Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2015 04:47 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

Hi Kim.

LOL, “you win some…you lose some” that is so true in any sport, you can’t win them all, no matter how much you want to.

I’m really glad Brian’s Aunt and Uncle are going to let Brian keep driving although I can definitely understand their reasons for fearing for his safety. I’m wondering (hoping ) if Brian and Justin will eventually be able to race together.

Great chapter, looking forward to more too :  ) *Hugs* Janet

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 08:23 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

The playful banter between Brian and Justin is so heartwarming – I love seeing them so carefree and happy for once. Like normal teenagers who found love, without dark and dangerous secrets haunting them.

William and Sarah’s relationship is so sweet, loving and – I don’t know, comfortable, that I can’t get enough of them. They’re a good example, the show that love can live for a very long time. Only now I realized how incredible it is that they didn’t break up over the death of their son. A lot of people can’t stay together after this kind of tragedy, it breaks them, destroys their relationship. But Will and Sarah demonstrated that staying together and loving each other through everything is possible. I love them, you created an amazing couple. I love how devoted and protective of Brian they are. Their conversation together was so touching… finally Brian has found his real family, the one that cares about him.

Thank you, Kim, for another captivating, beautiful chapter. I look forward to the next one!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! No, I thank YOU for the encouragement and for reading this latest chapter.  I have been somewhat discouraged lately with my writing, so your kind words are greatly appreciated.  I will update this again as soon as I can, along with My Heart's Desire. I'm actually working behind the scenes to write a new story, also, but probably won't post it until I'm finished.  Thanks again for taking the time to review. I am very grateful. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:11 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

AHA!!! i KNEW YOU WOULD COME TO THIS AFTER A FASHION AND THE ANGST DIED DOWN. I CAN SEE WHERE THIS MIGHT GO AND THE MONEY THAT MIGHT BE WON, GOOD CHAPTER. SRY FOR THE CAPS SOMETHING WRONG WITH THIS DANG COMPUTER-IT'S OFF MORE THAN IT SHOULD BE. HAVE TO HAVE IT CHECKED AGAIN!! WE ARE ALL GOOD HERE-LOOKS LIKE WE MAY BE LOSING BB TO ANOTHER HOSPITAL. WERE ARE VERY UPSET BUT HAPPY FOR HIM--THINGS CHANGED. HE SAID HE IS GETTING OLDER AND WANTS TO SLOW DOWN A LITTLE AND ENJOY SOME THINGS MORE. I GUESS HE IS GOING TO BE TEACHING. WILL LET YOU KNOW AS THINGS UNFOLD. LEE IS DOING WELL, STILL SAVING MONEY FOR HIS OWN PLACE. DON'T KNOW WHEN THAT WILL BE-MY GUESS IT WILL BE SOON. EVERYONE IS MOVING AROUND, NOT TO MY LIKING, BUT THAT'S LIFE. LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - sorry for the late response; it has been so busy for me lately.  I'm sorry to hear that you will likely be losing Brian to another hospital, but I can understand him wanting to do what is best for him.  Sounds like Lee is doing well; I am very happy to hear that.  He is such a sweet man.  And you sound like such a compassionate, caring friend. He is lucky to have you in his life.;)

I am slowly heading toward the conclusion of this story, as well as Lee's favorite.  Don't know how long it will take, but I'm going to try and show some restraint before I start another one, and at least have a good amount of it written before I post it. In the meantime, it's good to know there are a lot of other talented writers on here to keep everyone interested.  Thanks again for all the support, lindc! Hope you have a good weekend, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 03:33 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

Very nice update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comment, Trish. See you soon! ~Kim

Reviewer: Tiggerchihuahuas (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 03:03 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

hi Kim:  I loved it of course!  You know it's my absolute fav fanfic!!!  Can't wait to see where the story ultimately goes!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm so glad that you are still enjoying this story!:)  I probably have a few more chapters to go before it's done, including what happens to our boys once Justin goes off to college.;) 

Thank you not only for reading, but also leaving some feedback; I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

 

Looking forward to seeing you again next year, too!  :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:49 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

I don’t have words to express how touching this chapter was. Keep up the phenomenal work Kim ;)

Author's Response:

You're very kind, Tamara. Thank you for reading, and for the encouragement, my friend. It is much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 12:58 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

Hi Kim!

As always, it's great to read an update to this story. And, as with your other stories, it's always bittersweet knowing the last chapters are nearing. I know you will wrap this up in great style, with our boys having a beautiful future ahead of them, but it's always hard to say goodbye to them even in a fanfic platform. I know this only too well! 

This was a fabulous chapter, my friend. There has been so much character development throughout, and your constant attention to detail never ceases to amaze me. I'm afraid I can't discipline myself to keep that up in my own projects. I might start out doing so... but, then I either get lazy or RL just throws too many curves. :) 

Hang in there. I know how discouraging it is when the feedback isn't so forthcoming. I'm trying to keep going myself. Thank you for the update, and looking forward to more. *Hugss* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - glad to have you back from your trip.;)  I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts, and for the encouragement.  We both know what you mean about feedback.  Hard to keep going sometimes, and it starts to make you question yourself, at least as far as my writing goes.  I start to think, is it any good anymore?  But like you, I will never leave a story unfinished, and I care about this one, as well as my other one, so I will forge on until the end.;)

I'm still playing catchup on stories my self, but should be heading over to Bound by Fate shortly.;p)  Thanks again for all the support. *Hugs* back ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 11:53 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

ah my friend - I was so excited to get home from work and find a new chapter of this story I almost missed...lol...I couldn't have been more wrong when I originally thought it might not be one I would enjoy!

every chapter just keeps getting better and better - I love this head over heels Brian and the relationships he is forging - and I am still looking anxiously ahead to see how the last few twists are resolved -  you are certainly the master of them

thanks for the chapter - with all you have on your plate - it is even more appreciated!

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle! (waves hand). I'm always so thrilled to see you on here, and especially reading one of mine. Thank you for your thoughts, my friend. I'm glad you decided to give this story a try, and that you have been enjoying it.  And yes, I do have a few more issues to resolve before it's finished; the unanswered questions will be handled before it's complete.

Thanks again for reading, and especially for the feedback! It is greatly appreciated.  Hope I might see you in Toronto, too, next June at the con.;)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 11:38 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

Another great chapter Kim. In a way, it makes me sad because we're coming closer to the end, but this is such a beautiful storytelling :) eager for your next chapter, as always. Just love this story :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for taking the time to read this latest chapter. Yes, it's bittersweet to come to a story's end as I'm sure you know. But you also derive a certain satisfaction out of it, and hopefully those that have been waiting for its completion will give it a try and like what they read (and will let me know).;p)

Thanks for the encouragement! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:32 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

You do not need to ologise for the time between chapters of your flics we are blessed to be the recipients of your writing skills.
It looks like Brian has really found his true family and Will and Sarah are coming to a place of peace with Dale

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Thank you for your kind words.  To be honest, if it weren't for the few who leave comments and for my vow to never leave a story unfinished, I might not even post anymore. It gets very discouraging at times when there is little feedback. Your words of support really help, then.  Thank you so much. I will probably have two, maybe three more chapters to go before it is all done.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 06:18 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

So wonderful to see another chapter on this and to find that Brian's uncle and aunt are going to back him in his need to race. 



Author's Response:

You are so wonderful about reviewing so many writers' stories; as one of the admins, I'd like to give you a special thank you for that  I probably have a few more chapters to go before this is over, but I'm happy that you were looking forward to another update.  Thanks again for always being so supportive of me, and so many other writers on here.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 05:43 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed

Lovely chapter Kim. Will and Sarah finding out wasn't nearly as bad as I thought it would be. I'm glad they are supportive of Brian's training. Nice to see Brian and Justin just being silly together after all the drama they to laugh! As I've said i dread the ending of this story but do so look forward to more. I don't mind the wait for updates they are always worth it my friend.

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Hi, Susan! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for taking the time to comment.  I think both Brian and his aunt and uncle have changed throughout Brian's visit there.  I'm glad that you are still enjoying this story.  I would guess two, perhaps three more chapters, depending upon length?  I am writing some more new ones behind the scenes, but don't think I will post them unless they are either completely done or close to it. I worry too much about getting them updated, so I think that would be best.

 

Thank you again for the support, Susan. It is much appreciated *Hugs*  ~Kim

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