Reviewer: Placedo (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2023 10:59 AM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...
Hello Kim !
I can't believe, I've never read this one.
Promising start, can't wait to read more.
*hugs*
Dorothée
Reviewer: Suse (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2021 10:01 PM · On: Exchanging One Imprisonment For Another
I dont know how I managed to miss this story but apparently I did. Just finished reading it. Absolutely loved it. Such a change to see Brian in a vulnerable state, even though you tried to hide him behind his usual brash, snarky self. You put just enough angst to keep me reading late into the night. Few moments of tears as well. Have always enjoyed your writing and hope to see more of it. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.
Author's Response: Hi, Susan! Thank you for reading this story and for your kind words. I always love to get feedback, no matter how old the story, and this one was one of my favorites to write. I'm so glad you liked it. I still love these boys and love writing about them. I have several new story ideas that I have started on, so hopefully one day I will get one completed. Thanks again for reading this one and especially for taking the time to leave your encouraging comments; I really appreciate that. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2019 09:17 PM · On: Who's the Jackass Now?
Jared is such a little piece of shit. So glad his "plan" didn't work. I hope Craig woop his ass, but I doubt it. Geez poor Justin <3
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2019 12:55 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....
Loved this chapter so much. And Justin father is so... Ugh. He is too much. He is a teen damn it, but they are suffocating him. He is carrying the whole family on his back.
And Brian being silly xD He is so smitten with Justin hehe. Can't wait for Em to come.
And Jared is such an asshole. I know what is like to have such a brother *sigh*
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2019 09:52 PM · On: The Most Valuable Thing of All
I knew it ! Is Brian going to train True Blue??
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2019 09:47 AM · On: Unexpected Ally
Wonderful chapter as always, Kim. Amazing work considering you had such a stressful time of it with your father's death and all your teaching commitments... That must have been really hard for you. Xx
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2019 04:27 PM · On: The Painful Truth
The relationships you draw here are so touchingly rendered... I believe in all these characters and find myself really rooting for them!
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2019 01:15 PM · On: Head Over Heels
I had a feeling Doug must have spiked Justin's water but I wasn't sure
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 10:20 PM · On: Shifting Dynamics
Bloomin Heck that was hot!
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 09:12 PM · On: Who's the Jackass Now?
It seems these two never get a break :-(
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 02:53 PM · On: Emmett's Arrival
Oh no, this threatens to spoil everything !
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 09:48 AM · On: The Ebb and Flow of Life
What a fantastic scene you have described here in the barn... You imbue the calving with such tension, I was reading with bated breath. And moving the story on in terms of the growing respect between uncle and nephew. Amazing writing. I'm enjoying this story so much.
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2019 10:10 AM · On: Painful Memories
It's a super story... so glad you didn't let your doubting Thomas voice win!
The only anomaly though is why Brian would be kept in the dark about Dale's death... Surely Sarah would've told her sister what had happened to him?
Author's Response: Hello, Elizabeth! Just wanted to pop in to say I appreciate all your comments on this story. I had a lot of fun writing it; especially the parts that made Brian feel like an alien in another world - ha! As for experience, I have visited relatives in Kentucky (was born there, too), but have never really lived on a farm. Would have liked to, though. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you again for all the feedback. I really appreciate that. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2019 09:19 PM · On: Kiss in the Moonlight
Oh my goodness, you ability to render an erotic encounter is incredible! I'm really impressed. I literally can't put this story down!
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2019 07:49 PM · On: In Too Deep
Ooh gosh that was good... I'm very much enjoying the unfolding drama of arrogant teenage Brian being taken down a peg or two!
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2019 05:49 PM · On: Sparring Match
You must have done a tonne of research into running a farm... Either that or maybe you're speaking from firsthand experience? It's wonderfully alive in the writing and the way you describe Brian's reaction to the richness and diversity of farm life is very funny... I can just imagine how visceral it feels for him to be enveloped by all those farm sights and smells, lol
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2019 02:43 PM · On: Shoes....Or Pottery Barn??
Poor Justin, all flustered and jealous ... The sexual tension here was described so well! Damn it, I'm supposed to be doing a job application today but instead I can't tear myself away from this!
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2019 12:53 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League
That was incredibly hot .. What an encounter! Doubly sexy/hot given the vividly rendered background of baking Kentucky sun and straw bales. I'm enjoying this way more than I should be, Phew..
Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2019 10:06 PM · On: A Whole New World - But Something's Familiar...
Mmm a very intriguing set - up. I'm enjoying your writing immensely, Kim... The country scenery is described so vividly and the characters are already imbued with their own life and story rather than just being vehicles for the main action. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 10:46 PM · On: Love Hurts
Maybe Brian can hire a couple of farmhand to help his uncle an enroll at Vanderbilt to pursue a degree in Business and Marketing. That would put an end to issue of dealing with a long distance relationship.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 10:03 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
I knew Uncle Will would have a change of heart when he saw how much racing meant to Brian.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 03:15 PM · On: Envy Is A Four-Letter Word
Okay, I was out of line by inferring that Craig and Jared might have had a hand in Dale's death. But this Doug person seems to have hated the boy. And now, Jared has found him creeping around in a restricted area while convincing Jared to bet against his brother on a long shot? As my granny use to say: "Something in the milk ain't clean!"
Author's Response: Hi, Kim! I'm so glad that we got the email notification problems fixed! It's good to know now when someone is reviewing, so I don't unintentionally overlook any. I'm delighted that you are still reading this one. It's going to have a lot of ups and downs, with (hopefully) some surprises along the way. And yes, in this story, you can safely say that Jared is pretty much a jerk for most of it, while Craig is a much more sympathetic figure in this story than on the show.
I do hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it! Thanks for all the feedback! I do appreciate it very much. ~Kim
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 02:52 PM · On: Love...And Death
Uh oh! Justin version of Dale's accident does smack of sabotage. I never knew down home horse racing could be so cutthroat. And now, my radar is pinging because until Dale died, Justin wasn't winning any races or prize money to give to Craig...hmmm
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 02:21 PM · On: Emmett's Arrival
Gotta love Emmett and his cranberry pink boots. That Jared is a nasty piece of work and I hope he gets his just deserts soon.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 10:44 PM · On: Painful Memories
Thanks for filling us in on what happened to Dale. Brian seems to have finally gotten over his bout of culture shock and is adjusting to the tempo of farm life.
Author's Response: Hi, Kim! I'm so glad that Bob got our review notification problem fixed, or I would have had no idea you were readng this one. But I'm delighted that you are! I do hope that you enjoy the rest. I really liked writing this one, and putting Brian out of his comfort zone - ha! Plus, it was the first one where I had written him younger.
I do hope you like it! Thank you for so much for reading, and especially taking the time to comment! And I do hope we see a new story from you soon. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 06:45 AM · On: Exchanging One Imprisonment For Another
Where's Deb? Young Brian needs a smack upside his head! This first chapter already has me hooked.
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2016 10:07 PM · On: College Life
Wot can I say except another fab story......
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Sharon! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know. ~Kim
Reviewer: augusta70 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2016 05:27 AM · On: College Life
Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I loved this story. You gave us the characters we knew and loved but changed them enough that we could fall in love with them for all new reasons. I adore the teenage Brian you've created here - the way he still has his walls up and his heart guarded, but is able to open himself up and share who he really is more quickly. Even though it's a completey different world and situation, it still feels so right.
I also loved your Parent Trap story for the same reasons - the characters I love but new situations that feel so right and so real. I hated to have both of these end; I wanted to stay with these characters and see what else happened with them.
You have a true gift for writing, and I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing these.
Author's Response: Hi, Sonja! Thank you for reading this story, and for being so thoughtful in leaving a comment, both here and on AO3. I am so delighted that you enjoyed this different sort of Brian, and that you felt he remained IC, despite the alien environment for him. And I thank you, especially for your very kind words; I am very honored to have your support, and I hope I can continue to write stories that you will enjoy. I'm working on the last part of My Heart's Desire, and then I think it's time for a humorous one-shot before moving onto some new, multi-chaptered stories. I'm going to try and not post those, however, until they are either done or almost done, so I don't have such a big gap in between updates.
Thanks again for the support, Sonja! I deeply appreciate that. ~Kim
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2016 10:49 PM · On: College Life
I am sorry I haven't reviewed this story I admit I have been remiss. The listening group has disbanded no room to read and we have been doing doubles for several days. I am bad haven't been here for a while. This story was great abd I liked the way it ended. I certainly won't go away, as long as you write your great stories here. I am a lifer Ha! later!!!
Author's Response: Hi, lindc! Now I feel like I shamed you into reviewing - ha! But I do appreciate it, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm sorry to hear there aren't any more peeps; I admit I was flattered by the attention, but I am grateful to you for leaving me feedback and still being here as support. :)
So happy to see that you are back, lindc! Thank you for all the support as always. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2016 02:58 PM · On: College Life
I've just finished reading and I love it, a wonderful and emotional story with the boys and the farm life. I'm going to miss them all!!! Dear Kim, I hope you visit the boys once again, how it goes with them.
In the future I will definitely read the story again.
Happy weekend! xx
Author's Response: Thank you, Elly! I'm so happy you enjoyed this tale of the boys! Thank you for the support, and for reading. Perhaps I may revisit them again one day. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Fran (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2016 02:01 PM · On: College Life
Beautiful ending and beautiful story, really loved it. Thank you for sharing<3
Fran
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words, Fran! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback; that means a lot to me. ~Kim
Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2016 06:02 AM · On: College Life
Great story. A classic. Congratulations!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kinds words, and for reading! I am happy that you enjoyed it. ~Kim
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2016 12:15 AM · On: College Life
Hey,
I just finished this sweet love story, no question there, I hope with or with out a sequel Brian and Justin will return to the farms and build their businesses there :)
I also really hope the older generation will be around for years to come, they can't be that old being the parents of teenage boys... even though they keep pretending to be...
Out of curiosity, how old do you picture them in this the TtWS universe??
hugs.
Edda
Author's Response: Hi, Edda! Thank you for reading this story, and especially for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that. Not sure about a sequel, but there could definitely be a continuation to this down the road with one, so who knows? Perhaps. As for the parents' and the Walkers' ages, I sort of alluded to that, at least for the Walkers somewhere in the story (more toward the beginning, I think). In my mind, at least, I saw them somewhere in their early 50's perhaps? I thought of them having a child a little later in life; that would have certainly made it harder to watch their only son die at such a young age, and how much it would have affected them.
I'm honored that you chose to read this story. Thank you for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2016 11:34 PM · On: College Life
Beautiful ending for a so beautiful and emotional story
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the comments! I am happy that you enjoyed it.:) ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 10:54 PM · On: College Life
* Sigh * What a beautiful ending, Kim. Perfect.
I'm sad to let this story go. Truly I am. This is one of my favorite of yours. All the imaginary you have created here is just wonderful, as well as your OC. I love Will's speech so much, especially the part adressed to his son. It was so touching.
Again, wonderful, wonderful story. Brian and Justin are so in love! I will definitely reread it again. Thank you my dear friend for this ride. And of course, I won't lie, I'd love for you to revisit this universe one day. I know this isn't the easist time for you lately, but take your time to decide where you want to go from there. Just now I'll be here whatever you decide.
XOXO. And thank you again :)
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend. I have bittersweet feelings about ending this one, but I AM glad to finally get it concluded, since it seems like it's been going on forever! I hate the fact that it takes me so long to update, but it just can't be helped. But I will always finish whatever I start, so I am moving back to MHD for now to get that one done. Then after that I will have to decide whether to continue writing or not.
I may revisit this in the future possibly; depends upon a lot of things, I suppose. Thank you for all the support - and for your friendship. That has really helped to get me through a very difficult time lately. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 10:22 PM · On: College Life
Beautiful ending, thanks Kim.
* big hug *
Author's Response: Hi, Marian! Thank you for reading, and especially taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 09:55 PM · On: Udderly Out of His League
This ff makes me curious.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 03:20 PM · On: College Life
What a great ending to the story
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting, Tamara. I appreciate that deeply. ~Kim
Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 12:23 PM · On: College Life
What a wonderful finale! I must say that i cried with the little speech of Brian, uncle. When he look to the sky talking for is son, almost like, he was listening, lovely and emotional.
But my favorite part you know what it's, the reunion...! And the beautiful ending under the stars. So much happiness.
I have enjoyed very much! Thank you, Kim.
Definitely a story to read again in the future.
Author's Response: Hi, Cristina! Thank you for reading this chapter, and especially for your comments. I'm always happy to have one finally finished, but I did enjoy writing this one, and will miss Will and Sarah, just like I will miss Fin and Tony when I get done with MHD, which I am going to be concentrating on now to get it done. Not sure if I will be writing more stories beyond finishing up MHD, however, except for a one-shot I'm working on for a mental health site. But I thank you and all my readers for the support they have given me. I still do love to write about B and J. Thank you again for the support; I am very grateful. ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2016 05:55 AM · On: College Life
I so enjoy a happy-ever-after ending! I loved Brian's sneakiness when he first arrived at the house, making Justin think he was just dreaming.
Didn't I already tell you about the badge? I could've sworn that I had... but then again, my mind has been doing a very realistic impression of a sieve lately, LOL! I guess use my online name? Toto_too514? Or Trish? I'll let you decide and surprise me!
Great story... really enjoyed the ride!
Author's Response: Hi, Trish! Thank you for the comments, and for reading. Will pass along your info about the badge to my friend. You could have already told me - but I will make sure just the same that she has the info. I think there is room for both names, so unless you tell me otherwise I will ask her to put both on there. :) I appreciate your support, and taking the time to leave feedback. See you in June! :) ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 05:48 AM · On: College Life
Lovely story, lady. Brian and Justin can find their happiness together. Great job.
- Jackie Mag
Author's Response: Thank you, dear friend. Looking forward to seeing you again in June. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2016 03:50 AM · On: College Life
What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I loved every word. Well done!! :)
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you, Cait, for reading and especially for commenting. I enjoyed writing this story, but I am also relieved to finally have it finished, since it takes me quite some time in between updates, and I know some readers don't want to read until stories are done. Now I am heading back over to my other WIP to concentrate on that one, while I'm working on a one-shot in between. I am happy that you enjoyed this story. Thank you again for the support! I greatly appreciate that. ~Kim
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2016 12:39 AM · On: Exchanging One Imprisonment For Another
I have been missing in action for some time due to work and going to IL to help my parents. I am trying to get caught up on my reading. Oh, Kim this was such a lovely chapter. Again I was crying while reading the good-byes. Your writing is some kind of wonderful. LOL!
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I have missed you in more ways than you will ever know. I am glad to see you back on here, and am looking foward to finally getting the chance to meet you! I am glad you are still enjoying this story. I DO have the conclusion written (at last!), but am waiting to get it back from my beta. I'm hoping to get it posted sometime this weekend. Thank you for reading my stories, and for always being so supportive; I greatly appreciate it. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2016 01:31 AM · On: A New Life Begins
I'm confused about some things. One is, in this chapter it says about Brian "He stood there, listening to the familiar sounds of the farm he had grown to love for the past couple of years". Hasn't Brian only been at the farm for one year? The year between the summer when Justin is seventeen and going into his senior year of high school and the next summer when Justin graduates?
Also it's been so long since I've read the chapters from early in the story that I don't remember anything from the first half, so where does it talk about Brian's high school days? He would have to be a great student to get into Vanderbilt University but I don't remember which are the chapters that told us about what kind of a student he was.
Also even though I thought I read the last three chapters carefully I’m still not sure as to what Vic’s plan was. Was it to encourage Brian to apply to university? To arrange things (like with the stud fees for True Blue) so that Brian would be able to leave the farm? Both? Something else?
Author's Response: Hi, Rixa - I could have sworn I replied to this the other day, but apparently it did not save it. First of all, let me preface this by saying the past two weeks have been especially difficult ones for me, so if I come off as harsh here, it is not intentional. To answer the first question, Brian came to live with his aunt and uncle in early summer as Justin was about to enter his senior year, so I suppose it would be more like a year and a half. As for Brian and Vanderbilt, there was discussion before about him being a sports whiz, and how he might have wound up with a scholarship from that, but you will just have to allow me a little fictional license in believing he could get into Vanderbilt whether it was on a sports scholarship or through other means, since I have no idea how stringent their entry requirements are. We do not know the background as to how he got in; perhaps his former marketing instructors from high school wrote recommendation letters for him. As for the last question, Vic was mainly responsible for getting Emmett to come in and help out the Walkers with their farm, freeing Brian from feeling so responsible for taking care of them, and persuading his racing buddy, Eddie, to help keep True Blue in racing form and arrange for the stud fees to the Walkers for some additional income.
As a story written merely for non-paid pleasure purposes, I hope you will give me some leeway if the reality strays a little from the actual story. I hope you are enjoying it in any case (?), and I thank you for taking the time to comment. I DO have the last part written, and am waiting to get it back from my beta. I'm hoping the conclusion will be posted this weekend. ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 11:30 PM · On: A New Life Begins
Omg I have moved houses and had no internet for a few weeks and then we had outages so I missed chapters. But woohoo I have read three in a row! What a treat 😀 I loved the scenes of love with Brian and Justin saying later not good bye for our boys and the goodbyes to the Taylor's and Walkers I was so tear hi couldn't read lol. I look forward to the next chapter as per usual
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! I've missed you. Welcome back. ;) I'm happy that you are still following this story, and are enjoying it. So close now...working on it as I am writing this. I really want to get this story done, so I will keep working on it until it's finished; then I can devote more time to updating my other WIP faster.
Thank you for always being so supportive of my stories. Sometimes I feel kind of discouraged, and your kind words and consistent support mean a lot. You've been a reader of mine for so long, and I truly am grateful for that. ~Kim
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 04:56 AM · On: A New Life Begins
I missed this chapter with all the reboots. So happy to see the boys together again. Deb, of course, is a hoot......
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the comments, Monica! I thought Debbie was a good fit here. She will be in the next/last part as well. I deeply appreciate your support. ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2016 08:06 PM · On: A New Life Begins
Aw, I so love Debbie and you do her justice so wonderfully. This is exactly the Debbie we all know and love!
And you're really an evil woman, leaving us like that. Please hurry with your next update, I can't wait to see Justin's reaction!
Thank you for this beautiful chapter :)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend. Thank you for your feedback. I couldn't resist putting Debbie in this part of the story; I thought she would be the perfect fit for a landlady to two very besotted college boys.:)
Thank you for reading, and for the support. Will be thinking about you. *hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2016 04:03 AM · On: A New Life Begins
Nice to have Debbie on board! Vic's plan about the stud fees was ingenious!
I'm not usually a morning person, but I have a feeling tomorrow morning is going to be quite a spectacle at the boarding house! (If Brian can wait until morning, that is!)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the feedback, Trish. Yes, the morning is going to bring some surprises.;) I hope you enjoy it. Up to around 4,000 words on the (hopefully) final part, so I hope to get it posted soon. Then will be going back to "My Heart's Desire." After that, not sure if I will be writing anymore. Looking forward to seeing you in June. :) ~Kim
BTW, don't remember if you wanted a souvenir badge for the con or not, or if you told me so. My friend has made up a wonderful design as a memento. No cost. If you want one, send me an email with how you want it to read, and I will pass this information onto her, and I can show you the design she made.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 09:23 PM · On: Sweet Sorrow
I love the details of your writing, the little things that make my mind envision the scene and the atmostphere. The dim light. The night. Brian rocking back and forth. The intensity. i just love it
Brian is so sweet here. I'm amazed because your love for Justin just shines throught the page.
You know how much I love this particular story and all the atmosphere you have created. I will be sad to let this story go, but what an accomplishment :)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave another review, my friend. I appreciate that more than you know. BTW, will be heading back to your story again shortly. Thanks again for the support. XOXO ~Kim
Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2016 07:38 PM · On: Riding and Ropin'
I'm sure that with Vic's plan , Brian and Justin will be together.
amazing story. i love it.
kisses 😘
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Susana! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.;) Everything should be resolved coming up in the last chapter, which I am working on now. Thank you for all the support! Can't wait to see you in June. Besos! XOXO ~Kim
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2016 02:28 AM · On: Riding and Ropin'
Hi Kim : ) late as usual, seems to be a regular occurrence with me. Been going through a lot of different things lately; it’s hard to keep up.
LOL, water fights are so much fun, especially on hot summer days ; ) Can’t wait to find out what Vic’s plan was : ) looking forward to the next chapter. *Hugs* Janet
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend! Sorry I overlooked your review! I appreciate that so much.;) I hope things - while hectic - are going well for you and your family. I'm working on the last chapter right now, so hopefully it will be posted soon, and then I will concentrate on "My Heart's Desire." While I will miss these characters a lot, I will also be relieved to have another story completed.
I'm looking forward to more of your cowboy story! You describe living that sort of life so well.;) Thanks for reading this latest chapter, my friend, and especially for taking the time to comment. That means a great deal to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 11:00 PM · On: Riding and Ropin'
Hi Kim! I love this chapter :) Brian and Justin are so sweet! I also love Will and Sarah. I really will miss these characters once you'll be done. I have an idea about Vic's plan but I'm not quite sure yet. So I will have to be patient to find out :) I really will miss this story... Thank you so much for writing it!
Author's Response: Hello, my friend! I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. :) I think I'll miss Will and Sarah as well; just like I will Fin and Tony once I'm done with the other WIP. I'm going to keep working on this one to get the last/final chapter concluded, so I can concentrate on my other WIP.;) Perhaps one day I can return to visit them again.;)
Thanks for reading this chapter, bearing with me in between updates, and for your friendship, which means the most to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 06:03 PM · On: Riding and Ropin'
The suspense of what they have planned is REALLY killing me here. I wish we could have at least gotten a bit of a hint...but alas I will try to be patient until the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara! Well, anytime someone is impatient for more, I am flattered, so thank you.;) At least it was a nice, long chapter.;) And if it's any consolation, I AM working on the last part now, which will contain a few surprises, but also wrap up the loose ends. I want to continue working on this one as an exception, rather than going back to MHD like I normally do, so I can get this one concluded and then concentrate on my other WIP (along with a new one.;)
Thanks again for reading, and for your support, Tamara! I really appreciate that. ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2016 04:14 PM · On: Riding and Ropin'
Darn, now we have to wait to find out exactly what the plan is. Love how Brian used his money. His reason's weren't quite the best. He wanted time with Justin, but the results were good. The work got done and two boys earned some well needed money. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Yeah, Brian's got a good heart, but will also need to be a little mindful of taking good care of his finances, now that he is in a much more affluent position.;)
I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter! I'm working on the last part now, which will resolve the remaining issues, and explain Vic's plan. Thank you for continuing to read and review, and again, a BIG thank you for being our most prolific reviewer.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2016 02:56 PM · On: Riding and Ropin'
Glad to find a new chapter of the "stallion".
Love it - as always ;)
Looking forward to the solution you have in mind, think I might have an idea ...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that, especially since I realize sometimes it can be difficult to do that anonymously with those pesky security numbers. :)
I'm delighted that you have been enjoying this story! I am working on the last part now, so it shouldn't be too long before it's posted, and then I will concentrate on wrapping up my other WIP ( I also have a new story in the works).
Thanks again for your support! ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2016 04:04 AM · On: Riding and Ropin'
Always nice to see an update! Can't wait to find out what sort of plan Uncle Vic has cooked up for the boys!
Author's Response: Hi, Trish! Sorry for the delay in responding...sigh...if I only had about 24 more hours in the day - or even an extra hour or two! I am working on the next/last chapter now, because I really want to get this story concluded and concentrate on not only my other WIP, but on a new story behind the scenes.;)
The idea of Vic's will be resolved - along with the loose ends - coming up. I'll have the last part updated as soon as I can. Thanks for hanging in there with me, and for the support. I truly appreciate that, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: SallouAmri (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2015 09:02 PM · On: Love Hurts
Hi there Kim!
Remember me? I have decided that I might as well take the time to leave a review on your exhilarating and beautiful stories, so I made an account. You know what? Saying your stories are exhilarating and beautiful is just me keeping my cool. They are totally mind blowing. Trust me, I am not even close to exaggerating. Every last chapter just makes me extremely excited for the next. And the thing is, I judge a lot when it comes to fanfiction and the way the writer describes emotions and settings and time and all these little things, so whenever I read a story, I can't help but have high expectations. And you never dissapoint. You just keep getting better and better. The way you write everything carefully in detail is just so wonderful, inspiring and creative and makes me doubt that you're 100% human. I have been reading your stories for quite a while now and even if me saying this might seems totally strange and out of place, I am proud of you. I really am and I hope you are proud of yourself too. I personally didn't think QAF could've been any better, but you proved me wrong (I really shouldn't say that, but it's the truth). You keep on fulfilling every fantasy I've had of Brian and Justin. And me being a married lesbian woman helps me appreciate this even more, because it does really show that "we" are capable of love and marriage and having kids and all those fun things that hetero couples have been doing for eternity.
I think I should leave it there for today. It's Christmas tomorrow, so my little boys will be running around the house making as much noise as possible to wake me and my wife up before dawn. Wish me luck. Merry Christmas, I really do wish you the best. Have fun with your family and friends and stuff your face with as much food as you can (I know I will).
Love, Salloua
Author's Response: Hello, Salloua! Welcome to MW as a member, first of all.
Wow, I am so overwhelmed with happiness over your kind words about my writing. I cannot thank you enough for that. I am humbled by it, but so happy that you enjoy what I write. To know that someone enjoys what I write is very satisfying to me. I love to write about these two characters. Back in 2009 (I discovered them actually after the show went off the air through You Tube), they were the inspiration I needed to have enough courage to start posting stories online about them, and even now I still love to write about them. To know that others still like to read about them, also, is such wonderful encouragement to me, so again, I appreciate everything you wrote. I admit that sometimes I do not have a lot of confidence at times in what I write, even after all this time, so words like yours truly do help, as well as the feedback.:)
You might be happy to know that I just completed a multi-chaptered new story for a fan fiction challenge over on Live Journal, and after it's posted there (after a week), I can start posting it on here.:) So I hope you will enjoy that one as well. I MAY also have a short one-shot in the "Parent Trap" universe coming up, if I can find enough time to do it.
I hope you and your family are having a wonderful Christmas today! And I hope the coming year is a happy and peaceful one for you and your loved ones
Thank you again for all your kind words. i appreciate that so much.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2015 02:56 AM · On: Love Hurts
We are grateful to you for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I hope Emmett and Uncle Vic can come up with a good solution for our boys. You made tears come to my eyes when the boys were discussing thier love for each other and being apart. No goodbyes.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi, Dee Dee! Thank you for your kind words, my friend. I think you know me well enough by now that I won't let the boys stay unhappy forever.;) The resolution to this story should be coming fairly soon. It's been a long journey for them (and for me), but I have enjoyed writing about them in this 'verse.';)
I hope you have a wonderful Christmas, and a Happy New Year. We already know of a couple of exciting things coming up, but the best part will be finally getting to meet you! Looking forward to that.;) Thanks again. ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2015 03:07 PM · On: Love Hurts
I'm really curious about Vic's idea ...
And I trust in you to find the perfect solution for Justin's and Brian's future - together ;)
Merry Christmas and a happy New Year to you, too!
Author's Response: Hi, there! Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave feedback. I know sometimes it can be a real pain in the neck, trying to do that with those pesky security numbers, so I appreciate you doing that.;)
I will get this updated just as soon as I can; I'm in the middle at the moment of finishing up a multi-chaptered fic behind the scenes for a fan fiction community, so that one should be posted here within a couple of weeks. But rest assured, I will be continuing to work on updating this one, as well as my other WIP until they are both done.
Thanks again for your support; Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you as well! ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2015 10:32 AM · On: Love Hurts
Hi, Kim! I’m happy to see you updated again so soon, it’s a wonderful Christmas present!
It’s a very rare thing to see Brian and Craig bond. I loved their conversation, it was both hilarious and serious. Brian’s depression over Justin’s going away is palpable – and I love Craig’s concern. Nothing is more wonderful than seeing love he gives Justin after all misunderstandings.
It was also amazing to see Sarah and Justin’s interaction. With such supportive in-laws, I’m absolutely confident in our boys’ future.
And finally, Brian and Justin together… the tenderness and love between them is incredible, I absorb every word – your style is very beautiful, Kim. It’s sad that Brian is rather pessimistic now, but it’s also very in-canon, he’s always been like that.
Merry Christmas, Kim! I look forward to seeing your updates in the new year :)
Author's Response: Hi, Katrin! As always I look forward to your thoughtful comments.;) As for my style I am glad you like it. I guess I'm just a big, romantic sap.;) And while I know what a jerk Craig was on the show, I'm actually enjoying writing him here in a more positive vein. I do hope you contunue to enjoy the rest of it; I see probably a couple more chapters to go as we head toward Justin's journey off to college.
Thanks again for all the consistent support, Katrin. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas as well, and a very happy and peaceful New Year. ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2015 09:42 AM · On: Love Hurts
** sigh ** I adore this! I can't wait to see what happens to the boys. This chapter describes so well their feelings for each other. Loved every word :) thank you
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend! I appreciate your support so much, and your friendship and I am happy that you are continuing to enjoy this story. It is slowly coming to an end; I would think perhaps a couple more chapters (?). Thanks for reading, and for the feedback; I am very grateful for that. ~Kim
Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2015 05:37 PM · On: Love Hurts
Oh, my heart is breaking for them. :-( But I can't wait for the next chapter!
Merry Christmas to you!
Author's Response: Hi, Frances! I know what you mean; Justin is excited, and Brian is happy for his success, but they both have aching hearts at the thought of being separated. I'll have to see what I can do about that.;)
Thank you for reading this story, and especially for the feedback. I really appreciate that. Merry Christmas to you, too! ~Kim
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2015 03:02 PM · On: Love Hurts
Love this story. Love how Craig got caught out with his and Jen's ages being the same as Justin and Brain's....LOL Ahh the joys of parenthood when it comes back to bite you in the butt.
Merry Christmas and have a very happy New Year......
Author's Response: Hi, Monica! I'm so thrilled that you're still enjoying this story. Thank you for letting me know that. :) Yes, I thought it would be ironic to show Craig that he and Jennifer's romance wasn't all that different from the boys. I have been having fun writing them in this different environment, and I will miss them. I'm thinking probably a couple more chapters before it's done.
Thanks again for all the support, and I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year, too.;) ~Kim
Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2015 07:01 AM · On: Love Hurts
They are in love and can not be separated .
I hope Vic can help them .
Kisses
Author's Response: Hi, Susana! Kisses to you, too, my friend. I am happy you are still enjoying this story. Looking forward to seeing you in June! I hope you have a wonderful holiday. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2015 04:52 AM · On: Love Hurts
Neat chapter. Nice to see the boys fully expressing what they're feeling. And I wonder what Vic is up to? Merry Christmas to you, too, missy.
Jackie Mag
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend. And a very Merry Christmas to you and your family. Tell Alex I said hello.;) Can't wait to see it, and I know you fee the same. Looking forward to seeing you in June! I think I just may have the perfect poster for Randy to sign, too, after Cabaret.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2015 04:12 AM · On: Love Hurts
I loved the ‘what are your intentions’ conversation Craig had with Brian.
Loved the heavy but good angst about Brian’s fear of Justin leaving him behind, emotionally and physically.
This story still owns me.
Thanks for providing this before Christmas and Happy Holidays!
S:)
Author's Response: Hi, Sandra! Thank you for continuing to read this story, and for your thoughts on the parts that you liked about this chapter; that is always very helpful to me.;) And that line about the story 'owning you' is wonderful. It really makes me happy to know that you still enjoy this story. I have really liked writing their characters in this unique setting. I'd say maybe a couple more chapters before it's all said and done. Thanks again for all your support, and I hope you have a wonderful holiday, too.;) ~Kim
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2015 08:59 PM · On: Love Hurts
Hi Kim -I have to say, I like this Craig so much better than the way he was portrayed in the TV show, that one was a total jerk >:( . I’m wondering how Brian and Justin will handle the separation once Justin goes off to Vanderbilt, though it will be interesting to see what Vic and Emmett come up with ; )
Hope you have a great Christmas, my friend : ) *Hugs* Janet
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend. Yes, Craig is much more civil here. Still a little wary of Brian, but much more willing to accept Brian and Justin's relationship. Now I have to find a way to make these lovers happy.
I think I can wrap this up (hopefully) in a couple more chapters. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas, my friend. I'll be thinking of you and your family. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2015 06:07 AM · On: Love Wins
Brian is so good for Justin. And it's good that Justin is making Brian examine what he wants to do. Lovely.
- Jackie Mag
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Great to hear from you.;) Yes, I agree with you about Brian. He, too, needs to find his way in life, just like Justin. Whether they can find a way to be together, though, remains to be seen, but I will address it before the story is finished. Thank you for continuing to read this story, and for your support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2015 12:31 AM · On: Love Wins
Lovely chapter. I am wondering when Brian will finally decide his future. I am sure that Justin will be a big help and a big part of it.
Author's Response: Hi, Dee Dee! Yes, I don't think anything - even a long distance - will keep these two apart. The boys' future - and whether they will find a way to stay together - will be resolved before I am done.;) I will get this updated again very soon. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to comment, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2015 01:49 PM · On: Love Wins
Aahh, Brian's future in advertising finally coming up ... Of course they will go to college together, will they? :-)
Still enjoy this story very much!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading, and especially taking the time to let me know that you are still enjoying this. I really appreciate that! I will get this updated again very soon. Thanks again for the support. *Hugs*~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2015 01:33 PM · On: Love Wins
This chapter made me cry happy tears. I just wish Craig would stop hoping for the boys to break up....because I don't think that's likely to happen ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara! Sorry for the late reply; my charger cord malfunctioned on my Surface and I had to get a replacement. I think Craig is just trying to be cautious with his youngest son. He realizes that the two DO care deeply for each other, but he is still a bit afraid of Justin being hurt. I do think he's come a long way since the beginning of their relationship, and wouldn't do anythiing to stop them. I also think you are correct; no matter what Craig's prediction, I don't think he's going to be able to separate them, no matter what the distance.;)
I'll be getting this udpated again very soon. Thank you as always for reading, and especially for the feedback, Tamara. Both are very much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2015 09:54 PM · On: Love Wins
Wonderful chapter again Kim. Great that Brian and Justin both listen to others and then talk together about the issues. Hopefully Brian will work out soon his career path
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend! So glad that you are still enjoying this story. Thank you for always taking the time to leave me feedback. And yes, I will answer what will happen with the boys before I am done.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2015 09:51 PM · On: Love Wins
another really nice chapter Kim - although I gotta admit that I was hoping for a little off the track action as well...lol
how fun to see the budding marketing genius begin to come out - love watching this relationship grow - and look forward to see if my hunch for the future pans out...
thanks for another great read
Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! Now you know I can't include smut every time.;) But I certainly think there will be more coming up.;) And I WILL answer the dilemma for the boys when Justin goes to school. Thank you for reading, and for all the support. So good to see you back on here. I promise to get caught up on your stories just as soon as I can. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2015 07:35 PM · On: Love Wins
Loved this chapter Kim! Amazing writing as always. I know we are nearing the end, but I will savor every update until then ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend, for reading and for your kind words. That means a lot to me. BTW, working on Ch. 14, but my darn charger cord to laptop isn't working! Will have to go out this weekend and get another one, so might be a small delay in getting back to you. Thanks again. ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2015 06:33 PM · On: Love Wins
Still loving this.
S:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sandra! Nice to hear that readers are still reading enjoying this one.;) I have probably a few more chapters to go. I hope you continue to enjoy it. ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2015 03:28 PM · On: Love Wins
Nice update! Looking forward to "decision time," for Brian and Justin. Can't imagine Brian sitting home on the farm when Justin heads off to school. I'm sure he'll come up with some sort of plan to keep them togther AND take care of his aunt & uncle.
Author's Response: Hi, Trish! Yeah, I can see Brian wanting to take care of his aunt and uncle, but I really don't see him sitting there on the farm as the 'doting housewife,' so to speak, while Justin is in school. So we'll have to do something about that.;) Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for the feedback, my friend. BTW, hope to hear about you attending Photo Op's premiere. Wish I could go, but just too bad a time to do it. Heard it's only 9 minutes long (?!). *Hug* ~Kim
Reviewer: Ersilia (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2015 03:21 PM · On: Exchanging One Imprisonment For Another
Ehi Kim! Here I am, religiously waiting for the end of your story....just to make you know I'm supporting you...step by step ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Ersilia! How kind of you to stop in just to let me know that you are waiting to read this. That is so nice of you, and is great to hear. I AM getting close. I'm thinking a few more chapters. So I do hope you will be able to read it soon. Thanks again for all the support.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2015 02:53 PM · On: Love Wins
Annother terrific chapter. Justin with Brian equals winner.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I am delighted that you are still enjoying this story. :) And a special thanks to you for being so supportive of so many writers on here. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2015 10:57 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
I was so happy to see this chapter! It seems ages have passed since you’ve updated this, I miss it so much.
The scene with Justin throwing himself in Brian’s arms was so sweet and touching, you described it in such a beautiful way. The connection between the boys is palpable and rare.
I just thought that it would be awesome to see a movies based on this story. It has such a unique atmosphere, I savor every line of every chapter – it all would look awesome on the screen.
The moment with Will and Sarah broke my heart. Maybe it’s because the nature surrounds them here, but everything feels stronger – love and grief as well. I admire Will for his strength, and every moment he shares with Brian is so special. He is strict and unyielding sometimes, but it’s obvious how much his cares for the boy. I hope Brian feels it.
I understand why Justin is sp hesitant about riding again. He needs some time. I hope his parents won’t push him into something he is not ready for.
Thanks, Kim! It was an amazing update, as always. I look forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Hi, Katrin! Thank you as always for reading, and especially commenting. Sigh...I know. How I wish I could update faster! But I just posted the next part, so hopefully you will continue to enjoy it. Each time I think this story is at its end, it keeps going.;) But I don't want readers to think I'm rushing this just to get it finished. But it is winding down toward its conclusion. The main issue I will need to address is what happens when the boys are separated. That will be answered before I'm done.
Thanks again for all your support, Katrin! I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Rachael E (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2015 10:11 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
I'm still loving story Kim! I can't wait for more updates. I can fully understand Justin's hesitation on the track. I just hope he can pull through it before the race!
Author's Response: Hi, Rachel! You're very kind to let me know that you are stil enjoying this story. Thank you for letting me know; I greatly appreciate that. This has been a different sort of story for the boys, but I have really been enjoying writing it. Thank you again for the support; I should be getting this one updated soon. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2015 05:35 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
The two reminded me of Romeo and Juliet in the beginning of this chapter. I loved it.
Happy to see Craig going to work to take some pressure off Justin. Perhaps Justin is no longer feels the need to compete now that his family is no longer dependant on him.
Author's Response: Hi, Sandra! Sorry it has taken me a few days to respond to your review. My additional hours at work are really affecting my response time. I like your analogy to Romeo and Juliet. :) And yes, the dynamics in the family are definitely changing, and will continue to change, as will the boys' relationship. Thank you for continuing to read and review this story, Sandra. I'm delighted that you are still enjoying it. 😊 *Hugs *Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2015 12:24 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
Nice update... I hope Justin gets over his jitters quickly.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Trish! Justin's hesitation will be addressed more in the next chapter. I think a certain brunet may be able to help him just a bit.;) I'll have the next part up as soon as I can. Thanks again for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 12:25 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
I'm so in love with this story... The scene between Sarah and Will was so beautiful. I love that Sarah is defending Brian and that Will let the boys spend some time together. And Justin had so much to deal with, it's not surprising he's holding back... Again, anxiously waiting for the next part even if I'm not looking forward to let this story go... Thank you for another wonderful chapter :)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! It means a lot to me that you have been enjoying this story so much. Thank you for letting me know that. The scene with Will and Sarah was bittersweet, but I had been wanting to write a scene with them at Dale's grave for some time. I felt like this was the right time for Will to come to grips more with his son's death.
Thank you for reading, and for the support. Both are greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2015 09:22 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
What a lovely chapter. The love between our boys is so special. Will and Sarah's sadness brought tears to my eyes. I can't imagine loosing a child. What is Justin going to do. Will Brian ride for him?
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi, Dee Dee - always a delight to hear from you, my friend.;) Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for leaving your thoughts. I will be further addressing Justin's 'stage fright/PTSD' in the next chapter, as well as moving the story forward a little more toward its pendng conclusion. Thank you again for always being so supportive. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 04:09 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
So great - another chapter. My heart broke for Will and Sarah - I can't imagine outliving your child, let alone trying to come to terms with it. Jared really needs a boot up his arse. Hopefully Justin's fears will dissipate as he continues to practice - Vic is right - Justin's heart may not be in it anymore but he'll want to go out 'with a bang'. What better way to show those who wanted to hurt him he won't be beaten down.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for the feedback, Monica! Yes, it was hard to write the scene with Sarah & Will. It is a bittersweet day for them on Dale's birthday. But I do think Will is in a better place emotionally now, partly due to Brian helping to ease his grief just a bit. And good point about wanting to show others that Justin is not afraid of what happened to him. I will be further addressing his fear in the next part. I'm probaby envisioning maybe 3, 4 more chapters to this before it's done. Thank you for all the support! I greatly appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2015 10:03 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
Loved this story from the very beginning, and I'm happy to see it continued.
Brian and Justin together as teenagers, on a farm, so adorable. Looking forward to what you have in mind about their future, maybe going to college together?
Author's Response: Thank you for reading this story, and especially for taking the time to leave feedback; I greatly appreciate that.;) I have enjoyed writing B and J in this environment, which is so different than where they would be typically. I will kind of miss that farm.;) I see maybe 2 - 4 more chapters before it's concluded. Thank you again for the support! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 06:52 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
Oh you made me cry with Sarah and Will at Dale's gravesite.
I do hope Justin can get past his anxiety about racing.
And I do love seeing a playful/loving Brian, thanks for that.
Thanks for sharing, always happy to see your updates :-)
Author's Response: Hi, Melinda! Yes, it was rather sad. But at least they know what happened now, and they have Brian.;) I'm glad that you have been enjoying this story, and look forward to the updates.;p) I do have a bit more to tell - perhaps 2, 3 chapters? - before it's said and done. Thank you for reading, and for the support! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 12:11 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
OH poor Justin he has all the pressure to help out the family and now he has some PTSD from the recent events. However I love the interaction with between the boys.
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! Thank you for your support, and for the feedback! I could just see the two boys over in the apple orchard, flirting with each other.;) And Brian's uncle is finally coming around to accepting them together. Unfortunately, they may very well be separated come next fall. And Jared needs to get a job - ha! I do think he's finally turned a corner in his behavior, though, after their brush with death, but old habits due hard as they say. It will take a little more time before he loses all the arrogance and conceit, but he IS getting better, and I do think that was a wake up call.
Thanks again for reading, and especially taking the time to comment, Chris! I truly appreciate all the support you give me, and have always given me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Ersilia (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2015 12:01 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
Hey Kim...here I am again to support you....all in my best interest...I'm not reading this FF..till it's completed but I want you to know that I'm here, checking everyday if this work is in progress :P...don't let me down ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Ersilia! That means so much to me, that you would do that, even though you're waiting to read it. Thank you! It IS getting very close to completion; I would say perhaps a couple more chapters? So I do hope once I get it done that you will enjoy it. I have certainly enjoyed writing about them in this setting that is so atypical for where Brian would normally be.;) Thank you for taking the time to indicate your support. That is deeply appreciated. And don't worry; like all my other stories, this one WILL be completed. I know only too well how it is to get so caught up in a story, only to discover to my great disappointment that it is - and never will be - completed. :( One of my pet peeves as well as a reader, so I totally understand you waiting. :)
*Hugs* Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 02:48 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
I'm just going to say a simple I love this story...I hope it doesn't end anytime soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, Tamara! It makes me happier than you know to hear you say you are enjoying it. I probably have a couple more chapters before it's put to bed, so to speak. I have really enjoyed writing in this 'verse that is so different than Brian's normal environment, but I think it's time to end it soon. The interest in it seems to be waning for whatever reason - perhaps because Dale's death has been resolved, perhaps due to all the amazing stories on here right now - but for whatever reason, I think it's time, and the story plot is winding down. That said, though, I DO have some issues still to address, and with my penchant for being wordy, I may need more than two chapters. ;)
Thanks again for all the support you give me and so many other writers on this site. Without readers - and writers, such as you - I think the large majority of us would still be motivated to keep these boys alive. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 12:47 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
awwww - Brian won't let his man hold back - on the track - or anywhere...
how nice to visit this story once again - love the bantor and fun - especially in Uncle Will -
not to mention that our boys are always hot hot hot
thanks Kim
...Charle
Author's Response: Hi,. Charle! So delighted to hear from you.;) I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you reading, and for the comments, my friend. And thank you for sticking with me in between updates. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2015 08:58 PM · On: Apples and Butterflies
You could feel the sadness brought on by the celebration of Dale's birthday. Now Justin has to get back in the saddle so to speak. Perhaps Brian can help?
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - yes, I think Justin is going to need a little support from a certain other boy.;) Thank you as always for reading and for taking the time to comment. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2015 03:20 AM · On: Apples and Butterflies
Brian and Justin are so cute together here. I'm sure that Brian is worried about what will happend when/if they have to part ways.
Jackie Mag
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Yes, I suspect both boys are regretting that eventuality. But hopefully love will find a way to keep them together.;) Thanks for reading, and for your comments. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2015 04:58 PM · On: A Father's Love
I'm rereading this story again and wanting to say that it's still fantastic. So well written and... ahem... hot. ;-)
Author's Response: Hi, Frances! Please accept my apologies for not responding to your comments. I'm usually very conscientious about that, and I'm sorry I overlooked them. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this fic, and I wanted to assure you that I have not forgotten it. I'm working on the next part right now, so hopefully it won't be too long before I have it updated again. Thank you again for reading, and for the support; I really appreciate that! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2015 04:47 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
Hi Kim.
LOL, “you win some…you lose some” that is so true in any sport, you can’t win them all, no matter how much you want to.
I’m really glad Brian’s Aunt and Uncle are going to let Brian keep driving although I can definitely understand their reasons for fearing for his safety. I’m wondering (hoping ) if Brian and Justin will eventually be able to race together.
Great chapter, looking forward to more too : ) *Hugs* Janet
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 08:23 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
The playful banter between Brian and Justin is so heartwarming – I love seeing them so carefree and happy for once. Like normal teenagers who found love, without dark and dangerous secrets haunting them.
William and Sarah’s relationship is so sweet, loving and – I don’t know, comfortable, that I can’t get enough of them. They’re a good example, the show that love can live for a very long time. Only now I realized how incredible it is that they didn’t break up over the death of their son. A lot of people can’t stay together after this kind of tragedy, it breaks them, destroys their relationship. But Will and Sarah demonstrated that staying together and loving each other through everything is possible. I love them, you created an amazing couple. I love how devoted and protective of Brian they are. Their conversation together was so touching… finally Brian has found his real family, the one that cares about him.
Thank you, Kim, for another captivating, beautiful chapter. I look forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Hi, Katrin! No, I thank YOU for the encouragement and for reading this latest chapter. I have been somewhat discouraged lately with my writing, so your kind words are greatly appreciated. I will update this again as soon as I can, along with My Heart's Desire. I'm actually working behind the scenes to write a new story, also, but probably won't post it until I'm finished. Thanks again for taking the time to review. I am very grateful. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:11 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
AHA!!! i KNEW YOU WOULD COME TO THIS AFTER A FASHION AND THE ANGST DIED DOWN. I CAN SEE WHERE THIS MIGHT GO AND THE MONEY THAT MIGHT BE WON, GOOD CHAPTER. SRY FOR THE CAPS SOMETHING WRONG WITH THIS DANG COMPUTER-IT'S OFF MORE THAN IT SHOULD BE. HAVE TO HAVE IT CHECKED AGAIN!! WE ARE ALL GOOD HERE-LOOKS LIKE WE MAY BE LOSING BB TO ANOTHER HOSPITAL. WERE ARE VERY UPSET BUT HAPPY FOR HIM--THINGS CHANGED. HE SAID HE IS GETTING OLDER AND WANTS TO SLOW DOWN A LITTLE AND ENJOY SOME THINGS MORE. I GUESS HE IS GOING TO BE TEACHING. WILL LET YOU KNOW AS THINGS UNFOLD. LEE IS DOING WELL, STILL SAVING MONEY FOR HIS OWN PLACE. DON'T KNOW WHEN THAT WILL BE-MY GUESS IT WILL BE SOON. EVERYONE IS MOVING AROUND, NOT TO MY LIKING, BUT THAT'S LIFE. LOL
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - sorry for the late response; it has been so busy for me lately. I'm sorry to hear that you will likely be losing Brian to another hospital, but I can understand him wanting to do what is best for him. Sounds like Lee is doing well; I am very happy to hear that. He is such a sweet man. And you sound like such a compassionate, caring friend. He is lucky to have you in his life.;)
I am slowly heading toward the conclusion of this story, as well as Lee's favorite. Don't know how long it will take, but I'm going to try and show some restraint before I start another one, and at least have a good amount of it written before I post it. In the meantime, it's good to know there are a lot of other talented writers on here to keep everyone interested. Thanks again for all the support, lindc! Hope you have a good weekend, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 03:33 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
Very nice update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the comment, Trish. See you soon! ~Kim
Reviewer: Tiggerchihuahuas (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 03:03 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
hi Kim: I loved it of course! You know it's my absolute fav fanfic!!! Can't wait to see where the story ultimately goes!
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I'm so glad that you are still enjoying this story!:) I probably have a few more chapters to go before it's done, including what happens to our boys once Justin goes off to college.;)
Thank you not only for reading, but also leaving some feedback; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim
Looking forward to seeing you again next year, too! :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:49 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
I don’t have words to express how touching this chapter was. Keep up the phenomenal work Kim ;)
Author's Response: You're very kind, Tamara. Thank you for reading, and for the encouragement, my friend. It is much appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2015 12:58 AM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
Hi Kim!
As always, it's great to read an update to this story. And, as with your other stories, it's always bittersweet knowing the last chapters are nearing. I know you will wrap this up in great style, with our boys having a beautiful future ahead of them, but it's always hard to say goodbye to them even in a fanfic platform. I know this only too well!
This was a fabulous chapter, my friend. There has been so much character development throughout, and your constant attention to detail never ceases to amaze me. I'm afraid I can't discipline myself to keep that up in my own projects. I might start out doing so... but, then I either get lazy or RL just throws too many curves. :)
Hang in there. I know how discouraging it is when the feedback isn't so forthcoming. I'm trying to keep going myself. Thank you for the update, and looking forward to more. *Hugss* Janet
Author's Response: Hi, Janet - glad to have you back from your trip.;) I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts, and for the encouragement. We both know what you mean about feedback. Hard to keep going sometimes, and it starts to make you question yourself, at least as far as my writing goes. I start to think, is it any good anymore? But like you, I will never leave a story unfinished, and I care about this one, as well as my other one, so I will forge on until the end.;)
I'm still playing catchup on stories my self, but should be heading over to Bound by Fate shortly.;p) Thanks again for all the support. *Hugs* back ~Kim
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 11:53 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
ah my friend - I was so excited to get home from work and find a new chapter of this story I almost missed...lol...I couldn't have been more wrong when I originally thought it might not be one I would enjoy!
every chapter just keeps getting better and better - I love this head over heels Brian and the relationships he is forging - and I am still looking anxiously ahead to see how the last few twists are resolved - you are certainly the master of them
thanks for the chapter - with all you have on your plate - it is even more appreciated!
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Hi, Charle! (waves hand). I'm always so thrilled to see you on here, and especially reading one of mine. Thank you for your thoughts, my friend. I'm glad you decided to give this story a try, and that you have been enjoying it. And yes, I do have a few more issues to resolve before it's finished; the unanswered questions will be handled before it's complete.
Thanks again for reading, and especially for the feedback! It is greatly appreciated. Hope I might see you in Toronto, too, next June at the con.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 11:38 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
Another great chapter Kim. In a way, it makes me sad because we're coming closer to the end, but this is such a beautiful storytelling :) eager for your next chapter, as always. Just love this story :)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - thank you for taking the time to read this latest chapter. Yes, it's bittersweet to come to a story's end as I'm sure you know. But you also derive a certain satisfaction out of it, and hopefully those that have been waiting for its completion will give it a try and like what they read (and will let me know).;p)
Thanks for the encouragement! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 08:32 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
You do not need to ologise for the time between chapters of your flics we are blessed to be the recipients of your writing skills.
It looks like Brian has really found his true family and Will and Sarah are coming to a place of peace with Dale
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! Thank you for your kind words. To be honest, if it weren't for the few who leave comments and for my vow to never leave a story unfinished, I might not even post anymore. It gets very discouraging at times when there is little feedback. Your words of support really help, then. Thank you so much. I will probably have two, maybe three more chapters to go before it is all done. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 06:18 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
So wonderful to see another chapter on this and to find that Brian's uncle and aunt are going to back him in his need to race.
Author's Response: You are so wonderful about reviewing so many writers' stories; as one of the admins, I'd like to give you a special thank you for that I probably have a few more chapters to go before this is over, but I'm happy that you were looking forward to another update. Thanks again for always being so supportive of me, and so many other writers on here. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2015 05:43 PM · On: Brian's Secret Revealed
Lovely chapter Kim. Will and Sarah finding out wasn't nearly as bad as I thought it would be. I'm glad they are supportive of Brian's training. Nice to see Brian and Justin just being silly together after all the drama they to laugh! As I've said i dread the ending of this story but do so look forward to more. I don't mind the wait for updates they are always worth it my friend.
Well done!!
:)
Author's Response: Hi, Susan! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for taking the time to comment. I think both Brian and his aunt and uncle have changed throughout Brian's visit there. I'm glad that you are still enjoying this story. I would guess two, perhaps three more chapters, depending upon length? I am writing some more new ones behind the scenes, but don't think I will post them unless they are either completely done or close to it. I worry too much about getting them updated, so I think that would be best.
Thank you again for the support, Susan. It is much appreciated *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2015 10:23 AM · On: A Father's Love
I've already read this chapter twice so I must apologize for reviewing so late. I have be searching for days for a good romance on TV and in published fiction and couldn't find any. And then DUH, your name popped in my head as well as a few other QAF writers. I spent any free time I had today reading The Parent Trap since I wanted a completed story.
Now back to my current favorite, you did a spectacular job of portraying just how much Brian loves Justin by how he shot out of the house after hearing the gunshot. I thought it was beautiful how concerned and protective he was. I was also in awe of how well Craig loved his boys and how he was the hero this time instead of the villain he normally is in pics. You also made all the main characters realistic and likeable. I could about this bucolic place and people for years to come.
Author's Response: Hello, Sandra! Always good to hear from you.;) I'm glad you liked this latest chapter. I imagine everyone probably expected Brian to be Justin's savior, but I thought Craig would actually be a better choice here. I want to reunite the two brothers eventually, and this seemed like a good start in that direction.
Even though Dale's death has mainly been resolved now, I still have a few more issues to be concluded before I'm done with this story, so I hope you will continue to enjoy it and read when you can. Thanks as always for your support! That means so much to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2015 04:27 PM · On: A Father's Love
I love your fic! And it's so well written <3
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
But... There is something that bothers me. Justin, after yeeeeaaaars of training, loses against Brian? Whereas it's his first "real contact" with a horse? Err.... It' a little easy, isn't it? I mean... It's not possible... Well, at least, it's what I think.
Anyway! Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Hi, there! Thank you for reading this story, and for your kind comments; I truly appreciate you leaving your thoughts after reading this latest chapter, and I am happy that you are enjoying this story.
I see your point about Brian. You may be right. But the way I looked at it, Justin is still recovering somewhat from his fall, which would put him at a slight disadvantage, and in a lot of cases the horse's speed could be the determining factor. Dale used to race True Blue and win with him; so while Brian certainly doesn't have the same training at all as Justin or Dale, I think if the horse was bonded to him strongly enough, and wanted to race again fervently enough, with Brian's raw talent and love of speed, it might be possible for him to triumph this time over Justin.
Would he be able to do that in a fair race with a fully-recovered Justin? Likely not, and I will be exploring that a little coming up, although they would never race against each other officially, since Justin would be in a more advanced class of drivers. Hopefully that explanation is a plausible one.;)
At any rate, I hope it doesn't detract from your enjoyment of the story, and I greatly appreciate you leaving me your thoughts. I hope you continue to enjoy the story, and promise to update this just as soon as I can. Thanks again for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 01:55 PM · On: A Father's Love
Craig is officially my hero here! I only wish he was more like that in canon. He adores his sons, he’s so protective and loving. Like Brian :) And Jennifer is a perfect mother. This was an amazing chapter, I enjoyed it very much. Brian and Justin clearly don’t intend to let each other go. I sense we’re near the end of this eventful journey?
Author's Response: Hi, again, Katrin! Yeah, Craig is a much nicer guy in this universe.;) And the brothers can finally start to reconcile, even though I think there will always be a sense of competition there. But we all know where Brian's heart lies now.;)
As for the story, I still have a few more things to wrap up, so maybe 4, 5 more chapters? I still have some issues to settle, like Brian's wish to race, his aunt and uncle's reaction to that, as well as what will become of the two farms and the two boys. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story! Thank you for all the feedback and the support, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 01:47 PM · On: Shot in the Dark
Hi, Kim! I recently came back from my vacation and I was excited to see two new chapters of this amazing story!
I have forgiven Jared completely. Brian still hasn’t, though, it’s obvious he still senses some danger from him. His feelings for Justin has made him overprotective – that’s so sweet, I love moments like that. I love that he feels the need to be wary of Jared.
I love how Craig handled the situation, it’s clear he still loves his son a lot, even if he is angry at him.
Wow… I didn’t see it coming, or I don’t remember something. The ending of the chapter is incredibly intense! Thank God there is another chapter waiting for me already, or I’d die from frustration. Great chapter, Kim.
Author's Response: Hi, Katrin! First of all, welcome back! I hope you have a wonderful vacation. :) As always, I'm grateful to you for reading and reviewing, my friend, and I'm happy you liked this chapter. The ending was pretty intense, but at least I think the boys are finally going to be able to put all this behind them, and concentrate on other matters now.
Thank you again for always being so thoughtful about leaving feedback, Katrin. I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2015 03:38 AM · On: A Father's Love
Yep. I'm very much hooked. I'm not sure why everyone is worried about Justin going to college though... Brian can just follow him... or maybe go to college himself. I bet Brian's never thought of himself as a college boy. ;-) Thanks for read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, Frances! You are so kind to read and review; thank you for doing that. Only by knowing if others are enjoying what I write am I able to gauge interest, and it is very motivating to me.;)
I'm very happy that you are enjoying this, and yes, while Justin has another year yet before he would head off to college, I think both of these very-much-in-love young men can surely find a way to make their relationship work. That will be one of the things I will be exploring in the rest of the story, along with the brothers' relationship, Emmett, Brian's racing hobby, etc.
I will get this updated again just as soon as I can. Thank you again for all the support! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2015 12:54 AM · On: A Father's Love
Way to go Craig! For some reason I was expecting Brian to be at the other end of the shotgun... and I wasn't entirely sure how he would handle that.
Happy to see Jared & Justin patching things up, and glad Jared is once again back in the family fold.
Great update.
Author's Response: Hi, Trish! Well, I thought about Brian being the lifesaver, but I thought in this case it was more important to establish Craig's love for his sons, and for the two brothers to bond, so he seemed like the best choice for it. Glad that you are still enjoying this story! Dale's death and the circumstances surrounding it hasve essentially been resolved, but I still have some issues to settle yet.
Thanks again for the support, Trish! Looking forward to seeing you again soon. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2015 12:04 AM · On: A Father's Love
Hi Kim,
Good going Craig! It’s a good thing that gun was under the bed. I love how Brian is with Justin in this, so attentive and very protective. I have to wonder though how they’re going to deal with the separation when Justin goes to college or maybe Brian will go with him?
Loved this chapter, Kim, as always : ) looking forward to the next one and congrats on getting over 500 reviews! *Hugs* Janet
Author's Response: Hi, Janet! Thank you for reading, and for your comments, my friend. I am SO behind in answering these, and also getting caught up on stories. Started my new job today, and it's going to obviously cut into my time. Ugh. But I do appreciate very much your reading and the comments. Thanks for your congrats, too; I am very honored by that, and I do hope the readers continue to enjoy it. Looking forward to checking out your latest chapter of your story as well. Thanks again. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2015 03:58 AM · On: A Father's Love
Sry am late sprained my hand lifting supplies--stupid. Am in a soft cast for two more weeks. Have to type with one hand-not too hard. Such a good chapter-so much happening-brothers back together and the bad guy dead. It will be interesting to see where you take us next-still a lot to be resolved. Lee is hoping up next is his story-such a dedicated waiter Ha! lol
Author's Response: OMG, Lindc! So sorry to hear about your sprain! I think a see a worker's comp claim on the horizon (sorry, can't help it; used to work for an attorney that handled those - ha!). I hope your hand heals quickly. Considering you are typing with one hand, I REALLY have to thank you for taking the time to leave your comments. They are greatly appreciated as always. I do still have quite a bit to answer in this story, so I see it proceeding a least for a while yet. I AM working on a new Tricky story, though, and hope to have that up soon.
Get well soon!! Thanks again for all your support. And yes, tell Lee I will be working on his story next.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2015 08:22 AM · On: A Father's Love
Thank you for this chapter. Craig to the rescue....I love it. I've notice that a lot of readers (including me) are woried about Justin going to college . But shurely Brian has to continue his education too so it doesn't meen they have to separate at all.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hello, Mariana! Thank you for continuing to read this story, and for your feedback; that really helps me to stay motivated.;)
As for the story, Justin actually has one more year of high school to go until he leaves for college, so now that Brian is staying with his aunt and uncle, that hopefully gives them time to arrive at a solution to their dillemma; Brian will be torn between wanting Justin to pursue his dream, and wanting him to stay there, so a mutually agreeable decision will need to be made. In the meantime, I have some other issues to resolve, so I see the story continuing for a while yet.
I do hope you continue to enjoy it, Mariana! Thanks again for the support, and for the feedback; it is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 05:04 PM · On: A Father's Love
Wow. To think that Craig is the rescuer. Now they just have to talk with the sheriff and get rid of the body. Where do Brian and Justin go from here?
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! As always, I'm grateful to you for reading, and especially for the comments; thank you.;) I think I surprised quite a few readers with Craig's intervention; I thought it was fitting in this case, and hopefully now the brothers will be on better terms, since Jared at least partially redeemed himself.;)
There's still quite a bit to go yet before I plan on finishing this story; I do hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you again for reading and commenting; it is greatly appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 03:37 PM · On: A Father's Love
Oh my good for Craig stepping up like that in defense of both of his sons. Glad that creep is gone and that Will and Sarah have a little more closure. Not at all surprised Brian got to Justin as quick as he could. Happy Justin and Jared shared a moment I do hope their relationship improves now. Happy Brian and Justin got a few moments alone I am curious as what will happen now with them. I do hope the end of this isn't as close as I think it is now. Can't wait for more as always Kim!!
Well done!!
:)
Author's Response: Hi, Susan! I'm so happy you're still enjoying this story. I don't think most readers would have thought of Craig being the protector, but I thought it was fitting in this case. And yes, I do see things improving between the two brothers.
I think a lot of readers are curious as to what will become of B & J, but Justin actually has one more year of high school before they will need to part; hopefully, a certain brunet can work on a solution to their dilemma in the meantime.
I have a lot more to cover yet before this is all said and done; the resolution of Dale's death is but one part of it. I do hope you continue to enjoy it, Susan! Thanks again for all the support. Hope things are well for you at home.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 01:57 PM · On: A Father's Love
Now I can breathe again...thank goodness Craig had the presence of mind to act quickly to save his boys. It's also good to see the brothers are trying to mend their relationship. I just hope Brian and Justin can find a way to stay together with Justin’s upcoming departure.
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara! Now you knew that I wouldn't let something terrible happen to our boys.;) Although, I do love a good hurt/comfort fic, as long as it's temporary.;) I thought it was important to reestablish Craig's role in his boys' lives, too, and to help bring them back together.
As for college, Justin actually has one more year to go, since he's still a junior. But that issue WILL be addressed coming up before the story's concluded. In the meantime, I still have some other topics I would like to cover.
Thanks again for always being as supportive as you are, Tamara. It means more to me than you know, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 10:40 AM · On: A Father's Love
I love this chapter Kim! So wonderfully descriptive, allwoing us to take a look at their inner emotions. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next :) Thank you
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend! Thank you for reading, and especially leaving feedback; that means so much to me.;) And yes, I still have several issues to resolve before it's all said and done, so I hope you continue to enjoy it.;) Thanks again for taking the time to comment. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 10:25 AM · On: A Father's Love
Fantastic chapter! Brian and Justin are so beautiful together. I hope that they remain together even when Justin leaves for college ;)
xoxo
Author's Response: Hi, Cait! Thank you for continuing to read and comment; I truly appreciate that.;) I'm delighted that you are still enjoying this story. Justin's eventual move to college is going to be covered, along with what's to become of the two young lovers; but in the meantime, I still have quite a bit more to tell, even with Dale's death being resolved. I do hope you continue to enjoy it, Cait! I'll get this updated again soon. Thank you so much for all the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 06:40 AM · On: A Father's Love
Lovely chapter. Nice to see Brian declaring his love. It's hard to do that without making it sound corny or out of character, but it fits here. Nicly done.
- Jackie Mag
PS: Going to the PRIDE parade in Chicago tomorrow!
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend. I hope you had a wonderful time at the pride parade! Thank you as always for your comments. I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. And yes, It CAN be hard to keep Brian IC, but hopefully I didn't have him stray too far out of his comfort zone here.;)
Thanks for all the support! I still have a bit more to wrap up, so I hope you will continue to enjoy it.;) ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2015 04:09 PM · On: Shot in the Dark
"That's the only three-way you'll every have with me,"
I love that line and I loved how protective Brian was of Justin, but I felt bad for Jared. It seemed that he was truly trying to make amends to everyone. I only hope he gets a chance
Author's Response: Hello, there! I'm so appreciate that you chose this story to read, and especially for your thoughtfulness in leaving feedback; thank you.
As for Jared and Justin's relationship, yes, I do think that Jared is really trying here. Whether he gets the chance coming up is still up in the air (you don't want me to give TOO much away, do you?);) I CAN say that I'm working on the update to this right now, so it shouldn't be too long before it's posted, and you'll know right away who shot whom.;)
Thanks again for reading, and for letting me know that you are enjoying this story! That is very motivating to me, and means a lot. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 12:49 AM · On: Shot in the Dark
Oh no! I hope the boys are okay.
Was it McComb who fired or someone else? maybe Solomon went to get help after Justin sent him away.
Author's Response: Hi, Kristi! Thank you for reading this latest chapters, and especially for taking the time to review; I really appreciate that. As for the chapter ending, someone DID get shot. I won't give anything else away, but I WILL say that you will discover what happened pretty much right away as soon as the next chapter is posted.
I'm working on the update to "My Heart's Desire" now, which is written. So I should be able to update this story fairly quickly. Thanks again for the support! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2015 02:53 PM · On: Shot in the Dark
Well that's an ending ... you really know to use a cliffhanger! But you would never harm one of our favourite boys - or would you ??? ... So I'm not toooo worried..
Great chapter, thanks!
And also: Thanks a lot for your pics and reports of the ATX Festival, it's truly appreciated!
Author's Response: Hi, there! Thank you for reading and especially for leaving feedback! I am very appreciative.;) And no, I would not do that (at least not permanently, anyway; don't want to give TOO much away!). But you will find out quickly what happened in the next part.;)
And I'm glad you enjoyed the report and pics; I'll have a few more coming up in the next day or so. Thank you again for the support and the encouragement. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2015 01:59 PM · On: Shot in the Dark
I think you know what I'm going to say: I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER RIGHT NOW....ha.. ha...ha....
Very good and informative chapter. This story is getting better and better. "hugs"
Author's Response: Hi, Mariana! Yes, I know - very evil here! I'm hopeful I can get the next part up sooner rather than later this time, since I have a little extra (free) time at the moment; I'm working on the update to my other WIP now, so as soon as I'm finished with that installment, I'll be returning back to this one. At least, you WILL know pretty much right away who shot whom (and yes, someone DID get shot, I will at least say that much!)
Thanks so much for reading, and especially your thoughtfulness in leaving a comment. It is much appreciated. *Hugs* back ~Kim
Reviewer: nata (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2015 11:59 AM · On: Shot in the Dark
poor jared, I believe him, I even feel so sorry for him! he didn’t want it to happen. Now many people hate him. loved how protective brian was!!! To think that at first he liked jared better. The ending is scary! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Hi, Nata! Thank you for taking the time to read and especially comment on my story; I truly appreciate that. Yes, I think Jared has probably more than paid the price for his prior arrogance. Has maybe paid an ultimate price now? I will be explaining what happened pretty much right away in the next part, and will do my best to get it updated just as soon as I can. I hope you will continue to enjoy this story. Thanks again for reading and commenting! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2015 07:29 PM · On: Shot in the Dark
Hi Kim,
Whew, you certainly know how to leave a person hanging, don’t you?, haha.
I really feel for Will and Sarah in this, the whole story so far actually, hopefully they will have some closure soon. I love Brian’s protectiveness towards Justin, and Justin’s Spock imitation was great; I used to watch “Star Trek” all the time.
Awww, Brian finally told Justin those three magic words, it’s about time! Haha. Great chapter and now I’m chewing on my fingernails here waiting to see/read what happens next. *Hugs * Janet
Oh, BTW mine will be up in a few minutes ; )
Author's Response: Hi, Janet! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and for your feedback, my friend.; Yes, Will and Sarah have had a difficult time over the past few months; not to mention the time when Dale was killed. I think Will, especially, was traumatized by it, but he is slowly coming to terms with it, thanks in part to both Sarah and to Brian. I will be soon resolving this arc in the story, though, and they WILL find a certain amount of closure and comfort before that part is done.
I still have quite a bit more to tell regarding Justin and Brian, as well as Justin's relationship with his brother, and what becomes of the boys in the future.
Thank you again for all the support, Janet. I will be explaining pretty quickly who shot whom in the next part, and will get it updated just as soon as I can. *Hugs* ~Kim
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