Ok, I guess the horses didn't make a good honeymoon item either. Did you do that just to prove me wrong??? You know I do like to feel like I can control all your thoughts and words...just kidding :) for some reason I just get so wrapped up in your stories I feel like I have to vent all my goofy thoughts. Sort of like when you watch a horror story and you see the dumb half naked cheerleader limping off into the forest and you know she's going to get wacked you just can't help screaming, NO, don't got into to woods. The crazed man with the ax is right behind the oak tree and he's going to kill you. Stay with the nerdy guy with glasses, he'll save your dumb life, at least a little longer, a few more lines to add to your resume...
Now, back to your story....Great chapter, good to see Justin trying to talk it out with Brian. The plot is getting a little more complex now that we have this info from the Horse guy. I still want Michael killed, how about an empty elevator shaft. I know he'd be dumb enough to not notice and step right in, oops, splat, problem solved. Michael is just pure nasty. I don't care what small bit of kindness he might have offered Brian when he was younger, that can not be worth putting up with the vile behavior he's doing now. I know you need him for your story, I get the whole plot thing. I'm just saying in the real world, he needs to be gone!! Well you know, the real fake story world. Maybe my story dog will come and chase him around. I won't let my story dog bite him because I don't want story dog to get fictional rabies or literary distemper. Yikes, it's late and I think I need to go to bed.
Lori

Author's Response:

BigPaw:   I'm curious as to why you haven't written any stories here?  I get the impression just from the witty and intellectual comments that you leave me that you are a great writer. I really look forward to your comments, so I can just imagine how much I would look forward to your updates if you were to write a story here.

 

You are so witty, I mean statements like this:  "I guess the horses didn't make a good honeymoon item either.  Did you do that just to prove me wrong???"  - Girl, stuff like this is HILARIOUS on the level of GENIUS.  Really make my day, you acutally have me rolling on the floor with evey comment you leave.  "The dumb naked cheerleader..."   and on and on.  You are so FUNNY... I LOVE IT!  And, you don't know how tempted I am to actually use your ideals. I mean the many suggestions you made about Mikey Novot's demise sound pretty damn good to me!

Thanks you so much, Lori... you are always such a DELIGHT to hear from.

Sincerely, Delores