don't mean to ignore anyone but my course load is KILLING me.  However, I don't suggest that we both shoud have to die (laugh out loud).  So, please stop holding your breath because as flattering is that is I wouldn't want anything fatal to happen to you before I finish this story.

 

Thanks again for this beautiful review as well as taking the time to comment.

 

Sincerely, Delores

 

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 84: Day of the Storm (Part IV) / Who the Hell is Harry

I hope Brian be okay. :(

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa:  Glad u like the chaper.  I have to do some homework now, so I'll answer all the reviews later tonight.  Thank you so much for investing so much into this story.  Later. Sincerely.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

OK...this deserves a big fat.....

DUN! DUN! DUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Dun!  Dun!  DuNNNNNNNNNN!   OH yeah.  But you know how everything tends to backfire when Michael has a hand in it.  Let's hope that's the case this time around .

 

Thanks you dear.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

You are getting very good at cliffhangers(wink,wink).

Loving it!



Author's Response:

Hi, Missed U so FIERCELY.

 

Thanks for the compliment.  I can't believe I came back to all these reviews and just when I think I've answered them all I look back and see I missed one or two.

 

Thanks so much for returning to read another one of my stories, Reader.  And, I hope you enjoy this one like you did so others.  Hav Fun.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

Uh oh. Brian and Justin are so stubborn. :(

I wish they will be honest to each other for once. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

"Uh oh, Brian and Justin are so stubborn.  I wish they will be honest to each other for once."  I know what you mean, lol!  These two could have saved themselve a lot of trouble had they been from day one.

 

Thanks for point out that fact, Lexa.  Thank you for eveything in fact.  You've been such a loyal reader and I really appreciate it.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

I hope Justin gets out in time.

Author's Response:

"I hope Justin gets out in time"  Hmmm... now I will always be wondering what would have happened if he did. 

 

Thanks so much, Galenut, for commenting so often.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

Damm Brian are you that brainless not to know something is wrong with justin by the way he is acting or are you just as dumb as Michael is, justin stand up to brian for once in your life. say what on your mind. this is so good



Author's Response:

"This is so good."  AWWWWW, thank you so much for that.  And, I hope you stay with me and continue to HAV FUN to the very final chapter.

 

Thanks again for taking the time to comment and express that you like the story so much.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

see what come from not talking to each other Justin and brian.? And Chris Ethan’s should fuck you up, Kip is a big jackass, and fuck of all fuck super dumbass michael just go the fuck away for good.  glad ted is geting it good and hard. Thank you Mrs Chanders for calling.  O.K Ms D I want more now



Author's Response:

Ethan should eff up Chris.  That's a really good one.  But as Justin sees it Ethan's getting what he deserves lol. 

 

OH, you want more, and I so want to give you that but the professors at school are weighing me down with work.  But I see myself getting a little break not this weekend coming up but possibly the next weekend or the middle of next week.

 

Thanks you so much, Meme$, you been GREAT!  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

Oh this is going to be good, I sure hope Justin can put a good spin on why he's in a room with Chris. So what's up with Daphne, I'm betting something horrible has happened and Justin is going to end up with a premature infant to raise. The bigger question is will he be doing it as a single father??? I know Brian has to take some blame, he could have been a little more up front with his feeling but so far he hasn't lied about anything, he has answered Justin's question when the gutless wonder can ask one. If only Justin could be willing to take a risk he would now know where he really stands. Well we all know chickens end up in soup.
Lori

Author's Response:

"... chickens end up in soup."  Where do you get these fantastic phrases from?  I love that one and a WHOLE LOT of other snappy phrase you posted here.  Love it!

 

Thanks, Sincerely.  Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 82: The Day of the Storm (Part II) / Brick and Stone Don't Burn

NO!! If Justin cheats on Brian there will be no forgiveness tax break be damned. And with Chris of all things. What in the world is going thru his crazy little mind? Didn't the talk of giving up condoms mean anything to Justin? Micheal i hope you know little boys who play with matches wet the bed.
Lori

Author's Response:

"... tax break be damned."  There YOU go again putting me into stitches.   "Didn't the talk of giving up condoms mean anything to Justin?"  Huh?  What did Justin say to Brian about that LOL!  Granny hit it right on the nose when she told him to grow some good commonsense.

 

Thanks, BigPaw.  I can say enough what a pleasure.   Thanks.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

You left us hanging, I’m so sad. Please hurry back. I hope Daphne is alright but I want Justin to be gone when Brian gets there as I would like them to at least make their first wedding anniversary even if it is only three months.

Signed: one very sad reader.

Author's Response:

"... I want Justin to be gone when Brian gets there."   Now I'm wondering how it would have turned out if Justin had been gone when Brian got there.

 

Thanks, Flossee... you're the best.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 82: The Day of the Storm (Part II) / Brick and Stone Don't Burn

Justin what the fuck! I have no words.

I’m too sad for Cheers

Author's Response:

Hey!  Cheers turns to Tears, LOL!

 

Thanks so much, Flossee as always.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 81: The Day of the Storm (Part I)

Michaels back; I was hoping BigPaw had convinced you to end his sorry existence by now. Kip with a boner is the undoing of the raw sex. These men need to travel to a faraway land where they know no one and start again. At this point I will start my breathing exercises; I will stay calm and continue to read. This is great entertainment.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Speaking of good entertainment, the comments YOU, BigPaw and a few other post here is getting to be even more entertaining than my story.  I just love you guys!  Keep it coming.  It's not only fun and flatterinig but encouraging as well.

 

Thanks a million, Flossee.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 80: What Is It You're Not Telling Me?

Harold punched Joe because he was mean to his Teddy. Oh I love this man now. Does that make me fickle? Ethan (aka Ian) and Chris are leaving. NICE. Kip Thomas reappears; that frightening. No condoms; I can’t see that happening as these men are jinxed. I have my fingers crossed for them though. Another chapter to read, what a treat.

Cheers

Author's Response:

No that doesn't make you fickle... I love the man too for doing that, and I wonder how Ted would feel if he ever found out. Would have to boost Ted self-esteem a million.  

 

Thanks, Flossee.

Cheers to U 2.  Sincerely, Delores.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 79: Some Like It Rough

I love the back and forth between Brian and Justin sex and Ted and Harry sex. I think Ted and Harry were hotter. I can’t believe I just said that. LOL Finally it’s Harold not Joe. Let’s hope Teddy can remember that as he may have had his brains scrambled after actually getting some. HOT HOT HOT. On to the next chapter; thank you so much.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee, I'm so glad U liked the switching back and forth between the couples.  Ted and Harry hotter... I can't believe you said that either.  I'm cracking my sides.  

Thanks so much.  Sincerely, Delores 

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 81: The Day of the Storm (Part I)

This just gets better and better. I can't wait to see what happens when Brian gets home tonight. I bet Justin attacks him with a pitch fork. I think they need couples therapy with straight jackets and drugs, maybe even leather restraints. I love all the twists and turns you come up with.

I hope school is going well, it's great you are willing to learn new things.
Lori

Author's Response:

School is going quite well but challenging as crap, especially those group/team projects that force you to engage it.  And, thank you so much for saying the story is getting better and better.  I in deed try, lol. 

Thanks again, BigPaw, for everything.  Gotta to go tackled Ms. University lol.   Later now.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 80: What Is It You're Not Telling Me?

So is it true, Chris and Ethan are leaving for Europe where I'm sure they will catch the plague and die a horrible death, gosh so sad to see them go...NOT! Cloud 69, how sweet. You do come up with some good lines.
Lori

Author's Response:

'You come up with some good lines."   Aww, I'm not so clever... I usually take cliches and twist them a bit, LOL!   Now you're the one with the great original lines as well as stories antidotes.  You're a WIZ at it, lol!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 79: Some Like It Rough

Oh Justin just grow a pair and ask him! I think it's safe to say Harold longer has a problem with homosexuality!! I'm very happy Teddy had a fun filled night and learned the name of his lover. Perhaps now it will be easier for finding him again.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori.  Here's a couple more chapters for you 82 and 83.  I surely hope you enjoy them and now I'm off to do some more school work.  Later, sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2012 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

Another great chapter.Damn that Kip.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much for commenting, Galenut and I'm so sorry that you guys had to wait so long for additional updates.  It just that summer's over and I'm back in school among other things, so updating have been difficult to getting around to. But I definitely haven't abandoned the story and I will update again as such as doable. 

 

Thanks again, Galenut, for taking the time to comment.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2012 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 81: The Day of the Storm (Part I)

Uh oh. Brian have no idea Justin was at the door. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Yeah, and that jerk Kip didn't tell him! 

 

Hi, Lexa... so happy to see you are still with me.  And, so sorry that updates can't come as quicky as they were doing my summer break but school's a scorcher this time around.

 

Later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2012 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 78: It Depends...

;P



Author's Response:

Hi, Tagsit.  How's everything going especially with your stories?  As you see RL have prevented me from updating as often as I like.  Well, anyway, so how I managed to squeeze in updats today.  I hope you are still with me, and here's chapters 79,80 & 81.  I truly hope you enjoy.

 

Thanks again, sincerely, Delores 

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 78: It Depends...

Wow, Todd's a real bitch in this story , isn't he?  Great  story and I hope to comment more in future, sorry I got behind and had LOT to read to catch up.



Author's Response:

Hi, Bryton4ever71.  Thanks to school I'm now the one behind, lol!  But I hope you are still with me and here's three more chapters (79, 80 & 81).  I certainly hope you enjoy, but I'm sorry to say that with the demands of school, I don't know when I'll be able to update agian.  However, I definitely haven't abandoned this story. 

Thanks again, Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 78: It Depends...

So now you'be got Emmett sniffy the doors in the bathroom trying to figure out what's going on inside. This is some pretty twisted stuff, even for Emmett. I hope the lighting is good enough in the back room for Harold to see Ted. Not that I really want Ted hooking up with Harold but if Ted thinks he's a good for a romp or two lets see what happens. I hope it's not going to be a love connection.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, BigPaw:  'Love connection..?"  Oh, time will tell, lol.  Hav fun!  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 77: Burning The Midnight Oil

Brian, you deserve what ever Justin has planned for you. I think you need to get a huge "can I get any dumber Tax" for that little mistake. And Ben, what kind of employee tell his boss I LOVE YOU.. that was just not the right thing to say no matter how much you like your boss, your MARRIED boss. What kind of a world are these boys living in? Is there any chance Michael has died of terminal brain rot and meanness? Because he sure has it.
Lori

Author's Response:

"Brian, you deserve whatever Justin has planned..."   Oh, my God!  Wait until you see what he has planned,lol!  I'm sure you will tell me in the most fabulous way what you think of it.  Love U for that! 

 

"What kind of employee tells his boss I LOVE YOU!  Gay men like Straight men... Men are all  ______ when it comes to the affairs of the heart.  fill in the blank, lol!

 

Thanks again, BigPaw.  I can't believe my school work kept me away so long.  Can't say how soon I'll be able to update again... but I definitely haven't abandoned this story.  So, here's three more chapters for you (79, 80 & 81)

 

Later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 77: Burning The Midnight Oil

That's a good man that  Ethan is...Justin Justin Justin I love that man stop fucking and start talking to brian than start fucking



Author's Response:

Oh!  I love coming back here to these amusing reviews.  "Stop fuck and start talking..."  You got me dying!  Thanks so much Meme$... I had no idea I would be gone so long... but here's three more chapters for you.  I so HOPE you enjoy... chapter 79, 80 & 81.

 

Later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 78: It Depends...

Ted use (just a drop) to kill the shit odor away. it's so sweet how Em worry about the little things in people life like ted dick. you go Harold/harry go fine ted. He a good man that Harold/harry person is. I feel like I'am taking about a two headed brian look a like

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 78: It Depends...

‘Ted had been in there for a quite a while but it didn’t smell like he was taking a shit.’ OMG this was the opening sentence, my drink just about came out my nose. Then comes ‘Ted had a small dick he might be a man that has been dealt bad cards all around.’ Let’s hope Ted gets a break before I die from laughter. Todd gets told to wait and Harry might or might not be right back… it depends. I’m loving Harry at the moment let’s hope Ted gets a little joy with him in the backroom. Okay that certainly made up for all the angst in the previous chapter, thank you.

Cheers

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 77: Burning The Midnight Oil

So much angst; once Brian said hubby it was a clear sign that bringing the wine and bread home was never going to happen. Poor Brian sufferers from bad timing and foot in mouth doesn’t he? Yay for Ethan but the dishes, dust sheets and a used bed did Michael do that or was that part of the plan Ethan didn’t clean up. Things are getting curiouser and curiouser. A bit of Ethan and Chris making out in the car could have been fun or is that just me that thinks that. They could have made enough heat to accidently cause a fire. Justin got angry, I’m so happy as he usually tries to appease Brian but why is he angry and naked?????? Maybe it’s duelling dicks at 20 paces. On to the next chapter; thanks for two.

Cheers

Author's Response:

"On Brian said hubby it was a clear sign that bringing the wine and bread home was never going to happen..." YOU GOT ME DYING WITH LAFFTER WITH THAT STATEMENT.  I can't stop laffing, lol!  Yeah, you right... Michael and Ethan tried to make the place look well lived in so when the place burns down Brian would suspect that Justin and Ethan had been carrying on a long affair there (at Britin).  

 

Oh, my gosh!  You got me rolling on the floor again:  Ethan and Chris... radiating enough heat to burn down the ranch. 

 

And, here's three more chapters for you 79, 80, & 81.  I had no idea that school would keep me away so long but like I had suspected this is one of my toughest semesters.

 

Thanks so much, Flossee.   Later  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 78: It Depends...

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks agains, and there will be more as soon as my schooling allows.  But I try to dedicate at least one hour per day to updating, editing and posting.  So, maybe by sometime early next I might be able to post again.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 77: Burning The Midnight Oil

Uh oh Brian in trouble with Justin. 

I hope Michael see reason before it is too late.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

'Uh oh Brian in trouble with Justin."   Ewwwww!  Scarey isn't it, LOL!    "... Michael... see reason..."  Let's us PRAY.   Thanks so much, Lexa... always such a pleasure.   Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2012 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 76: Crap! You Caused Him To Get Away From Me Again!

Finally caught up with all your new chapters. Boy you write fast! Love the idea of getting Ted together with Brian's lookalike. Can't wait to see what happens next. TAG

Author's Response:

Hey there, TAG... so glad 2 see you'll back.  But actually I'm back inside school and have slowed down considerbly because of it.   I try now to dedicate about an hour a day to writing, editing and posting the chapters.   I hope the quality doesn't suffer but i prefer not to leave readers hanging too long.   Here's chapter 77 & 78, I do hope you read them and continued to enjoy.   Thanks so much again.   Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2012 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 76: Crap! You Caused Him To Get Away From Me Again!

Yay! We finally get to know more about Harold!  I wish Mikey and Ethan would just get on with it!



Author's Response:

"I wish Mikey and Ethan would get on with it!"  It's drawing pretty near debv3.  Thanks so much for hanging in there with me.  This story is a lot longer than I ever anticipated, LOL!   have fun with chapters 77 & 78.  sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 76: Crap! You Caused Him To Get Away From Me Again!

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lexa... and here's two more chaps for you 77 & 78.  I so hope you enjoy those as well.   Thanks again (much) - sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 76: Crap! You Caused Him To Get Away From Me Again!

So now Harry has switched sides? He now hangs out a Babylon with Todd, Todd thinks they are in a relationship. But Harry has the hots for Ted....can I just say TWISTY. Did Harry daughter die yet? I'm hoping there is going to be a very sad depressing grave side chapter. I think Harry needs some grief for all the problems he's caused me in this story.
Lori

Author's Response:

Twisty, twisty, twist... that's the name of this game LOL!    Did Harry's daughter die yet?   Naw, not yet... In fact, in subsequent chapters she liable to be a lot more instrumental than you might ever think LOL!  

 

Thanks so much BigPaw and here's two more chapters 77 & 78.   Enjoy, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 76: Crap! You Caused Him To Get Away From Me Again!

OMG that was so funny they were getting Fuck, Todd, Joseph and Harry all fixed up. I loved it; a whole chapter on Ted and the elusive Harry. Todd gets the boot that sounded so much like a Kinney thing to say ‘you’re only a good time boy, and not even that really’. LOL I love this story but this was the best chapter and you left us hanging. Naughty Naught you.

Cheers

Author's Response:

"...Fuck, Todd, Joseph and Harry all mixed up"   Thanks, Flossee, I'm so glad U liked it.   Here's two more chapter for you and to use your phrase... they both leaves you hanging... Naughty, naught me, apologizes for that LOL!  

 

Thanks U so much, Flossee and continue to hav fun.   Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 75: Grow Some Balls

Oh Theodore it’s been two months, Joseph has probably moved on with Harry and his daughter to become a happy little family group since he isn’t bothering Brian any more. I too was waiting for Gus to slip up and give away vital information. Maybe Ethan will mend his ways and save Gus from a burning Britin. Did I forget something, what does Ethan need to get from Michael or don’t we know what that is yet? I did forget we have one more badie in Todd so Michael can definitely; exit stage right. Good luck with your studies just don’t get your fiction mixed up with your assignments especially the maths ones. Nice chapter, thank you.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Joseph and Harry hooking up, huh?  Well, let's see about that LOL!  Here's chapter 76 for you and I will keep my fingers crossed that you enjoy anyway, LOL!

 

What does Ethan need to get from Michael.  Well, if he doesn't want to be a part of Michael's scheming anymore there are some things he has better get back from Michael.   And, you're right it hadn't been mentioned yet.  You're not forgetting anything.  However, in a subsequent chapter it will be reveal.  Thanks so much Flossee it is always so GREAT to hear from you.  Sincerely.  Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 75: Grow Some Balls

Great chapter. I hope Brian and Justin find out what Michael been up to. 

Looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

'Hope Brian and Justin find out what Michael been up to'   Hmmmm? 

 

Thanks so much Lexa for commenting often and here's the next chapter 76 for you enjoy and stay tuned.   Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 75: Grow Some Balls

Ethan needs to come clean and tell Justin what's happening before someone gets hurt badly. Mickeal has to own up to his actions and that might mean that he and Chris and Ethan get into some trouble. But Mikey is the. Astermind so E and C should get out while they can.  Looking forward to Harry and Justin meeting soon!? 

 

Nice chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much for commenting, debV3.   And, here's chapter 76 for you I so hope you enjoy.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 75: Grow Some Balls

Best beginning line ever...What crawled up your ass!! Pure poetry. I still think Justin is a fool for trusting Ethan, even if he listen to the ass crawler Chris and decides turning Britin into a easy bake oven, now that it will also come with a kiddie meal he's still crazy. Taking Gus along on a date with Ethan is asking for major fall out, that kid is lethal he hears way too much and repeats better than a parrot on magic seeds. Gus is just going to spout out the wrong little bit of info at just the wrong time. They do make very nice cages to keep children in while the parents go out. A food bowl snaps in place and the door locks secure. I've even heard of people using them to train puppies and you know if they are good enough for a cute puppy they would be just right for a snotty nosed kid with a big mouth.

Poor Ted, I hope Brian can encourage him to seek out his cab driver, I know the name problem will cause some confusion but I bet there will be a way to fix things.
Lori

Author's Response:

"What crawled up..."  Thank you for that, lol.   Repeats better than a parrot on magic seeds... Wherever do you get that stuff (love it!).   

 

Poor Ted!  You can say that again... the name thing will turn out to be a serious thing.   Here's that chapter for you.  I hope you enjoy.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 74: You're His Lackey

Great chapter, looking forward in what happens next.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa, darling... here's MORE for you.  LOL.  Enjoy and thanks so much 4 commenting often and forgive me for the lost response.  I have to keep remembering to answer the reviews in the Fox browser and not Explorer.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 74: You're His Lackey

Hey I thought I saw your head on sale in a gift shop. I’m so pleased it wasn’t you. Chris and Ethan I knew that was a great combination and Chris being the smart one who would have thunk it? Michael with a Brian obsession that’s new, NOT, but it is getting creepy. Ben is better at fucking sorry I slipped up there making love than Brian; doubt it as steroids have side effects, so I’m told. Where is Ted and Joseph or has he hooked up with Harry by now? Michael can go off with Ben as we still have Vance, Jim and Kip Thomas as badies but we still have 9 months to go so maybe not. Two whole days to write fiction that sounds like heaven I hope it works out like that so we get our fix. So glad your back.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee.  Miss you too, and I'm just curious:  what was the sale price on my head LOL!   

 

"Ben is better..."  It's just like Brian said, if Michael would just get involved with someone else and get over his obsession with him he just might find that there just might be someone out there that he could love even more than Brian.   And, funny you should mention Ted, Joe and Harry when you did... they're the subject of the next subsequent chapters.  Enjoy, sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 74: You're His Lackey

Just like in the Wizard of Oz chris has a brain!!!! oh more more more and more



Author's Response:

And someone need to steal one of the yellow bricks from the golden paved Yellow Brick Road to hit Ethan and Michiael in the head with lol!

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 73: Make It Through The Night

WEll well well good to have you back, and back in school. all I can say is Ben you jughead all into Michael really!! love is really deaf dumb and no taste at least in ben case



Author's Response:

'No taste in Ben's case."  Maybe Ben might be able to bring to surface some redemping qualities in Michael.  Already he brought out something in bed no else been able to get Michael to deliver before LOL!  Michael just need to open his eyes and see the roses.

 

And thank you about schoool.  I think it's going to very demanding but I determine regardless to update as reasonably possible.  I have no intentions of abandoning this story while I do my coursework, you guys have been so good to me, I feel I owe you. 

 

Thanks again, Meme$veryrich.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 74: You're His Lackey

Hark a voice of reason...damn why does it have to be Chris Hobbs?
Twisty Twisty.
Now I'm going to go poke my eyes out again after reading about Chris and Ethan doing evil things again. I hope your fingers aren't bursting into flames.
Lori

Author's Response:

Got me rolling on the floor again, and I must be a perv... I kind of like the pairiing between these two.   And, Ethan's such a idiot not being to figure out for himself what was so so dim witted about Michael's plan as well as how stupid he is to tell Chris about it.  I meaan think about it, why would he be foolish enough to do that.  Now Ethan would know that Ethan's a broke sucker after all and might fear that Ethan is out for his money now.  Dumb, dumb, dumb, Ethan!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 73: Make It Through The Night

Hey I'm very glad to see you back. Flossee and I were ready to call out the search team to look for you. I was going to send Hairy to Rescue Ranger School but figured you'd be dead by the time he was trained, probably eaten by savages on some tropical island. Your head on sale in a gift shop.

Now on to this chapter. I am glad Brian and Justin are going to save Gus from fighting lesbians, but I am worried that having a small child around will put a crimp in their wild sex life. They just had to deal with Granny watching them now they have a tiny tot with good hearing and sharp eye sight. I think the whole Ben and Michael thing is strange, Michael is acting even more unhinged then usual. He should be packing his bags and waiting at the curb for a chance to start a new life with Ben instead of acting like the psychotic bobble head he is.

I hope everything is ok in your life, I really was worried you were quiet for so long.
Lori

Author's Response:

Oh, Lori thanks so much for responding as usual and  for being concerned.  it's just that I am a college student and school starts up again for me the day after Labor Day (Sept. 4th) and I was preparing for school as well as travelling all over the place trying to get in some last meant vacationing and fun before school starts.   I'm in a very demanding business program and I know it's going to be tough this semester because in additional to all those demanding business courses I'm going to have a math class in the mix as well.  Boy, am I dreading the experience already and I hope I would be able to squeeze some time in for writing.  Classes is only three days a week so I'm hoping I can get all my assignment done in within two of the days that I don't go to class and have the other two days to do leisurely stuff.  I was able to do that last semester but these classes I think will be a lot more demanding than they were last semester.  We'll see... keep your fingers crossed for me, LOL!

Don't worry about the boyz love life I'm sure if thinigs get too hectic for them they can leave granny with the tot and go out clubbing together, lol but keep a sharp look out for video cams or they can wear masquerade masks.  Mike and Ben.  I think Michael is taking the hard and slow way around.  At least though (although it was subconsciously done) he  was at able to admit the sexual compatibility between Ben and him.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 73: Make It Through The Night

Thanks for the update, it was great.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I hope you read both chapter 73 and 74.  I put 74 on rather late, so I hope nobody missed it.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

To:  Lexa

 

I apologize for the author's response, I responded in Internet Explorer, however, unless I type my response in another browser it doesn't always go through.  I apologize fo that.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 72: I Can Walk Anywhere I Please

excuse me while I vomit. I can hardly write over the hurling of my stomach. This is by far the worst chapter I have ever been forced to read. Evil and Evil rolled up together as one. And they claim to like it. UGH. I can only hope the world implodes in a silent bang and Micheal is killed, after a burst of pain of course~ You really have topped yourself in demented twists with this. I have to give you that. You do know that I am bleeding from the eyes and my mind will never be able to rid it's self of this horrible unholy act. It's 3:30 am and I had hope that I might be able to sleep tonight, well forget that, i might never sleep again. I might need therapy for the next 60 years. damn, you are good. This really took me by surprise.
Lori

Author's Response:

HI, I gather you don't like th ethen/chris pairing.   oh well, I thoght it might be the perfect paring made in hell, lol.  Hope to update again next week.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 71: Listen Up! Are You Listening?

I don't care how cool Grandma is I don't know how she could put up with Brian and Justin having wild screaming monkey sex in every room of the house at any given moment. My god she could swallow her teeth if it caught her unaware. She is an old woman. I don't think going to live with Craig is what she needs. That woman needs a nice place, with a pool and shopping, not nut jobs like her son. So, 2 months into the future and no fire by Michael, no answers about Harry? Granny hints that Justin still thinks Brian is cheating on him? I think we need to see if Justin even has a fully functioning brain, I'm thinking his head is filled with vanilla pudding.
Lori

Author's Response:

HI, Bigpaw.  Apologize for being away so long but I hope to update again next week.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 72: I Can Walk Anywhere I Please

Still waiting. Ted and Joseph forever.

I love the Ethan and Chris pairing. It’s about time Chris got some action in a story. Well done. Michaels back what a shame; well all good things must come to an end.


Cheers

Author's Response:

like the ethan/chris pairing, huh?  Will be updating again next week.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 71: Listen Up! Are You Listening?

NO NO NO you can’t do that. You jumped two months that means the story will be over quicker. What happened when Ted rang Joseph did Ted like him better than Harry and did they date and get married. What does Harry think of losing Ted to Joseph?

I demand a Ted and Joseph chapter. Okay demand is too strong.
I need a Ted and Joseph chapter. Okay need isn’t right either.
I want a Ted and Joseph chapter. Alright you’re the author.
How about a paragraph? Pleeeeease.
Maybe just one line then. Pretty Please.

While I’m waiting I will write my review.

I never like the way Justin talked to Tucker as I think it was hypocritical.

Still waiting. Waiting Waiting Waiting. I can take a hint I will move on to the next chapter.

Cheers

Author's Response:

I will be updating next week.  

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 70: It Just Might Serve Him Right

Ben looks after Michael. Ben your HOT go get someone nicer.

Cheers

Author's Response:

I will be updatng again next week.  Sorry I've been away so long.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 69: Just Let Him Be

Poor Ben. I like the way Brian is there for him. Ben would so make a good body guard but unfortunately that came at a price. He had to touch Michael. Ewww

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thanks Flossee.  Will update again next week...hopefully.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 68: A Funeral Recepton To Die For

Yay, Brian and Craig in the master bedroom together. Another first.

I love him. I love Justin. I am in love with Justin. Brian stating the obvious and still Michael can’t accept it.

No Daphne but Ethan and Michael show up, that just seems odd.

Justin felt a little bit frightened. Is this the weirdest funeral ever or is it just a normal family gathering? Thank you for this chapter and now I have even more to read.

Cheers

Author's Response:

You're welcome and I apologize for being away so long but I should be updating next week.

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