Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2021 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 38: Try It! You Might Like It!
Im dead inside
Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2013 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 168: Side By Side
"Hi Justin" indeed… Yes, finally!!! Probably Brian's best day in 2 years. I really hope Justin will remember what Brian had to cope with and will cut him some slack, even though he made terrible choices. Come on, what happens next?
Author's Response: Hi, T... here's what happens next... here's chapt 169 for you and I hope U continued 2 enjvy. Later.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!
Yay, both men have bladders that are in unison, now I can’t wait for Clay to walk in on them or did they use different bathrooms and Brian walks out without even seeing Justin. Oh you wouldn’t do that to us would you? LOL. Michael did something good for a change, hooray. Thanks for the quick up. Did you meet Prince Harry when he was in New Jersey?
Cheers
Author's Response: "Oh, you wouldn't do that to us would you?" Hell no, I wouldn't dare, and with that said, here's the next chap #168... so hope U enjvy. Later and cheers to U 2.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!
I bet seeing Brian in his bathroom will scare the 'piss' out of Justin! Hehehe! TAG
Author's Response: "I bet seeing Brian in his bathroom will scare the 'piss' out of Justin!" If you meant that literally - YOU ARE SO RIGHT, LOL! Now here's chapter 168... see 4 yourself, lol!
Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!
I am so glad Brian and Gus finally reunited!! I wish Gus wouldn't love Clay as much as Brian. The first happy moment Brian got in years and still…
So, will Brian be brave enough to face Justin - I really hope so...
Author's Response: Hi, T... so glad 2 C U R still w/me. "I wish Gus wouldn't love Clay as much as Brian." Hmm, I'm not so sure about that because Gus did suggest that Clay should give Justin back to Brian. I think that's an indication that regardless that he's quite fond of Clay, his father is still his greatest preference.
"So, will Brian be brave enough to face Justin..." Well, here's chapter 168... so let's see. hope U enjvy, sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!
Please....please...please....pleaseeeeeee....Ineed more and I cant wait. Please.
Author's Response: Hi there, Draccone. Here's the next chap for you, #168. i hope U enjvy. LOL, Delores
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!
You leave us hanging like this... You're evil... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Ohhhh, hears anogher hanger for you... SORRY, sorry, sorrie, sorrieeee, later though, Delores, and I promise to rush back asap with the next chapter.
Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2013 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!
Nooo It's like you just started a few sentences and didn't finish them…like 3 different cliff hangers!
Author's Response: Hi, T, so glad 2 C U R still with me.... and here's another cliff hanger for you, lol! Later - Delores
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!
I’m so pleased Justin is happy; calling Clay daring and Clay calling him love. Ahh... Is the word surgeon a code; is Clay really a hitman who does surgery on the side? Maybe Clay works for the CIA and is also a surgeon, then Justin could love him even more. LOL I can’t wait to find out what Michael has discovered. Hurry back if your study allows.
Cheers
Author's Response: Hi, Flossee. Here's another chapter for you... chapter 167.... hope you enjvy. Later, Delores
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa: And thank you, and here's more for you, hope U continue to enjvy --- Delores
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!
Hmmm...For some reason it irks me that Brian is tricking. Not majorly, just...If he's still in love with Justin, why do it? Of course, I just love monogomous B/J. It does make sense, I mean, how long does Brian love Justin in the show and tricks when they're actually together? So it's something he would do...But...eh...I just want them to get back together already and stop sleeping with other people! How long do I have to keep waiting? T.T
Still doing a great job though, :). I always look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Hmm, hmmm.... Brian is heading to Germany - Justin's neck of the woods, Anything can happen, lol Thanks IcedCupcake
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 139: The Sandwich
Well this chapter certainly goes against canon. Because in the show Justin definity did bottom for Conner.
Author's Response: Hi, so sorry, I don't know I didn't see you comment until now. Hi, I get very excited when someone new responds. So, happy you joined us and will stay with the story. Thanks.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!
So b1 + m2 = save Justin’s $$$ from Clay. Sorry did you say you wanted more maths or less? LOL I’m so glad you didn’t go mad as I’m still hoping we will get a Justin chapter really soon.
Cheers
Author's Response: Hi, glad U R still with me. The next chapters aren't too far away.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!
I dont know where to begin so I am not going to start. I am just PATIENTLY waiting for us to get out of this crazy universe and back into the one where Brian and Justin fit together. AHH!! BTW So totally going insane here.
Author's Response: Hey! I know what you mean but keep in mind Brian is on his way to Germany now. up-oh.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!
Great chapter. I love this story but when will Brian and Justin see other and make things right again between them? Just curious.
Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa: Brian is finally on his feet again and it seems he's following Jusitn around the globe now. Some thing's about to give.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!
Brian finally seems to come to his senses.
Does he soon deserve to see Justin again pwetry pwease with puppy dog eyes???
:-D
Author's Response: I agree 100%, and it seems since Brian got back on his feet, he hasn't be doing much but following Justin around the globe (first Paris... now he's off to Germany). Hmmm, looks like that just might be leading up to something....anything is possible at thsi point, lol.
Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!
O.K really hate Melanie, more than in any other story...
I would really like to know more about Clay, and about how things are with Justin and Gus. Does Gus really doesn't think about his dad?
How horrible for Brian that he only has the same person who made his life so sad.
Come on, bring the next chapters I can't wait!
Author's Response: H, T.... so glad U R still with me, and it won't be long before Ipost additional chapters. later
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
Wow, I can't believe that Brian is asking Michael for help... Hopefully he'll ask him to call Gus, or even better yet Justin for him... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi, Kath... here's some answers to those questions for you. Truly hope U continue 2 enjvy, lol!
Reviewer: Ink (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2013 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
Oh and anther thing it's bitch ass move on Mel part for what she said to brian and michael is a bigger bitch for saying that to Brian to where is grandma when you need the old gal or Jen or Ted or Em or Larry curly or moe . Justin come back robert go there .
Author's Response: Robert go there! I don't think our man Rob will becoming to Paris any time soon, but he's definitely still pertinent to the story, giving him a love interest is not just by accident, it actually crucial to how the story turns out in the end.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
oh this Michael.
Wonder what you have up your sleeve for us in the next chapter.
Anxiously awaiting the update :-)
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust, dont' you worry, with school done for the summer I won't be taking so long to up date like I have been. Later.
Reviewer: Ink (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
If brian get back with Michael for any reason even having a shit than he is a big fool as Justin is for marrying that asshole of a doctor.They both as in BJ need to get their head out of their ass and grow a brain.
Author's Response: Hi, Ink, you are so right, LOL! And don't worry Brian has no intention whatsoever of getting back with Michael. I think that was well established when Brian said he don't think he'd would ever be able to forgive him and he said it might be a POSSIBLY that he can earn that forgiveness but he couldnt' be even certain of that either. Brian wants his JUSTIN back, and his son back - NOT MICHAEL. In fact, he hates that fact that he even care that Michael might hurt himself. He prefers not to even care at all about Michael, but he's just being classic Brian, that is his head and brain says one thing when his hearts says another.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
Oh no you don’t, they aren’t getting back together; lol , unless you say they are. *Sigh* I have my bucket ready, but I’m still not looking forward to Michael and Brian being together again. Yuckity, yuckity, yuck. I need a Justin chapter please, to get the image of Michael and Brian out of my head. I’m glad your back, I hope classes haven’t been to exhausting for you.
Cheers
Author's Response: HELL NO! They aren't getting back together at least not as LOVERS again. Classes were very exhausting but I think I'm bouncing back now from the experience. I'm not sure if I mentioned it here before, but I suspect that my school is disguising a MATHEMETICIAN'S degree as a Bussiness one. I was required to take Algebra, Calculus, and Statistics, and when I took all those classes I thought that was the end of that. However, last semester I took a classes called Business Research Methods and one called Poduction Operations Management, and with titles like those, what would you think they detailed! huh, huh... but believe it or not they are all about MATh, MATH, MATh, and then some math. Business Research Methods is just another statistics class, Prod Operations started out witih Algebra and Geometry, and then filtered into Calculus and ended with Trignometry. I thought I would go MAD, lol!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 163: Nobody Here Misses You!
Why does Mel want Michael and Brian back together? If that is going to happen then you have to give some warning so I can have a bucket ready to throw up in. LOL Two chapters thank you so much.
Cheers
Author's Response: I'll give you guys a break right off the bat! There is DEFINITELY NO Michael and Brian reunion - sexually that is! If they become anything again, it They definitely WON'T be lovers! NO EFFING WAY, LOL! Hooray for that!
Mel said what she said because she HATES both Michael and Brian, and therefore in her head they would make the perfect couple- BUT NO WAY IS THAT GOING TO HAPPEN!
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
Great chapter. I hope Brian and Justin find a way back to each other.
Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hi, I'm so glad U are back, and yes eventually they will, and I'm hoping I can do it in about ten more chapters. I really want to wrap up this story so I can concentrate on finishing up all the undone stuff I have here.
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2013 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere
Are you ever going to finish this? It was actually an okay story the first 60 chapters or so. I was rooting for Brian and Justin to be together. But it went on and on and on that it's just ridiculous how long and how annoying the story progressed. They get back together. They don't get back together. Decide already. It seriously getting preposterous.
Author's Response: thanks for commenting, Ann, but no.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted
so waiting for the update. Maybe a long one for my long flight to L.A.! there I will have a coffee with them, :)
Write much and soooooon pwettypwease :)
Author's Response: Here's the update for you.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
Okay I know the last comment I made I was frustrated but... I'm addicted to this story and I can't wait for another chapter...
God please just tell me Justin has finally come to his senses and has left that dreaded doctor and is coming home to Brian... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Addicted! Thank you for that! This semester's finals are done, so I should be updating very soon - second or third week in May.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
Oh Hell's Bells!! What a cliffhanger! Hope you will update soon! Best soap on the site!
Author's Response: Hi, Bryton... didn't mean to be away so long but had finals, and now that that's out of the way I will be updating again soon. Later. I'll try not to have you dangling over a cliff too long, LOL!
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
I hope he scares the shit out ofMel. She has no business taking Gus and Linds phones! What a nasty bitch. I hope Brian puts her in her place and Deb and Carlmhear every word Mel says to Brian.
Author's Response: OMG! I got readers hating Mel, lol! I'm a Devil, huh? Finals are over now so I should be updating in the second or third week of May.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
Uh oh!
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa: Really miss U, and now that finals are done, I will be updating soon.
Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2013 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
Will Brian ever get a break? even just one tiny moment of joy?
What about Justin? I wonder about his honeymoon and about what is lurking under the surface there…
I've missed you – welcome back!
T
Author's Response: Hi, T: I've missed U 2; and now that college is done for this semester, I might have more time on my hands to update; however, I might seek an internship opportunity, so that might slow me down as well.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
uhoh, big bad Melanie-wolfe ....
Granny is still having aftereffects of the poisoning? Don t you dare do anything to her! :-)
Germany' good choice! Will they come to Cologne? We could have a coffee together :-).
hurryhurry!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust.... Come to Cologne... have coffee together... KILLER, LOL! Laffing my gust out! Sorry for being away so long but had semester finals. Hope to update a week from now.... second week in May.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2013 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
Busted! TAG
Author's Response: Oh yeah! Will update again as soon as I can. I haven't abandoned the story... just been busy with course work - FINALS.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You
One is the loneliest number; only one chapter. I feel cheated. LOL Thank you for the update; it’s very sad but the ending was fun. Mel and Brian, she will whip his ass. Hurry back if you can.
Cheers
Author's Response: Hi, Flossee... and everyone! I didn't mean to stay away so long but I had FINALS at school, and this semester was really tough. School is done for now, so maybe in a week or so I'll be able to update again. Later.
Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2013 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
Wow, I love your reasons explaining why Justin would marry Clay! I understood it before, but now I'm even more thrilled that he is obviously in love with that man. Please don't get me wrong, I'm a big B/J supporter, but what Brian did really sucks, so he deserves to suffer for everything he put Justin through. Yes, he was in a rather difficult condition, but no matter what he thinks - he didn't shut Justin out in order to do what's best for him, he did it just for himself, for his own sake. It was a terrible thing to do, and now I have no idea how Justin will come to really forgive him. Loved the talk between Brian and Grandma. Maybe I'm a freak, but I hope to read more about tormented with jealousy/hurt/guilt Brian - can't help myself, I love those things, and he really infuriated me with his foolish behaviour.
By the way, I like Clay a lot - I'll be sad if he turns out to be a jerk, but maybe it'll be even better, because I believe in Brian and Justin, so if Clay really feels something for the blond, he'll have his heart broken.
Thank you for those fantastic updates, I can't wait for more now!
Author's Response: Hi, Katja: I really missed you. So, glad 2 hear from U. Thank you so much for so TOTALLY getting these characters and why they act the way that they do. And, here's more for you now chapter 162. I hated staying away so long but Final exams kept me really busy.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2013 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
Thanks for your extremely long response to my other comment. I wonder because of the time taken to answer it if you're trying to convince me or you who Justin belongs with. Just don't expect me to accept it if you put him and Brian back together now. Because then who would be unrealistic? We'll just have to agree to disagree. Thank you for the response, but I'll just move onto another story.
Author's Response:
What? You wonder if I'm trying to convince you or myself who belongs with Justin? My gosh! We all know that JUSTIN BELONGS WITH BRIAN!!! So, if you think my response to you was trying to convince you that he belongs with someone else, you totally did not get my point. So, you are right you should move on because you totally don't get it. What I was trying to convince you of was your statement that said the Justin mariried someone after only knowing him for a month was not credible. I said nothing about Justin absolutely belongs with Clay. I just told you why he married him. Bye.
Thanks again for commenting.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2013 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
Brian now not only needs to reunite with Justin for himself and their love, but he also needs to save him. I realize that Clay is not only dishonest, but actually dangerous, worse than Jensen. There is no doll moment in this story, I really enjoy all the twists and turns – just great!!
T
Author's Response: Hi, T: So glad U R back. 'No dull moment in the story." Thank you so much for that. I'll try to update again as soon as fleaible. Later, sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
Well Brian’s talk with Grandma was certainly better than the two Justin had. The first one Justin had with Grandma I thought I was going to have to buy him a tampon and the second one Grandma admitted to watching his sex tape. Ewwww
I’m so pleased you confirmed something I was pondering. The general public still thinks Justin has billions. Oh I can’t wait to see how that goes down with Clay when he kills off Justin and gets nothing. Okay, no killing off Justin as he’s my favourite.
You are the queen of turmoil with these men. I hope RL and good health allows for another fine update soon.
Cheers
Author's Response: "Well Brian's talk with Grandma was certainly better than the two Justin had." You never fail me, this made me roar with laffer, lol! "Clay killing off Justin." HA, ha, ha,... got me in stitches. And, I'll try to update again as soon as I can.
Thanks, Flossee and cheers 2 U 2.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
So Justin did marry Clay. :( What about Brian? I am hoping that Justin would realize the mistake he had made by marrying Clay and return back to Brian. I am hoping Brian and Justin will work things out soon.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa.... thanks so much for constantly coming back and leaving such great comments. I like the bunch of wonderful comments you made here. Let's see what can be done about that. Later.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
This is a very entertaining story. But Justin being engaged and then wed to a man he only knew for a month defies credulity. I just can't see that as realistic. You 're the author, but I say either put B and J together or resolve it some other way. But frankly it's just starting to drag on and on. Sorry but that's my honest opinion.
Author's Response:
Hi, there.
First of all, thanks for taking the time to comment, and saying you find the story entertaining. I very much appreciate that. Two, please don’t apologize because you are definitely entitled to your opinion.
However, your comments throw me into a web of wonderment.
You say the relationship between Justin and Clay defies credibility and is unrealistic because Justin married Clay after only knowing him for a month. Please don’t take this out of content but your very statement defies credibility because you don’t seem to question any of the other relationships in the story (especially how the union of Justin and Brian came about - by the same token you state here it might be the most incredulous relationship in the story, but you haven't questioned that.... why not?).
For instance: In this story Justin actually falls in love with Brian before he even meets him. Recall, he sees Brian’s picture on the cover of a business magazine, and tells Daphne that he has fallen madly in love with him, and vows that he’s traveling from Seattle to Pittsburgh, and track him down and marry him. So how credible and realistic is that… why haven’t you questioned it?
Also, Robert falls in love with a man he sees only once in the subway station; Chris and Ethan meet and fall instantly in love, Ted and Harold fall in love at first sight. So how credible or realistic are any of those relationships, and why didn’t you question those relationships?
So, since you don't seem to have issues with the credibility of any of the other relationships, why is the union of Justin and Clay so farfetched to you? It seems to me that Justin and Clay have more of a basis for falling in love than any other couples in the story? To get a better sense of my meaning, please consider all of the following (13 reasons or more for Justin and Clay to fall in love):
- Clay saved Justin son J.C.’s life
- Clay appears to be very good to and for Justin, and a big fan of his art
- They have a lot in common (dancing, singing, love of art, laughing at the same things, and much more)
- Clay was committed to Uri for 20 years, therefore, capable of strong attachment and commitment. That’s something that Justin highly desires in a partner.
- Clay’s a surgeon, so he has a prestigious job and high overall respectability, and presumably rich
- Clay’s handsome, a great lover, a great listener, and seems to always say exactly what Justin either wants to or need to hear
- Clay seems to really get Justin; especially in terms of his art. Recall the day they first met how easily he was able to decipher Justin’s abstract pieces when others couldn’t. Also, unlike most people, Clay didn’t assume that it was Justin who had left Brian, and he was able to figure out (without Justin telling him) what all artist’s promiscuity was all about.
- Justin trusts Clay. That’s clearly indicated by the fact that he didn’t ask a lawyer to draw up a prenup for Clay to sign.
- Clay is good with both of Justin’s sons J.C. and Gus [That’s a big plus! All parents want a partner that their children adores and vice versa]
- Justin gets some things from Clay he didn’t get from his other boy friends. Unlike Ethan, Clay appears to be faithful; unlike Jensen, Clay doesn’t appear to be either a bigot, snob, or needy; and unlike Brian, Clay appears quite opened about his feelings, easygoing, and uncomplicated
- Ethan, Jensen, and Brian, has caused Justin tremendous pain. Therefore, someone like Clay is refreshing to him, as well as a relief to him. Recall when he told Robert that he was choosing Jensen over Brian because Brian’s complicated but Jensen is not. A similar thing is probably occurring now when it comes to choosing Clay over Brian. Clay is uncomplicated whereas Brian is terribly complicated. Keep in mind that Justin is not aware that Brian has completely healed, and not sure what his reaction is going to be when he finds out.
- Also, all Justin’s friends like Clay, but that wasn’t the case with Brian though. Melanie despises Brian. Ethan and Chris aren’t big fans of Brian’s either. Lindsay has feelings of unacquainted love for Brian, so it’s possible that subconsciously, she might be a little jealous of Justin being with Brian. The only skeptics are Jennifer, and Justin’s grandmother but it might not be all that personal. Those two women are mostly concerned that Justin married someone he hasn’t known long. They’d feel the same way about it no matter who it was that Justin married that quickly.
- Other things to consider when evaluating why Justin has fallen for Clay: Recall Justin told Viola that he known other men far longer than he knew Clay, however, none of those relationships have worked. That signifies that time spent getting to know a person has very little essence to Justin. Maybe after what he’s been thru, he feels you can spend a lifetime getting to know another person and still not really know that person (so what difference does it make). Also, Grandma-Taylor told Brian that Justin hasn’t been able to make a good decision since Brian left (especially about his love life). So maybe marrying a man he’s only known for six months is just one more of those bad decisions.
So, taking all this into consideration how can you say that the relationship between Clay and Justin lack credibility, and is unrealistic. Could it be possible you have developed issues with this story at this point, because either you don’t understand the overall basis of their relationship, or your emotions make it too hard for you to accept that Justin might be in love with someone else in addition to being in love with Brian?
I hope I’ve convinced you but still you are entitled to your opinion, so if I haven’t that’s completely fine. No hard feelings.
Oh, last of all. The other comment you made here throws me into a flux of confusion. You said the story is entertaining, but ask me to end it because it starting to drag on and on. That doesn’t make sense to me, because usually when people are being entertained they don’t want to see the fun come to an end. I find that terribly strange, but then again you are entitled to your opinion, and thanks again for taking the time to comment.
Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted
I won´t, be assured, NEED to know how it ends, so keep on posting regularly and all is fine :). If not, I send you my medical bill :P
<3
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust... Thanks you so much for hanging in there with this unusually long story written by me. I'll try to post another chapter as soon as fleasible.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted
that´s right, but do WE deserve so much heartache ^^ :).
Nevertheless, keep on doing what you are doing, you´re doing it good!
Best wishes!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. but plez don't have a heart attack before I finish this.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack
oh, man , how many more chapters will you tease us till the reunion? Honestly, I totally expected it to be Justin who busted Brian in the boys room.
Hurry!
Later!
Author's Response: I know what you mean, Reiselust, but Brian doesn't deserve to get Justin back to easily, lol!
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
More!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Draccone.... here's more 4 U (chapter 161). Later, and sincerely Delores
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
Uh oh! I am looking forward to how Brian explain himself to Justin this time. If that was Justin, right?
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hmmm, if that is Justin, lol? Here U R, Lexa. Thanks so much for continuing 2 come back. chapter 161, later. Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
OMG I hope that isn't Mel. I hate her, at least in this story lately. And Clay gee he ' a charming fellow, not, whatever he I'd to Granny is wrong and I hope wherever Justin and he want on honeymoon, he falls off a cliff, gets eaten by a shark or contracts some sudden illness that is in curable. Poor Justin he just needs to get back to Brian.
Author's Response: OMG! I got people hating Mel, lol! And, you making me laff hard when you say here all that you would like to see happen to Clay on the Honeymoon, LOL! Well, here's 161. I hope U enjvy. Later Delores
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2013 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
This is so heart breaking. I hope that Brian will find an ally that will help him. Also I hope he will have an emotional reunion with Gus, he deserves to have at least one happy thing after such miserable 2+ years. Glad grandma Taylor is back – missed her!
This story is just addicting!
T
Author's Response: Hi, T: Strange you should mention ally, here. Here it is, lol! Hope U enjvy chap 161. Later, and thanks again for taking the time to comment. Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
you are such a teaser :P . Thanks for the long update.
I knew something was wrong with Clay, too good to be true.
ok, let 's wait for explanations :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, Reiselust... here's 161 for you. Hope U enjvy. Hav Fun, Delores. Later
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
That is not a fair place to leave this! And geez is Clay totally sketchy now or what? I mean, I think it was the general consensus that he was too perfect and something had to be wrong with him...But a murderer? Well, at least that's what I think. Did he kill Uri? Did he spike Viola's champagne with something? Gaw!! I need to know. Justin and the kids could be next!
Update soon please. :)
Author's Response: Hi, IcedCupcake, so sorry about not being fair, LOL! And, I see U rather excited there, so gere's 161 I hope you enjvy. Later now.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!
Did Clay push Uri overboard? What did Clay do to grandma? Who just walked in on Brian? Okay I can hear the theme to Soap playing in my head so I will stop with the questions now.
Cheers
Author's Response: Hi, Flossee. Here's your next episode of this Soap, lol!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House
Hi, I usually avoid reading A/U but I gave this story a chance a few days ago and I couldn't stop reading – WOW what a roller-coaster! Since I read it all at once (!!) this is kind of my first cliff hanger … Poor sad Brian, I hope it won't take them more missed years. This Clay seems too perfect like he knows exactly what to say, and have just the perfect back story. He gives me no reason to dislike him but I don't know there are too many coincidences. What about Gus, can he really forget his father so easily?
Can't wait for the next chapter
T
Author's Response:
Oh, my God! Welcome, welcome, welcome!
You said you’ve read 158 chapters all in one sitting! You’ve flattered me so much I’m laughing like a hyena, and my head’s spinning around like Linda Blair's did in the Exorcist… thank you, thank you, thank you. I can’t thank you enough; your words are so uplifting and inspiring. And, for that here’s the next chapter instantly, and as an added bonus I'm adding chapter 160 too, and if I'm able to I'll add 161 tonight as well.
Thanks again, and I hope you continue to enjvy. Later Brianawriter [real name] Delores
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House
oh Brian hurry hurry hurry !!!!!! Thanks for the multiple updates! Don ' t take that long hiatus again anytime soon <3.
I' d kill Mel on the spot :/
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust... I hope I didn't hurrried fast enough. I just added 159 and I'm adding 160 later on tonight. Hope you enjoy both chapters.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House
Oh my fucking lord. I need more right now.
Author's Response: Well, here's more for you. Thanks so much, Draccone. I glad a fellow author keeps coming back here. And, I can't wait to finish updating all these stories so I can finally start doing so reading again. I'm dying to see what you've been up to lately. I always enjoy your stories. Well, got to go and answer the rest of the reviews and upload 160, later.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?
Noooo. Why the hecks am I reading this. Why?. Why... Why... Why.... Why....
Author's Response: Read on, Read on, Read on... Here's chapter 159, and 160 will be posted shortly tonight. Plz continue to enjvy.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?
Wow this is good. This is the kind of Justin/OC relationship I've rarely seen but wanted to a lot esp if Brian in the AU was not good for him or being good to him.
I know Ethan gets villified a lot but in the show, I thought he was very good for him just as Clay is good for him right now. This will allow Justin to grow and mature into someone who Brian can chase instead of the other way around.
Good job! Enjoying the story a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you for this comment, Bryton4ever71. I'm always so glad when readers leave comments that let me know that they truly get the full meaning of my story and also say that I'm doing a good job getting that point across. And, here's chapter 159, and 160 will be post very soon. I hope you continue to enjoy.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House
I think Justin is in denial. :( I am looking forward to find out what happens next with Brian and Justin. I hope Brian stop the wedding in time.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hmm, Brian, stopping the wedding. NOw that's very interesting.... with that said here's chapter 159 for you, and 160 is coming momentarily tonight as well.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House
OMG I want to puke now. I hope Mother Taylor’s words have some influence. Justin instead of say I will, or I do, just say I am mentally incapable of making this decision; please get me help.
Cheers
Author's Response: Huh-huh, let's hope that's all it takes, but I kind of doubt it.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 157: The Very Next Week
Robert needs to find his mystery man before he and Brian even think about getting together. I can’t wait to find out who the mole man is. Is it Clay maybe?
Cheers
Author's Response: Hmm... dark eyes, hair, and a mole... Who could that possibly be. How soon will we know but believe it. Robert's love interest is not just thrown in there for entertainment purposes it has a big significance for the story.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 156: I'll Like To Propose Something To You...
“there’s something a lot more serious than that I would like to propose.” NO, NO, NO he can’t propose as I don’t like him or trust him. LOL Really Justin you can’t say yes to marrying every guy you meet. You have a fifty, fifty chance to get the answer right Justin and the answer is NOOOO way.
Cheers
Author's Response: Awww, poor Justin, but let's hope he gets it right one of these days.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 155: What's Another Week?
Yay! That was the scene I was expecting. Mel has both Lindsay and Gus’ phones. I don’t think I can take any more phone misplacements. ROFLMAO
Cheers
Author's Response: Huh, still move phone action to come. LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?
Clay is one smooth talker. Now I’m losing count; Justin’s ex’s are, Ethan, Brian, Brian again, Jensen and hopefully soon to be ex Clay. “I can’t help that I’m still in love with Brian” Justin’s words; then he says “Make love to me again”. I think Justin is one confused man. Please find scarecrow Justin a brain so he can think straight (maybe straight is the wrong word but you know what I mean).
Cheers
Author's Response: '... Now I'm losing count.' Thanks... catch me up will you, LOL! 'Maybe straight is the wrong word! You got me cracking again.'
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 153: What is Your Plans For That Stuff?
What with the toilet déjà vu scene? Did Justin plant something in Chris and Ethan’s place or maybe Michael’s room? LOL I’m just kidding but it did take me back since there is a phone involved. What’s with these people and their phones; can they get a wrist strap or maybe a handbag to carry them in. At least with a handbag you always know where your phone is; they are always at the bottom under everything else. Or is that just mine?
Cheers
Author's Response: My gosh, Flossee, U don't forget any of the old chapters, huh? Boy! You make me smile and laugh every time. Boy that would be funny if Justini gave Ethan a bit of his own medicine. Howeer, Justin wouldnt' be lying recall how willing Chris went to the hotel with Justin that day, lol! Oh, and more PHONE action to come. LOL! Where I'm moving on the answer the rest of the reviews and then I'm uploading chapter 160. Later.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 152: How Do You Feel, J.C.?
Is Ethan in cahoots with Clay? I don’t trust Clay and my guess is that Sid, Ethan, Chris or Michael is also in on his devilish plan; whatever it is. You just gave us another person to place in the most likely to be a villain column; Sid. Thanks as that means this fic has yet another dimension.
Cheers
Author's Response: Awww, poor Clay, LOL! But umm... let's us see about that, LOL! Here's 159, Flossee, and 160 come up a little later this evening. Later, Delores
Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2013 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House
Omg!!!
Can't wait for an update.
Once Justin see's Brian it'll be like no one else is in the room. Omg I'm dying to know what'll happen next!!
Great update.
-Marina
Author's Response: Hi, Britinified (Marina), so happy to hear from you again. And, I hope I didn't keep you waiting long here's chapter 159, and 160 is being adding some time later tonight. Very much hope you enjvy, later.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?
Okay I hate where this story is going... I really hate to give up on it now after reading so much of it but I wouldn't read anymore if Justin going to stay with Clay... Run Justin Run... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: OH, don't give up on me dear. Read between the lines, lol! There's a big clue there about that relationship, lol!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 152: How Do You Feel, J.C.?
Call me skeptical but I just don't like the dear doctor. Just something about him that seems to good to be true; besides Justin needs to get back together with Brian... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I agree 100% with you, but it got to be done just right to get the full impact of the reunion lol! Here's chapter 158 coming right up for you, lol!
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 153: What is Your Plans For That Stuff?
You know, and I can't believe I'm saying this...I don't even think I believe Brian and Justin being together is the best option anymore. Before, when the divorce was fresh, them getting back together seemed like the only solution. Now, however, they both have different lives. Would they even recognize each other?
Brian went through a very hard time in his paralysis. And even though Justin wanted to be there, he wasn't. Brian went through all those things alone and is different because of them. As for Justin, he's had this whole other life, boyfriends and doctors and JC, that Brian has no part of. I'm starting to think that too much time has passed for them to find a reason to be together again...
They may love each other, but they don't know how much the other person has changed. How can they reconcile their old feelings with their new selves?
I only write this much because I care SO much. Right now this is my favorite story and I really want things to work out between everyone...But the more time that passes the less I see that happening. At least not without one of them being unhappy with it and leading to another divorce.
Ok so this is basically a repeat of everything I left in my last review...Well, not a repeat, but just more concerns. I still love the story and can't wait for the next update. :)
Author's Response: Wow! thank you for writing this; and guess what? I thought of every obstacle you have written here, and I've already worked it all out... you'll be surprise what develops along the way that do eventually get them back together, and I hope (by story end) that I've done a good enough job to make it believable. We'll see.
Also, IcedCupcake, let me say here. You probably have no idea how much I value a review such as this one. It's such an honest critique of the story, and I appreciate it so much, because taking everything into consideration you writing here, can only make a better writer out of me. So, always feel free to express yourself just like you're doing here, and never shy away from doing so. Thanks again. And, here's chapter 153 for you, I hope you still continue to enjvy.
Also, and I hope to post all the way to chapter 157 tonight. later.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?
I cant wait for more. I want to choke Justin for not answering Brian. Ugh!! But what can u do. Clay and Justin...me dont like. But I know you know I wasnt going to. Lol. Update soon please.
Author's Response: Hey, Draccone, additional chapters coming up, lol. Later
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?
I cant wait for more. I want to choke Justin for not answering Brian. Ugh!! But what can u do. Clay and Justin...me dont like. But I know you know I wasnt going to. Lol. Update soon please.
Author's Response: Hi, again, Draccone. Here's 153 and additional chapters to follow today. Later.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?
I cant wait for more. I want to choke Justin for not answering Brian. Ugh!! But what can u do. Clay and Justin...me dont like. But I know you know I wasnt going to. Lol. Update soon please.
Author's Response: Can't waitfor more... well, here's 152 for you, and I'm working on posting up to 157. Hope U enjoy. Later
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 150: In The Care of Competent Hands
I was so happy to see an update on this story you had me bouncing and clapping in my seat! ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: thanks you so much, Kathleen, and here's some more chapters for you to bouce and clap to. Here's 152, and I plan to post up to 157. Later
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 150: In The Care of Competent Hands
Cuddling.... always a dangerous sign!!! More teasing here!
Brian, run to Paris as fast as yoi can pleeeeaaaaasssssse!!!
Thanks for the two updates, so craving fir that story!!!
Author's Response: 'Cluddinig... always dangerous sign!!!" U got me roll on the floor, lol! Brian, frun to Pariee fast! U wouldn't believe how fast! Well, here's chapter 152 and I'll be adding more periodically today. Later
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?
The way Mel keeps looking at the phone I can see this isn’t going to go well for the Brian/Gus relationship. I think Brian might be on the other end of one of Mel’s rants. What is it with people called Mel, a phone and a rant??????
Cheers
Author's Response: Hey, hey, hey! Flossee, You guess it and you'll hear that rant before the day is out. Here's chapter 152 for you but I plan to post up to chapter 157 before the day is out. Later
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 150: In The Care of Competent Hands
OMG now you are sending yourself subliminal messages by having the two men on a couch. I think your subconsciously telling yourself which fic needs to be update next. LOL I hope you are feeling better and your headache is gone.
Cheers
Author's Response: Flossee! Oh, thank you so much. I'm actually feeling so good right now that I'm writing this message while chuckling and with a smile painted on my face. In fact, I'm feeling so upbeat right now that I'm might add the next chapter before my head hits the pillow tonight.
Two men on the couch, lol. You can always make me laff really hard, lol. Thank you so much for that. Later and sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 149: Thank God for a Doctor in the House
I can't believe you did this to JC. Poor little boy. Nobody deserve this.
I love this story.
The suspense is killing me....... Please update soon
Author's Response: Hi, Mariana, haven't heard from you in quite a while. So glad to hear you still read this one and still enjoying. and didn't mean to stay away so long but real life havent' been too accommodating lately. In fact I writing this respond while experiencing a massive headache but hopefully I'll be in good enuff shape to update this weekend. Thaks again and later.
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 149: Thank God for a Doctor in the House
Damn it. So bad of you to end it like that. You are cruel. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much LOL! Sorry though I'm not in my usual peppy mood because of being a bit worn out and chronic headaches but I starting to feel better. Hopefully enuff to post some more chapters really soon. Later thogh.
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 136: Where is He?
Those are the strangest couple. No wonder Jensen is the way he is if he had to grow up with those two.
Author's Response: Hi, Taire.. so sorry I'm so late in responding but been terribly busy as well as suffering from chronic migraines, but getting better so I hope this weekend I'll be good enuff to post a few additional chapters. Thanks for taking to the time to comment.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 148: Welcome Back to the Living
Wow that one was a long one! How interesting to know what happened to Michael at last. I'm glad he's changed for the better.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, Michael surfacing like that is quite interesting. thanks again. later.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 145: Probably Just My Imagination Running Away With Me?
Hmmm...a new mystery...who. is Justin seeing? II keep wanting it to be BGrian but that's not it...OMG...is it Michael?
Author's Response: Hi, again. Forgive me for the lazy responses back but been having headaches lately so I'm not too focus on at the moment. but things are getting better. I feel almost good enuff that I think I might be able to update this weekend.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 149: Thank God for a Doctor in the House
Please let JC be alright. I hope Justin rings Brian for comfort but somehow I dread that he will feel indebted to Clay and may allow those feeling to take him where he doesn’t want to go. One more chapter and we are half way through this fic and I am loving every twist you put in. Thank you so much for the wonderful, fantastic, exciting, clever entertainment which can only stem from a brilliant imagination.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Flossee for what you wrote here... the good feeling it gives me makes my head ache a lot less painful. Thanks you again for that. I hope to update this weekend again... hopefully.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 143: Are Kinney-Men The Worst?
awwww so sweet and glad for Harry and Ted
Author's Response: Harry and Ted.... thanks alot. Sorry been away so long but been quite busy doing something else and having chronic headaches too lately, but getting better. I will try to update this weekend.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 148: Welcome Back to the Living
I can’t believe you did that to me; bringing Michael back. LOL Why is Justin being so nice to him? It sounds like Michael is going to use the information and make a play for Brian again. Stop telling him stuff Justin; the thought of Brian and Michael together makes me wants to puke. I had best move on to the next chapter.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks, Flossee. Sorry but I'm not myself lately but hopeful I might bounce back enuff to update this weekend. Later
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 147: Who Was That?
What’s with the short chapter I feel cheated. LOL. So the guest is Smellyman; is he a new superhero and is his job to get Justin away from those weirdos.
Cheers
Author's Response: short chapter, lol! 'Smellyman'... (ha,ha,ha).
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 146: Guess Who Showed Up For Dinner
This dinner party seems really weird; I think the three men are up to something and it will not bode well for Justin. Guess who showed up for dinner? My guess is Sidney Poitier. Yum.
Cheers
Author's Response: Sidney Portier! U got me screaming wiith laffer. Sorry that I've been away so long. I'm going thru a headache stage but it seem to be getting better. So, I might feel good enuff 2 update this wkend.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 149: Thank God for a Doctor in the House
Chris is Hobbs! OMG!
Poor JC doesn't deserve this. Never ever. At least now I sense a reunion coming up. Pun intended :-)
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust, can't believe I've been gone this long and time really moves fast. I hope to update this weekend. however, I've been have a lot of migraine lately, so I can't be too sure I will feel good enough to update that soon but I'm aiming for it. Later. I got a few chapters already written but needs editing. I'll try.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 148: Welcome Back to the Living
Wow, Michael. HIM we had not on the count, lol. Teasing us and then still no reunion tsktsk. But when you started with the smell... well
Author's Response: Yah, Mike Novot is back. Sorry, I haven't update in awhile, but been both busy and having problems with my head but I hope I feel good enough to update this weekend. I'll try.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 149: Thank God for a Doctor in the House
Great chapter.
I hope Justin's son be okay and I wonder what Brian has to say to Lindsey.
Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Wow! I can't believe I've been gone sinice March 7th. Time really flies. Hope to update this weekend. Thanks Lexa.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 148: Welcome Back to the Living
I'm not so sure I could forgive Michael so easily...
Okay I'm now ready for Brian and Justin to get back together, the suspense is killing me... ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean, Kathleen, about Justin forgiving Michael ... and that's why I did it this way. I put Michael in so many of Justin's dreams so he'd see him in a different light. Also that's the reason I had him find him in such a debilitated state. I felt unless I did it that way, no one would buy it. So, I can only hope I did a good enough job that no one will see it as totally far-fetched... also, at the very end of the story everyone will discovered that Justin forgiving Michael serves a greater underlying purpose than it might seem at this point.
Thanks again, Kathleen, and I'm so glad you are ready for them to be reunited, but that too has to be done just right for that to be belivable, so it's still a little ways away from now.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 147: Who Was That?
So glad to see new chapters posted, but how could you leave us here with this cliffhanger... ~ Kathleen
PS Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Hi, Kathleen.... more is coming up it just mere minutes. Thanks so much for keep coming back... I'm so thrilled.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 145: Probably Just My Imagination Running Away With Me?
Great teaser as always. But that´s what we love you for.
Who´s "Shemar´s love interest" whowhowho???
Who is haunting Justin on the streets? whowhowho?????
Who´s asking you to continue soon? mememe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust... Thanks so much, you got me smiling ear-to-ear. And, here's an additional chapter for your 146, but 147 is soon to follow also today. Later
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 145: Probably Just My Imagination Running Away With Me?
It sounds like Justin could mould Clay into a perfect boyfriend. Are you reading my mind? I was thinking about who you were likely to have reappear and you go bringing Chris and Ethan back on the scene (I’m pleased it wasn’t Michael) but I still don’t trust either of them. You had me fooled for a while but now I think it is Jensen that Justin is seeing. Originally I thought it was Brian and maybe Brian falling down all the time is the reason why Justin loses sight of him. LOL Please hurry back when RL permits.
Cheers
Author's Response: Hmm... Clay might be TOO MUCH of the perfect boyfriend.... Arghhhh... what could I possbly mean by that... hmmmm! Very interesting take you have there on the mystery man... but we'll see, LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 144: Whom Do You Think of Every Moment of the Day?
OMG you read my mind. I was wondering what happened to Roberts mystery subway man and now you mention him but still tease us with who he is. I WANT DETAILS. Pretty please. LOL
Cheers.
Author's Response: Hey! Flossee! Robert's mystery man... whom... you and several of the characters in the story are going to be quite surprised, lol! Well, here's 146 and 147 will follow soon after.
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 144: Whom Do You Think of Every Moment of the Day?
Grrr...I don't like Brian right now. Totally in love with Justin but acting like a total jerk and getting his dick sucked by other men when he SHOULD be going after Justin. Grrr...Bad Brian. Bad.
Author's Response: Bad, bad, bad Brian. I totally agree with you... but he still thinks Justin is engaged or even married... and he couldn't be too confident about getting him back after all that he done to him. Here's 146 for you... and 147 is on the way before the day's out.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2013 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 145: Probably Just My Imagination Running Away With Me?
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa. Thank you and here's more... chapter 146 and 147 will be added also before the day's out.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 143: Are Kinney-Men The Worst?
I am happy for Ted and Harold. I hope Brian and Justin talk more soon.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Lexa... and here's more for you... 144 & 145. Later
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 143: Are Kinney-Men The Worst?
Teddy is going to marry the virgin Harry and have wild monkey sex on their wedding night. Rosalind got an A in her calculus class; I’m so pleased all that time she spent without her calculus book and her toilet habits didn’t hold her back. LOL And Brian is doing a happy dance with Robert. So time to bring on the Justin and Brian long distance phone sex.
Yes you were gone a long time but you always make it worth the wait. I hope RL is good to you.
Cheers
Author's Response: VIRGIN HARRY!!!! LOL!!!! Here's 144 and 145... enjvy plz... later.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 143: Are Kinney-Men The Worst?
more more more :)
glad you're back :)
Author's Response: Wow! So, glad U R still w/me. And here's more for you 144 & 145. So hope you enjvy. lOL!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called?
Thanks for writing! Your story is very addictive
Author's Response: .... story is very addictive. Thank you so much for that, Bryton4ever71... Later.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 131: Later... And You 've Better Behave!
Awwww..I love chaps where Gus is in them! This was so sweet and cute! Love the I don't wanna hang up first thing you had going on there! Great story in general First one I caught up on...Or am trying to anyway.
Author's Response: Hi Bryton4ever... I love the Gus chapters too. So glad u do. And here's 143... and sorry it's been a while since I last update... didn't even know it has been this long.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called?
Great chapter. I hope Brian and Justin reunite soon.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa, miss U and everyone else. But I've been quite busy with other things... so busy I didn't even realized I've been away this long. So here's chapter 143 for you... hope you enjvy.
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called?
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Hi, Pacagirl. You are so welcome and I apologize for being away so long... real life been quite demanding (in a good way though). Later and here's 143.
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called?
Hmmm...A promiscuous Justin...I hope that when Justin finds out Brian is able to have sex that he won't feel the need to do that. I never really did like all the tricking (I'm a romantic).
Also, I have to admit, I don't like that Justin's just ready to get married to Brian again like nothing ever happened. They've been apart a long time. And what Brian did was horrible; it was selfish (regardless of if he said he was doing it for Justin's own good), cruel, inconsiderate, and just plain bad husbanding. (I'm not exonerating Justin's mistakes, just pointing out Brian's big one). Not to mention 0 for 2 are pretty bad statistics. If it were me I would feel apprehensive about giving it another go. Isn't the definition of insanity doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results?
That being said, I want them to be together (of course). I just think they need to work on their relationship a lot before commiting to yet another marriage that will, looking at their past history, most likely end up failing as well. So I hope that you allow them that growth because I think it's important for them, or else what has really changed for them?
I'm one of those happy ending kind of girls. I hope that's what you have planned. But as much as I love a happy ending I love realism. And realistically, these two need a relationship councilor. Bad.
Still, you haven't disappointed me yet and I'm sure I'll enjoy whatever route you choose to take. Those are just all my thoughts on the matter. A nice long rant. :) I'm sorry you lost a chapter. It is so frustrating when that happens because you know however you try to duplicate it, it just won't be the same. I'll be anxiously waiting for your next update!
(Sorry for sticking so many things into that review, but I had a lot of things on my mind about all of this. Which, if you think about it, is a great compliment to you. :) ).
Author's Response: HI, IcedCupcake: I can't believe I've been away this long. It only seems like a week though, but real life has been quite demanding lately (in a good way though). I've been a lot busier than I realized but I don't want to abandon this story. So here's 143 dfor you.
You say some amazing things here. Especially about the part that Justin's ready to get married to Brian again like nothing ever happened. Good point but Justini could be seeing this in so many different ways. Also, things might be going on with Justin that he's might not even be aware of. For one, if he's so gung-ho on returning to Brian... why wait a year? It might be a lot more to that aspect than even Justin knows. We have to wait and see how things turn out. And, i agree with every concern you stated here and that's one reason I didn't rush and put the guys back together immediately (even though) someone here made a comment asking me if it was about time I put them together... and like you I too thought that wouldn't wash right now.
Thanks again for stating all these concerns here, and they are many of the same concerns I had as I continue to write. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called?
500 reviews congratulations; and I don’t want to hear how long it took you to get them. There are so many people who are obviously reading along but may not be comfortable leaving reviews, and that’s okay, but you still can’t deny the popularity of your fic. Well Done. You are a LEGEND.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks for congratulating me on the 500 reviews. And, thank you so much for what you say here. Later. Oh, by the way, I've been in touch with BigPaw via personal email and she's doing just fine but life has been so busy for her. I'm happy for her. Later.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 140: It'll Have To Be That Way
I thought you wrote Colin Farrell instead of Connor James just to make it up-to-date. I love Colin Farrell too and I don’t mind which one you want it to be. Both are HOT.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks again for pointing out that mistake for me... I meant Connor James but for some reason it came out as Colin Farrell. Whom I do know and love his acting and he's so HOT! I went back and changed it Connor James. Thanks again. and here's 143. Enjvy plz.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 142: Is There Any Particular Reason That You Called?
I love this chapter as again you had Brian showing a more caring side. Thank you even if they didn’t discuss the important issues at least they are in contact. I like how Justin is the one giving the silent treatment now. Classic. I can’t wait for the Ted and Justin showdown; it should be hilarious since I really don’t think either man can be really mean to another person. I hope you get your chapter back soon and thank you for so much entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks, I was able to reproduce that chapter 143 pretty easily because it was a simple one... here it is now. Thanks, Flossee.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 141: You Didn't Do That To Him!
I love Pearl she’s a real gem. Jensen’s parent may be awful but Jensen was an adult and must take responsibility for his actions towards others. I wonder if Justin will ever see the note if there was one. I hope Justin can move on from this knowing he wasn’t to blame in anyway. I hope the next chapter isn’t so heavy as I need a lift right now. So much angst girl; you are killing me here. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: Hi, Flossee. Wow! I didn't realized it been so long since I updated. It felt like about a week.
I glad U like Pearl. and here's chapter 143 for you. I hope U enjoy.
Later.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 140: It'll Have To Be That Way
I couldn’t imagine having such a conversation with a parent. However, Justin never made her promise she wouldn’t tell Brian, now she only has to ring the apartment building and ask to be put through to Mr Kinney. Come on Mother Taylor you can do it before they make irreversible mistakes, because if Brian finds out what Justin is doing the reason won’t matter as I’m sure he will do the same. Maybe she could get them together in six months’ time for Molly's wedding. Okay enough guessing as I have more chapters. Yay.
Cheers
Author's Response: Flosee did I say Colin Farrell? I know who he is but the actors name was Connor James, did I make the mistake and call him Colin Farrell. I know who Colin Farrell is... I love that man... big fan. Let me go fix that. Thanks for point that out to me.
Hmmm, very interest take you have here. Now I better go and fixed the Colin Farrell thing... it should be Connor James and not Farrell. LOL!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 139: The Sandwich
OMG Justin agreed to a threesome. I’m glad he didn’t bottom for them but I thought for a moment they were going to force him into it. I hate how it was suggested just because the painting was purchased for such a value he expected Justin to put out. Whoa, get out now Justin. This chapter creeped me out a little. I will read on and enjoy whatever epiphany Justin gets from it.
Cheers
Author's Response: If I recall correctly, Justin had a threesome with the actor and director in the original QAF as well, or he at least he did them both on different ocassion (but I really do think it as a threesome)... but don't quote me on that becasue I'm not 100% sure though.
have fun reading on... later, Flossee.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 138: The Force That Drives You?
Robert ran into Emmett; this is just too good. I love Emmett. Well done. Surely Brian realises he hasn’t seen any wedding photos in the newspapers or magazines where he usually gets his information on Justin or even the internet now he is able to access it. He is usually a very astute man. Okay reading on to get more of my fix.
Cheers
Author's Response: No. It's not Emmett that he ran into, but someone else that might have spend a considerable amount of time with Brian and have grown used to using one of his favorite phrases. Will see whom in due time, lol. Later, Flossee.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 137: There's Someone I Want You To Meet
I know you are going to ask me if I know who Colin Farrell is???? Yes; we have heard of him here in the land of Aus. LOL A three way for Justin well I didn’t see that one on the cards. I can’t write any more as I have to read on to find out if he does it.
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh... Land of Aus? I'm not familar with that Colin Farell... but in the original QAF series, there are two characters Colin Farrell and Brett Keller, who are a movie star and director (respectfully). They are the two I inicluded in this chapter. They were the duo working on the movie about Rage based on a comix book that Justin and Michael patterned after Brian. Oh, sorry about the confusion there.
Thanks Delores
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 136: Where is He?
OMG is Jensen dead? His parents seem like the most infuriating people. Lucky I can read on and hopefully not think about them anymore.
Cheers
Author's Response: Yah, really sad lol!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 135: Please, Brian, Please!!!
I’m really glad frustrated Justin finally got laid; even if it was in a hot, streamy dream. I love that he called Brian to get off though. I must read on ; thank you for so many updates.
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh yeah, under the circumstances that's the only way I could get these guys back in the slack again.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2013 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 135: Please, Brian, Please!!!
Thanks for the Valentines Day gift of this steamy little dream sequence. Although I really would prefer for Brian and Justin to just get on with the real thing. LOL! TAG
Author's Response: Hi, TAG: I'm in 100% agreement with you, LOL! Well, here's 140 but still more the come.
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 135: Please, Brian, Please!!!
Happy to know that you're going to update a few chapters.
I hope my dream will be as nice as the one justin made in this chapter :)
Author's Response: I'm glad u liked that one. Now here's 136 and I'm adding 137 and then some Later. Delores
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 134: No Matter Whom You Are Ever With I'll Always Be there... But Why is Michael Here!
I hope Brian and Justin get back together soon.
I like how Brian and Jusitn are talking to each other again. :)
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hi, Lexa... sorry I stayed away so long but here's chapter 135 and I will be add a few other chapters throughout the night. Later and sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 134: No Matter Whom You Are Ever With I'll Always Be there... But Why is Michael Here!
I was hoping Michael showing up in a dream meant he was dead; but alas no. When I read the title I made the ‘Assumptions” that “Night After Night” Brian was “Sleeping with the Enemy” or “A Trick of the Other Kind” maybe even a “Thirty Four Year Old Virgin”. However we all know that would be a “Lover’s Charade” as he “Cherished” Justin at one time and still seems to now. I can’t wait for the reunion where the “Two Men on a Couch” confess their love for each other. Okay I can wait as I don’t want this to end but speaking of ends; I love how you ended this chapter.
Cheers
Author's Response: Wow! Flosee, I really like what you did here. FUN, FUN, FUN. Thanks, and here's chapter 135, but I will be adding several others throught the night. Later, Delores
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 133: Please Justin, Please
Yay! Alex is back (AKA Mr No Afternoon delights roommate). Now Alex who obviously knows how to handle Jensen can hook up with him and they can use the discarded ring. Maybe that’s just my fantasy so he will leave Justin alone. Another chapter; you spoil us. Thanks
Cheers
Author's Response: Hey, hey, hey.
Karma again: '... hook up with him and... use the... ring." I had no attention of actually doing that but ironically enough the goofy thought had at least come to my mind, AND HERE YOU ARE STATING IT! That is only TOO REMARKABLE!
Also, Flossee, I attempted to answer your next review (the one wiith all my titles in it), but my response did not take, so can you repost the comment so I can answer you. Sorry about that. Sincerely, later. Delores
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 44: Stunned!
Michael is such an asshole. I hope he gets his real soon.
Author's Response: 'Michael is such an asshole... hope he gets his real soon.' You bet LOL!
Taire, thanks so much for expressing how much you like the story, and another thanks for taking the time to comment often. I appreciate that so much. Now stay with me and continue to hav fun. Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted
BTW...thanks for the FUCKING UPDATE! LMAO. That reminds me I have to get to doing some of my own. Thanks for your words. Take care D!
Author's Response: Thanks, Draccone; and much joy updating your story. Later. Delores
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 134: No Matter Whom You Are Ever With I'll Always Be there... But Why is Michael Here!
Awww... my poor fucking boys. Why do they punish each other so. Ahhh. Can't wait for Justin's trip (counting that he doesn't get involve with anyone that is not Brian) and Brian's recovery so he can take over the world (counting that he doesn't take over anyone that is not Justin). *grins* Update soon, you know I love this.
Author's Response: Justin taking his trip and Brian getting back on his feet and taking over the world... so TRUE at that, Draccone.
Thanks so much. I have to take a short break to take care of some personal matters but won't be away too long though. Some chapters are already written but needs quite a bit of work before they can be posted.
Later now, but sooner hopefully though. Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 134: No Matter Whom You Are Ever With I'll Always Be there... But Why is Michael Here!
`Michael 's here, he was just here a moment ago` `Michael' s here....`OMG what a nightmare! Thanks for the two long chapters which entertained me through my migrane aftermath. How sweet that for once Brian has some sense and talks to Justin. Might he not be going to Europe after all? Continue soon :-)
Author's Response: "OMG what a nightmare!" Thanks, Reise Lust for summing it all up as a nightmare after all. I'm sure Justin appreciates you doing that for him. He wasn't quite sure which it waa. However, you must be right because I would think any occassion that Brian and Justin start to do the WILD THING but something interrupts them and prevent it from even getting started has got to be a nightmare for both men LOL!
I have to take a small break and take care of some personal matters, but I won't be gone too long because too many readers here has expressed to me that they look forward to the updates and I don't want to disappoint anybody.
So later, but let's shot for sooner actually. Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 134: No Matter Whom You Are Ever With I'll Always Be there... But Why is Michael Here!
I love the titles of your chapters!
Justin's dreams are crazy.
Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks, Pacagirl, for the statement that you love the titles of my chapters. I use several methods to come up with the weird titles, sometimies I steal lines from the original QAF series like in the chapter, but most I write the chapter first and then take sort of a catchy line from the dialogue in the chapter and name it that, or take a old saying but twist it a bit. so, instead of saying Gone With The Wind, I might say Ran With The Wind or something, LOL.
"Justin's dreams are crazy." LOL - so are mines - but I guess readers here probably guessed that already, LOL!
Thanks a lot, Pacagirl.
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2013 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 36: I Can't Make You Love Me If You Don't
okay. when do we find out who this Harold person is?
Author's Response: I think you still have quite a few chapers to go to find out his identity but I promise it will make perfect sense when you do LOL! So readers where able to pick up on it kind of early on. but the important thing is that you continue 2 enjy. I hope you do. Later now, Delores
Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 28: People Are The Same Most Everywhere You GO
I'm so glad nothing bad happened to Brian and Justin. That was heart stopping there for a second.
Author's Response: HI Taire again! Wow! I'm so glad U got this far and still sticking with it. Like I mentioned in a earlier response I just added 133 & 134 and I hope I can continue to entertain you that you get that far. Hav Fun. Later, Delores
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?
Great story but don't you think it's time to finally reunite them?
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for commenting and just in case I haven't gotten around to it here's a belated Happy New Year fireworks display for you 2013****@!@$%^&&!!!!
And, I'm so flattered you're anxious to have the guys reunite, and this point I can't say how long that might take, but I'm trying to reunite these guys in a manner that no one here might expect, However, there's a hint already tho for readers who good at picking up hints here and there along the way, but it has to be done very carefully or the impact just won't be the same.
Also then there's my big fan FLOSSEE (she expressed she doesn't want the story to ever end or at least she wants 300 chapters LOL)!
Thanks again, Anon, for taking the time to comment IT IS SO APPRECIATED as well as inspiring. Later, Delores
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 132: I Really Wonder Why?
OMG you did it again. Justin didn’t tell Brian he wasn’t getting married. LOL You are the master of omission. NO! What is Jensen doing coming back; I will have to start calling him Lazarus as it appears he could even come back from the dead. Jensen it’s OVER. Run Justin. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: OH my gosh! There's the Karma again. You said something that is absolute Karma here. You're see ... what I mean when you read the first installment of chapters with Justin in Milan [Europe]. There's the Karma again. You'll see when you see what I mean.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 131: Later... And You 've Better Behave!
I’m glad Gus hasn’t forgotten Brian as it gives Brian something to work towards. I must read on to see if Justin is living his dream European trip.
Cheers
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad he hasn't either and to think that Brian's been away for two years and still he's Gus greatest influence. That's a reflection how powerful that love and bound had been prior to the accident. Well, Floss... where's 133 * 34, later. Deloers
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