Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

OK...this deserves a big fat.....

DUN! DUN! DUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Dun!  Dun!  DuNNNNNNNNNN!   OH yeah.  But you know how everything tends to backfire when Michael has a hand in it.  Let's hope that's the case this time around .

 

Thanks you dear.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

You are getting very good at cliffhangers(wink,wink).

Loving it!



Author's Response:

Hi, Missed U so FIERCELY.

 

Thanks for the compliment.  I can't believe I came back to all these reviews and just when I think I've answered them all I look back and see I missed one or two.

 

Thanks so much for returning to read another one of my stories, Reader.  And, I hope you enjoy this one like you did so others.  Hav Fun.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

Uh oh. Brian and Justin are so stubborn. :(

I wish they will be honest to each other for once. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

"Uh oh, Brian and Justin are so stubborn.  I wish they will be honest to each other for once."  I know what you mean, lol!  These two could have saved themselve a lot of trouble had they been from day one.

 

Thanks for point out that fact, Lexa.  Thank you for eveything in fact.  You've been such a loyal reader and I really appreciate it.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

I hope Justin gets out in time.

Author's Response:

"I hope Justin gets out in time"  Hmmm... now I will always be wondering what would have happened if he did. 

 

Thanks so much, Galenut, for commenting so often.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

Damm Brian are you that brainless not to know something is wrong with justin by the way he is acting or are you just as dumb as Michael is, justin stand up to brian for once in your life. say what on your mind. this is so good



Author's Response:

"This is so good."  AWWWWW, thank you so much for that.  And, I hope you stay with me and continue to HAV FUN to the very final chapter.

 

Thanks again for taking the time to comment and express that you like the story so much.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

see what come from not talking to each other Justin and brian.? And Chris Ethan’s should fuck you up, Kip is a big jackass, and fuck of all fuck super dumbass michael just go the fuck away for good.  glad ted is geting it good and hard. Thank you Mrs Chanders for calling.  O.K Ms D I want more now



Author's Response:

Ethan should eff up Chris.  That's a really good one.  But as Justin sees it Ethan's getting what he deserves lol. 

 

OH, you want more, and I so want to give you that but the professors at school are weighing me down with work.  But I see myself getting a little break not this weekend coming up but possibly the next weekend or the middle of next week.

 

Thanks you so much, Meme$, you been GREAT!  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

Oh this is going to be good, I sure hope Justin can put a good spin on why he's in a room with Chris. So what's up with Daphne, I'm betting something horrible has happened and Justin is going to end up with a premature infant to raise. The bigger question is will he be doing it as a single father??? I know Brian has to take some blame, he could have been a little more up front with his feeling but so far he hasn't lied about anything, he has answered Justin's question when the gutless wonder can ask one. If only Justin could be willing to take a risk he would now know where he really stands. Well we all know chickens end up in soup.
Lori

Author's Response:

"... chickens end up in soup."  Where do you get these fantastic phrases from?  I love that one and a WHOLE LOT of other snappy phrase you posted here.  Love it!

 

Thanks, Sincerely.  Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 83: The Day of the Storm (Part III)

You left us hanging, I’m so sad. Please hurry back. I hope Daphne is alright but I want Justin to be gone when Brian gets there as I would like them to at least make their first wedding anniversary even if it is only three months.

Signed: one very sad reader.

Author's Response:

"... I want Justin to be gone when Brian gets there."   Now I'm wondering how it would have turned out if Justin had been gone when Brian got there.

 

Thanks, Flossee... you're the best.  Sincerely, Delores

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