Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2015 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very intriguing and realistic portrayal of Brian's probable feelings regarding Gus. It was cruel of Lindsey and Melanie to remove Gus, especially right after Lindsey encouraged Justin to go to NYC (and I'm convinced that, in part, she was trying to live vicariously through Justin). While that was ultimately Justin and Brian's decision, it probably wouldn't have come to been such a tragic, abrupt change without Lindsey's interference.

I just don't see Linsdey and Melanie's relationship lasting unless they go to counseling. They got back together in the aftermath of the bombing, but that didn't make the underlying problems disappear.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2015 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

I hated Linds for taking Gus away from Brian - and the way she more or less convinced Justin that he NEEDED to be in NYC. Yes, maybe marriage wasn't right for them THEN, but he IMO could have remained in Pitts and travelled to NYC for work when he needed to. Linds more or less took both his boys away from him :(

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2012 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

good story, I wish ther would be more chapters



Author's Response:

that seems to be the consensous--i'll see what i can do :) thx

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

thanks for this story - there aren't enough stories out there about Brian and his feelings over his relationship with Gus - and this one is definitely the best of them

also - I love that little hint in there where he admits to himself that he doesn't even mind anymore opening up to Justin and being vulnerable in front of him

I can't wait to see what story you come up with next - or...hint, hint - you could continue this story - there is just so much to tell - and you do it so well

Charle



Author's Response:

wow! thanks!! i'm thinking about doing a direct follow-up to this one. im posting a b/j one tomorrow--stay tuned!

 

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loving this series of stories. Lindsay is such a bitch in her oh so proper way. I want to pick her up by her shirt and give her a damn good shake!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi! I hope you´ll continue this stories, I would like to read how Justin and Briean continues or eventually are back together in one town. Nice story.

 



Author's Response:

i'm getting there! lol...thank you!!

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story! Though I'm wishing it were a chapter. What an intense conversation between Lindsay and Brian. They both stood their ground and made valid points but I want to know for sure that Brian won this round. Missed Justin, I kept expecting him to show up to stand by his man!



Author's Response:

Thank you. The next one is all Brian and Justin--stayed tuned!

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

thanks for the story

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am so glad I found these two stories I love the intensity of them :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much--great profile name by the way.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this certainly was a huge change in the story from


Broken Telephone.  I don’t like what I hear from Lindsey. 


Talking to Mel. is not enough, I didn’t really hear her agree to


let Gus visit Brian.  I also didn’t like:


     “…but you can’t just come here and start demanding


      things like custody agreements when you don’t


      have any legal rights.”


I  sensed an element of cruelty in that remark. Anyway – so far


it is interesting, and I will happily wait for the next chapter.


 


DavidR




Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment! These fics aren't so much chapters in a single story as much as they are individual stories that reference each other's plot lines but now you're making me think that I should write a direct sequel to this one in particular. Gets my hampster wheel turning--Thanks again!

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is so good!  It just makes me burn over Brian's situation with his son.  "I’m just the sperm donor and your personal ATM.”  Ack!  I look forward to your next installment! 




Author's Response:

Thanks so much! More soon.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this story i hope brian and justin get back together



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this story i hope brian and justin get back together

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