Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 04:33 PM · On: Horror and Revelation
Hi, Kim! I was so glad to see this story updated. Every chapter is incredible, and when you post two almost simultaneously, it’s as if Christmas came early!:)
I loved how Jared uncovered the truth, it was such a tense, exciting episode! Like in great movies – I was seeing everything with my own eyes. I don’t know what to make of Doug – I know there plenty of venturesome, reckless players who just can’t stop, and then have big problems, but to solve them this way… Doug was scared for his life, I get that, and there was no way to repay what he owed already, but he should have come to the police. He put his fear of disappointing his parents and getting into troubles with law higher than health of another person – of his friend’s brother! And when I realized he also played an active part if Dale’s death, I was shocked – he basically killed one person, and he was risking doing that again to Justin?! God! He needs serious help and then a few years of prison!
I’m always so touched to see how Brian and his uncle’s relationship develops. They are wonderful together, I love the progress they’ve made! I hope Brian will be here for his aunt and uncle when they learn shocking news.
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2014 02:00 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
UMM!!!! Getting good, now maybe we will have ssome answers. Just a little (HA HA) late in reading your latest chapter.So much going on, one of our team was killed in an accident. Nice man=he will be missed. We are all ok and I have instructions to say hey and love to you from everyone. I can see how busy you have been as your writins has been put on the back burner for a while. Now you will be even busier as school will be starting soon if it hasn't already. I am leaving in a couple days for New Zealand to see my Adam and Queen--can't wait. Take care. lol
Author's Response: Hi, Lindc! It's so great to hear from you. I've missed you! I'm glad you haven't forgotten me. I know it's taking me longer to update, but I'm working on them diligently.
I am so sorry to hear about your colleague. I will keep all of you and his family in my thoughts and prayers.
As for the story, yes, things are definitely heating up. I am actually working on the next part of this story right now, and might have it posted es easly as tomorrow. The Walkers will finally find out about their son.
And I have a new story, too; one that was supposed to have been written for the fan fiction challenge a few months ago. But it happened right about when my father died, so that pushed everything back. As soon as I have it completed, though, I will start posting it.
I hope you have a wonderful time in New Zealand! I've heard it's a beautiful country. Thanks for checking in and reading this latest chapter. And thanks as always for being so supportive. Please give everyone my love and best wishes. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2014 09:12 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
that was a very interesting chapter, i loved it! jarred probably redeemed himself, now no one will go on blaming him so much. poor will and sarah, but maybe now they will be able to get some rest.
Author's Response: Hi, Sasha! Always great to get feedback from you! Thank you for reading, and for your comments.;) I am glad you are still enjoying this story. I am working on another update right now, so I should hopefully get that posted very soon. I still have a lot to say with the story plot, so I hope you will continue to stay tuned. Thank you for your patience. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2014 09:42 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
What a nice surprise to find a new part of the Wild Stallion - one of my favorite stories!
Looks like both "accidents" will finally be resolved, and I like the interaction between Brian and his uncle. Will be interesting to see what you have in mind for Brian at the end of summer ...
Can't wait for the next part, and the next, and ..... :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the words of encouragement. I'm very happy that you have been enjoying this story, and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know. I do feel bad about not being able to update faster, but RL and my duties on here make that very difficult at times. Rest assured, though, it WILL be finished. I am working on another part of this right now before heading back to my other WIP, in fact, so hopefully it will be posted very soon; that is my goal.
And as you can imagine, I have quite a bit more to tell, including what happens to Brian at the end of the summer, along with some surprises along the way.;) Thank you again for the support. I hope you continue to enjoy it. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2014 01:48 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
Now we're getting to the good stuff! Love the intrigue! TAG
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and for the comments, Tag. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Will have the next part up very soon. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2014 01:55 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
Hi kim! So loan sharks for Dale, I didn't see it coming...and now, I'm eagerly awaiting for the next chapter :) thank you! *hugs*
Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments, Alois! I should have the next part up very soon; working on it now. Thank you for reading, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2014 02:18 PM · On: Horror and Revelation
Oh this is what I have been waiting for, now Will and Sarah will finally get the truth about what really happened to Dale. Doug's father won't be able to bail him out once he's charged with Dale's murder.
Update soon my friend...I can't wait ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara! Thank you for bearing with me in between updates. I know it takes a while, but I am constantly working on my WIPs to get them finished, and they WILL be done. Sigh...just wish I could do it faster! I AM working on one more part of this before I head back over to my other WIP, though, so it shouldn't be too long before I post again. Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for all the support you give me. It is truly appreciated, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2014 01:34 PM · On: Horror and Revelation
Wow the truth is starting to come out now, I am glad for Craig and Justin that Jared was cleared of wrong doing. Brian and Will working together such a wonderful combination both moving towards a love and respectful relationship
Author's Response: Hi, Chris. Thanks for bearing with me in between updates; I appreciate your support of this story.;) Yes, things are slowly changing between Brian and his uncle; so much so that I think Brian will be surprised by some events coming up that will impact his future. I will have another part of this updated before I head back to my other WIP, which is closer to being finished. Thanks again for reading, and for your comments, Chris. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2014 07:25 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
Just want to say I was so excited to see this update. I've been waiting for more of this story and I want to say thank you for this. You made my day Kim!!
Not looking forward to what happens next as it looks to be painful all around for the Walkers the Taylors and Brian. Can't wait for it though.
Well done!!
:)
Author's Response: Hi, Susan! I'm so delighted that you've been anticipating an update to this story! I will have another part to post coming up before I head back to my other WIP; hopefully I can post a little faster now, too, now that things have settled down a little more in RL. So glad that you are enjoying this. Thank you for your kind words, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2014 07:15 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
Well I'm glad Jared was vindicated, but to find out that his friend was responsible for Dale's death - that's horrifing. How will they fix things and bring the bad guys to justice. Wonderful to see Brian using his knowledge of cars to help out his uncle.
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading, and for your comments. You're so supportive of so many writers on here, and it is truly appreciated. I know - what a predicament for Jared! And now the sheriff has to tell both Doug's father and the Walkers what has happened; not a pleasant task. I have a lot more of this story to tell yet; I hope you continue to enjoy this one! Thanks again for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2014 06:55 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
Kim, this story is so addicting! I feel like every update is too short because I just - need - more. Needless to say, I'm very much enjoying this. <3
Author's Response: Hi, Jessie! What a lovely thing to say; thank you so much. I'm enjoying writing it; hopefully, I can update faster now that things have settled down somewhat in my RL. I WILL have another part coming up to this fairly soon. Thanks again for reading, and especially taking the time to comment. That means a lot to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2014 05:46 AM · On: Horror and Revelation
True confessions of a kid in too much trouble. Too bad so many have to get in trouble over greed and gambling.
Brian is such a talent with his hands. And he's a good mechanic, too! (g)
- Jackie
Author's Response: Hello, my friend. Thank you for bearing with me in between the updates; I'm hoping to be able to update this one and my other WIP faster now.;) I'll have another update to this story soon; wanted to post what I had in the meantime, though, so everyone didn't think I had abandoned this story. And yes, Brian IS 'good with his hands' - ha! Thanks again for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
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