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Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Sorry Flossee I keep forgetting I can't respond in Explorer only Fireforx. So here my respond to you. I had to do a cut and paste:

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

This is the 200th review I have written and I wanted to put it on someone’s story that always answers their reviews and genuinely likes their reviewers so I chose you. I know there is nothing new for me to review but I just wanted to say I appreciate an author such as yourself. Just to let you know we are still holding our breath as to Brian’s wellbeing and Justin’s comfort. No pressure RL comes first; well maybe a little pressure. It's BigPaw’s turn with the brain now.

Cheers

Author's Response; Flossee, thank you so much for for your kind and considerates words. You have no idea how thankful I am. And, just for you I will make sure I update this Sunday.

Later, sincerely, Delores

Author's Response:
P.S. Plz forgive all those typos. Me stressing lol. Will see you Sunday though.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

This is the 200th review I have written and I wanted to put it on someone’s story that always answers their reviews and genuinely likes their reviewers so I chose you. I know there is nothing new for me to review but I just wanted to say I appreciate an author such as yourself. Just to let you know we are still holding our breath as to Brian’s wellbeing and Justin’s comfort. No pressure RL comes first; well maybe a little pressure. It's BigPaw’s turn with the brain now.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2012 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Ok, I stopped holding my breath! At least yu did update, for which I'm happy, but now you have our poor Brian on the brink of death and crap for brains Mikey (hate that name so that's why I called him that) at the hospital......Brian has to make it and please let Mikey still get what's coming to his flat ass,ass! I guess I won't resort to another childish scene, but if iyou don't make Brian fit as a fiddle and ready for some Sunshine loving, I will! Oh, and I love this story!

Author's Response:
Hi, so glad 2 see you are still with me. And, here's another chapter for you 86, and I hope to be uploading 87 this same evening. Just have to do some quick editing. Michael getting his... he just might bring that onto himself.

"Oh, and I love this story!" THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STATEMENT. I LIVE FOR PEOPLE TO SAY THIS.

Later, Anon, See ya, Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

I hope Brian be okay.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:
"I hope so tooo.... but sorry.... no promises though."

Thanks Lexz.... Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Ok, I swear Flossee and I are not sharing the same brain, we do not compare our ideas and try to write the same reviews. Heck we live in different halves of the world, but I do think we are kindred spirits.
Lori

Author's Response:
... Flossee and I are not sharing the same braiin..." Are you ABSOLUTELY sure of that... LOL!

Later, Lori... sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

Oh I know this is a very sad and serious moment, but I can't help but laugh over Justin pissing his pants and Vic spraying him down with lysol....Now I sure don't want Brian to die, but I would love for Justin to have cause to kill Michael. Hey maybe the Doctors could make a mistake and pronounce him dead, when really it's just a faulty heatbeat measuring machine, then once Michael is dead in a puddle of blood...beep beep goes the old heart monitor and Brian is good to go. Justin might be headed to prison but in the long run no Micheal might be worth a few years behind bars. I was shocked that Jack and Joanie showed up, all of a sudden they are going to pretend to care about the son they never wanted or loved? TWISTY!!! I do hope that Ben wises up and gets the hell out of town before Michael knows he's leaving. That parasite has no business latching on to a sweet guy like Ben. I am now going to have the Love Boat theme song in my head for days on end. I think I would have made a wonderful Julie the cruise director. I just couldn't stand to wear the dorky uniform all the time. Plus I probably would have wanted to push the problem guest overboard if they gave me any grief. That might have caused some problems. Good thing I like train rides better than boats. Well it's 3:30 am so I think it's nearly bedtime. I hope Justin get some dry undies soon or he's going to get diaper rash and you know that's going to be a big turn off for Brian, if he lives. He likes his bottoms smooth and rash free, or so I've told.
Lori

Author's Response:
Funny you should laugh about the wet pants, that was hardly thrown in there for just dramatic effect, Justin trying to remedy the dirty pants situation can cost him dearly (in the long run). Now that you bring a vivide picture of Vic spraying them with the lysol to mind, That is HALARIOUS, laugh out loud!

Hmm, hmmm... it just might not have to take something as terrifying as Brian dying to cause Justin to kill Michael, Oh, how many LOVE BOAT memories are you bringing to my mind now! I wonder if I can find some episodes on Hulu.com or Crackle.com. I'll give it a try later.

"... likes his bottoms smooth and rash free..." Hmm, might just about to become a distant memories for some people. STAY TUNED.

Thanks, BigPaw.... you're the best... sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 85: God, Please...

I don’t want to see Brian die but maybe just for a short while Justin could think he has; then Justin will carry out Michael’s demise. I’m still voting on the barber shop ending BigPaw suggested but Justin can wield the scissors. Vexed I love this word it is one of my favourites so thank you it was a thrill to see it. I know that’s a random thought. Come on Brian come back to Justin. Can someone please get Justin clean pants as I’m sure he will be there for a while and that’s just sad that he is so upset he couldn’t control himself. Thank you another fine chapter.

Cheers

Author's Response:

"... just for a short while Justin could think he was.." It might not even take that much for Justin to violently lash out at Michael.

It's funny you should mention Justin getting clean pants because even that (which might seem like a minor things right now) just might bring unexpected and unwanted circumstances about. Huh? Stay tuned.

Thanks Flosse, sincerely, Delores

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