Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2018 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hope there will n an update or sequel

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2015 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, no more chapters ... Will you continue this story??? Its a joy to read! Thank you for sharing it!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2013 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is such a lovely story, although it feels incomplete. There are some questions left unanswered, like where will they live after the 6 months, do they get married? Those sort of things. Also, a family scene of either Thanksgiving or Christmas would have beautifully completed this story. It's a very nice surprise though that Craig is included in this new complete family of Brian and Justin.

Reviewer: pen-f (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

This was such a lovely story, and very beautifully written. Brian and Gus are simply adorable, and I love them to pieces. It did have an abrupt sort of ending, but that just leaves more for the reader to interpret and imagine what happened next. :) I'd like to think Craig, although a little reluctant, comes to accept Justin for who is is and who he loves. I guess I'm just a sucker for happy endings. Hahaha Awesome job.

Much love!
-Penelope



Author's Response:

thanks so much for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2011 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 5

This doesn't feel finished.

Reviewer: skywriter (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

Found this story through and Live Journal link.  This is a great story... You write such beautiful Brian/Justin and in this case Gus story. I loved reading this one but is it finished?  It is so abrupt I feel like I'm missing something.   Its a cliffhanger. 

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yay!

 Thanks for the speedy RSVP!

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

P.S.  Meant to say -- beautiful story!  God knows you give us plenty with your wonderful stories, but just a tiny bit more on this one?

 Please?



Author's Response: It really is the end for now - but it is on my list of ones to do additional chapters or sequels

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was sure I'd missed a chapter.  Is this really the end???

Reviewer: butterflytiger_1982 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love this story Elsa but it never feels like it's over. Am I missing something?

Jessica

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was really great! I loved the whole stroy and Gus is so sweet in this one. I just wanted to ask if you write a sequel. Pretty please????? You can't stop there!
Hugs Tina

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2008 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please write a sequel!!  Though by Craig coming to the diner he must be either trying to or has accepted Justin and Brian.  I'm sure Jennifer would've told him about Brian.  I'd still like to read more!

Reviewer: sol (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2008 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 5

awwww... I really love this story .. but .. is it really finished?? ... with craig just arrived at the diner?? ... and if it's  not, is there a sequel??? thanks ... really great story!!!

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