Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2012 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 47: The House That Brian Built

Very evil plot Michael - boo hiss! I'm impressed with 4 chapters in one day. Amazing! Keep it up. TAG

Author's Response:

OMG!  Baby!  Keep it up, as flattery as that is I got to take a break... take care of moms and myself.  LOL.  Be back next week though.  Thanks so much Tag... later.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 47: The House That Brian Built

I feel like I get a double thrill from your writing, I get an updated chapter and then the review from BigPaw to read and they are hilarious. Poor Justin, Michael and Ethan out to destroy his marriage and house. Cary and Harry seeming to be something they aren’t. Brian sneaking off in the middle of the night and although it is innocent Justin doesn’t have a clue what he is doing. When will this man get a break? More please.

Cheers

Author's Response:

But is Brian's really sneaking out?  I mean he put Justin to sleep so he could catch up on some office work... not necessarily to meet Harry.   And, Justin might be guilty of dealing with Harry in the same manner as he dealt with Cary.  the Cary situation is only resolved because Brian forced the issue to the surface, and see how easily that was resolved.  Maybe the same could be done with the Harold situation if Justin would just confront Brian. 

Recall, Brian didn't even know that Justin had saw him with Cary, so he wasn't likely to bring his meeting with Cary up in casual conversation.  It only came out when Brian forced Justin to tell him what was brothering him; and Brian figured  Justin was accusing him of being unfaithful because he smelt another man's cologne on him and he was really explaining to Justin how the other man's scent perfumed scent go on him. he still didn't know that Justin observed Cary and him in Kinnetic's lobby. 

 

Same with Harold (maybe), when did Justin ever outright asked Brian about Harry?  He asked him once at Britin but that was early on before Brian even had met with Harold.  Also, keep in mind the night that Justin asked Brian about where he had been all day of the last day of their honeymoon, he was high on his mix... so was he being nonchalant or evasive that night? 

 

So, do Brian even know that Justin is struggling with the Harry thing... how would he know?  Justin hasn't expressed it to him.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 47: The House That Brian Built

Well I would be a little worried if I thought Michael actually knew how to light a match but knowing Boy Blunder I'm pretty sure he's going to set his own pants on fire and roast his nuts.
Lori

Author's Response:

I can't believe I made Michael this mean.  I usually one of the few authors here that cuts Michael a lot of slack.  Delores

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