Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Placedo (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2023 10:59 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Hello Kim !

I can't believe, I've never read this one.

Promising start, can't wait to read more.

*hugs*

Dorothée 

 

 

Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2019 10:06 PM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Mmm a very intriguing set - up. I'm enjoying your writing immensely, Kim... The country scenery is described so vividly and the characters are already imbued with their own life and story rather than just being vehicles for the main action. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 11:15 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Oh yeah! Brian doing brothers - now that sound very entertaining. Can't wait! TAG

Author's Response:

LOL!  Hi, Tag!  Glad to see you reading this one!  I just got back a couple of days ago from the convention in Germany, so I'm still trying to get back into my routine.  I'll be updating this story again very soon, do not worry.  Thanks for reading what I have so far and for the comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 12:36 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

This story combines all my favorite things, the boys, a dog, horses. It's perfect in every way. I can't wait to hear more about Jen's bee keeping.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori! Thank you for reading the story so far and for having faith in me to complete it; I promise not to let you down.:)  And thank you, especially, for leaving me feedback; that is very motivating to me!  I'm delighted to know that this story's plot has a lot of components that you enjoy - I'll have to do some homework about the beekeeping, though - ha!  Hopefully you'll enjoy it enough that eventually I'll join the list of esteemed 'favorite' authors that you comprised, although it's quite an impressive list already - you have some of my favorites on there as well.;)

Thanks again for taking the time to leave me feedback; I promise to get this update soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2012 12:41 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

"He squirmed uncomfortably in his seat..."


That was a very nice description of the bus ride. I could almost feel I was on the ride with him.The whole trip seemed to be a punishment or a humbling experience. Riding in the back of truck was even more humiliating for Brian. I almost felt sorry for him.


"Brian continued to stand up in the back of the truck as Craig and the two boys watched them leave, his gaze bouncing back and forth between Jared and Justin."


 


It was exciting to read the introduction of the Taylor family (for a second I thought the name of the brother was going to be Michael). LOL. 


You have the dynamics of Justin with an older brother and his parents knowing both are gay.  This should prove interesting with Brian in the picture.


Nice chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I always look forward to your thoughtful comments!  As for Michael being the second brother....ew...(sorry to those M & B shippers out there!), but I just couldn't do it.  It might have been an interesting angle, though, but really - competition with Justin?  Nah....

I wanted to give the brothers names that both stared with "J" and thought Jared sounded like perhaps he might be a rebel - ha!  I think Brian may be drawn to Jared first as they have some things in common, but eventually that will change (wink, wink). 

Thanks so much for taking the time to leave me feedback!  And thank you for being so consistently faithful about doing that; that means a lot to me.  I hope I can keep writing stories that you will enjoy.:)  I'll get this updated soon, too.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 08:53 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Loved what I've read so far.... I'm dying to see what will happen next!!! Hope to read you soon!!!! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Hi, Mafita, my dear!  Thank you for reading along on this story and for the comments; and thank you for all the support you've been giving me - that means a lot!  I'm glad you like this one.:)  There should be some tension coming up between the two brothers over 'you-know-who,' but I think we know who will eventually come out on top (well, relatively speaking anyway - ha!).  Thanks again, Sweetie; I'll get this updated very soon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 04:58 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Anew story,diferent and insteresting,can't wait for more,and for more updates of your other stories,the parent's trap have me in tip toes here and whit my heart in my hands.

hugs.



Author's Response:

Hi, Luisa - What a lovely thing to say; thank you!  I'm starting work on "Parent Trap" right now, and I admit - that one does have a special place in my heart, too.:)  I thank you for reading my stories and for taking the time to leave me feedback.:) 

Brian will find that Justin won't go rushing immediately back into his arms in that story, but the deep love between them is still there - and now they have two very determined girls that are going to work hard on bringing them - and their family - back together.:)  I'll enjoy watching Justin trying to resist as three people gang up against him to try and get him to give into his heart.  Thank you again for the kind words, Luisa!  I will get "Parent Trap" updated very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 02:13 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Kim, great chapter. Thanks for writing all those beautiful stories.

Woww two gay brothers. Which one will Brian choose first? Jared, because ...  Justin !! don't be so shy !! Brian wants you! * giggles *

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Ha!  I love your comments, Marny, they're always so funny!  I know - poor Brian - what's a little (well, not so little!) boy to do with two hot guys?  Fuck them both, I assume - ha!  Seriously, though, I do think he might initially be more interested in Jared and see Justin as more of the 'kid brother' at first.  But we all know it won't take long for our sexy brunet to see who the REAL prize is.  BTW - I'm about to post a St. Patrick's PWP one-shot with the boys - I do hope you like it!  Thanks again, Sweetie - and I'm still hoping for a meeting somehow in June!  Hope everything's going well for you.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 06:07 PM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

It looks so promising!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha!  Thank you for commenting on this story - yes, it's rather in the 'early stages,' but now that I've gotten the 'preliminaries' out of the way (introducing the three boys to each other), we can more onto the more 'interesting' part of the story (wink, wink...).  I DO see a little bit of sibling rivalry here, and I think initially Justin will concede a little to his older and more confident older brother.  That being said, though, we all know where it will be leading eventually, don't we?  I do hope you will continue to enjoy this story.

On another note, I want to thank you, also, for all your ongoing support of my stories and for the faith that you've entrusted in me that I will finish my WIPs.  I appreciate that and I won't let you down.:)  Thanks again!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 12:43 PM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

i like  this chapter    kim



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it!  I promise to update this again soon.  And thank you, also, for taking the time to comment on my stories as well as on so many of the other authors' stories.  I'm sure they appreciate that as much as I do.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 10:29 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Just a little someum someum thought might tickle your fancy.  Was trying to find a review on Randy at Theaterjam3 in the village in Snow Storm.  I found one wow!  wish I could have seen it. I was just wondering if you read it.  Only 20 minute play and very sexy only he and two girls in his underwear.  It's quite an article Tee Hee. lol



Author's Response:

No, I don't think that I did!  But I DID see one somewhere else and wowsa!  What I would have given to see him parading around in his underwear as he 'entertained' himself.  Thanks for letting me know about it, though.  What a shame you can't take pictures in that place for posterity's sake (and 'posterity' is definitely the operative word here - ha!).

BTW - Thank you, also, for that comment about WIPs on the other posting - I am very honored by it and that means a lot to me.  You and your co-workers/friends' support has meant the world to me this past year and I hope I can continue to write stories that you all enjoy, because I certainly treasure the comments that you have given me.  Than you for that, my friend.  Hope you all have a great time tonight and a safe trip to DC!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 09:34 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

My bad!  I missed this one-oh my gosh!  This one is going to be fantastic.  I was born in the country and grew up on my dad's dairy farm.  I am so excited to see how this plays out.  Farms are so much fun although big city people are not in the know.  There is so much to do-barn dances, baked bean suppers, hay rides, rolls in the hay-those are the most fun.  There again there is mucking out stalls, and slopping the hogs not so much fun.  Can't wait for more chapters.  What a happy find.  Brian will be happy here even if he won't admit it. As some of your reviewers say--doing a happy dance.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Hi, Kym!  I can definitely tell that you know what you're talking about!  If you don't mind I may actually use some of your suggestions and include them in this story!  (Definitely the 'rolls in the hay' for our sexy brunet - yum....).  My parents are both from Kentucky, and I can still recall us driving down to the small town of Hitchins (and yes, it's as small as it sounds - ha!) to visit my grandmother who lived right in front of a train track.  I can still hear the sound of a train as it slowly came closer and closer to the house at night while we were sleeping.  And I can still remember having to use the weathered, wooden outhouse out back to go to the bathroom because she had no running water.:)  Not to mention the creaking of the screendoor out front as we went out to the front porch.  There were some challenges, but it was also peaceful and quiet there as well.:)

Brian is definitely going to feel out of place there at times and will be in for some culture shock, but he will also find some other areas quite 'entertaining.'  (wink, wink).  Thank you so much, Kym, for taking the time to review! And thank you for being so supportive of all my stories - I am very appreciative.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 09:21 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

I think I've found a new favorite story, lol! I loved it! Vanderbilt, huh? My friends and I would kill to go to Vanderbilt. My parents wanted to send me to Belmont but we couldn't afford it. Nashville is an awsome city, lots to do! Will the boys make a trip there? Lower Broadway is an extremely fun place to visit! Just a suggestion, lol! Great work, friend! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Stephanie, my friend!  I'm so glad you're enjoying Brian's arrival on another planet - LOL!  Thank you for the suggestion about Vanderbilt; maybe I'll have to check into a little side trip for our two boys to do just that.  That would unerstandably have to be a ways off yet, though, because I think it will take a little time for Brian to figure out just who - and what - he wants.  He might be temporarily sidetracked by the more arrogant, cocky brother, but we all know eventually he will figure out just which one is the special one.:)  And he will  figure out a way to bond with his reluctant 'babysitters' in a unique way.:)

Thank you for reading and commenting, Stephanie.  And thank you for your ongoing support of my stories - that means a lot to me!  I promise to continue updating this one as well as my other two WIPs (and any others along the way) until they are all completed.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

 

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 08:07 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Watch out Taylor boys Brian will be hunting soon.  Ha!  Maybe Justin will be second in line.  Interesting.  Poor Brian down on the farm.  City boy in the boons.  Should be really interesting as we go along.  Next week we are off to D.C. again.  Traveling is fun when on vacation but this is just too much messiness.  Will probably be there for three days,  Just BB and I are going this time.  He's tired of going alone, sooooo I get to go help.  Such a guy.  I have to keep him away from all the people coming on to him.HA!  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, my dear friend!  Always so glad to hear from you.:)  Yes, you'd better go with him for protection sake - ha!  Hope you have a safe trip, but I know you'd probably rather not have to go at all.  But hopefully they appreciate what you do.  I hope, too, that you all have a great time on St. Patrick's Day tomorrow!  Tell everyone I said hello, and thank you for all your support; you all are very special to me.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 04:45 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

I love when Brian first saw Justin.  He is beautiful thats true.  lol  I hope Jared realizes soon who Brian has eyes for.  Can't wait for another update.



Author's Response:

Hi, Bridget!  You're so sweet to read and especially comment; that means a lot to me.  I think despite Brian's admiration for the beautiful younger brother, I think he may take the 'easy' way out first (after all, Brian is very practical - ha!).  And that may spell some angsty moments for our tender-hearted blond; but I think eventually Brian is going to see just how beautiful Justin is both inside and out.

Thank you for taking the time to leave me feedback, Bridget. It's great to know that others enjoy what I write.:)  I promise to update this one again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2012 04:13 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...

Yay! I'm first! I think. Lol. I was in the midst of posting my new story, but had to stop to read this first.

I was so glad to see an update to this very intriging premise. Poor Brian. Such a fish out of water here. And, do I sense some sibling rivarlry developing over the enticing brunet? Ha! Poor little Justin. I guess it's quite obvious which one I'm pulling for! Excellent first meeting. I can't wait to read more of this, my friend. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Oh, no, there go my readers over to yours now - LOL!  And yes, you are first.:) 

Seriously, I think I need to start writing about slaves, sheiks and dominating bosses to pull in a few more reviews, but I don't think I can top you on the possessive Brian stories - you've cornered the niche on that one perfectly!  Ack!  I'm honored that you stopped your posting long enough to read my latest chapter, though.  And you're right - I think we'll see some shifting of attention between both boys before Brian decides whether he wants the easy and willing target - or the more elusive one.  Of course, I think we all know eventually which choice Brian will make (wink, wink).  Thanks for the support, my friend.:)  And I'll be waiting for your new one as always.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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