Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2019 12:53 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League

That was incredibly hot .. What an encounter! Doubly sexy/hot given the vividly rendered background of baking Kentucky sun and straw bales. I'm enjoying this way more than I should be, Phew.. 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 10:37 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League

Yee Haw! I dont see why Justin doesn't want a roll in the hay with farmer Brian. I'd definitely go for it! TAG

Author's Response:

LOL!  Love your sense of humor - and I think from the "yee haw" that I see a little hillbilly in you (don't worry - all my relatives are from Kentucky!).  And I think Justin most certainly DOES want a roll in the hay, but he has to get by some good, old-fashioned pride and jealousy first.:)  Thanks so much for the comments - I'll be getting this updated very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2012 12:52 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League

I can't believe how long it's been since I read the last chapter!! I've had a ton of work lately and didn't have much time for fanfiction, I have been wanting to read this chapter for so long, I'm glad I finally did! Great chapter! Brian got what he deserved! Haha! I can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon!!! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm very glad you had a chance to read this last chapter and enjoyed it!  I am actually working on the next part right now - I have most of it written, but have a few thousand words to go yet (you know how wordy I can get - ha!).  Thank you as always for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback; that means so much to me and is so motivating to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2012 07:27 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

Really sorry I have been remiss in reading lately.  Have been so busy on the job, not much time to do any of my fun things I like to.  Finally have a day off after ten days.  Am very tired but finally caught up here.  This story is wonderful, I love rural country stories as you know.  So many scenarios you can put in here. Farm life and the things to do there leaves a writer with many ways to write sexy things.  Will be waiting for them. The boys better watch out for Brian when he is in hunting mood.  Love this one.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  I apologize for not responding to your review earlier; for some reason I am not getting any notifications anymore whenever I receive a review; very odd!  I do want you to know how much I appreciate you taking the time to read and review; I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it.:)  I will be updating this again very shortly.  I do have some experience in a rural setting, since a lot of my relatives grew up in Kentucky.  I fear poor Brian will definitely feel like a fish out of water, but something tells me he's going to enjoy himself just the same (wink, wink).  Thanks again for the lovely comments, Kym!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

I am so enjoying this story. There is so much going on. Brian is butting heads with Uncle Will who has not gotten over the death of his son and Justin and his brother are rivals for Brian's affections.

How about when you get done you demonstrate on ME?

 Brian's sexual innuedos during the milking of Checkers were  priceless!

I would love to see Justin as a jockey, at least that's where I think you may be headed.

I can't wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

Hi, dear!  I'm so glad you like this one!  And I WILL tell you that you are correct in that Justin, with his smaller frame, will wind up being the Taylor jockey.  There will be a LOT of 'jockeying' around going on in this story and not just on horses - ha!  I really like writing the back-and-forth banter between B & J, so I hope to incorporate a lot more of that in the upcoming chapters. 

It really makes me happy knowing that you're enjoying this story!  Thanks as always for your support and encouragement; that means the world to me.:)  I will get this updated soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

"squirt and sport"  how droll. love um.  having to get used to the boys being younguns.  ha!.  cute story so far-justin so naive so precious.  just wait til big bad swoops down-going to be fun to watch.  just a little info on me-am going to vegas second week in may for a vacation for a few days.  need some decadence in my life-one can only be good for so long.  my job is taking a toll on me and i don't get to do too much for fun-so vegas here i come,  maybe i will win some bucks, although i am not too much of a gambler.  i really want to see the shows, as they are super.  the last time i went was 2009. i had a ball then so hopefully can do it again.  back to work!  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, lincd!  Sounds like a lot of fun and you so deserve it - I hope you have a great time and win wads of cash!:)  Thanks for reading along on this one.  I'm having a lot of fun with it, and the dinner should be quite interesting with the boys.  I do see a bit of sibling rivalry here between the brothers over Brian, who will no doubt eat the whole thing up.:)  I don't want Justin to be quite so 'accomodating,' though.  Brian may find it's not quite as easy to get him to give in as he thinks, especially once he flirts around with big brother.  Thanks as always for your support, lincd (all of you); it means so much to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

Love it! I adore this story so much! Great work!

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, Stephanie; I'm so glad that you like it!  Your support of my stories means so much to me!  Dinner is going to be very interesting in the next chapter, but just which boy will get the best 'dessert?' LOL!  Thank you for the wonderful comments, my friend; I'll get this updated again very soon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League

Thank you for updating! I was so thrilled to see a long update for this story. It's really nice to have a change of scenery. As usual your writting is brilliant and I want more. Great work!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha!  I'm so delighted that you've been looking forward to an update.:)  I knew it had been way too long - I'm sorry for that.  It has been crazy lately with heading toward graduation for my students.  I'm glad I could make it a long update.  Needess to say, the dinner should be quite 'entertaining' in a lot of ways.:)  (Tour of the stables, anyone?  Wink, wink...).  So glad you're enjoying the story.  Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments, Sorcha.  I will get this updated very soon.  I definitely see a battle of wills heating up.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cherrycheriie (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2012 04:10 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League

I'm so loving this story and I'm really liking the obvious chemistry between Brian and Justin - older brother Jared doesn't stand a chance! I'm really looking forward to your next update :)

HA! smorgasbord xD Love that word, and I love the way americans pronounce it, it sounds so funny xD lol!



Author's Response:

Hello, Madeleine; thank you for reading and for your comments, my friend.:)  Oh, and thank you, also, for the 'favorite author' designation; that makes me very happy.:)  While Brian has definitely become intrigued with his beautiful neighbor, I CAN still see him perhaps 'sampling' the OTHER brother as well.  After all, he wouldn't want to tip his hand too much and give his emotions away just yet.:)  Thank you again for taking the time to leave feedback!  I promise to update this very soon, and I'm looking forward to your own story as well.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2012 10:50 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

ah - the fun begins - for Brian and Justin at least - Jared will no doubt be quite surprised to find out that his 'charm' doesn't hold a candle to the attraction between the gorgeous new brunette and his 'squirt' brother ... for once  'sport' doesn't stand a chance of victory

great work  - as always

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle, my friend!  Yes, I think Jared will be a little surprised that his 'inconsequential' brother has suddenly gotten a head start on his desire to get to know their sexy neighbor better.  Although..I still see Brian playing the field just a little; I don't see him all of sudden falling at Justin's feet yet.  He wouldn't want to reveal his feelings too soon, and he will be curious about the older, more rebellious brother.  Let's just say that dinner should be quite interesting...ha!  Thanks verybmuch as always for your support, Sweetheart; I will get this updated again very soon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

Hoping that this would be updated some time this week, I thought I would check one more time before heading off to bed.  :-)

What a wonderful update, sweetie  -- and a long one, too.  I'm not complaining one little bit. 

Later!



Author's Response:

Hi, 'Daphne' - thank you for reading and for your comments!  I really appreciate you taking the time to do that.:)  I'm so glad you've been waiting to read the update; I knew it had been a while and I was feeling guilty, so hopefully the longer chapter helped to make up for it.:)  Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it!  I promise to get it updated again just as soon as I can.  Dinner will never be the same - LOL!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2012 09:17 AM · On: Udderly Out of His League

Ooooh, I was thrilled to see this update. I needed an excuse for a break, and what an excellent one! This chapter was such fun. I can just visualize our young Brian attempting his life on the farm. Imagining his attempts simply doubles me over with laughter! Of course, sweet little Justin to the rescue. He might want to rethink that in the future - if he doesn't want to be nailed against the hay stacks! Haha. I loved their banter, chemistry... and the pictures were a great touch. *Grumbles to self* about big brother unsettling the mix... but, at least I think our adorable little blond has made quite the impression on our lusty teenager!

Excellent update, my dear. I'm so looking forward to more of this! *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Hi, my dear friend!  I'm glad I could provide you with a respite from your storywriting.:)  Yes, Brian is definitely not a 'country boy,' but I think he's figuring out that there are some definite 'perks' - LOL! 

You know how much I love to throw the angst in there, so naturally Jared will be doing some interfering before Justin is able to snare the gorgeous boy's heart (and body).  Thanks so much for the feedback, Sweetie.  Looking foward to your updates as well:)  *Hugs*  Kim

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