Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

I have not read a fic where a character like Jensen has to roll over to obtain an account. This is so original; you are a genius. That was the last thing I expected. Where did you come up with that? I am not going to write anymore, I will just wait for the next instalment of where your pure brilliance takes us.


Cheers

Author's Response:

'... a character like Jensen has to roll over to obtain an account."  You know I'm getting the feeling that that might not have even happened had Mr. Mallory had not sensed Jensen's arrogance and bigotry.  So in a sense, Jensen brought that on himself.  so, I don't know how sorry anyone should feel for him, how readers around here don't seem to feel sorry for him anyway.  Justin needs to jump on that band-wagon, lol.

 

Later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: WW (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2013 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

Ooooh!!



Author's Response:

WW!   Hiiiiiii!   So glad and very excited to see someone new commenting!!!!!   And, HAPPY belated NEW YEAR to you.   Here's your fireworks display  2013#%^&*%^$@#@!!!!

 

Hope you stay until to the end.  Where's 124, 25 & 26 for you.  Do hope you enjvy. and thanks so much again letting me know how much you are enjvying the story.  Later and sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

Enjoying the story. Don't like Jensen at all, not the way he treats Justin and especially the way he reacts to African Americans. He is a terrible person. Please let Austin see that soon. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Debv:  Good to see you back.  Nice way to start the year off. 

 

'.... But don't like Jensen at all.'  I think that's the concensus among readers, HE's a TRIP, darn it!   But Justin's judgment is so impaired and clouded by what happen between Brian and him, and he's just too blind to see.

 

Here's chapter 124, 5 & 6 (6 imparticularly is kind of intense), hope U enjvy anyway, lol.  Later and sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 123: Who's On Top?

Oh wow! That opening scene was comedy genius and gold! I just loved it when Justin did a 180 from mentally cussing her out to sucking up to the big lady calling her a pretty young thing and a siren. ROFL

And the end....Jensen in the hot seat with a portly AA! Uh oh! So...is he racist? I diidn't really get that from him earlier altho he was calling Robby "brother" a lot...maybe that was a clue...Oh dear....another black strike against the J-man...tut tut!!....aaaaaacccck just read that back...no pun intended!



Author's Response:

Ohhhhh, Wowwww!  U like Mrs. Jennifer Bakersfields, lol!   Woman's a trip, lol!  

 

Poor Jensen!  Looks like his snobbish air done caught up to him.  Mr. Mallory had to have noticed the scene between Jensen and the hostess and could easily figure out what was going on, or otherwise he might not have acted the way he did.  So in a sense Jensen might have brought that on himself.

Later and sincerely.

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