Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2021 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 38: Try It! You Might Like It!

Im dead inside

Reviewer: RoberRamey (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2020 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 14: You Under Estimate Yourself

Mid night whispers are annoying all the people due to different ailments. All the voices of the night whispers and STUPID SPAM LINK GONE are invited for the comforting elements for the field. Tool is fixed for the next operation for the mid night whispers for the individuals.

Member locked out. ~bob

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2019 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter

Just loved it, could read it forever.  What a great story

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 8: How High Was I?

Justin is so week

Darn Ethan and Michael

Reviewer: Flo3241 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2018 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter

So I read this about four years ago but for some unknown/forgotten reason I don't think I completed it. 

Finally got around to reading it all again. I would like to say although it was a long read, it was worth it. Yes the characters frustrated me most of the time. But it was bound to happen since it's britin lol. I do wish we got a brief look into their third marriage though. But I can see why you might have excluded it.

Overall, great read!. Thanks for uploading. 


Flo3241 (aka Flo_qaf_bands). 



Reviewer: rukia12 (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2016 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: You Under Estimate Yourself

damn micheal you are such a pain in the ass

Reviewer: rukia12 (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2016 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: And You Don't Get To F--k Any Other Men

oh j'adore cette histoire et justin est tout simplement merveilleux

Reviewer: Flo_qaf_bands (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2014 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 19: While I Thought You Were Sleeping...

Love Love L O V E this fic....also I laughed out loud cause I was actually thinking of the Breaking Dawn before Justin mentioned it.

Author's Response:

Thank U so much 4 taking the time to comment.... SO GLAD U ENJOYED IT.   I enjoyed writing it.  Thanks again.  

Sincerely, Delores a/k/a Briana Writer

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2013 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter

So glad you finished it! It's great that Brian and Justin finally got their happiness. They went through so many things, but luckily they were able to start all over again. I hope this time they won't blow it!

Thank you for your gigantic work, I can't imagine what it took to write all this! Later!   

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Katja, for coming back and reading to the end.  And thank you for all your encouraging words thru the end.  And I feel very confident that they won't blow it and that is because they've been to HELL and back together (and I'm sure they don't want to go back there).

Thanks again.  Sincerely, Delores.

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

HI, T:

Several of my response didn't take because of a script error and I have to use cut and paste to answer those reviews.  Yours was one of them.

Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter


Yes! Finally they get their happiness back. I just wish they would have more than one happy chapter after over 100 of miserable ones…J

Thanks for this wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, T.  I'm so glad U enjoyed the story and thank you so much for commenting often.  I will appreciated it.  Hope U check out so more of my story and enjoy them.  I certianly enjoyed hearing from you often.  Sinc. Delores

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2013 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

Hi, Lexa: I answered you earlier but a script error caused the response not to take so I now have to do a cut and paste and answer you this way:

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter


Great ending!

Author's Response:   Thank you so much, Lexa.  I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much, and thanks so much for taking the time and courtesy to comment so often thru out the story.  I really cherish that.  Thank you again, Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2013 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter

This makes me kind of sad, and kind of happy. Sad that it´s over for ME, happy that there is a new life together for THEM. What a journey you took us on, ups and downs, rights and lefts, tears and laughter, love and hate. THANKS for doing all this for us with this wonderful story! 

Author's Response:

Reiselust:  Thank you so much that is so.  That is so flaterring.  I hope you join me on the next story The Truth About Gus.  It's the last new one I'm posting and then I'm going to concentrate on finishing up all those uncomplete stories I have at the site.  Later, and thanks again.  Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2013 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 196: Final Chapter

That was sweet, and so romantic...

I just wish you had more romantic moments when they were married in the fic.

Because I'm all about the love...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathleen:  Thanks so much for letting me know that you stayed to the end and enjyed the story.  Now I'm going to post one more new story here which should only take me about three days of posting to get up because it is already finished.  and after that I'd just spend time updating what I have uncomplete here.  later Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 195: A Streetcar Named Desire: JUSTINNNNNNN

What!!!! That's not a very romantic reply.  Shouldn't there be some sultry stair descending, ending in a lingering kiss??????  Preferable with Brian being almost shirtless. LOL


Author's Response:

"What!!!  That's not a very romantic reply."  Maybe not; but any reply from the right somebody can be ______________  I'll let you finish that sentence with your own words, LOL!

Reviewer: K (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 195: A Streetcar Named Desire: JUSTINNNNNNN



It can't be done... there has to be more than one chapter left... Please add to it ... another child... another wedding... and more as long as there is happiness 

Author's Response:

K!  I'm so flattered but even I can't take but one more chapter of this story.  BUT THAT IS SO FLATTERING.   However, I got another story coming right up after I post the last chapter of this one.  However, that's already written in its entirety, so it's about 50 chapters.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 194: See Ya, And Be Happy

I don't think i recall Michael talking about Ben's offer.

At any rate, I hope Ben will make an appearance as this tale is about to wrap up. We haven't heard from him in so long.

Author's Response:

I think we can reasonably assume that Michael might have talked to Brian about Ben while the four men ate dinner, because the story did jump over to New York with Robert and Dan, and it's very unlikely that the four men ate dinner in complete silence.  Also, Brian and Michael walked a long way to get to the theatre on Liberty, so it's also reasonable to assume they talked then.  Thanks for making that point, others might have wondered about it to. 

And here's the last chapter I hope you enjoy, and I'm loading another story but it's not as long and as drawn out as this one... and it's about 50 chapers in total.  Thanks so much for hanging in until the very end of this long story.  I'm just loved you and everyone else who did.  Thanks again. 


Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2013 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 183: It Was All For Nothing

Finally! THE TALK! Oh what did you let us suffer through ups and downs..... :).

Though the result might not be what we expected, IF at all something is to expect in your stories ( I do mean it in a positive way!!) happy to have them om a talking base again. Now off to the next chapters :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that comment, Reiselust, I smiled all the entire time while I read it and I hope you do enjoy the ending.  Once I finally answr all these reviews and load it.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2013 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 192: I Keep Forgetting

Please just put this story to bed.   It's just become way too absurd now and OOC!

Author's Response:

Anonymous, you have really made my day!  Put this story to bed.... Well, for a story that is 196 chapters in total, thank you for saying that at chapter 192.   Chapter 196 is going up any moment now.  Thanks you so much for hanging in there with me!  I'm absolutely THRILLEDDDDD!

Reviewer: K (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2013 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 192: I Keep Forgetting

Please Please Please post more chapters as soon as possible... I am addicted to this story and want more and more the more I read... I don't ever want this story to end but I really do want to see Brian and Justin back together and without all the fucked up drama their supposed other husbands keep bringing them


Author's Response:

K!  Thanks You!  Finally anoher person that is not chopping my head of for the story dragging on too long.  However, it is a long, long long story, and I had never imagine I'll ever write a story this long.  When I originally wrote this I thought it would be forty chapters top!  What a laff that turned out to be, lol!

Oh, I'm so sorry to say after I answer these few reviews, I'm uploading the last chapter.  However, I'll posting a new story afterwards.  That's already finished and I think its about 50 chapers long.  Later.  I have to rush and finish answering he reviews so I can finally get that last chapter on.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 191: He Lied To Me In The Worst Possible Way

Why can't these men get a break?  Surely if Justin was yelling, Brian would have heard more than the last sentence.  Positive side: more and more people are finding out Justin isn't married. 


Author's Response:

Well actually the last sentence is the only thing that Justin yelled or at least yelled the loudest, and Brian was upstairs and tthen in the kitchen with the boys.  Also it's a twenty room mansion, so plenty of space to put wide gaps between people and hearing range.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 190: Someone's At Your Door

Yay; Brian and Justin slept together.

Author's Response:

... And didn't even know it, lol!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 187: I Didn't Want My Jewelry Soaking In Palmolive

Really Justin; still with the ring crap.


Author's Response:

Well, actually he should have taken it off and left it soaking in the Palmolive, lol1

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 186: Strictly Business

Well it looks like Michael's redeeming qualities will allow him to have his happy ending with Ben.  Matchmaker Emmett, I'm sure it's not going to be that easy. I will read on to see what fun ensues.  LOL 


Author's Response:

Yeah, the wedding planner was a riot, LOL!  Thank GOD for him though.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 185: A Week Later

These men are frustrating.  Brian can tell Dan outright not to be jealous as Shemar (Robert) was his old physical therapist, but B/J just can’t be honest with each other.  Deceit is being dishonest (lying) which is never a good thing.  I was hoping Michael would go back to Brian’s office and spill the beans. I'm so pleased to have lots of chapters.



Author's Response:

Brian can tell his fake husband [Dan] anything because the emotion just isn't there to make Brian CRAZY like his real husband [Justin] can.  And you welcome, but you can thank my therapist for all the chapers at once, and you can curse her for me taking so long to respond to your reviews.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 183: It Was All For Nothing

Justin and Brian may have talked about important stuff, however, they never really get to the one issue that would make them both happy.   My medication is kicking in so I will dwell on the positive and just say, I’m so pleased you wrapped up the Vance and Stockwell story line.  Yay; they are gone and Brian can watch their reaction over and over again.  LOL


Author's Response:

So true... they can't seem to get down to the nitty-gritty, all on the accunt of Justin doesn't want anyone to know he failed at marriage a third time, and Brian is trying too hard not to step on Justin's shoes.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 182: I Owe Him One

OMG that was quick.  B/J have already run into each other.  Please if they have sex; not on the cold restroom floor and have them use a condom; as I want them safe.   LOL 


Author's Response:

I laffing so hard no... I have a headache and throat ache.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 181: Next Week

Yes that's more like it.  Justin is a least going back to the Pitts and hopefully he sees Brian.  However, if they do that dance thing where they don't talk to each other I will have no choice, but to pull out the few strands of hair on my head that have started to grow back. 

Signed frustrated and still no cheers

Author's Response:

Hey... let the boys talk, they got to grow up at some point, lol!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 179: Good Old Saint Joanie

Well that was a very religious orientated chapter.  I know you said you were wrapping this fic up so let's hope that's the end of Joan, Claire and the nephews.


Author's Response:

"...end of Joan, Claire, and the nephews."  You get me every time.  I can not shred even one tear after reading one of your reviews.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 177: Are You Still So Untrusting?

I just finished reading a fic where everyone grew up except Brian and he is still tricking into his 40's; then I see your update and Brian has done something massively stupid and married Dan.  My eyes are bleeding Delores, so you need to fix my shocking Brian morning.  LOL  Maybe the cannonball from the Treasure Island pirate ship can go astray and hit Dan; leaving Brian a widow and with all Dan's worldly goods (Debt).  LOL   Dan is holding on to Brian, Justin is holding on to Clay, Uri is holding on to life and I'm holding on to your every word, so please update even if there are a few mistakes, as this Brian needs redemption.   Pretty Please.


Author's Response:

Hey, Hey, Flosseeeeee!!!   Forgive me for being slow to respond lately, but my therapist has limited my daily use of computers.  I mean that literally.  She says I've become compulsive and need to cut back tremendously.  That's why I rushed and put so many chapters up at once and wasn't able to do that good of an editing job either.  So, now I rushing to answer all these reviews so, I can hurry up and put up the last chapter before my therapist catches me, LOL.  So, moving along to your next comment.  later.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 177: Are You Still So Untrusting?

Poor Brian. I am looking forward to what happens next. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more. 

Author's Response:

Lexa, I'm about to load the last chapter now, but I want to take this time to thank you and all the other loyal fans who took time to comment on this long, long, long story throughout.  Hope you enjvy the last chapter and that the ending was worth the long rollercoaster ride.  Thanks again, later.  rushing to answers all this reviews and post that last chap.  Delores

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 177: Are You Still So Untrusting?

Bad idea! Very bad idea. Run Brian! Call the lawyers right now! Go back to Justin! 

Author's Response:

I know what you mean, Debv3.  Justin added 11 chapters letter now.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

don´t worry. I know my own things get messed up often, so all is fine :)! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Reiselust... I knew you would be patient with me, LOL!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2013 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 173: WTF!

Oh my God! I was literally hunched over the comp with this one. I'm pretty sure I know what's going on tho, but you sure know how to draw something out.

Author's Response:

Thanks for still hanging in here with me, and I hope to wrap this story up by next Wednesday.  Down loading as many chapters as I can today but I only got about 3 and half hours though.  Later, rushing along.  Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 176: Take a Cue from Ethan and Brian

WTF Justin get out of your loveless marriage and go after the man of your dreams.  He's in Vegas with a slimeball, so you better hurry.  LOL  Speaking of hurrying, please hurry back.  Thank you so much for all the entertainment Delores; I almost forgot to mention I loved the name choice, Dolores.  LOL 


Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee, I back to update today.  Rushing along, Delores.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 172: Heading Back Home

Yay, Brian is keeping Britin.  He's still holding on to something he shared with Justin, even if he is doing it subconsciously.  OMG Brian called his ranch Ms. Britin.  LOL


Author's Response:

Oh, yeah.  He probably wouldn't let her go in a million years.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 171: Michael Is Not The Threat

Clay doesn't love Justin; Yay.  Now they can divorce.   Is Uri going to become the new Lazarus and rise from the dead?  I shall read on and find out.


Author's Response:

Flosee, as always you're killing me.  Rushing long now.  Later Delores

Reviewer: boris (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2013 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 176: Take a Cue from Ethan and Brian

The new about Uri is a relief. I thought Clay was going to turn out to be some sort of husband murderer.

But Justin had no right to say what he did about Ethan's man. It was a crummy thing to do. And can't be excused just because it was Justin.

Author's Response:

Hi, Boris:

I think this is the first time you're commenting, and I get SO EXCITED when someone comments for the first time.  Thanks for taking the time to let me know that you are enjoying he story.  And I know what you mean about what Justin said to Ethan (but poor Justin was drunk out of his skull and the liquor was talking for him, as well as so distraughted - poor guy couldn't think straight); and I guess he felt every man he ever loved hurt him and just maybe he ought to hurt one of them.  You're right though... no excuse... but we all do unexcusable things for time to time (i guess).

Thanks again, Boris.  I can't express enough how excited I am to hear from you, and stay with me because I hope to wrap this story up by mid-week (next week).  Stay w/me and continue to hav fun!   Later Delores.

Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2013 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 176: Take a Cue from Ethan and Brian

Wow I am really confused. First Clay who had some darkness around him (like adding some extra to Grandma Taylor's drink) is the poster child of a loving man.

Justin is hardly thinking about Brian – will he go back only because he can’t have Clay? Is Brian now the default? Oh no!!

And Brian, is it really that easy for him to move on?  I know he loves Justin but he seems happy, then again he is becoming like old Brian in the show, sex and parties so maybe this is his pain management. Is he going to fight for Gus against Mel?

Everybody's life is getting better except for Brian and Justin. I really want Brian happy; those three years were just too much!

I missed you – welcome back!

Author's Response:

Hi, T.:  Brian the default... I very much doubt that!!!! 

And, I miss you too and I'm definitley back.  In fact, I hope to wrap this story up by this Wednesday.  Also, like I told others in the reviews, I have to rush to answer the reviews because I have limit time to devote to my computer today.  So rushing along.   Later Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 176: Take a Cue from Ethan and Brian

Okay answer me this, when Justin met Clay is was totally gun-ho for getting back with Brian. Remember I'll see you in one year, and he was determined to make it work this time...

It was evil, deceitful Clay that manipulated him into falling for him, marrying him...

So now Brian's the bad guy??? We know he really loves Brian, so for fucks sake have him get some balls and go after his man. After all Brian already let him know he still loves him, came to Europe to get him...

I really don't understand Justin...

Why in the world would he want to stay with Clay??? After everything he's done???

I really am glad to see you updated this story, but please put me out of my misery and get these two back together again...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kathleen.  Wonderful points, and I rushing to updown load the answers.  So, forgive me for rushing but I only have a few hours on the computer today and I answered all these reviews before but for some reason my responses didn't take so this is the second attempt.  I hope it goes through this time.  Later, rush to answer the rest of the reviews and then uploading some more chapters.  Later Delores

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 176: Take a Cue from Ethan and Brian

Well it looks like Justin will be sufficiently screwed up for a while.  What happens now?  They both just start fucking around until they start up that dysfunctional relationship they had in the show?  Is there any chance for them to be happily married?  Or even just...happy?

Author's Response:

I surely hope the end up happily ever after with each other, and I try my best to end this story and post the ending by Wednesday of next week (July 31).   Forgve my rushing.  It's almost 2 pm where I am and I only have about 3 and half hours to spend on the computer to day, so I have to rush away.  Also, I answered these reviews already but for some reason my responses didn't take.  So, this is actually the second time I answering about 15 reviews and I thought I was just gonig to do some posting today.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 176: Take a Cue from Ethan and Brian

awwwwww Justin, you' re sooooooo not unlovable!!!!! 

thanks for the long update!!!

Author's Response:

Poor Justin.  He's so drunk and depressed. Rushing along and sorry about that but t I have to get those updates loaded.  Later Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 175: Blasts From The Past

finally some storyarcs come together :-)!! Love how the story continues!!

Please check at the part where Brian meets his exs you sometimes put Clay instead of Cary. 

Author's Response:

Hi, thank you so much for point out to me that I accidently referred to Clay as Cary, I think I fixed all occurences, but if you find some more let me know.  I really appreciate that alot.  Thank you, Reiselust.  

However, something's weird because I viisted here earlier this week and answered all these comments but now I come back today and see none of my response were posted for some reason.  So, please don't think I've been ignoring everyone all this time.  I haven't I just went away thinking I had answered all the comments.

I'm posting today and I hope that the response don't get lost again.

Later Delores. 

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 175: Blasts From The Past

Dan is Shemars dream man?!  Uri is alive? Poor Justin.  Hope Brian is willing to wait while Justin rebuilds his life..again.


Author's Response:

Hi, Debv3, I'm glad you caught the most recent updates.  That's alll for today... be back really soon though.  Later.  Sincerely Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 170: You Got That Glow

YAY SHE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!should think of your story even more often then I do already, then it will pop up eventually :-) <3

Author's Response:

Yay... she's still with me!!!!!!!!  Thanks so much Reiselust.... catch you later.l   Will update again a few days from now.  Later   until then.   Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 169: Screw Now! Weigh the Consequences Later!

Hello is anyone home? I'm waiting patiently for a new chapter, are you still writing this story?

Missing you ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, I'm finally bckk home!   So sorry Ii had to run off like that and become missing in action, but had some major R/L to tend to.  But I'm back and I will be updatinig the week of 7/15... and lots of chapters added, as well as to I hope to finiish this story by the month's end.  See you next week, 7wilds...

Thanks so much for sticking with me.   Next week... now.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2013 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 168: Side By Side

UH OH! Talk about being caught on the pot!! LOL I love seeing you're updates!

Author's Response:

Hi, Bryton4Ever71.  So glad to return today to see some comments.  I haven't forgotten you guys, I just had some major R/L issues to address, and I resolved it all.  So, I'll update gain real soon.  Not this week for the July 15.  See you guys then and I will be adding lots of chapters in fact.  I hope to finish this story before the month is out.

Thanks so much for beinig such a loyal fan ofo this story.  See you next week.  PROMISE.


Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 169: Screw Now! Weigh the Consequences Later!

Wow, the meeting betwen Brian and Justin did not end well at all. 

I am keeping my fingers crossed that you make things better between Brian and Justin soon. :(

Great chapter, looking forward for more. 

Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa... keep those fingers crossed, babe.  LOL!

Reviewer: Debv3 (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2013 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 169: Screw Now! Weigh the Consequences Later!

Still don't like Clay. I wish Justin would give Brian a chance  to explain. 

Author's Response:

Don't like Clay... hmmmm....  Very interesting... because he's so PERFECT???? LOL!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 168: Side By Side

Where is Delores?????  The writing in this chapter seems so different.  Poor Justin his weak bladder has returned; at least he doesn't have to wait to get clean pants this time.  I like this update as it reminded me of the lesbians anniversary party when they ended up at the same toilet; aah good memories.  LOL




Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 169: Screw Now! Weigh the Consequences Later!

Wow! You really do think up some crazy scenarios. By any chance are you a big fan of Tele Novelas? This plot seems like its straight out of one of those. I'm loving it! TAG

Author's Response:

Hi, Tag:  I'm almost embarassed to say but when I saw your question, I actually had to go to Wikipedia, look up the term Tele Novelas, and get the low down on it.  I have to admit I have recently watched a few Korean Dramas, and based on what I read at Wiki, I suppose they fit the category of Tele Novelas.   Thank you teaching me that term... and constantly coming back to my I guess I can say no  Tele Novela.  



Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2013 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 168: Side By Side

"Hi Justin" indeed… Yes, finally!!! Probably Brian's best day in 2 years. I really hope Justin will remember what Brian had to cope with and will cut him some slack, even though he made terrible choices. Come on, what happens next?

Author's Response:

Hi, T... here's what happens next... here's chapt 169 for you and I hope U continued 2 enjvy.  Later.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 168: Side By Side

Hehehe, what a crazy reunion scene! TAG

Author's Response:

Oh, yeah.... it ain't over yet though. Next chapter soon to come!  THanks, Tag.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!

I forgot; congratulations over 600 reviews. You’re a legend.


Author's Response:

Thanks, Flossee, lol!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!

Yay, both men have bladders that are in unison, now I can’t wait for Clay to walk in on them or did they use different bathrooms and Brian walks out without even seeing Justin. Oh you wouldn’t do that to us would you? LOL. Michael did something good for a change, hooray. Thanks for the quick up. Did you meet Prince Harry when he was in New Jersey?


Author's Response:

"Oh, you wouldn't do that to us would you?"  Hell no, I wouldn't dare, and with that said, here's the next chap #168... so hope U enjvy.  Later and cheers to U 2.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!

I bet seeing Brian in his bathroom will scare the 'piss' out of Justin! Hehehe! TAG

Author's Response:

"I bet seeing Brian in his bathroom will scare the 'piss' out of Justin!"   If you meant that literally - YOU ARE SO RIGHT, LOL!  Now here's chapter 168... see 4 yourself, lol!

Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!

I am so glad Brian and Gus finally reunited!! I wish Gus wouldn't love Clay as much as Brian. The first happy moment Brian got in years and still…

So, will Brian be brave enough to face Justin - I really hope so...

Author's Response:

Hi, T... so glad 2 C U R still w/me.    "I wish Gus wouldn't love Clay as much as Brian."   Hmm, I'm not so sure about that because Gus did suggest that Clay should give Justin back to Brian.  I think that's an indication that regardless that he's quite fond of Clay, his father is still his greatest preference.

"So, will Brian be brave enough to face Justin..."  Well, here's chapter 168... so let's see.  hope U enjvy, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 167: I Gotta Piss!

Please....please...please....pleaseeeeeee....Ineed more and I cant wait. Please.

Author's Response:

Hi there, Draccone.  Here's the next chap for you, #168.  i hope U enjvy.  LOL, Delores

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!

You leave us hanging like this... You're evil... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Ohhhh,   hears anogher hanger for you... SORRY, sorry, sorrie, sorrieeee,   later though, Delores, and I promise to rush back asap with the next chapter.

Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2013 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!

Nooo It's like you just started a few sentences and didn't finish them…like 3 different cliff hangers!

Author's Response:

Hi, T, so glad 2 C U R still with me.... and here's another cliff hanger for you, lol!  Later - Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!

I’m so pleased Justin is happy; calling Clay daring and Clay calling him love. Ahh... Is the word surgeon a code; is Clay really a hitman who does surgery on the side? Maybe Clay works for the CIA and is also a surgeon, then Justin could love him even more. LOL I can’t wait to find out what Michael has discovered. Hurry back if your study allows.


Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee.  Here's another chapter for you... chapter 167.... hope you enjvy.  Later, Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 166: To Berlin, It Is!

Great chapter, looking forward for more. 

Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa:  And thank you, and here's more for you,  hope U continue to enjvy  --- Delores

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!

Hmmm...For some reason it irks me that Brian is tricking.  Not majorly, just...If he's still in love with Justin, why do it?  Of course, I just love monogomous B/J.  It does make sense, I mean, how long does Brian love Justin in the show and tricks when they're actually together?  So it's something he would do...But...eh...I just want them to get back together already and stop sleeping with other people!  How long do I have to keep waiting?  T.T


Still doing a great job though, :).  I always look forward to your next update.

Author's Response:

Hmm, hmmm.... Brian is heading to Germany - Justin's neck of the woods, Anything can happen, lol  Thanks IcedCupcake

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 139: The Sandwich

Well this chapter certainly goes against canon. Because in the show Justin definity did bottom for Conner.

Author's Response:

Hi, so sorry, I don't know I didn't see you comment until now.  Hi, I get very excited when someone new responds.  So, happy you joined us and will stay with the story.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!

So b1 + m2 = save Justin’s $$$ from Clay. Sorry did you say you wanted more maths or less? LOL I’m so glad you didn’t go mad as I’m still hoping we will get a Justin chapter really soon.


Author's Response:

Hi,  glad U R still with me.  The next chapters aren't too far away.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!

I dont know where to begin so I am not going to start. I am just PATIENTLY waiting for us to get out of this crazy universe and back into the one where Brian and Justin fit together. AHH!! BTW So totally going insane here.

Author's Response:

Hey!  I know what you mean but keep in mind Brian is on his way to Germany now.  up-oh.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!

Great chapter. I love this story but when will Brian and Justin see other and make things right again between them? Just curious.

Looking forward for more.


Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa:  Brian is finally on his feet again and it seems he's following Jusitn around the globe now.  Some thing's about to give.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!

Brian finally seems to come to his senses.

Does he soon deserve to see Justin again pwetry pwease with puppy dog eyes???



Author's Response:

I agree 100%, and it seems since Brian got back on his feet, he hasn't  be doing much but following Justin around the globe (first Paris... now he's off to Germany).  Hmmm, looks like that just might be leading up to something....anything is possible at thsi point, lol.

Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2013 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 165: Sorry is Bullshit!

O.K really hate Melanie, more than in any other story...
I would really like to know more about Clay, and about how things are with Justin and Gus. Does Gus really doesn't think about his dad?
How horrible for Brian that he only has the same person who made his life so sad.
Come on, bring the next chapters I can't wait!

Author's Response:

H, T.... so glad U R still with me, and it won't be long before Ipost additional chapters.  later

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

Wow, I can't believe that Brian is asking Michael for help... Hopefully he'll ask him to call Gus, or even better yet Justin for him... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi, Kath... here's some answers to those questions for you.  Truly hope U continue 2 enjvy, lol!

Reviewer: Ink (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2013 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

Oh and anther thing it's  bitch ass move  on Mel part for what she said to brian and michael is a bigger bitch for saying that to Brian to where is grandma when you need the old gal or Jen  or Ted or Em or Larry curly or moe .  Justin come back robert go there . 

Author's Response:

Robert go there!   I don't think our man Rob will becoming to Paris any time soon, but he's definitely still pertinent to the story, giving him a love interest is not just by accident, it actually crucial to how the story turns out in the end.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

oh this Michael.

Wonder what you have up your sleeve for us in the next chapter.

Anxiously awaiting the update :-)

Author's Response:

Hi, Reiselust, dont' you worry, with school done for the summer I won't be taking so long to up date like I have been.  Later.

Reviewer: Ink (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

If brian get back with Michael for any  reason even having a shit than he is a big fool as Justin is for marrying that asshole of a doctor.They both as in BJ need to get their head out of their ass and grow a brain.

Author's Response:

Hi, Ink, you are so right, LOL!  And don't worry Brian has no intention whatsoever of getting back with Michael. I think that was well established when Brian said he don't think he'd would ever be able to forgive him and he said it might be a POSSIBLY that he can earn that forgiveness but he couldnt' be even certain of that either.   Brian wants his JUSTIN back, and his son back - NOT MICHAEL.  In fact, he hates that fact that he even care that Michael might hurt himself.  He prefers not to even care at all about Michael, but he's just being classic Brian, that is his head and brain says one thing when his hearts says another.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

Oh no you don’t, they aren’t getting back together; lol , unless you say they are. *Sigh* I have my bucket ready, but I’m still not looking forward to Michael and Brian being together again. Yuckity, yuckity, yuck. I need a Justin chapter please, to get the image of Michael and Brian out of my head. I’m glad your back, I hope classes haven’t been to exhausting for you.


Author's Response:

HELL NO!  They aren't getting back together at least not as LOVERS again.  Classes were very exhausting but I think I'm bouncing back now from the experience.  I'm not sure if I mentioned it here before, but I suspect that my school is disguising a MATHEMETICIAN'S degree as a Bussiness one.   I was required to take Algebra, Calculus, and Statistics, and when I took all those classes I thought that was the end of that.  However, last semester I took a classes called Business Research Methods and one called Poduction Operations Management, and with titles like those, what would you think they detailed!  huh, huh... but believe it or not they are all about MATh, MATH, MATh, and then some math.   Business Research Methods is just another statistics class, Prod Operations started out witih Algebra and Geometry, and then filtered into Calculus and ended with Trignometry.  I thought I would go MAD, lol! 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 163: Nobody Here Misses You!

Why does Mel want Michael and Brian back together? If that is going to happen then you have to give some warning so I can have a bucket ready to throw up in. LOL Two chapters thank you so much.


Author's Response:

I'll give you guys a break right off the bat!  There is DEFINITELY NO Michael and Brian reunion - sexually that is!  If they become anything again, it They definitely WON'T be lovers!   NO EFFING WAY, LOL!   Hooray for that!

Mel said what she said because she HATES both Michael and Brian, and therefore in her head they would make the perfect couple- BUT NO WAY IS THAT GOING TO HAPPEN! 


Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

Great chapter. I hope Brian and Justin find a way back to each other.

Looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Hi, I'm so glad U are back, and yes eventually they will, and I'm hoping I can do it in about ten more chapters.   I really want to wrap up this story so I can concentrate on finishing up all the undone stuff I have here.

Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2013 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 164: I'm Going Nowhere

Are you ever going to finish this? It was actually an okay story the first 60 chapters or so. I was rooting for Brian and Justin to be together. But it went on and on and on that it's just ridiculous how long and how annoying the story progressed. They get back together. They don't get back together. Decide already. It seriously getting preposterous.

Author's Response:

thanks for commenting, Ann, but no.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

so waiting for the update. Maybe a long one for my long flight to L.A.! there I will have a coffee with them, :) 

Write much and soooooon pwettypwease :) 

Author's Response:

Here's the update for you.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

Okay I know the last comment I made I was frustrated but... I'm addicted to this story and I can't wait for another chapter...

God please just tell me Justin has finally come to his senses and has left that dreaded doctor and is coming home to Brian... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Addicted!  Thank you for that!  This semester's finals are done, so I should be updating very soon - second or third week in May.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

Oh Hell's Bells!! What a cliffhanger! Hope you will update soon! Best soap on the site!

Author's Response:

Hi, Bryton... didn't mean to be away so long but had finals, and now that that's out of the way I will be updating again soon.  Later.  I'll try not to have you dangling over a cliff too long, LOL!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

I hope he scares the shit out ofMel. She has no business taking Gus and Linds phones! What a nasty bitch.  I hope Brian puts her in her place and Deb and Carlmhear every word Mel says to Brian. 

Author's Response:

OMG!  I got readers hating Mel, lol!  I'm a Devil, huh?  Finals are over now so I should be updating in the second or third week of May.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

Uh oh! 

Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa:  Really miss U, and now that finals are done, I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: T (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2013 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

Will Brian ever get a break? even just one tiny moment of joy?

What about Justin? I wonder about his honeymoon and about what is lurking under the surface there…

I've missed you – welcome back!


Author's Response:

Hi, T:   I've missed U 2; and now that college is done for this semester, I might have more time on my hands to update; however, I might seek an internship opportunity, so that might slow me down as well.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

uhoh, big bad Melanie-wolfe ....

Granny is still having aftereffects of the poisoning? Don t you dare do anything to her! :-)

Germany' good choice! Will they come to Cologne? We could have a coffee together :-).


Author's Response:

Hi, Reiselust.... Come to Cologne... have coffee together... KILLER, LOL!  Laffing my gust out!  Sorry for being away so long but had semester finals.  Hope to update a week from now.... second week in May.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2013 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

Busted! TAG

Author's Response:

Oh yeah!  Will update again as soon as I can.  I haven't abandoned the story... just been busy with course work - FINALS.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 162: I'll Bring Him To You

One is the loneliest number; only one chapter. I feel cheated. LOL Thank you for the update; it’s very sad but the ending was fun. Mel and Brian, she will whip his ass. Hurry back if you can.


Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee... and everyone!  I didn't mean to stay away so long but I had FINALS at school, and this semester was really tough.   School is done for now, so maybe in a week or so I'll be able to update again.  Later.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2013 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

Wow, I love your reasons explaining why Justin would marry Clay! I understood it before, but now I'm even more thrilled that he is obviously in love with that man. Please don't get me wrong, I'm a big B/J supporter, but what Brian did really sucks, so he deserves to suffer for everything he put Justin through. Yes, he was in a rather difficult condition, but no matter what he thinks - he didn't shut Justin out in order to do what's best for him, he did it just for himself, for his own sake. It was a terrible thing to do, and now I have no idea how Justin will come to really forgive him. Loved the talk between Brian and Grandma. Maybe I'm a freak, but I hope to read more about tormented with jealousy/hurt/guilt Brian - can't help myself, I love those things, and he really infuriated me with his foolish behaviour.

By the way, I like Clay a lot - I'll be sad if he turns out to be a jerk, but maybe it'll be even better, because I believe in Brian and Justin, so if Clay really feels something for the blond, he'll have his heart broken.

Thank you for those fantastic updates, I can't wait for more now!

Author's Response:

Hi, Katja:  I really missed you.  So, glad 2 hear from U.   Thank you so much for so TOTALLY getting these characters and why they act the way that they do.  And, here's more for you now chapter 162.  I hated staying away so long but Final exams kept me really busy.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2013 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

Thanks for your extremely long response to my other comment.   I wonder because of the time taken to answer it if you're trying to convince me or you who Justin belongs with.  Just don't expect me to accept it if you put him and Brian back together now.   Because then who would be unrealistic?  We'll just have to agree to disagree.    Thank you for the response,  but I'll just move onto another story. 









Author's Response:

What?  You wonder if I'm trying to convince you or myself who belongs with Justin?  My gosh!  We all know that JUSTIN BELONGS WITH BRIAN!!!  So, if you think my response to you was trying to convince you that he belongs with someone else, you totally did not get my point.   So, you are right you should move on because you totally don't get it.  What I was trying to convince you of was your statement that said the Justin mariried someone after only knowing him for a month was not credible.  I said nothing about Justin absolutely belongs with Clay.  I just told you why he married him.  Bye.

Thanks again for commenting.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2013 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

Brian now not only needs to reunite with Justin for himself and their love, but he also needs to save him. I realize that Clay is not only dishonest, but actually dangerous, worse than Jensen. There is no doll moment in this story, I really enjoy all the twists and turns – just great!!


Author's Response:

Hi, T:  So glad U R back.   'No dull moment in the story."  Thank you so much for that.  I'll try to update again as soon as fleaible.  Later, sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

Well Brian’s talk with Grandma was certainly better than the two Justin had. The first one Justin had with Grandma I thought I was going to have to buy him a tampon and the second one Grandma admitted to watching his sex tape. Ewwww

I’m so pleased you confirmed something I was pondering. The general public still thinks Justin has billions. Oh I can’t wait to see how that goes down with Clay when he kills off Justin and gets nothing. Okay, no killing off Justin as he’s my favourite.

You are the queen of turmoil with these men. I hope RL and good health allows for another fine update soon.


Author's Response:

"Well Brian's talk with Grandma was certainly better than the two Justin had."  You never fail me, this made me roar with laffer, lol!   "Clay killing off Justin."  HA, ha, ha,... got me in stitches.  And, I'll try to update again as soon as I can. 

Thanks, Flossee and cheers 2 U 2.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

So Justin did marry Clay. :( What about Brian? I am hoping that Justin would realize the mistake he had made by marrying Clay and return back to Brian. I am hoping Brian and Justin will work things out soon.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lexa.... thanks so much for constantly coming back and leaving such great comments.   I like the bunch of wonderful comments you made here.  Let's see what can be done about that.  Later.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

This is a very entertaining story.  But Justin being engaged and then wed to a man he only knew for a month defies credulity.  I just can't see that as realistic.  You 're the author,  but I say either put B and J together or resolve it some other way.   But frankly it's just starting to drag on and on.  Sorry but that's my honest opinion. 

Author's Response:

Hi, there.

First of all, thanks for taking the time to comment, and saying you find the story entertaining.  I very much appreciate that.  Two, please don’t apologize because you are definitely entitled to your opinion. 

However, your comments throw me into a web of wonderment.

You say the relationship between Justin and Clay defies credibility and is unrealistic because Justin married Clay after only knowing him for a month.  Please don’t take this out of content but your very statement defies credibility because you don’t seem to question any of the other relationships in the story (especially how the union of Justin and Brian came about - by the same token you state here it might be the most incredulous relationship in the story, but you haven't questioned that.... why not?).  

For instance:  In this story Justin actually falls in love with Brian before he even meets him.  Recall, he sees Brian’s picture on the cover of a business magazine, and tells Daphne that he has fallen madly in love with him, and vows that he’s traveling from Seattle to Pittsburgh, and track him down and marry him.  So how credible and realistic is that… why haven’t you questioned it?

Also, Robert falls in love with a man he sees only once in the subway station; Chris and Ethan meet and fall instantly in love, Ted and Harold fall in love at first sight.  So how credible or realistic are any of those relationships, and why didn’t you question those relationships?

So, since you don't seem to have issues with the credibility of any of the other relationships, why is the union of Justin and Clay so farfetched to you?  It seems to me that Justin and Clay have more of a basis for falling in love than any other couples in the story?  To get a better sense of my meaning, please consider all of the following (13 reasons or more for Justin and Clay to fall in love):

  1. Clay saved Justin son J.C.’s life
  2. Clay appears to be very good to and for Justin, and a big fan of his art
  3. They have a lot in common (dancing, singing, love of art, laughing at the same things, and much more)
  4. Clay was committed to Uri for 20 years, therefore, capable of strong attachment and commitment.  That’s something that Justin highly desires in a partner.
  5. Clay’s a surgeon, so he has a prestigious job and high overall respectability, and presumably rich
  6. Clay’s handsome, a great lover, a great listener, and seems to always say exactly what Justin either wants to or need to hear
  7. Clay seems to really get Justin; especially in terms of his art.  Recall the day they first met how easily he was able to decipher Justin’s abstract pieces when others couldn’t.  Also, unlike most people, Clay didn’t assume that it was Justin who had left Brian, and he was able to figure out (without Justin telling him) what all artist’s promiscuity was all about.
  8. Justin trusts Clay. That’s clearly indicated by the fact that he didn’t ask a lawyer to draw up a prenup for Clay to sign.
  9. Clay is good with both of Justin’s sons J.C. and Gus  [That’s a big plus!  All parents want a partner that their children adores and vice versa]
  10. Justin gets some things from Clay he didn’t get from his other boy friends.  Unlike Ethan, Clay appears to be faithful; unlike Jensen, Clay doesn’t appear to be either a bigot, snob, or needy; and unlike Brian, Clay appears quite opened about his feelings, easygoing, and uncomplicated
  11. Ethan, Jensen, and Brian, has caused Justin tremendous pain.  Therefore, someone like Clay is refreshing to him, as well as a relief to him.  Recall when he told Robert that he was choosing Jensen over Brian because Brian’s complicated but Jensen is not.  A similar thing is probably occurring now when it comes to choosing Clay over Brian.  Clay is uncomplicated whereas Brian is terribly complicated.  Keep in mind that Justin is not aware that Brian has completely healed, and not sure what his reaction is going to be when he finds out.
  12. Also, all Justin’s friends like Clay, but that wasn’t the case with Brian though.  Melanie despises Brian.  Ethan and Chris aren’t big fans of Brian’s either.  Lindsay has feelings of unacquainted love for Brian, so it’s possible that subconsciously, she might be a little jealous of Justin being with Brian.  The only skeptics are Jennifer, and Justin’s grandmother but it might not be all that personal.  Those two women are mostly concerned that Justin married someone he hasn’t known long.  They’d feel the same way about it no matter who it was that Justin married that quickly. 
  13. Other things to consider when evaluating why Justin has fallen for Clay: Recall Justin told Viola that he known other men far longer than he knew Clay, however, none of those relationships have worked. That signifies that time spent getting to know a person has very little essence to Justin.  Maybe after what he’s been thru, he feels you can spend a lifetime getting to know another person and still not really know that person (so what difference does it make).  Also, Grandma-Taylor told Brian that Justin hasn’t been able to make a good decision since Brian left (especially about his love life).  So maybe marrying a man he’s only known for six months is just one more of those bad decisions. 


So, taking all this into consideration how can you say that the relationship between Clay and Justin lack credibility, and is unrealistic.  Could it be possible you have developed issues with this story at this point, because either you don’t understand the overall basis of their relationship, or your emotions make it too hard for you to accept that Justin might be in love with someone else in addition to being in love with Brian?


I hope I’ve convinced you but still you are entitled to your opinion, so if I haven’t that’s completely fine.  No hard feelings.


Oh, last of all.  The other comment you made here throws me into a flux of confusion.  You said the story is entertaining, but ask me to end it because it starting to drag on and on.  That doesn’t make sense to me, because usually when people are being entertained they don’t want to see the fun come to an end.  I find that terribly strange, but then again you are entitled to your opinion, and thanks again for taking the time to comment.


Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

I won´t, be assured, NEED to know how it ends, so keep on posting regularly and all is fine :). If not, I send you my medical bill :P 


Author's Response:

Hi, Reiselust... Thanks you so much for hanging in there with this unusually long story written by me.  I'll try to post another chapter as soon as fleasible.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: You Got What You Wanted

that´s right, but do WE deserve so much heartache ^^ :).


Nevertheless, keep on doing what you are doing, you´re doing it good! 

Best wishes! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  but plez don't have a heart attack before I finish this.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 161: You Almost Gave Me a Heart Attack

oh, man , how many more chapters will you tease us till the reunion? Honestly, I totally expected it to be Justin who busted Brian in the boys room. 





Author's Response:

I know what you mean, Reiselust,  but Brian doesn't deserve to get Justin back to easily, lol!

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!


Author's Response:

Hi, Draccone.... here's more 4 U (chapter 161).  Later, and sincerely Delores

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!

Uh oh! I am looking forward to how Brian explain himself to Justin this time. If that was Justin, right? 

Great chapter. 

Author's Response:

Hmmm, if that is Justin, lol?   Here U R, Lexa.  Thanks so much for continuing 2 come back.   chapter 161, later.  Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!

OMG I hope that isn't Mel. I hate her, at least in this story lately.  And Clay gee he ' a charming fellow, not, whatever he I'd to Granny is wrong and I hope wherever Justin and he want on honeymoon, he falls off a cliff, gets eaten by a shark or contracts some sudden illness that is in curable.  Poor Justin he just needs to get back to Brian.

Author's Response:

OMG!  I got people hating Mel, lol!   And, you making me laff hard when you say here all that you would like to see happen to Clay on the Honeymoon, LOL!   Well, here's 161.  I hope U enjvy.  Later Delores

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2013 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!

This is so heart breaking. I hope that Brian will find an ally that will help him. Also I hope he will have an emotional reunion with Gus, he deserves to have at least one happy thing after such miserable 2+ years. Glad grandma Taylor is back – missed her!

This story is just addicting!


Author's Response:

Hi, T:  Strange you should mention ally, here.  Here it is, lol!  Hope U enjvy chap 161.  Later, and thanks again for taking the time to comment.   Sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!

you are such a teaser :P . Thanks for the long update.

I knew something was wrong with Clay, too good to be true.


ok, let 's wait for explanations :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Reiselust... here's 161 for you.  Hope U enjvy.  Hav Fun, Delores.  Later

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!

That is not a fair place to leave this!  And geez is Clay totally sketchy now or what?  I mean, I think it was the general consensus that he was too perfect and something had to be wrong with him...But a  murderer?  Well, at least that's what I think.  Did he kill Uri?  Did he spike Viola's champagne with something?  Gaw!!  I need to know.  Justin and the kids could be next!


Update soon please.  :)

Author's Response:

Hi, IcedCupcake, so sorry about not being fair, LOL!  And, I see U rather excited there, so gere's 161 I hope you enjvy.  Later now.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 160: ...And So Do You!

Did Clay push Uri overboard? What did Clay do to grandma? Who just walked in on Brian? Okay I can hear the theme to Soap playing in my head so I will stop with the questions now.


Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee.  Here's your next episode of this Soap, lol!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 159: What's Another Week, He Said!

What’s Another Week? He still got there in time he just chose not to say anything. What is Brian up to entering the house? I hope you are eating lots of chocolate eggs so you are awake enough to post the next instalment tonight. Happy Easter.


Author's Response:

Happy, Easter, Flossee, and here's that next installment.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House

Hi, I usually avoid reading  A/U but I gave this story a chance a few days ago and I couldn't stop reading – WOW what a roller-coaster! Since I read it all at once (!!) this is kind of my first cliff hanger … Poor sad Brian, I hope it won't take them more missed years. This Clay seems too perfect like he knows exactly what to say, and have just the perfect back story. He gives me no reason to dislike him but I don't know there are too many coincidences. What about Gus, can he really forget his father so easily?

Can't wait for the next chapter


Author's Response:

Oh, my God!  Welcome, welcome, welcome!

You said you’ve read 158 chapters all in one sitting!  You’ve flattered me so much I’m laughing like a hyena, and my head’s spinning around like Linda Blair's did in the Exorcist… thank you, thank you, thank you.  I can’t thank you enough; your words are so uplifting and inspiring.  And, for that here’s the next chapter instantly, and as an added bonus I'm adding chapter 160 too, and if I'm able to I'll add 161 tonight as well.

Thanks again, and I hope you continue to enjvy.  Later Brianawriter [real name] Delores

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House

oh Brian hurry hurry hurry !!!!!! Thanks for the multiple updates! Don ' t take that long hiatus again anytime soon <3.

I' d kill Mel on the spot :/

Author's Response:

Hi, Reiselust... I hope I didn't hurrried fast enough.  I just added 159 and I'm adding 160 later on tonight.  Hope you enjoy both chapters.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House

Oh my fucking lord. I need more right now.

Author's Response:

Well, here's more for you.  Thanks so much, Draccone.  I glad a fellow author keeps coming back here.  And, I can't wait to finish updating all these stories so I can finally start doing so reading again.  I'm dying to see what you've been up to lately.  I always enjoy your stories.   Well, got to go and answer the rest of the reviews and upload 160, later.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?

Noooo. Why the hecks am I reading this. Why?. Why... Why... Why.... Why....

Author's Response:

Read on, Read on, Read on...    Here's chapter 159, and 160 will be posted shortly tonight.  Plz continue to enjvy.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?

Wow this is good. This is the kind of Justin/OC relationship I've rarely seen but wanted to a lot esp if Brian in the AU was not good for him or being good to him.

I know Ethan gets villified a lot but in the show, I thought he was very good for him just as Clay is good for him right now. This will allow Justin to grow and mature into someone who  Brian can chase instead of the other way around.

Good job! Enjoying the story a lot.

Author's Response:

Thank you for this comment, Bryton4ever71.  I'm always so glad when readers leave comments that let me know that they truly get the full meaning of my story and also say that I'm doing a good job getting that point across.  And, here's chapter 159, and 160 will be post very soon.  I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House

I think Justin is in denial. :( I am looking forward to find out what happens next with Brian and Justin. I hope Brian stop the wedding in time. 

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response:

Hmm, Brian, stopping the wedding.   NOw that's very interesting.... with that said here's chapter 159 for you, and 160 is coming momentarily tonight as well.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House

OMG I want to puke now. I hope Mother Taylor’s words have some influence. Justin instead of say I will, or I do, just say I am mentally incapable of making this decision; please get me help.


Author's Response:

Huh-huh, let's hope that's all it takes, but I kind of doubt it.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 157: The Very Next Week

Robert needs to find his mystery man before he and Brian even think about getting together. I can’t wait to find out who the mole man is. Is it Clay maybe?


Author's Response:

Hmm... dark eyes, hair, and a mole...  Who could that possibly be.  How soon will we know but believe it.  Robert's love interest is not just thrown in there for entertainment purposes it has a big significance for the story.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 156: I'll Like To Propose Something To You...

“there’s something a lot more serious than that I would like to propose.” NO, NO, NO he can’t propose as I don’t like him or trust him. LOL Really Justin you can’t say yes to marrying every guy you meet. You have a fifty, fifty chance to get the answer right Justin and the answer is NOOOO way.


Author's Response:

Awww, poor Justin, but let's hope he gets it right one of these days.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 155: What's Another Week?

Yay! That was the scene I was expecting. Mel has both Lindsay and Gus’ phones. I don’t think I can take any more phone misplacements. ROFLMAO


Author's Response:

Huh, still move phone action to come.  LOL!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?

Clay is one smooth talker. Now I’m losing count; Justin’s ex’s are, Ethan, Brian, Brian again, Jensen and hopefully soon to be ex Clay. “I can’t help that I’m still in love with Brian” Justin’s words; then he says “Make love to me again”. I think Justin is one confused man. Please find scarecrow Justin a brain so he can think straight (maybe straight is the wrong word but you know what I mean).


Author's Response:

'... Now I'm losing count.'  Thanks... catch me up will you, LOL!   'Maybe straight is the wrong word!  You got me cracking again.'

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 153: What is Your Plans For That Stuff?

What with the toilet déjà vu scene? Did Justin plant something in Chris and Ethan’s place or maybe Michael’s room? LOL I’m just kidding but it did take me back since there is a phone involved. What’s with these people and their phones; can they get a wrist strap or maybe a handbag to carry them in. At least with a handbag you always know where your phone is; they are always at the bottom under everything else. Or is that just mine?


Author's Response:

My gosh, Flossee, U don't forget any of the old chapters, huh?  Boy!  You make me smile and laugh every time.  Boy that would be funny if Justini gave Ethan a bit of his own medicine.  Howeer, Justin wouldnt' be lying recall how willing Chris went to the hotel with Justin that day, lol!   Oh, and more PHONE action to come.  LOL!   Where I'm moving on the answer the rest of the reviews and then I'm uploading chapter 160.  Later.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 152: How Do You Feel, J.C.?

Is Ethan in cahoots with Clay? I don’t trust Clay and my guess is that Sid, Ethan, Chris or Michael is also in on his devilish plan; whatever it is. You just gave us another person to place in the most likely to be a villain column; Sid. Thanks as that means this fic has yet another dimension.


Author's Response:

Awww, poor Clay, LOL!  But umm... let's us see about that, LOL!  Here's 159, Flossee, and 160 come up a little later this evening.  Later, Delores

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2013 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 158: Not One... But Two Doctors In The House

Can't wait for an update.
Once Justin see's Brian it'll be like no one else is in the room. Omg I'm dying to know what'll happen next!!
Great update.

Author's Response:

Hi, Britinified (Marina), so happy to hear from you again.   And, I hope I didn't keep you waiting long here's chapter 159, and 160 is being adding some time later tonight.  Very much hope you enjvy, later.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 154: Allow Me To Give You All That Your Need?

Okay I hate where this story is going... I really hate to give up on it now after reading so much of it but I wouldn't read anymore if Justin going to stay with Clay... Run Justin Run... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

OH, don't give up on me dear.  Read between the lines, lol!  There's a big clue there about that relationship, lol!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 152: How Do You Feel, J.C.?

Call me skeptical but I just don't like the dear doctor. Just something about him that seems to good to be true; besides Justin needs to get back together with Brian... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I agree 100% with you, but it got to be done just right to get the full impact of the reunion lol!  Here's chapter 158 coming right up for you, lol!

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 153: What is Your Plans For That Stuff?

You know, and I can't believe I'm saying this...I don't even think I believe Brian and Justin being together is the best option anymore.  Before, when the divorce was fresh, them getting back together seemed like the only solution.  Now, however, they both have different lives.  Would they even recognize each other?  

Brian went through a very hard time in his paralysis.  And even though Justin wanted to be there, he wasn't.  Brian went through all those things alone and is different because of them.  As for Justin, he's had this whole other life, boyfriends and doctors and JC, that Brian has no part of.  I'm starting to think that too much time has passed for them to find a reason to be together again...

They may love each other, but they don't know how much the other person has changed.  How can they reconcile their old feelings with their new selves?

I only write this much because I care SO much.  Right now this is my favorite story and I really want things to work out between everyone...But the more time that passes the less I see that happening.  At least not without one of them being unhappy with it and leading to another divorce.

Ok so this is basically a repeat of everything I left in my last review...Well, not a repeat, but just more concerns.  I still love the story and can't wait for the next update.  :)

Author's Response:

Wow!  thank you for writing this; and guess what?   I thought of every obstacle you have written here, and I've already worked it all out... you'll be surprise what develops along the way that do eventually get them back together, and I hope (by story end) that I've done a good enough job to make it believable.  We'll see. 

Also, IcedCupcake, let me say here.  You probably have no idea how much I value a review such as this one.  It's such an honest critique of the story, and I appreciate it so much, because taking everything into consideration you writing here, can only make a better writer out of me.  So, always feel free to express yourself just like you're doing here, and never shy away from doing so.  Thanks again.  And, here's chapter 153 for you, I hope you still continue to enjvy. 

Also, and I hope to post all the way to chapter 157 tonight.  later.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?

I cant wait for more. I want to choke Justin for not answering Brian. Ugh!! But what can u do. Clay and Justin...me dont like. But I know you know I wasnt going to. Lol. Update soon please.

Author's Response:

Hey, Draccone, additional chapters coming up, lol.  Later

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?

I cant wait for more. I want to choke Justin for not answering Brian. Ugh!! But what can u do. Clay and Justin...me dont like. But I know you know I wasnt going to. Lol. Update soon please.

Author's Response:

Hi, again, Draccone.  Here's 153 and additional chapters to follow today.  Later.

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?

I cant wait for more. I want to choke Justin for not answering Brian. Ugh!! But what can u do. Clay and Justin...me dont like. But I know you know I wasnt going to. Lol. Update soon please.

Author's Response:

Can't waitfor more...  well, here's 152 for you, and I'm working on posting up to 157.  Hope U enjoy.  Later

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 150: In The Care of Competent Hands

I was so happy to see an update on this story you had me bouncing and clapping in my seat! ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

thanks you so much, Kathleen, and here's some more chapters for you to bouce and clap to.  Here's 152, and I plan to post up to 157.  Later

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 150: In The Care of Competent Hands

Cuddling.... always a dangerous sign!!! More teasing here! 

Brian, run to Paris as fast as yoi can pleeeeaaaaasssssse!!!

Thanks for the two updates, so craving fir that story!!!

Author's Response:

'Cluddinig... always dangerous sign!!!"   U got me roll on the floor, lol!  Brian, frun to Pariee fast!  U wouldn't believe how fast!  Well, here's chapter 152 and I'll be adding more periodically today.  Later

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 151: Bad Parenting?

The way Mel keeps looking at the phone I can see this isn’t going to go well for the Brian/Gus relationship. I think Brian might be on the other end of one of Mel’s rants. What is it with people called Mel, a phone and a rant??????


Author's Response:

Hey, hey, hey!  Flossee, You guess it and you'll hear that rant before the day is out.  Here's chapter 152 for you but I plan to post up to chapter 157 before the day is out.  Later

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 150: In The Care of Competent Hands

OMG now you are sending yourself subliminal messages by having the two men on a couch. I think your subconsciously telling yourself which fic needs to be update next. LOL I hope you are feeling better and your headache is gone.


Author's Response:

Flossee!  Oh, thank you so much.  I'm actually feeling so good right now that I'm writing this message while chuckling and with a smile painted on my face.  In fact, I'm feeling so upbeat right now that I'm might add the next chapter before my head hits the pillow tonight.


Two men on the couch, lol.  You can always make me laff really hard, lol.  Thank you so much for that.   Later and sincerely, Delores

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 149: Thank God for a Doctor in the House

I can't believe you did this to JC. Poor little boy. Nobody deserve this.

I love this story.

The suspense is killing me....... Please update soon


Author's Response:

Hi, Mariana, haven't heard from you in quite a while.  So glad to hear you still read this one and still enjoying.  and didn't mean to stay away so long but real life havent' been too accommodating lately.  In fact I writing this respond while experiencing a massive headache but hopefully I'll be in good enuff shape to update this weekend.  Thaks again and later.

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