Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 10:25 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Hi, Kim! I was ecstatic to see the update from you – I love this story dearly.

I loved Brian and Justin’s playful banter – they are so at ease with each other. And of course I love how passionate Brian is when it comes to his blond boy – he can barely keep his hands off him.

Wow, Brian riding the horse! I think it’s the first time in this story? It was amazing, I could almost see him! I love all those little incredible moments of their farm-life. Nature, wind, golden sun, laughter, horses… I wish I were there with them! 

Brian was so clearly excited – I loved it. He needed some distraction after that disastrous meeting with his so called parents.

The ending was shocking – why did you have to stop there? I look forward to seeing what Jared has to say. And how he will react to seeing Brian and Justin so very obviously in love.

Thank you so much, Kim! It was such a relaxing, light, pleasant chapter – I deeply enjoyed it. I can’t wait for the next part of it! Thank you!  



Author's Response:

Hi, Katrin! First of all, let me apologize for overlooking your review; it wasn't intentional. Sorry about that!  I always make sure I answer reviews, because I feel if someone takes the time to leave me feedback, I have a responsibility to let them know how much it's appreciated, so thank you.

As for the story, yes, there is a lot more to tell here.  And if you think THIS ending was shocking, it will be tame compared to the next one! (Ducking under desk..).  But I am so glad you are enjoying this. And I think once we get past the next chapter, things will be taking a lighter turn for the most part, although Brian still has to find a way to let his aunt and uncle know what he's doing (unless they find out first!).

Thank you once more for always being so diligent in reviewing, and for the encouragement.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 01:05 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Great chapter, my dear! A lot of excitement in the horse track. I felt like I was there watching it while it was happening. His writing is amazing and so engaging that always get lost in the images you create.
I'm worried about the arrival of Jared and what that will mean for the boys.
A big hug, my friend! Fatima.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Fatima.  I'm glad you enjoyed it. Jared's presence will be explained in the next chapter, which I am working on now. Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 12:59 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Hi Kim! I'm in love with your story. The way you describe everything in this chapter is so good, so well-written. I love the connection between the boys and the way you describe what Brian must feel on the racetrack. And moreover, I can't wait to read about Jared's visit. Thank you again for this wonderful story :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - thank you for reading this latest chapter, and especially for taking the time to comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Yeah, Jared, I'm sure, was a surprise to them; I'll be going into more detail in the next chapter about his reason for being there.

I'll get this updated as quickly as possible. Thank you again for the support, my friend. It is greatly appreciated. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Fran K (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2015 08:11 PM · On: Thrill and Rush

"Wish there was a conclusion to jump TO"

I loved that line, so Brian! Can't wait for next chapter. And thanks for sharing:)



Author's Response:

Hi, Fran! LOL - I know; poor, frustrated Brian - ha!  Don't worry; I'm sure Justin will more than take care of him.;)  Thank you for letting me know that you are reading and enjoying this story; it is only through readers such as yourself who leave feedback that I know someone IS reading and that they enjoy what I write; that is so motivating to me.

I hope you continue to enjoy it; more drama yet to come before it's all over.  I'll get this updated again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2015 09:34 PM · On: Thrill and Rush

wonderful chapter--you go Brian. I knew this would happen. Hopefully he will win a big race for good money and give to aunt and uncle. No telling where that could lead, Now what does Jared want ???? Interesting!!! We are all well. Lee is off on his wild vacation HA!!! We will be waiting for stories and pictures yum!!! Hope you are ok and survived Mom's day. Dad's day will probably be harder for your family. Peace and love during that day. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc! So good to hear from you.;)  Yeah, Brian's feeling just a bit smug at the moment, but some of it could have just been some temporary serendipity.;)  And he hasn't encountered his aunt and uncle's reaction to what he's doing just yet. I will be exploring that in the upcoming chapter, along with Jared's purpose for being there. 

Mother's day wasn't too bad; next month will be, though. Not only do we have Father's Day, but also what would have been my mom and dad's 61st anniversary on 6/6.  That will be hard, but we'll just take it one day at a time. It will be difficult to have my first Father's Day without him here.  I still miss him terribly.

Thank you for all the support, Lindc; I'm glad you and the others are still following my stories. The reviews are way down on this chapter, which can be disheartening, so your encouragement is much appreciated. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2015 09:34 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Hi Kim,

Thank you for another great chapter. I love it and all the story so much.

I hope Craig didn't tell Jared (or anyone else) about Brian inheritance.

That could be dangerous for Brian.

Big hug,

Mariana



Author's Response:

Hi, Mariana! Thank you so much for the comments, and for reading; I really appreciate that.  I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter, and I CAN say that Craig has not told Jared about the inheritance.  I will be explaining Jared's purpose for being there in the next chapter, and I'll get it updated just as soon as I can. Thank you again for the support; it is very helpful to me and keeps me going. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2015 03:54 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Really enjoyed this update.  I love harness racing.  Brian really enjoyed his first time out.  Now what is up with Jared.  Hopefully he will be happy for his brother and Brian. 

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! I have never seen a harness race in person, but have seen a regular horse race.  I was always fascinated with the trotting horse, though; ever since I saw an old movie from the 50's.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Dee Dee. I truly appreciate your thoughtfulness.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 02:40 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

What a great rush that must have been for Brian, riding that sulky.  Not exactly the same as sticking your head out the window while drag racing, but, still....

- Jackie Mag

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Author's Response:

Ha!  That sounded like Brian was a dog.;)  I don't think he will be that successful all the time; he may feel a big connection with True Blue, but that may have been a fluke; after all, Justin is the expert on this. 

Jared may be putting a crimp in their plans, too; at least temporarily.  I'll be updating this as soon as I can. Thank you for reading, and for the comments, my friend.  BTW, received your email; will be sending a response either tonight or tomorrow.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 12:22 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Ah ha, the dreaded cliffy at the end, LOL. Another great chapter, Kim, Justin’s embarrassment at being caught ogling Brian’s bare chest at the beginning gave me a good chuckle, I really like the way these two interact in this story. Brian is really in his element on the track and I love the bond that he and True Blue are forming, I’m assuming they will eventually be on an actual race track competing against other horses and drivers,  it will be exciting to see what these two can do.

Hugs ~*~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - yeah, I know; bad girl!  But it was a good stopping point, and I will be explaining more about the reason for his presence in the next chapter. Let's just say that trouble seems to follow Jared wherever he goes!  This will be no exception.

Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for your comments, my friend. I appreciate that so much.  I'm looking forward to your story updates as well (hint, hint).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2015 09:25 PM · On: Thrill and Rush

Hi Kim!

This was such a great chapter, with so much going on. I love how the boys have progressed and grown in this story. Of course, I just knew the unexpected arrival would be Jared. Hopefully he doesn't cause problems this time.

Thanks for posting. Enjoying this story... *Hugsss* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for your thoughts, my friend.  I will be explaining why Jared it there in the next chapter; let's hope he's not bringing trouble with him.  More drama is coming up, though, for the boys.

Thank you for the support, Janet, and for the comments; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 06:27 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

Wonderfully written.  I felt like I was on the track.  Something tells me that once Brian gets on the race track there will be no stopping him.  Do you suppose that Jared and Emmett could get together? 



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend. Interesting concept!  Not sure if Emmett will stick around for that possibility, but who knows? Things are always dynamic in this particular story, and things could change in the future. 

I will be explaining Jared's presence in the next chapter.  More drama coming! Thank you so much fo reading, and especially commenting; I truly appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 04:45 AM · On: Thrill and Rush

I don't even have enough words to say how much I love this chapter. Kim this just keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara! Well, I don't have enough words to tell you how much I appreciate you reading and taking the time to review.;)

I guess it's human nature that stories always start out with a lot of reviews, and then diminish greatly over time. This one seems to be doing that, unfortunately, and it does get disheartening at times. So I am very grateful to you for your comments, and pleased that you are still liking this story.  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.

Thank you for all the support you give me and so many other writers, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

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