Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2013 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 17
Just came back to re-read this. I was so in love with it.
Please tell me it's going to be finised at somepoint.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 17
So Brian and Justin planned the break up together. Phew that’s a relief. I hope that’s the end of Will but I fear not. Please hurry back as I’m greedy and I want more chapters. LOL
Cheers
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh you little tease lol. Please hurry back with more, I'm curious to see Brian's reaction to the big break up.
Please update soon JP
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 17
It was short but good. Thank you :)
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 16
glad you are continuing with the story, missed it!!! Hope to read more soon :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2012 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 16
I literally spent all day reading this story from the first chapter playing catch up. Will is the worst kind of person to be in a relationship with. The bastard was so emotionally abusive that it's pathetic, not to mention how much of a fucking coward he is.
Justin needed to learn how to stand up for himself and feel confident and comfortable in his own skin. Brian and the gang gave him this when Will was so adamant about him remaining weak and dependant.
Now that Brian has stopped acting like a dick and has revealed his true feelings for Justin, maybe 'the boyfriend' will be out of the picture whether he likes it or not
Please update soon JP
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2012 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 16
I actually danced when I saw you updated your story. I love it.
Great chapter. Will really need to stop interrupting our Boys...grrr.
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2012 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 16
YAAAAAAAHOOOOOO,So glad to see you back, it's like I've been waiting forever. Thank you sooooooo much for the wonderful update  
Please don't wait that long again *I know you won't;)* and update soon   
Later.
Dilia.
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2012 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 16
i am so glad this story is being continued! i absolutely love it :D
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
So hapy to see an update,I love this story
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 16
OMG I almost squealed when I saw this. Thank you for the update and I hope RL will now be kind to you. I love this fic as I really like Brian and Justin getting to know each other as friends before they have sex. Great chapter, I hope we get more soon.
Cheers
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 16
Glad to see you back. TAG
Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 14
cannot wait for more this is so exciting. i read this in one go. so addictive.
Author's Response: I hope you mean the chapter in one go and not the whole story. But hey! If you read the whole story in one go, that shows dedication haha! And it's very flattering thank you for the review :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
Very gripping and angsty story. I don't know why Brian is putting up with Justin and The Boyfriend. So sad to read, especially that he's boinking ugly guys - Brian, really? I sure hope this turns around soon! I'm starting to dislike Justin and don't think Brian will ever pull out of this dive roll that he's in.
I hope the boys work it out. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
All the best,
Laura
Author's Response: Heyy thanks for the review :)
Brian is one complicated man isn't he? But for the next chapter you will hopefully see a change for him and his way of getting what he wants. He'll no longer ne sitting around and waiting ;)
The description of the trick wasn't real haha it was just Justin's jealousy which made him emphasise any imperfections.
Please don't dislike Justin! :( could you perhaps let me know why you're staring to feel that way so I can understand and try and do something? Because that wasn't the angle I was going for, but then again it's how the reader interprets it that matters isn't it?
But thank you for the comment it's much appreciated :D
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2012 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
Okay, Brian. Enough with the asshole imitation. We know there's a heart in there somewhere! Poor Jus! TAG
Author's Response: Yes somewhere deep deep deep deep down there, there is a heart the size of texas and Justin will find it don't you worry!
Thank you for the review :D
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
Hope real life isn't too bad ! Thank you for updating!
This was a sad but inevitable chapter for the plot development. I can't wait for the chapter where Brian and Justin finally unite (in every sense of that word ;) )
Will be eagerly looking forward for the next installment! :D
Author's Response: It's not so bad that I can't just tell it to 'f*** off' but thank you for the concern :)))))
It was hard to write this chapter for some reason but I'm glad I finally did it!
Brian and Justin are driving me carzy with all this waiting for them to come together but hopefully soon................. They will get it on!!!
Thanks for the review, I just love them :D
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yay! A new chapter! It was sad but loved the angst. And I thank you for reassuring me that this chapter will not be abandoned :)
I just hope that Justin will soon realise that his relationship is toxic and Brian...*sigh*
Hope you can update soon :)
Author's Response: Oh the angst! I love reading angst as long as it's resolved ;)
And of course I am not abandoning this story! I may be tied up in another country, lost all my belongings, and have no money to speak of but I would still find a way to update this strory whenever it was possible.
As a matter of fact I am currently writing some more for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2012 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just responding to a reply you wrote to my review of chapter 10. I wanted to let you know that there was no problem with how you wrote the story. It's fine. I just get nervous with some Justin/other stories. This one has turned out to be much better than what I thought. I have gone back and enjoyed plenty of stories that I had, mistakely, jumped at certain conclusions. There are other times where it may be an interesting story but not something I want to read at the time.
It wasn't you, Hon, it's me, LOL.
Author's Response: Omg am I embarrassed or what?! Haha!
In a way I'm glas that I misinterpreted it because those first few chapters are kinda badly written I was just nervous because it's my first time writing I guess.
I'm soooo glad you came back to the story it really is Brian and Justin all the way (how could it ever be anything else? O_o) it literally breaks my heart when people write Brian and Justin apart at the end of their fics but it is their prerogative I guess :(
Thanks for clearing it all up you've been vey helpful nevertheless :D
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh poor Justin. :( Brian need to figure out what he wants and be honest to Justin about his feelings.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Haha! You're review number 69 ;)
Brian is sooo complicated the boy doesn't know how to ask for what he truly wants. And Sunshine is messed up emotionally but slowly improving by keeping better company than The Boyfriend :)
Thanks for the review :D
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2012 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 14
"Wanna fuck Theodore?"
"Okay now I definitely now you're wasted."
Hilarious!
Author's Response: Hahaha!! It took me a while to write that part down because I was thinking it and laughing! :P
Thank you for the review ;)
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
THANK YOU . THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS LOVELY UPDATE AND WONDERFUL CHAPTER.
Oh..and it is up to standard just fine ;) . Wish you the best.   
Author's Response: YOU'RE VERY WELCOME!!
Thank you for the assurances haha I'm glad you're happy reading this story and thank you for reviewing so much !!!!! Xx :D
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
     
RedRose.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 10
It isn't muscled or anything; he's petite and I just want to sit him on my lap and nibble on his ear while I tell him how I'm gonna fuck him into the mattress.
"What so I'm a stranger to you?" I'm practically talking to his nipples.
I must say that Initially started reading this story some time ago, but the first few chapters didn't keep my attention. I'm glad I decided to give it a another chance. This whole chapter is hilarious and I love how the story has porgressed. This is extremely good for a first time.
Author's Response: Ahhhh punch to the stomach! :(
BUT.... I have to completely agree with you! I read this over a couple of days back and I was just so disappointed in what I wrote. It could have been waaaaay better.
Hopefully I am doing any readers justice with this story because ultimately I really just want them to enjoy reading it.
But than you for being honest and a appreciate the constructive criticism it really does help to give someone a kick up the *** :D
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2012 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 13
   You know,...It's gotta be illegal to have such a great talent and to write such a wonderful story, Have you ever been arrested before?!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!
I literally have the biggest smile on my face and it's kinda hurting haha!
You're making the idea of getting arrested seem very appealing :) like it'd prove my writing ability!
Thank you so much for the review I abolutely LOVE! All my readers :D
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 13
Aww...I feel so sorry for Brian! And the boyfriend irks me up so much, you've done an excellent job I have to admit..I severely loathe him now. Great chapter, although all sad, sad. Please update sooon!
Author's Response: OMG THANK YOU!!!
Update should be sometime next week hopefully.
And don't worry *Whispers* I hate The Boyfriend too. ;)
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 13
This chapter was truly heart breaking :( but the angst still captivates me. I hope you update soon because I really want to see the chapter where Justin finally realises he's in love with Brian. Hallelujah! haha. *Hugs*
Author's Response: *Returns hug*
Thank you sooo much! I hope there is enough glue to mend any injuries caused to readers haha!
next chapter will hopefully be out sometime next week :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ooooh, the little green monster - jealousy - who's it gonna get first? Brian or the evil Boyfriend. I can't wait to find out. TAG
Author's Response: haha i think that by now both The Boyfriend and Brian are only seeing GREEN!!
Thank you for the review! it is much appreciated :)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 13
God, poor Brian! And The Boyfriend is an ass and an emotional manipulator! I hope Brian gets Justin to see that, and soon!
Author's Response: 'emotional manipulator' i love that description!
hopefully Justin will see the truth!
Thank you for the review :)
Reviewer: Lyn (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
ahhhh Justin has to see that the boyfriend is no good..
Poor Brian....
Loved the chapter. now need more please..
x
Author's Response: next chapter is a work in progress.
I feel so bad for Brian and I'm so tempted to just throw him and Justin together. But, alas! that's not the way it goes :)
Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2012 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 13
OMG!!!!
I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
Stupid Will! Go awaaaaaaaaaaay like yesterday! haha
Author's Response: more like last week! haha
I'm working on the next chapter now and hopefully it'll be out next week :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2012 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
OOOOOOh. We hate The Boyfriend! I checked the link you included and there is no way he's even 1/2 as cute at Brian. I have a sneaking suspicion that he may be cheating on our Sunshine, too. Hate The Boyfriend! TAG
Author's Response: Yes we do hate The Boyfriend!
I have a sneaking suspicion too ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
Just adored the faux shower scene! Im not sure how Justin managed to handle finding Brian like that so coolly, though. If I were him, I would have just stayed quiet and watched. . . . . . TAG
Author's Response: I'm not sure I could stay quiet and watch. I'd probably pounce on him ;)))
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
Can't believe you have the patience to type this on your iPod. I'll never complain about short chapters from you again. TAG
Author's Response: Awww haha thank you. The ipod is kinda annoying but its one of the only two ways I can write fan fiction so I'm happy I've at least got that ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh the smut is definitely good - more please! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
Okay, this OOC nice, thoughtful Brian is starting to really freak me out! Or is it just a very cunning plan? Yeah - that's gotta be it. Justin better watch out! Nice Brian is a really really big turn on! TAG
Author's Response: I like nice Brian too!
He's got the potential to be nice, he is in those little moments on the show, just no one reallt knows about it haha
I always likes how hes be nice in his own Brian Kinney way :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
Justin, who is this Will guy? You know better than to talk to strangers, don't you? Now be a good boy and go home with Brian like you're supposed to. TAG
Author's Response: OMG hahahha that's halirious!
Thanks for the (kinda) review ;)))
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2012 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 11
OMG..HOW I LOVE THIS STORY.
*THANK YOU*
Author's Response: *THANK YOU* right back! Xxxxxx
Loving that you love this story! I'm so greatful! :)
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ooo...the tension.
Grrrreat chapter! The angst and the jealousy, perfect. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Aww thank you!
I love reviews! Haha my ego is like the size of an elephant, need to come back down to earth! ;)
Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 11
Aww...Damn that.."The Boyfriend" haha, I love how Brian uses that in a condescending way.
Love the jealous Brian, can't wait to see what happens!! (Loved that leg joke btw ;)
Author's Response: aaahh the leg joke *wink* *wink* haha!
thank you for the review!
brian... jealous... soooo hot! ;)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yikes. Brian better step up his game and do everything he can to replace the Boyfriend. Great Chapter.
Lori
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Brian is sooo fine!............. Just wanted to get that out there ;) haha xx
Reviewer: RedRose (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2012 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
you doing so well so far, please keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I really need to keep going I'm pushing my way through not having a good structure for the story haha ;)
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2012 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
Great to see you back, fully energized.:)
This chapter was entertaining!! Please write more !
Hope to see your update very soon, perhaps?
Author's Response: I'm hoping that the updates were to you're satisfaction haha!
I'm like the enigiser bunny now! You can't stop me ;)
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Finally there's an update! yeepie!
Please just let someone posion The Boyfriend, or simply plane crash and let him disappear, so Brian and Justin can be together.
Cheers, June
Author's Response: Oh I soooo wish it was that easy!
Thank you for the review they are all so much appreciated ;)
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hey!
I was so happy to see this update and was even more happier when I finished reading it..it was so fun! Especially Brian's behaviour...hilarious.
I really hope you update this soon, I'm sure you'll come up with something interesting :)
Talking about exams...gah..i have mine in a couple of weeks.
Anyways hope to see your story updated soon.
Author's Response: Aaahhh! I'm so glad you're happy haha!
Exams have been a b**** but oh we'll! ;) I hope yours go amazingly well, good luck for them!
I get my results in august so here's to happy tears (not 'my parents are going to kill me' tears) :D
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 10
Thanks for the update. I really like this flirty Brian.
Lori
Author's Response: Haha I like flirty Brian too! ;) thank you for the review!
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
Just wanted to stop reading for a bit to say that I am enjoying reading this story... A bit out of character, but you are staying true to your B/J relationship and have developed a nice story line. I like this Brian and Justin relationship... k, on to the next chapter :o)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! It means a lot to me when people leave reviews it just makes me smile so much haha ;)
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2012 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
Excellent update! and I could understand Brian's pain in the end...awesome chapter on the whole Good luck for the exams!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate the luck I have a feeling I'm gna need it
Brian's pain is all our pain right? he's just so emotional really! ;)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
I sure hope Brian can convince Justin that he can do a much better job as partner than Will is doing as The Boyfriend. Brian just needs to make a claim for what he wants. He's being pretty passive about the way he feels. Maybe the Christmas celebration at Debbie's will be the time to say what he really wants.
Lori
Author's Response: I hope so too!
Brains hasn't made a move yet because he doesn't feel like he's ready yet. He knows that he area deeply for our little Sunshine but he doesn't know how to be what Sunshine wants yet so I'm going to get a lot of characters to give him advice. Like Debbie gave him a kick up the a** :).
Christmas is definitely a rime for couples. Don't you think? ;) we just don't know which ones!
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hmm...Nice update! That indian restaurant scene was quite cute! Still loving the story and good luck with your exams...I know how much pain they are.
Hope to see you update again!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're still interested in re story. And I appreciate you're reviews a lot
I think after all of my exams I may just sleep for the rest of the year ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2012 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 8
want more!!!!!!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 8
whoo good smut.:)
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awesome! More yummy smut please!
Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: There will most definitely be more smut but I can't guarantee it's going to be our two favourite boys ;) *cheeky face*
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter. I like how things are building, the feelings that Brian has and how just plain kind he is being is wonderful. It makes the Boyfriend seem like a real waste of time and energy. Lets hope Brian's dream comes true soon.
Lori
Author's Response: Brian an Justin have a looong journey to go through but they will have their special moments.
[pssst! I don't like The Boyfriend either ;)]
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 8
Good smut... very good smut! :) A little fast, but I knew something was different based on how you've written Justin so far. Alarm timing... you gotta love it... although we should all be so lucky to have such hot dreams to wake up from... great job! Look forward to more, as always!
Cheers, Laura :)
Author's Response: Oh how I'd love those types of dreams!
Someone on fanfiction.net actually gave me the idea in a review and i'm always one to please my readers so I tried to put a good one in there :) thanks for the review!
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2012 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yay! an update!
Loved it hun :)
And the smut was hot..loved to read more of that ;) !
"I don't think I should reward my unwelcome visitor with my amazing body."
Cracked me up!
Hope to see your story soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that the humour came across! I was really worried that my sense of humour was kinda bland lol Thank you so much for your review ! :)
Reviewer: randyfan (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi! Thank you for sharing...
It is a wonderful story! I love Brian and Justin!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
Now I have to wait *sigh*.
Loving it till now and the way you write Brian and Justin is very sensual and sexual. good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of your reviews I will definite try to write longer chapters but there's a lot going on right now and I feel bad for not updating for aaaaages so I try to get something out even if it's just little. Next one is up now :)
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hot! Forgiven :) but longer chapters maybe? More interactions between B/J
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 4
Damn the bf! Loving till now!
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
That scene was hot!
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
Funny and cute!
Reviewer: azxyz (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice !
Reviewer: BJlover (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
Awesome Story! Loving it...I love your humour. Will wait impatiently for the next update!
Author's Response: The update is here! Admittedly it's not that long but I have been really busy and just wanted to get something out. Thank you so much for the review! :)
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
this story is so sweet - I just love it - the build up is perfect!
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
This looks promising. Excited for more.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2012 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
This looks very promising. I'm a little worried about that boyfriend.
Please update soon!
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2012 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
hey love it will they or will they not kim
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 2
Im liking it! Hope you update soon :)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
love it kim
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved the chapter, it was sexy with tinge of humour. Will be waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
:)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2012 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
its great update soon kim
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